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For Battling
01-28-2018, 11:47 PM
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classickERBL bleak

bleak
02-02-2018, 01:46 AM
24 I MIA I Beat Cop I "Aspiring Admin" I Blah

My animals giving hands out... got pro reach to most regions
24 Palms from Panama, You'll be 24/MIA way South of those beaches
Long clips, the Fonzness is real w/ hands in my pants.
my goons yelling ayyeeee! It ain't the thumbs that make you panic and dance
50 on opp head, he'll drop dead when the Desi kicks.
I forget the slight, work. me &my shooters driven by dead precedence
1 Love in your avy, so we know on vday a chick isn't showing.
Talking tough like: "I'll put a ghost in a box"... that he checks yes or no in

For Battling
02-02-2018, 04:38 PM
Ugh


You’ll be the star of this movie, everybody’ll wanna meet bleak
My crews directing outside, shooting ur trailer before the film like a sneak peak
Then it’s ur fam, I’m killin’ errrrr last one of u dumb fucks
Garbage time.. I’m unloading cans in front of ur house like dump trucks
& ur girls been sus’ frm the start. If u dnt knw what I mean, u’ve got a problem
She’s a mermaid.. looks good at the top but starts gettin’ fishy at the bottom
So if ur a hitter let me see!! I’m slangin’ beamers until he bleeds
n if it ain’t me then it’s the team, bustin’ shells in the dugout like sunflower seeds

WRATH
02-03-2018, 02:09 AM
My animals giving hands out... got pro reach to most regions
24 Palms from Panama, You'll be 24/MIA way South of those beaches

Okay

Long clips, the Fonzness is real w/ hands in my pants.
my goons yelling ayyeeee! It ain't the thumbs that make you panic and dance

Alright

50 on opp head, he'll drop dead when the Desi kicks.
I forget the slight, work. me &my shooters driven by dead precedence

Coulda been more

1 Love in your avy, so we know on vday a chick isn't showing.
Talking tough like: "I'll put a ghost in a box"... that he checks yes or no in

Nah


You’ll be the star of this movie, everybody’ll wanna meet bleak
My crews directing outside, shooting ur trailer before the film like a sneak peak

Fire

Then it’s ur fam, I’m killin’ errrrr last one of u dumb fucks
Garbage time.. I’m unloading cans in front of ur house like dump trucks

Played but cool

& ur girls been sus’ frm the start. If u dnt knw what I mean, u’ve got a problemfat wife
She’s a mermaid.. looks good at the top but starts gettin’ fishy at the bottom

Heh

So if ur a hitter let me see!! I’m slangin’ beamers until he bleedsfat wife
n if it ain’t me then it’s the team, bustin’ shells in the dugout like sunflower seeds

Okay

V zelph

Barcotic
02-03-2018, 01:45 PM
Bleak
opener was dope, nice swag

not feeling the rest of the concepts

vs

Zelph
opener was coo
next hit, already too many 'like's tho

mermaid joint was corny & closer was whack

3 comparison/like bars out of 4? ehhh
v/zelph barely

Nick James
02-03-2018, 02:00 PM
bleak.. wasnt rlly feelin too much but the closer. closer was decent.. rest of the concepts didnt give u much to work from.

for battlin opener was nice but the mermaid shit was dope. Rlly all u needed in this one


FB had one more quote then bleak

V/ FB

ill nik-A
02-03-2018, 03:56 PM
Bleak the mia line was dope to me but then u fell off

Lippet. That trailer Line was fuego. Ur misses weren’t as bad as bleaks

I got lips

Alvin Karpis
02-04-2018, 08:55 AM
Bleak had the opener, ideas were there but wording hurt you
Lip was very generic, I expected a personal or two. Mermaid was clever
But overall just a better verse with less misses

VZelph

Pinot Grij
02-04-2018, 10:47 AM
Bleak closer was a funny personal.. but FB's mermaid bar was my favorite. Fuckin' hilarious.

Vote -- FB

Flow
02-04-2018, 12:43 PM
Bleaks opener was decent. But downhill from there out for me sorry fella. Zelph had opener and dumptruck and seeds but bit of an od on gun bars but meh.

Vote zelph

For Battling
02-04-2018, 05:57 PM
For Battling Wins 7-0