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For Battling
01-22-2018, 02:49 PM
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Sour joog Unemployed

Nick James
01-22-2018, 03:28 PM
12?

Enbombz
01-23-2018, 06:43 AM
12 is good

Enbombz
01-24-2018, 08:22 PM
Man i'm gone be beating him bad, this kids the weakest of fags
Fuck top 5 disses ever, you'll never make top 5 disses of the week in the mag
You keep talkin that disrespect, I come to ya crib rocking the tool g
No stopping this uzi, Blow the doors off quicker than a Jim Morrison groupie
Dude talking empty smack, but he don't wanna get me mad,
I'll get my strap..Dude see the cans n wanna be friends like a Pepsi add
I tried to be nice, but if he think he beating me, the truth
He doesn't stand a chance, the rapper in me has "no problem" ethering this fool
Bullets gone spray n rip up his guts, I am giving no fucks
When this kid get lit up, he get tagged by thirteen like chilla n goodz
I'll put the tech to his lips, if he step to the kid
Dude don't want these exit wounds, he wounded enough he can't exit his crib

Nick James
01-25-2018, 01:17 AM
I kno u readin my threads for personals so now joog feel he got me
of course u pass for a bookworm.. bitch u got the ring n tape ones in ur body
joogs girl got a mean throat shit ill break the neck of this dumb vet
nigga if you catch me slippin its cuz I cant step sumwhere she aint cum yet
ur rlly gay as shit, n' for that reason alone I wont defend the guy
I only know its sour joog when i watch u pucker up to kiss a win goodbye
hoes dont give joog any play these dudes got u gas' d believin u great
when it comes to broads u hearin more no's than a poll for the mid season break
ull always be last in quotes I hate to crash ur hopes
bitch u culdnt win if russia came back n hacked the votes
U aint the king of nothin watch u get beat n pounded
if i pull the crown its cuz I knocked out all the other teeth around it

Joog ur way up outta here nigga

Clout
01-25-2018, 05:06 AM
Joog got this easialy.

Pepsi add, chance the rapper, top 5 disses, the doors all dope to me.

I wasn't digging unemployment verse at all felt lack it lacked alot of harsh impact. I only liked kiss the win good bye. Rest were eh to me

V joogin

Flow
01-25-2018, 07:32 AM
Unemployed
Opener light
Slipping was funny
Kiss win good bye was solid
Hacked votes was light
Closer is played af

Joog. P

Opener light
Jim morrison was lotb
Pepsi add was solid
Ethering was ok
Last two bars were meh

Pretty even to me but preferred joogs. Coild go either way

Vote Joog

Barcotic
01-25-2018, 08:12 AM
Joog

blow the doors off was creative, dope
pepsi joint was coo
exit wounds was aite

Unemployed

opener had a nice concept but the wording made it fall completely flat
catch me slipping was good

v/joog

Amen
01-25-2018, 08:17 AM
Man i'm gone be beating him bad, this kids the weakest of fags
Fuck top 5 disses ever, you'll never make top 5 disses of the week in the mag
Played but liked the slight flip lol...
You keep talkin that disrespect, I come to ya crib rocking the tool g
No stopping this uzi, Blow the doors off quicker than a Jim Morrison groupie
Dude talking empty smack, but he don't wanna get me mad,
I'll get my strap..Dude see the cans n wanna be friends like a Pepsi add

vs

ur rlly gay as shit, n' for that reason alone I wont defend the guy
I only know its sour joog when i watch u pucker up to kiss a win goodbye

Rest was ass...

I got Joog here...

Problumatic
01-25-2018, 08:44 AM
I also have Joog taking this one fairly easy.. he was just more consistent, period.

The multis were pretty consistent through out the punches and set ups.
His Jim Morrison/blow doors off line was probably the most memorable of the battle 4 me.
Pepsi line was aight lol .. was actually kinda funny but that’s about the only lines that truly stood out.

Vs

The opener was dope if it was set up to a better extent.
Russia/Hacked the votes was pretty aight

Just wasn’t a lot of power or cleverness behind your set ups and select content to really pivot off of going into your next bar.

V/Joog

Nick James
01-25-2018, 04:49 PM
Thats wassup @ the tips

I aint battled in a hot min so fuck it lol

classickERBL
01-25-2018, 05:00 PM
joog - had the pepsi bar i like
unemployed that ring and tapeworm concept was cool ,win goodbye was cool... russia votes was funny , overall unemployed got better concepts
v - unemployed

Nick James
01-26-2018, 12:10 AM
5-1 joog

Schadenfreude
01-26-2018, 01:03 AM
SOUR JOOG
Decent battle, respectable showings from both, Unemployed you were aight, just way too many old concepts. Joog you had a couple misses as well, but the punches that did land hit hard & Doors was easily LOTB.

Pinot Grij
01-26-2018, 01:21 PM
Joog

Opener light but cool
Doors line is hot.
Pepsi ad is fuckin' dope to me. Great imagery.
No problem line was choppy and lost its effect.
Chilla n Goodz line is dope -- thought I'd see more of this this week.. I wish it rhymed better, but the execution was cool.
Exit Wounds is cool

vs

Unemployed

Worm wp is stretched and not that effective.
Cum line is gross as shit but cool, I guess.
Pucker line is cool, I thought you could've taken it in a stronger direction tho.
I didn't know there was a poll, lol. Line is ok though.
Russia line is cool but feels a little out of date.
Crown line is aight too.

Good battle. Joog was solid. Unemployed was really good too but it almost seemed like the lines missed that little extra oomph and x-factor. That was the difference.. Joog just had a little more shine.

Vote -- Sour Joog

For Battling
01-27-2018, 09:36 AM
Sour Joog Wins 7-1