WRATH vs Barcotic - BARCOTIC WINS

[Orc]

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THE WINTER CLASSIC
The Premier Text Battling Tournament


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must match the 1st person's line amount.


Barcotic WRATH

[Barcotic]

14

[WRATH]

Light work

[Barcotic]

16

WRATH aka Merc
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=125547
lol

dont lea' ya girl 'round me or im slammin from the jump
Mercury placeable, even to a bitch who can fit a planet in her cunt
ill feed her PRO bone.. from the back as the hoe's prone, brother
spin her around n give her 2 fingers before i finish -stone cold stunner
wrath stares @ his reflection & sees a lonely queer, not a prodigy
lookin like he got slammed on his face, i think he Oezdemir an apology
nc brings the stars out, mate.. n Bar downplays for NO man
when it comes to the Limewire u still here if ur bars outdate the program
i beat cats in ski masks. want beef? that's bold fam
act stupid n lose ur car, these hands'll give u Z's -that's ZOLTAN!
ur security system is obsolete, b.. the street heat is slick
if the Kamloops every 8 seconds, ill put a hole in u the size of BC in 6
this man's a softy. shit, an obvious clown and joke
go 'head, Seguin how u tuff n ill shove a hockey stick down ur throat
claimin Light work in ur check-in like u've gained more respect now
the only light work u'll be gettin will brighten the stage for me next rd.

[WRATH]

Do I even lift? Shittt.... is a fat pussy warm?
Pull up on bar, strong arm hold em up - THATS perfect form
Big shells, this a tortoise, U need to listen cause this important
Idk Why u post mortem wordplays when they just come off as stiff, rigor mortis
As far as i've seen im King, feds gonna tape off the lime green
My lines go over heads.. shoulders knees and toes 2- nigga thats a crime scene
Im known for killin' punani, text yo girl nd she send nudes of her body
Told her ya X Square, she gave me the circle while i threw up the triangle... illuminati
Death by shootout, perfect aim, this like lambs to the slaughter
You gon take more shots to the head then when Destroyer found out that he aint the father
Me n ya broad get intimate and yo copying ass wont interject
You steal lines from URL.. not the battle league bro the entire internet
Star power off a fire flower, breakin bricks down is too easy
You are NOT the first player to jump in ranks.... nigga you Luigi
Round here we see you as fake, so killing u wont be a mistake
If I'ma pop Canada star.. it aint Justin Bieber Weeknd or Drake

[Problumatic]

Oh this was a good one. Close ass battle.
Barcotic .. that Zoltan line was slick, 2 fingers/stone cold stunner was a decent punch, hockey line was aight and the planet/cunt one was a little ehh but it wasn’t just bad or anything.

Wrath - post Mortem wordplay was DOPE...crime scene like was slick, URL line was plain funny lol..Luigi was aight..I think you were taking aim at his Avi so if you were you get a little more credit for that one ..Illuminati line was a lil corny..

Close ass battle.. but i’ma give it to Wrath based off that Post Mortem line ..it was so close that one line made the difference for me . Good shit

V/WRATH

[Amen]

dont lea' ya girl 'round me or im slammin from the jump
Mercury placeable, even to a bitch who can fit a planet in her cunt
ill feed her PRO bone.. from the back as the hoe's prone, brother
spin her around n give her 2 fingers before i finish -stone cold stunner
You always have at least 1 WWE reference, yo lol...
wrath stares @ his reflection & sees a lonely queer, not a prodigy
lookin like he got slammed on his face, i think he Oezdemir an apology
ur security system is obsolete, b.. the street heat is slick
if the Kamloops every 8 seconds, ill put a hole in u the size of BC in 6
this man's a softy. shit, an obvious clown and joke
go 'head, Seguin how u tuff n ill shove a hockey stick down ur throat

vs

Big shells, this a tortoise, U need to listen cause this important
Idk Why u post mortem wordplays when they just come off as stiff, rigor mortis
As far as i've seen im King, feds gonna tape off the lime green
My lines go over heads.. shoulders knees and toes 2- nigga thats a crime scene
Played concept flipped well.
Me n ya broad get intimate and yo copying ass wont interject
You steal lines from URL.. not the battle league bro the entire internet
The irony in this one lol...

