Joe Boston vs. DynamiCz - JB WINS

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Joe Boston DynamiCz

[DynamiCz]

Checkin IN..! Imma do 12

[Joe Boston]

Check

[Joe Boston]

12 DynamiCz

Think Joes that beatable bullshit egos ill make him eat those
Delay one Big "Fuckyou" to this veteran, my hatred for him like Gregory Salcidos
Your shots like missed free throws that accuracy off on an everday basis
bullets have u missing eyes,nose n ears, clues couldnt put u back together like Guess Who? faces
Ur bitch packed ur suitcases, says ur broke, wack in bed, just complete rubbish
When im sipping Samsonites shell let me grab those handles like rollaway luggage
I'll dot your eye and get that shit published face'll have that new frontpage look
If u attempt to run Danielle,Steele to ur dome that'll be hotter then her best selling book
Your not a crook in these streets i studies your repertoire
You'll never have an Enterprise in ur hood theyll just find ur dead body in the trunk of ur rentacar
In the bedroom ur bitch says ur subpar thats why she joins me in Minaj's
If u say Baio lets fuck! Its usually ends up with u being subjected to molestation charges

[DynamiCz]

Young child, my promotion was carrying straps, i keep my Gun Raised,
Burial praise..hands together, im taking "Joe Out Of Boston"..02 Celtics Trade//
Punchline League was Not Ya Place, In order to be "King" you cant Resemble The Ace,
How you focus..when you be having "Problems W/ Amen" like you cant Remember Ya Grace//
Ya style they "Pump it Up"..killed him, the "Ransom Note" read ya Flow Nothing,
When my Mood is Muzik, make ya life a "Everyday Struggle" when i push Joe Buttons//
Had to Toss The Mag..His Position was off..I had to Prop The Bag,
Thought he would "Heal(Heel)Off Back" until they realized i had Joe..Boston Crabbed//
Shotgun inside the distance..I learned what "In Reach" Meant,
Grip on the handle..the kickback "Shook My Hands" like a Mutual Agreement//
Lets be honest your career is mad fraud, your battle verses are Mad Odd,
The disbelief you would write a verse telling somebody he has a Dad Bod//

[Facts MuhSheen]

Felt Joe came with a few harder hitting punches here. The Samsonite and the Enterprise punches were the standouts from his verse here. Rest was mainly just ok at best. Closer was probably the weakest bar of the verse. Solid enough for the W here, though.

DynamiCz had some concepts that were good for the most part. Amen / Grace connection was too obvious to really make any impact. Joe Buttons punch would've been nice of it wasn't for the s at the end of the word, which makes it unnatural since it doesn't work as his name anymore. Dad bod closer was weird, although I am fairly new to the site, so I'll admit I don't get the punch. Either way, it didn't change the outcome of my vote.

MVGT: Joe.

[Habitat]

Think Joes that beatable bullshit egos ill make him eat those
Delay one Big "Fuckyou" to this veteran, my hatred for him like Gregory Salcidos
not feeling this one
Your shots like missed free throws that accuracy off on an everday basis
bullets have u missing eyes,nose n ears, clues couldnt put u back together like Guess Who? faces
didnt like this
Ur bitch packed ur suitcases, says ur broke, wack in bed, just complete rubbish
When im sipping Samsonites shell let me grab those handles like rollaway luggage
little bit of a reach but ima give this to you. decent hit here
I'll dot your eye and get that shit published face'll have that new frontpage look
If u attempt to run Danielle,Steele to ur dome that'll be hotter then her best selling book
not feelin this one
Your not a crook in these streets i studies your repertoire
You'll never have an Enterprise in ur hood theyll just find ur dead body in the trunk of ur rentacar
nice
In the bedroom ur bitch says ur subpar thats why she joins me in Minaj's
If u say Baio lets fuck! Its usually ends up with u being subjected to molestation charges
not a fan

