Alvin Karpis vs bleak - KARP WINS

[Orc]

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THE WINTER CLASSIC
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Alvin Karpis bleak

[bleak]

I'll match

[Alvin Karpis]

Idk 12

[bleak]

Just need honesty here no hate

Gun bars the new thing huh? no more clowning? i have to start openin from the side like a mail truck or bang toys like retarded kids? got it

some honesty: gun bars won't get u a win in this battle, fiend
I'll get hammered drunk, diss&trigger 'Pis til the end of the magazine
here's my problem: I bang toys it's 3 Macs, bombs & 4 Ruges.
& then: when you bang toys... 3 strap ons w/ more dudes.
Kar KO'd w/ a punt kick. I'm a viper &this frail fuck's done
Ground level for delivs, he'll get opened from the side like a mail truck does
Paying Raw Roc to your people. comes to Kannons? Holding the ace.
Ur thinking SMACK Cave Gang, I'm talking the hood turns &folds in your face.
ock's not suit for blockbusters. Chock fulla old bars.
be a Ghost in the Shell of what he was, cz his punches dated as those are.
No comparison. I'm handing fronts to fiends;he takes it and sniffs it.
It's vicious, we'll see Vin diagram short if he ain't making the difference.

12

[Alvin Karpis]

Check my resume, I champ these tourneys and you’re just another lame
You think AK won’t make it to the end? check your fuckin name
My girl ride or die she’ll do the time, you poor bastard
Watch my Bailiff a finger n pull the trigger, merk ya, and laugh in court after
That compliment battle with swerve was weird, you must be the nicest head
Your pic reminded me of that 127 hour movie except you should have died instead
Honestly I don’t do heights my friend but don’t pretend you’re realer
I bet you enjoyed it until you looked down like head from Silver
Air shit with rare clips, you better prepare bitch
When you see my sticks all over you’ll be scared like it’s Blair Witch
Let’s don’t front, you never been dope and this when the joy ends
Your Achilles Heel... is actually a mountain you climbed up with your boyfriend

[Schadenfreude]

some honesty: gun bars won't get u a win in this battle, fiend
I'll get hammered drunk, diss&trigger 'Pis til the end of the magazine
'Pis til' I mean you tried it, but no.
here's my problem: I bang toys it's 3 Macs, bombs & 4 Ruges.
& then: when you bang toys... 3 strap ons w/ more dudes.
Weak
Kar KO'd w/ a punt kick. I'm a viper &this frail fuck's done
Ground level for delivs, he'll get opened from the side like a mail truck does
Couple ppl have done this already
Paying Raw Roc to your people. comes to Kannons? Holding the ace.
Ur thinking SMACK Cave Gang, I'm talking the hood turns &folds in your face.
Terrible wording
ock's not suit for blockbusters. Chock fulla old bars.
be a Ghost in the Shell of what he was, cz his punches dated as those are.
Weak & played
No comparison. I'm handing fronts to fiends;he takes it and sniffs it.
It's vicious, we'll see Vin diagram short if he ain't making the difference.
Vin diagram could've been hard, but the execution was weak


Check my resume, I champ these tourneys and you’re just another lame
You think AK won’t make it to the end? check your fuckin name
Super simple, but effective
My girl ride or die she’ll do the time, you poor bastard
Watch my Bailiff a finger n pull the trigger, merk ya, and laugh in court after
Just OK
That compliment battle with swerve was weird, you must be the nicest head
Your pic reminded me of that 127 hour movie except you should have died instead
Decent
Honestly I don’t do heights my friend but don’t pretend you’re realer
I bet you enjoyed it until you looked down like head from Silver
LOOOOOLLL
Air shit with rare clips, you better prepare bitch
When you see my sticks all over you’ll be scared like it’s Blair Witch
Don't do gun bars
Let’s don’t front, you never been dope and this when the joy ends
Your Achilles Heel... is actually a mountain you climbed up with your boyfriend
Lol good closer

VOTE ALVIN KARPIS

[Saint]

bleak:

some honesty: gun bars won't get u a win in this battle, fiend
I'll get hammered drunk, diss&trigger 'Pis til the end of the magazine

-liked the creativity here. wording hurt here.
Pis is a shaky np imo.

here's my problem: I bang toys it's 3 Macs, bombs & 4 Ruges.
& then: when you bang toys... 3 strap ons w/ more dudes.
Kar KO'd w/ a punt kick. I'm a viper &this frail fuck's done
Ground level for delivs, he'll get opened from the side like a mail truck does

I didnt like this section. 1st one wasnt too good.
2nd blah @ the flip.

Paying Raw Roc to your people. comes to Kannons? Holding the ace.
Ur thinking SMACK Cave Gang, I'm talking the hood turns &folds in your face.

-messy man, setup needed revision.

ock's not suit for blockbusters. Chock fulla old bars.
be a Ghost in the Shell of what he was, cz his punches dated as those are.

- man i like the ghost in the shell ref...excecution was eh

No comparison. I'm handing fronts to fiends;he takes it and sniffs it.
It's vicious, we'll see Vin diagram short if he ain't making the difference.
- diagram cool wp. i actually give u this one. do more of this.

- bleak man...you have some solid ideas but wording is hurting you. I think a bit more reading & changing the words around may help you.

