Krucial 13 vs. Strikta - STRIKTA WINS

[For Battling]

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday Jan 25th and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

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Krucial Th1rt3en Strikta

[Strikta]

Quick 8..

I been nice lately, but staying outta trouble's so easy it hurts
Now if I'm up to no good, I'm staring close at my monitor reading ya verse
Poor bitch u'll never get better - words that broke this boy's heart..
..Get mad
Face it, only time ya change into a machine is at ya local coinstar
U look like a mess, strung out on meth & dope, slammin' & sniffin'
Drugs just didn't take a toll on ur body, it snapped a pic & mailed u a ticket
Rather fuck whores w/ a hat than get BJs by ya girl who sucks for fun
I'll roll w/ the safety over the top like I'm playing some Cover 1

[Krucial Th1rt3en]

im flaming u this bad, bcuz i love to resort to contact,
im dragon u thru the fire like the logo of Mortal Kombat.

your bars are trash, step it up, until then-this practice,
your Wordplay wouldnt be outside the box if u had children's fridge magnets.

your tooo easy, i can beat u with something light against your hardest,
catch bodies with text/tecs, dropping throw aways on you since your garbage.

wit these Caps i pill heads, its med time,
ill put his lights out early, this Strict' bed time.

[ill nik-A]

Anywho. A dragon/draggin wp in 2018? Ok if u say so. That was ya second best line. Fridge line was solid. But then u did the text/tech. First we are not retarded. U don’t have to point out the wordplay. Also it’s a verse not a couplet party.

Strikt.
Opener was lazy. Coin star and toll were good enough to get u the win

Vote Strikt

[Saint]

Vote: Strikta - coin & toll were cool.
No big misses, opener was passable.
Wording was good.

Krucial- fridge line was good. metal could been done different, needed revision.
Liked the MK reference except dragon wp.
Didnt like your last 3. Wording/concept.

[For Battling]

Krucial Th1rt3en you need to edit out lines to match what your opponent dropped

If you don’t match it’s a DQ

[Krucial Th1rt3en]

Krucial Th1rt3en you need to edit out lines to match what your opponent dropped

If you don’t match it’s a DQ

just dq me, fuck it

[Enbombz]

ill- Coinstar and toll were nice. opener and closer were meh

13-As other have stated your concepts/plays are very dated and done. You really have something going like a personal to get away with them and certain ones like as above stated are just corny now. Its hard to know from site to site what been done before but if its some90's wordplay you should already know. Keeping grinding though you can form punchlines you got some mechanics down just need a bit more originality/creativity.

vote ill

[Suthaveli]

krucial, I actually liked your draggin thru the fiya bar, the only issue is that it's played.sex doll line was okish. I like the magnet line. next 2 i didn't care for. pootie tang strap line was played but not too bad of a line.
you def look like u have a gd grips on things. ur biggest issue is lookin ta figure out what's played & vice versa. in all honesty, that will come w.time. if u care enough to, i think readin some verses in the archives might help w.that some. in all honesty, so much shit has been ran through so u can come w. a concept you think is fresh & there will be atleast 1 muthafucka tell you that its played so its def hard. messaging people might help w.that.


Boa Constrikta verse was pretty dope. i didn't like the first line but its pretty much like the no showing as muthafucka hasn't lost a step. coinstar & toll on body went hard, lol.

mvgt- Strikta

[WRATH]

Quick 8..

I been nice lately, but staying outta trouble's so easy it hurts
Now if I'm up to no good, I'm staring close at my monitor reading ya verse

Nah

Poor bitch u'll never get better - words that broke this boy's heart..
..Get mad
Face it, only time ya change into a machine is at ya local coinstar

Solid

U look like a mess, strung out on meth & dope, slammin' & sniffin'
Drugs just didn't take a toll on ur body, it snapped a pic & mailed u a ticket

Good

Rather fuck whores w/ a hat than get BJs by ya girl who sucks for fun
I'll roll w/ the safety over the top like I'm playing some Cover 1

Solid



im flaming u this bad, bcuz i love to resort to contact,
im dragon u thru the fire like the logo of Mortal Kombat.

Good but my dragon line was better

your bars are trash, step it up, until then-this practice,
your Wordplay wouldnt be outside the box if u had children's fridge magnets.

Nice

your tooo easy, i can beat u with something light against your hardest,
catch bodies with text/tecs, dropping throw aways on you since your garbage.

Bro wtf fuck strikta this shit nice

wit these Caps i pill heads, its med time,
ill put his lights out early, this Strict' bed time.

Good because that nigga tried to play you with those lazy ass lines


V krucial

[Destroyer]

Strick killed it even rusty
Coin star and toll were hilarious and hit hard
Other dude looked like he did a bedtime punch????
No, just no

V/strik

[Orc]

Strik dropped oldschool here and I enjoyed it. Up to no good and taking a toll were like the old RM style of flipping cliches and making them fresh. I fucked with it. Kru needs to take the advice he's been given and sharpen up. Lose the techs lines. Be more creative. Harsher wording. If it's gunbars that's fine -- make them harsh.

Strikta

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

I been nice lately, but staying outta trouble's so easy it hurts
Now if I'm up to no good, I'm staring close at my monitor reading ya verse
Poor bitch u'll never get better - words that broke this boy's heart..
..Get mad
Face it, only time ya change into a machine is at ya local coinstar
U look like a mess, strung out on meth & dope, slammin' & sniffin'
Drugs just didn't take a toll on ur body, it snapped a pic & mailed u a ticket

this was very dope...
you should battle more often...
as fire as it was that toll line was kinda hypocritical yo...

im flaming u this bad, bcuz i love to resort to contact,
im dragon u thru the fire like the logo of Mortal Kombat.
wit these Caps i pill heads, its med time,
ill put his lights out early, this Strict' bed time.

I think you have a lot of potential. I like your wording but your stuff is kinda outdated. I think you will be a beast if you keep at it for a month or too.

Vote- Strikta. He had fresher lines and was more consistent.

Bye...