vs

Young child, my promotion was carrying straps, i keep my Gun Raised,
Burial praise..hands together, im taking "Joe Out Of Boston"..02 Celtics Trade//
light
Punchline League was Not Ya Place, In order to be "King" you cant Resemble The Ace,
How you focus..when you be having "Problems W/ Amen" like you cant Remember Ya Grace//
not harsh enough. Telling someone they dont have focus is not an insult and also following from the focus angle to having problems with amen was a weird correlation
Ya style they "Pump it Up"..killed him, the "Ransom Note" read ya Flow Nothing,
When my Mood is Muzik, make ya life a "Everyday Struggle" when i push Joe Buttons//
reach
Had to Toss The Mag..His Position was off..I had to Prop The Bag,
Thought he would "Heal(Heel)Off Back" until they realized i had Joe..Boston Crabbed//
not a fan of this
Shotgun inside the distance..I learned what "In Reach" Meant,
Grip on the handle..the kickback "Shook My Hands" like a Mutual Agreement//
didn't like this either. not creative you're just saying kick back caused your hands to shake. i get the correlation with mutual agreement but this is not harsh
Lets be honest your career is mad fraud, your battle verses are Mad Odd,
The disbelief you would write a verse telling somebody he has a Dad Bod//
statementish

Joe had a couple decent hits. Wasn't a fan of dynamics verse. he has potential but needs to work on making his punches more harsh.

v/jb

[WRATH]

12 DynamiCz

Think Joes that beatable bullshit egos ill make him eat those
Delay one Big "Fuckyou" to this veteran, my hatred for him like Gregory Salcidos

Multis there the punch lacks

Your shots like missed free throws that accuracy off on an everday basis
bullets have u missing eyes,nose n ears, clues couldnt put u back together like Guess Who? faces

Lot going on but i liked it

Ur bitch packed ur suitcases, says ur broke, wack in bed, just complete rubbish
When im sipping Samsonites shell let me grab those handles like rollaway luggage

Okay

I'll dot your eye and get that shit published face'll have that new frontpage look
If u attempt to run Danielle,Steele to ur dome that'll be hotter then her best selling book

Nice

Your not a crook in these streets i studies your repertoire
You'll never have an Enterprise in ur hood theyll just find ur dead body in the trunk of ur rentacar

This cool

In the bedroom ur bitch says ur subpar thats why she joins me in Minaj's
If u say Baio lets fuck! Its usually ends up with u being subjected to molestation charges

Reach



Young child, my promotion was carrying straps, i keep my Gun Raised,
Burial praise..hands together, im taking "Joe Out Of Boston"..02 Celtics Trade//

Okay

Punchline League was Not Ya Place, In order to be "King" you cant Resemble The Ace,
How you focus..when you be having "Problems W/ Amen" like you cant Remember Ya Grace//

Solid

Ya style they "Pump it Up"..killed him, the "Ransom Note" read ya Flow Nothing,fat wife
When my Mood is Muzik, make ya life a "Everyday Struggle" when i push Joe Buttons//

Okay

Had to Toss The Mag..His Position was off..I had to Prop The Bag,
Thought he would "Heal(Heel)Off Back" until they realized i had Joe..Boston Crabbed//

Nah

Shotgun inside the distance..I learned what "In Reach" Meant,fat wife
Grip on the handle..the kickback "Shook My Hands" like a Mutual Agreement//

Cool

Lets be honest your career is mad fraud, your battle verses are Mad Odd,
The disbelief you would write a verse telling somebody he has a Dad Bod//

Punch lacked


Joe got it

V joe

[Nick James]

Joe boston.. wording was off in sum areas so the set ups n punches didnt exactly mesh together to create a significant impact but u def had lotb with the enterprise punch. I liked that.. the closer was aight for a current event flip.

Dynamicz.. concepts were cool u just lacked execution in sum parts. opener culdve been a quotable but the angle u went as far as wording it didnt have that impact. The amen line was also a good concept just wasnt enuff done with it to generate sum sting. I fucked with the mutual agreement punch tho.. altho its not much of a diss at ur actual opponent I still thought it was nice lol.

