Alvin Karpis vs. Profit - ALVIN KARPIS WINS

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Alvin Karpis Profit

[Alvin Karpis]

inn, going 10

[Profit]

What's good man, 10 is perfect

[Alvin Karpis]

Profit huh? uh I should just stop you there....
Prada biggest fraud, he can’t even afford a pair of socks from there
I’ll call zelph to spray ya block and air, go to war with the heat
Or do it myself, watch my wrist as I leave Fitbits all over the street
Do it for free, catch you where ya mama stay & snipe ya face
I’ll heat ya whole room up for cheap like that amish fireplace
You been in the closet for years but there’s a slight chance
That you finally come Outfit, in your pink skirt with tight pants
You’re a lame with ya text, I’m blazin ya best
There’s no Waco signing you is fresh even if you knew David Koresh

[Profit]

U went to town on FB's mouth, caught an L then pitched a fit
U remind me of idiots wettin the blunt up, the way u OD'd on niggas lips
How TF u HOF here? When no1 feels the BS u write
From both directions u been took off the dribble... dooog u gettin beat left & right
But GOW showed luv, so u praise him like a bitch
As a child u was taught to worship God, That didnt mean ride his DICK
Faggot u ain't killin nuttin, w/o Sho I doubt this clowns heard of
So if ur ever compared to a hit man.. s'cos ya career ain't shit w/o Murda
U think rappin bout toast is foolish, just wait till I blast what I'm totin, stupid
All we'll see is this Kidd gone from the bucks.. & it gon mean a coach gets booted

[Habitat]

Profit huh? uh I should just stop you there....
Prada biggest fraud, he can’t even afford a pair of socks from there
i think this is a reach.. profit being called pra just seems weird
I’ll call zelph to spray ya block and air, go to war with the heat
Or do it myself, watch my wrist as I leave Fitbits all over the street
i dunno man profit just doesn't seem like a name you can shorten.. fit does work better than pra tho so ill give a jab here
Do it for free, catch you where ya mama stay & snipe ya face
I’ll heat ya whole room up for cheap like that amish fireplace
nice
You been in the closet for years but there’s a slight chance
That you finally come Outfit, in your pink skirt with tight pants
not feeling this
You’re a lame with ya text, I’m blazin ya best
There’s no Waco signing you is fresh even if you knew David Koresh
waco signing coulda been dopeee but as is it was decent

vs

U went to town on FB's mouth, caught an L then pitched a fit
U remind me of idiots wettin the blunt up, the way u OD'd on niggas lips
funny. execution a bit off but this is decent
How TF u HOF here? When no1 feels the BS u write
From both directions u been took off the dribble... dooog u gettin beat left & right
didn't like this
But GOW showed luv, so u praise him like a bitch
As a child u was taught to worship God, That didnt mean ride his DICK
this is ok
Faggot u ain't killin nuttin, w/o Sho I doubt this clowns heard of
So if ur ever compared to a hit man.. s'cos ya career ain't shit w/o Murda
ok
U think rappin bout toast is foolish, just wait till I blast what I'm totin, stupid
All we'll see is this Kidd gone from the bucks.. & it gon mean a coach gets booted
didn't like this

amish fireplace was lotb. Basically had 3 i liked from each but w/ the lotb i gotta go with alvin karpis.

v/alvin

[For Battling]

Profit huh? uh I should just stop you there....
Prada biggest fraud, he can’t even afford a pair of socks from there
barely decent, just a simple nameplay
I’ll call zelph to spray ya block and air, go to war with the heat
Or do it myself, watch my wrist as I leave Fitbits all over the street
now this is nice
Do it for free, catch you where ya mama stay & snipe ya face
I’ll heat ya whole room up for cheap like that amish fireplace
fire again
You been in the closet for years but there’s a slight chance
That you finally come Outfit, in your pink skirt with tight pants
same as the opener here man
You’re a lame with ya text, I’m blazin ya best
There’s no Waco signing you is fresh even if you knew David Koresh
wording in the second line is off, had potential but this is decent

I’m literally calling those simple wordplay nameplays decent at best because I refuse to be bias since I’m not too into wps, if it works then it works. And yours work but they are very simplistic. Fitbits and fireplace were both dope though

