Killing Spree vs. Mr. J - MR J WINS

[For Battling]

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday Jan 25th and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

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Killing Spree Mr. J

[Kill Spree]

look faggit....

13 Left u W/a Sour taste! S'why my gang'll finish yuh
Cos Talkin Ur Loss Vs Cruets comparing ur verse W/Drinking Vineger
Then get a remarkable win!!! Congrats that guys the worst
Funny you Showed up Incredible & not one bar Difined that word!
Get shot wen Oppertunity Nox! Watch'em Bleed out
Cos if Geno diss bars Win? Ur family'll Say Amen after this beat down

Boy my style is that Yeah Pie, yours is looking like Bukkake.
I stuff peaches & cherries, while there are layers to you getting frosted fruitcake

Punch Ur melon for tha ego trip! Ur gay & all fails
Voters Bukakke ppl.. this fruitcake Plays fummy @ one of those W/All Males
I'll Infiltrate Ur system W/Bullets! No way FGT Hurt SPree
See RED how u BA loser; Ur punches Rival every no show In that tourney
Faggit be Bold'er get burried in the ground, Kid is a flop
Ur within a stones throw from gettin put to sleep with one hit from the Rock

[Mr. J]

Me Killing Spree well thats played out like spinning rims
all this pussy gonna get is a middle finger to use for a sit & spin
predictions say Hes gifted when he tries & thats murder.
by the sound of things your the spokesperson for Asbergers.
boy if you pack burners its only when you outside for a cook out
the only time this fruit did a stick up is when his kabob is took out
aim straight at ya chess, take these rooks out with a pawn swap
no one would treasure ya trash on boards not even at a pawn shop.
its most probable Id leave ya in the back clapped & under wraps.
or it would a novel idea to get at ya early & leave capped in underpants
ya whole text career a mess so dont be a simple ho.
you a BA bitch that cant even get a dub off of 2tripple0

[Suthaveli]

showed up incredible irony punch was pretty gd. amen beatdown line was okish.
idk if theres a language barrier or whatev here but there were places in your verse was was confused. I don't recall this from you tho so maybe its me reading alot of verses today. everything else missed for me. I see alot of improvement in you from when i last saw you tho.

opener was cool mr. j. asbergers was nice. kabob was ok. pawn shop ok. last 2 bars were very simple. ur first 3 bars shows me u hv improved. thank goodness becauz i was starting to lose hope from you doing so awhile back tbh. i hope to keep seeing the growth

cool lil battle. I honestly came into this thinking Kill spree would be the winner in a boring matchup not worth reading but this was actully pretty fun to peep. to my suprise mvgt- Mr. J

[Ender]

look faggit....

13 Left u W/a Sour taste! S'why my gang'll finish yuh
Cos Talkin Ur Loss Vs Cruets comparing ur verse W/Drinking Vineger
Strange use of capital letters makes your lines a pain to read. And I wasn't feeling this anyway
Then get a remarkable win!!! Congrats that guys the worst
Funny you Showed up Incredible & not one bar Difined that word!
The wording of this was off and it was a little simple
Get shot wen Oppertunity Nox! Watch'em Bleed out
Cos if Geno diss bars Win? Ur family'll Say Amen after this beat down
No
Punch Ur melon for tha ego trip! Ur gay & all fails
Voters Bukakke ppl.. this fruitcake Plays fummy @ one of those W/All Males
Nah
I'll Infiltrate Ur system W/Bullets! No way FGT Hurt SPree
See RED how u BA loser; Ur punches Rival every no show In that tourney
Not feeling this
Faggit be Bold'er get burried in the ground, Kid is a flop
Ur within a stones throw from gettin put to sleep with one hit from the Rock
Like with most of your lines in this battle, the idea is there but it seems unpolished and you didn't do enough with it

Me Killing Spree well thats played out like spinning rims
all this pussy gonna get is a middle finger to use for a sit & spin
Not feeling this at all
predictions say Hes gifted when he tries & thats murder.
by the sound of things your the spokesperson for Asbergers.
I feel like there was a good idea here somewhere, but this didn't work for me
boy if you pack burners its only when you outside for a cook out
the only time this fruit did a stick up is when his kabob is took out
This was alright
aim straight at ya chess, take these rooks out with a pawn swap
no one would treasure ya trash on boards not even at a pawn shop.
The set-up isn't really connected to the punch outside of the word 'pawn'.
Again, this could have been good, but I wasn't feeling the execution
its most probable Id leave ya in the back clapped & under wraps.
or it would a novel idea to get at ya early & leave capped in underpants
Eh, alrightish
ya whole text career a mess so dont be a simple ho.
you a BA bitch that cant even get a dub off of 2tripple0
A bit simple, but alrightish again

I wasn't feeling a lot in this battle, but I still feel like Mr J took it fairly easily.

Vote - Mr J

[Orc]

I don't know what the fuck killing Spree was thinking this week. Incredibly bad verse. No cohesion, no wit, no hits. I'm both shocked and disappointed. Mr J stepped up. Capped in underpants was clever. Fruit stick up was ok too. You're definitely getting better. Keep working on the execution.

Vote Mr J

[WRATH]

look faggit....

13 Left u W/a Sour taste! S'why my gang'll finish yuh
Cos Talkin Ur Loss Vs Cruets comparing ur verse W/Drinking Vineger

Okay

Then get a remarkable win!!! Congrats that guys the worst
Funny you Showed up Incredible & not one bar Difined that word!

Okay

Get shot wen Oppertunity Nox! Watch'em Bleed out
Cos if Geno diss bars Win? Ur family'll Say Amen after this beat down

Log off

Punch Ur melon for tha ego trip! Ur gay & all fails
Voters Bukakke ppl.. this fruitcake Plays fummy @ one of those W/All Males

Awesome concept ruined by you

I'll Infiltrate Ur system W/Bullets! No way FGT Hurt SPree
See RED how u BA loser; Ur punches Rival every no show In that tourney

Nah

Faggit be Bold'er get burried in the ground, Kid is a flop
Ur within a stones throw from gettin put to sleep with one hit from the Rock

Okay


Me Killing Spreefat wifewell thats played out like spinning rims
all this pussy gonna get is a middle finger to use for a sit & spin

Suspect but okay

predictions sayfat wifeHes gifted when he triesfat wife& thats murder.
by the sound of things your the spokesperson for Asbergers.

Trash

boy if you pack burners its only when you outside for a cook out
the only time this fruit did a stick up is when his kabob is took out

NO

aim straight at ya chess, take these rooks out with a pawn swap
no one would treasure ya trash on boards not even at a pawn shop.

Trash

its most probable Id leave ya in the back clapped & under wraps.
or it would a novel idea to get at ya early & leave capped in underpants

Terrible

ya whole text career a mess so dont be a simple ho.
you a BA bitch that cant even get a dub off of 2tripple

Hilarious but not because of the line


V - k.s.

[Alvin Karpis]

Both had some bad misses so it came down to the lines I felt more
Mr J had a couple lines that I liked more
KS just didn’t bring his normal consistency

V Mr J

[Swerve]

Nothing

vs.

its most probable Id leave ya in the back clapped & under wraps.
or it would a novel idea to get at ya early & leave capped in underpants


Rough verse from KS...I really didn't like any of it and a lot of it seemed rushed and forced. On the other hand Mr. J was very plain and really lacked creativity. However, his actually wording and style is very nice, if he could inject some creativity, like the Captain Underpants word play, he could get better.

I got Mr. J

[For Battling]

Mr. J Wins 5-1