I got Barc w/ more of a consistent and cleaner hitting verse.

[Ronin]

V. Bar

I hate that other dudes style. It makes me cringe.

[For Battling]

V. Bar

I hate that other dudes style. It makes me cringe.

Get this shit outta here fagit

[Suthaveli]

dont lea' ya girl 'round me or im slammin from the jump
Mercury placeable, even to a bitch who can fit a planet in her cunt
ill feed her PRO bone.. from the back as the hoe's prone, brother
spin her around n give her 2 fingers before i finish -stone cold stunner
ur security system is obsolete, b.. the street heat is slick
if the Kamloops every 8 seconds, ill put a hole in u the size of BC in 6

I hate your wrestling references but understand you’re a fan its a topic you’re likely knowledgeable on & possibly nostalgia. I did like this stone cold line tho. Don’t give me stuff to click on. I hate clicking stuff. I refuse to post links in my shit no matter hwstrong it will make my verses case, lol. Cool verse tho.

Vs

Big shells, this a tortoise, U need to listen cause this important
Idk Why u post mortem wordplays when they just come off as stiff, rigor mortis
Me n ya broad get intimate and yo copying ass wont interject
You steal lines from URL.. not the battle league bro the entire internet

Brah, you’ve gotten better over time. A few bars miss due to execution but they weren’t bad. I actually almost quoted that overhead press line but didn’t due to me seeing sooo many bar lines. But I like the flip & execution.


If barc wasn’t so mad & charged up over the destro thing this def could’ve been a upset. Wrath verse,IMO wasn’t bad & depending on preference could go either way.

Mvgt- Barcotic

[Schadenfreude]

dont lea' ya girl 'round me or im slammin from the jump
Mercury placeable, even to a bitch who can fit a planet in her cunt
Lol good opener
ill feed her PRO bone.. from the back as the hoe's prone, brother
spin her around n give her 2 fingers before i finish -stone cold stunner
Naaaw, made your point w/ the opener
wrath stares @ his reflection & sees a lonely queer, not a prodigy
lookin like he got slammed on his face, i think he Oezdemir an apology
Just OK
nc brings the stars out, mate.. n Bar downplays for NO man
when it comes to the Limewire u still here if ur bars outdate the program
Decent
i beat cats in ski masks. want beef? that's bold fam
act stupid n lose ur car, these hands'll give u Z's -that's ZOLTAN!
Concept's creative, but didn't relate to Wrath at all
ur security system is obsolete, b.. the street heat is slick
if the Kamloops every 8 seconds, ill put a hole in u the size of BC in 6
Decent
this man's a softy. shit, an obvious clown and joke
go 'head, Seguin how u tuff n ill shove a hockey stick down ur throat
Again only decent
claimin Light work in ur check-in like u've gained more respect now
the only light work u'll be gettin will brighten the stage for me next rd.
Good closer


Do I even lift? Shittt.... is a fat pussy warm?
Pull up on bar, strong arm hold em up - THATS perfect form
Great execution to a played concept
Big shells, this a tortoise, U need to listen cause this important
Idk Why u post mortem wordplays when they just come off as stiff, rigor mortis
Dope
As far as i've seen im King, feds gonna tape off the lime green
My lines go over heads.. shoulders knees and toes 2- nigga thats a crime scene
Familiar concept, but I like it
Im known for killin' punani, text yo girl nd she send nudes of her body
Told her ya X Square, she gave me the circle while i threw up the triangle... illuminati
Weak
Death by shootout, perfect aim, this like lambs to the slaughter
You gon take more shots to the head then when Destroyer found out that he aint the father
Nice
Me n ya broad get intimate and yo copying ass wont interject
You steal lines from URL.. not the battle league bro the entire internet
Another played concept that you didn't throw a dope spin on
Star power off a fire flower, breakin bricks down is too easy
You are NOT the first player to jump in ranks.... nigga you Luigi
Lmao Idk why I like this so much
Round here we see you as fake, so killing u wont be a mistake
If I'ma pop Canada star.. it aint Justin Bieber Weeknd or Drake
Too predictable

Overall: Barc I always enjoy your creativity, but you don't really throw haymakers. Those punches were consistent, yet none of them stood out as LOTB quality. Wrath your wording is crisp & clean, but those played concept continue to be a problem & it's costing you. Anyway verse for verse, Barc's too experienced VOTE BARCOTIC.