Alvin had Silver & Achilles Hill both dope
I've seen bailiff, it was decent
Seen sticks/Blair witch from cro, his was better tho
127 hours was ok.
Opener was almost too easy, but aight

vote- karp

[Paradigm]

some honesty: gun bars won't get u a win in this battle, fiend
I'll get hammered drunk, diss&trigger 'Pis til the end of the magazine
nah...
here's my problem: I bang toys it's 3 Macs, bombs & 4 Ruges.
& then: when you bang toys... 3 strap ons w/ more dudes.
lol nah wack
Kar KO'd w/ a punt kick. I'm a viper &this frail fuck's done
Ground level for delivs, he'll get opened from the side like a mail truck does
lol this is dope
Paying Raw Roc to your people. comes to Kannons? Holding the ace.
Ur thinking SMACK Cave Gang, I'm talking the hood turns &folds in your face.
nah not feeling
ock's not suit for blockbusters. Chock fulla old bars.
be a Ghost in the Shell of what he was, cz his punches dated as those are.
this concept is so old lol execution fell short
No comparison. I'm handing fronts to fiends;he takes it and sniffs it.
It's vicious, we'll see Vin diagram short if he ain't making the difference.
dope ending to the concept but would like to see like a better setup

Check my resume, I champ these tourneys and you’re just another lame
You think AK won’t make it to the end? check your fuckin name
lazy nameplay
My girl ride or die she’ll do the time, you poor bastard
Watch my Bailiff a finger n pull the trigger, merk ya, and laugh in court after
this is cool
That compliment battle with swerve was weird, you must be the nicest head
Your pic reminded me of that 127 hour movie except you should have died instead
lol coo
Honestly I don’t do heights my friend but don’t pretend you’re realer
I bet you enjoyed it until you looked down like head from Silver
lmao jesus
Air shit with rare clips, you better prepare bitch
When you see my sticks all over you’ll be scared like it’s Blair Witch
like the concept but fell short for me
Let’s don’t front, you never been dope and this when the joy ends
Your Achilles Heel... is actually a mountain you climbed up with your boyfriend
miss


i think bleak had the lotb to be honest but alvin was 100% more consistent and had some cool bars and only one real miss.

Vote - Alvin Karpis

[Flow]

Sorry Bleak but I couldnt really find any bar I felt was up to your potential. Some attempts in there that could of been dope eg opener and closer but just didnt connect like they should have. The deliver truck side opening wasnt too bad but nothing came close to karpis bae court line for example. Plus he jabbed prettt consitently throughout. So for that i vote

AK

[Pinot Grij]

Bleak

Opener ok.
bang toys -- ehh.
Mail truck is ok, but feels a little old.
That next one got way too much shit going on in it.
Ghost bar is ok.
Closer no good.

Yo, I can't lie and you're probably gonna be mad about it, but I just wasn't feeling this drop at all.

Alvin Karpis

Opener is a cool little flip.
Bailiff is pretty nice.
127 hours not my favorite.
Silver line is funny.
I'm not a fan of sticks lines and even this one is pretty simplistic.
Closer ok.

AK got this off a few strong lines, but there were some misses that weren't up my alley. Again, I think Bleak has had some cool drops but this entry was not my taste at all.

Vote -- Alvin Karpis

[Barcotic]

Bleak
nobody calls him vin or pis so those nameplays were ineffective. i appreciate the creative side but u went too far w them

bang toys was lol
ghost in the shell was a dope concept but wording hurt it

vs

Karp
bailiff was decent
silver joint wasnt bad but a scared of heights diss? light af
blair witch was just ok

i mean this could def go either way. I got bleak's standing out more but alvin w the consistency
& in a 12 liner i gtg w consistency
v/karp

[WRATH]

some honesty: gun bars won't get u a win in this battle, fiend
I'll get hammered drunk, diss&trigger 'Pis til the end of the magazine

Trigger pis? Tf is that?

here's my problem: I bang toys it's 3 Macs, bombs & 4 Ruges.
& then: when you bang toys... 3 strap ons w/ more dudes.

Light

Kar KO'd w/ a punt kick. I'm a viper &this frail fuck's done
Ground level for delivs, he'll get opened from the side like a mail truck does

Nigga, bang toys AND mail truck? For Battling

Paying Raw Roc to your people. comes to Kannons? Holding the ace.
Ur thinking SMACK Cave Gang, I'm talking the hood turns &folds in your face.
ock's not suit for blockbusters. Chock fulla old bars.
be a Ghost in the Shell of what he was, cz his punches dated as those are.
No comparison. I'm handing fronts to fiends;he takes it and sniffs it.
It's vicious, we'll see Vin diagram short if he ain't making the difference.

12



Check my resume, I champ these tourneys and you’re just another lame
You think AK won’t make it to the end? check your fuckin name
My girl ride or die she’ll do the time, you poor bastard
Watch my Bailiff a finger n pull the trigger, merk ya, and laugh in court after
That compliment battle with swerve was weird, you must be the nicest head
Your pic reminded me of that 127 hour movie except you should have died instead
Honestly I don’t do heights my friend but don’t pretend you’re realer
I bet you enjoyed it until you looked down like head from Silver
Air shit with rare clips, you better prepare bitch
When you see my sticks all over you’ll be scared like it’s Blair Witch
Let’s don’t front, you never been dope and this when the joy ends
Your Achilles Heel... is actually a mountain you climbed up with your boyfriend


I cant read the rest of this without the strong feeling that bleak bit zelph

V AK

[bleak]

It all stemmed from Karp's post that I quoted at the beginning. Both concepts are pretty played tbh good battle tho Karp

& it's trigger pistol you fkn simp

[WRATH]

Dumb who talks like that