View Full Version : For Battling vs. bleak - FB WINS
For Battling
01-28-2018, 11:47 PM
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classickERBL bleak
bleak
02-02-2018, 01:46 AM
24 I MIA I Beat Cop I "Aspiring Admin" I Blah
My animals giving hands out... got pro reach to most regions
24 Palms from Panama, You'll be 24/MIA way South of those beaches
Long clips, the Fonzness is real w/ hands in my pants.
my goons yelling ayyeeee! It ain't the thumbs that make you panic and dance
50 on opp head, he'll drop dead when the Desi kicks.
I forget the slight, work. me &my shooters driven by dead precedence
1 Love in your avy, so we know on vday a chick isn't showing.
Talking tough like: "I'll put a ghost in a box"... that he checks yes or no in
For Battling
02-02-2018, 04:38 PM
Ugh
You’ll be the star of this movie, everybody’ll wanna meet bleak
My crews directing outside, shooting ur trailer before the film like a sneak peak
Then it’s ur fam, I’m killin’ errrrr last one of u dumb fucks
Garbage time.. I’m unloading cans in front of ur house like dump trucks
& ur girls been sus’ frm the start. If u dnt knw what I mean, u’ve got a problem
She’s a mermaid.. looks good at the top but starts gettin’ fishy at the bottom
So if ur a hitter let me see!! I’m slangin’ beamers until he bleeds
n if it ain’t me then it’s the team, bustin’ shells in the dugout like sunflower seeds
WRATH
02-03-2018, 02:09 AM
My animals giving hands out... got pro reach to most regions
24 Palms from Panama, You'll be 24/MIA way South of those beaches
Okay
Long clips, the Fonzness is real w/ hands in my pants.
my goons yelling ayyeeee! It ain't the thumbs that make you panic and dance
Alright
50 on opp head, he'll drop dead when the Desi kicks.
I forget the slight, work. me &my shooters driven by dead precedence
Coulda been more
1 Love in your avy, so we know on vday a chick isn't showing.
Talking tough like: "I'll put a ghost in a box"... that he checks yes or no in
Nah
You’ll be the star of this movie, everybody’ll wanna meet bleak
My crews directing outside, shooting ur trailer before the film like a sneak peak
Fire
Then it’s ur fam, I’m killin’ errrrr last one of u dumb fucks
Garbage time.. I’m unloading cans in front of ur house like dump trucks
Played but cool
& ur girls been sus’ frm the start. If u dnt knw what I mean, u’ve got a problemfat wife
She’s a mermaid.. looks good at the top but starts gettin’ fishy at the bottom
Heh
So if ur a hitter let me see!! I’m slangin’ beamers until he bleedsfat wife
n if it ain’t me then it’s the team, bustin’ shells in the dugout like sunflower seeds
Okay
V zelph
Barcotic
02-03-2018, 01:45 PM
Bleak
opener was dope, nice swag
not feeling the rest of the concepts
vs
Zelph
opener was coo
next hit, already too many 'like's tho
mermaid joint was corny & closer was whack
3 comparison/like bars out of 4? ehhh
v/zelph barely
Nick James
02-03-2018, 02:00 PM
bleak.. wasnt rlly feelin too much but the closer. closer was decent.. rest of the concepts didnt give u much to work from.
for battlin opener was nice but the mermaid shit was dope. Rlly all u needed in this one
FB had one more quote then bleak
V/ FB
ill nik-A
02-03-2018, 03:56 PM
Bleak the mia line was dope to me but then u fell off
Lippet. That trailer Line was fuego. Ur misses weren’t as bad as bleaks
I got lips
Alvin Karpis
02-04-2018, 08:55 AM
Bleak had the opener, ideas were there but wording hurt you
Lip was very generic, I expected a personal or two. Mermaid was clever
But overall just a better verse with less misses
VZelph
Pinot Grij
02-04-2018, 10:47 AM
Bleak closer was a funny personal.. but FB's mermaid bar was my favorite. Fuckin' hilarious.
Vote -- FB
Bleaks opener was decent. But downhill from there out for me sorry fella. Zelph had opener and dumptruck and seeds but bit of an od on gun bars but meh.
Vote zelph
For Battling
02-04-2018, 05:57 PM
For Battling Wins 7-0
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