[Pinot Grij]

Barc

Opener dope
Stunner is dope punch but PRO Bone is a shit setup.
Oezdemir was lmao.
Limewire is cool concept but delivery was a bit fucked.
Not feeling Zoltan.
Kamloops is ok.
Seguin is a stretch and you know it.
Closer is aight.

Started really well -- then tapered out for a bit but the closer put things back on track.

WRATH

Opening line is fucking hilarious, punch left something to be desired.. not fierce wp.
Rigor mortis is a cool flip -- but mortem as wp was a stretch.
Crime scene is ok.
Illuminati ok.
Shots to the head is played.
URL is dope -- complete and effective. Nice. A punch that's been sitting under all our noses this whole time -- those are the best kind.
Luigi is ehh.
Closer is a throwaway.

WRATH had that one URL bar, but Barc was too polished. Both stretched wordplay a lot -- Barc's hits off the top were strong though -- WRATH could've made it closer with a stronger start off the hop.

Vote -- Barcotic

[Paradigm]

dont lea' ya girl 'round me or im slammin from the jump
Mercury placeable, even to a bitch who can fit a planet in her cunt
eh miss not feeling kinda awkward to me
ill feed her PRO bone.. from the back as the hoe's prone, brother
spin her around n give her 2 fingers before i finish -stone cold stunner
dope
wrath stares @ his reflection & sees a lonely queer, not a prodigy
lookin like he got slammed on his face, i think he Oezdemir an apology
lol hit... idk think this couldve been flipped into something dope tho
nc brings the stars out, mate.. n Bar downplays for NO man
when it comes to the Limewire u still here if ur bars outdate the program
hit
i beat cats in ski masks. want beef? that's bold fam
act stupid n lose ur car, these hands'll give u Z's -that's ZOLTAN!
miss
ur security system is obsolete, b.. the street heat is slick
if the Kamloops every 8 seconds, ill put a hole in u the size of BC in 6
i dont get this tbh
this man's a softy. shit, an obvious clown and joke
go 'head, Seguin how u tuff n ill shove a hockey stick down ur throat
soft
claimin Light work in ur check-in like u've gained more respect now
the only light work u'll be gettin will brighten the stage for me next rd.
lmao nice

Do I even lift? Shittt.... is a fat pussy warm?
Pull up on bar, strong arm hold em up - THATS perfect form
dope concept i like it but its missing like a piece in the setup
Big shells, this a tortoise, U need to listen cause this important
Idk Why u post mortem wordplays when they just come off as stiff, rigor mortis
ending needs work, miss
As far as i've seen im King, feds gonna tape off the lime green
My lines go over heads.. shoulders knees and toes 2- nigga thats a crime scene
creative soft hit
Im known for killin' punani, text yo girl nd she send nudes of her body
Told her ya X Square, she gave me the circle while i threw up the triangle... illuminati
nah lol
Death by shootout, perfect aim, this like lambs to the slaughter
You gon take more shots to the head then when Destroyer found out that he aint the father
nah miss
Me n ya broad get intimate and yo copying ass wont interject
You steal lines from URL.. not the battle league bro the entire internet
lol hit
Star power off a fire flower, breakin bricks down is too easy
You are NOT the first player to jump in ranks.... nigga you Luigi
lol this is missing a good ending idk kinda a miss
Round here we see you as fake, so killing u wont be a mistake
If I'ma pop Canada star.. it aint Justin Bieber Weeknd or Drake
nah miss

Wrath had some good concepts and a few hits nothing spectacular but is missing some like delivery in his good hits to make them dope. Bar had some lazy bars but was more consistent and had lotb.

Vote - Barcotic