Vs


U went to town on FB's mouth, caught an L then pitched a fit
U remind me of idiots wettin the blunt up, the way u OD'd on niggas lips
shoulda say nigga lips instead of niggas, yes it makes all the difference bro. The concept is cool and had potential for dopeness but turned out just “ok”
How TF u HOF here? When no1 feels the BS u write
From both directions u been took off the dribble... dooog u gettin beat left & right
kinda corny & basic here bro
But GOW showed luv, so u praise him like a bitch
As a child u was taught to worship God, That didnt mean ride his DICK
alright cool
Faggot u ain't killin nuttin, w/o Sho I doubt this clowns heard of
So if ur ever compared to a hit man.. s'cos ya career ain't shit w/o Murda
alright not bad
U think rappin bout toast is foolish, just wait till I blast what I'm totin, stupid
All we'll see is this Kidd gone from the bucks.. & it gon mean a coach gets booted
LOVED the set up, wording in the second line a bit off but nonetheless this was a good line

Pretty cool battle. Alvin had 2 hitters that were both LOTB but everything else was mostly filler. The only thing I didn’t like from profit was left & right. Everything else was pretty good and definitely had the most consistent verse here. Could go either way, really depends on voter preference imo. Going with profit.

Vote Profit

[Saint]

I liked profits attempt at some personals
Opener almosttt made it, murda was cool
wasnt feeling rest tbh..

AK had amish fireplace, fitbits - amish dope
verse asa whole worded better, koresh concept was cool but needed tweaking.

V/Karp

[WRATH]

Profit huh? uh I should just stop you there....
Prada biggest fraud, he can’t even afford a pair of socks from there.

Good enough.

I’ll call zelph to spray ya block and air, go to war with the heat
Or do it myself, watch my wrist as I leave Fitbits all over the street

Cool

Do it for free, catch you where ya mama stay & snipe ya face
I’ll heat ya whole room up for cheap like that amish fireplace

Okay

You been in the closet for years but there’s a slight chance
That you finally come Outfit, in your pink skirt with tight pants

Idk about the fit lines, this okay

You’re a lame with ya text, I’m blazin ya best
There’s no Waco signing you is fresh even if you knew David Koresh

Solid




U went to town on FB's mouth, caught an L then pitched a fit
U remind me of idiots wettin the blunt up, the way u OD'd on niggas lips

Tastefully done tbh

How TF u HOF here? When no1 feels the BS u write
From both directions u been took off the dribble... dooog u gettin beat left & right

Nah

But GOW showed luv, so u praise him like a bitch
As a child u was taught to worship God, That didnt mean ride his DICK

Looool

Faggot u ain't killin nuttin, w/o Sho I doubt this clowns heard of
So if ur ever compared to a hit man.. s'cos ya career ain't shit w/o Murdafat wife

Cool...

U think rappin bout toast is foolish, just wait till I blast what I'm totin, stupid
All we'll see is this Kidd gone from the bucks.. & it gon mean a coach gets booted

It's good, but i would have liked this a little cleaner


V profit

[Flow]

Wraths opener and closer were decent af. Liked them an was an okish bar with the gow line.

However i felt that AK wss just more consistent he had two fire lines that amish line being lotb and his weaker jabs just held more sting then wraths.

Vote AK

[Destroyer]

Ok so clearly there is some biased voting going on here
Alvin got this
I liked everything in his verse except the closer because it doesn’t work both ways
Profits verse wasn’t bad. Opener and GOW line hit but he had more misses
Honestly, it isn’t close though
Everyone who voted profit needs work on voting, simply

V/AK

[Swerve]

I’ll call zelph to spray ya block and air, go to war with the heat
Or do it myself, watch my wrist as I leave Fitbits all over the street
Do it for free, catch you where ya mama stay & snipe ya face
I’ll heat ya whole room up for cheap like that amish fireplace

vs.

U went to town on FB's mouth, caught an L then pitched a fit
U remind me of idiots wettin the blunt up, the way u OD'd on niggas lips
U think rappin bout toast is foolish, just wait till I blast what I'm totin, stupid
All we'll see is this Kidd gone from the bucks.. & it gon mean a coach gets booted


AK od'd on name play, which hurt him other than the one good line. The follow up amish fireplace was actually quite dope and simple. I thought profit was going to take it, but came off very lazy and played. I really had trouble even quoting that bucks line. Niggas lips was cool though.

V/ AK

[Mr. J]

I got Karpis winning this based off of the fireplace line alone. But I did enjoy some of Profits punches. The Kidd line was cool. Didn't really enjoy the OD line though that was kind of a stretch for the punch.

[For Battling]

Alvin Karpis Wins 6-2