Rlly gotta go wit boston for the enterprise line..

V/ boston

[DynamiCz]

Good shit Joe bro!! I got to get in the groove of how you guys battle here on this site, keep killin tho kiddo..!

[Pinot Grij]

Joe -- Guess Who and Enterprise. Baio was a good try that cracked a smile, but still pretty dumb. appreciate the attempt though.

vs

Dynamicz - referencing a vague trade from 15 years ago that most people wouldn't get is a reach. Remember ya grace is weird wording. Joe Buttons is a good attempt but the execution was off, liked where your head is at tho. Dad bod is not really a punchline, but the rhyming was crispy. Overall, construction is solid, just gotta up ur content.

Vote -- Joe Boston

[For Battling]

Think Joes that beatable bullshit egos ill make him eat those
Delay one Big "Fuckyou" to this veteran, my hatred for him like Gregory Salcidos
1st line is hard to read, lacks appropriate commas. Concept and punch overall I wasn’t frelin too much
Your shots like missed free throws that accuracy off on an everday basis
bullets have u missing eyes,nose n ears, clues couldnt put u back together like Guess Who? faces
this was good bro, I love lines like this
Ur bitch packed ur suitcases, says ur broke, wack in bed, just complete rubbish
When im sipping Samsonites shell let me grab those handles like rollaway luggage
nah idk what that is lol
I'll dot your eye and get that shit published face'll have that new frontpage look
If u attempt to run Danielle,Steele to ur dome that'll be hotter then her best selling book
danielle wp forced Man didn’t fit in too good, overall decent punch
Your not a crook in these streets i studies your repertoire
You'll never have an Enterprise in ur hood theyll just find ur dead body in the trunk of ur rentacar
commas!!! Good punch tho
In the bedroom ur bitch says ur subpar thats why she joins me in Minaj's
If u say Baio lets fuck! Its usually ends up with u being subjected to molestation charges
wasnt feeling it

Vs


Young child, my promotion was carrying straps, i keep my Gun Raised,
Burial praise..hands together, im taking "Joe Out Of Boston"..02 Celtics Trade//
everything is good about this punch except the ancient concept, wording & execution I’m diggin
Punchline League was Not Ya Place, In order to be "King" you cant Resemble The Ace,
How you focus..when you be having "Problems W/ Amen" like you cant Remember Ya Grace//
alright not bad
Ya style they "Pump it Up"..killed him, the "Ransom Note" read ya Flow Nothing,
When my Mood is Muzik, make ya life a "Everyday Struggle" when i push Joe Buttons//
oh nah that’s played, you living in 2002 my Man straight up lol
Had to Toss The Mag..His Position was off..I had to Prop The Bag,
Thought he would "Heal(Heel)Off Back" until they realized i had Joe..Boston Crabbed//
you don’t have to explain wordplay in a punch with ( ), it hurts you
Shotgun inside the distance..I learned what "In Reach" Meant,
Grip on the handle..the kickback "Shook My Hands" like a Mutual Agreement//
lmao I liked this, fuckin dead ass laughed
Lets be honest your career is mad fraud, your battle verses are Mad Odd,
The disbelief you would write a verse telling somebody he has a Dad Bod//
nah man

Shoutout to DynamiCz for posting, this was good first verse here but you gotta definitely freshen up your concepts. Wording and rhyming is all on point for damn sure, only thing hurting you is the old concepts.

Guess who, enterprise

Vs

Mutual agreement


Vote JB

[Saint]

Guess who was fresh to me, a little jumbled
Enterprise - cool hit

Dynamic shows signs being out the loop of text battling. Just need better concepts
Mutual agreement was better for s&f

vote- joe

[Barcotic]

Jb
enterprise was coo

not feeling the rest

vs

Dy
problems w/ amen hit, a little corny but creative
shook the hands was dope af conceptwise but baaarely hit impactwise

iunno, really close
v/dynamicz

[For Battling]

Joe Boston Wins 7-1