WRATH vs. Swerve - SWERVE WINS

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WRATH Swerve

[Swerve]

10.

[For Battling]

WRATH Swerve due tonight

[WRATH]

Ya girl pussy is gi-normus, and i dont mean that in the fun way
She got a fat cat, it sleeps too much eats lasagna and hates mondays
YOU ain't got the Cohones, dick. Im not one to play
Bruh got the kind of ladyparts that woulda made mo'nique accept the 500k
You're not apart of the "in" crowd, cut you up to small lil figures..
After this battle u gon be down in the dumps.. left in a ditch and lost in the river
On the road to success ur gonna crash, prolly cause u boring us
Swerve in the nik of time, and you still wont be a champ at 40+
You dont know how to battle. I'll teach you if its kept off the record
You need to learn how to except compliments... THAT you should forget all together

[Swerve]

Greed, Pryde, Wrath? Nah, you lame...I'm dying, that's classic,
Closest you come to cardinal sins is missing your ornithology classes.
Wrath works the angles tryna sneak wins, its a fact you're lame son,
I work the angles so ballistics can't find the trajectory I spatter your brain from.
Getchu where you live, step and only led is what you're tasting,
Drive by leave you with more holes in your frame than a termite infestation.
We can drop the guns and talk knives if you step to my dojo,
I'll stab and leave four handles coming from your skull like the Punisher logo.
Swerve known to be mean, put the gun to your head as you scream,
Squeeze until you C flames and think you're watching the Calgary NHL team.

[Habitat]

Ya girl pussy is gi-normus, and i dont mean that in the fun way
She got a fat cat, it sleeps too much eats lasagna and hates mondays
didn't like how you turned pussy into garfield because people call cats pussy cats this somewhat makes sense but it just comes off lackluster to me.
YOU ain't got the Cohones, dick. Im not one to play
Bruh got the kind of ladyparts that woulda made mo'nique accept the 500k
light
You're not apart of the "in" crowd, cut you up to small lil figures..
After this battle u gon be down in the dumps.. left in a ditch and lost in the river
ok
On the road to success ur gonna crash, prolly cause u boring us
Swerve in the nik of time, and you still wont be a champ at 40+
cool
You dont know how to battle. I'll teach you if its kept off the record
You need to learn how to except compliments... THAT you should forget all together
didn't like this

vs

Greed, Pryde, Wrath? Nah, you lame...I'm dying, that's classic,
Closest you come to cardinal sins is missing your ornithology classes.
didn't like this..
Wrath works the angles tryna sneak wins, its a fact you're lame son,
I work the angles so ballistics can't find the trajectory I spatter your brain from.
cool
Getchu where you live, step and only led is what you're tasting,
Drive by leave you with more holes in your frame than a termite infestation.
ok
We can drop the guns and talk knives if you step to my dojo,
I'll stab and leave four handles coming from your skull like the Punisher logo.
didnt like tihs
Swerve known to be mean, put the gun to your head as you scream,
Squeeze until you C flames and think you're watching the Calgary NHL team.
light

damn this is close af. based off misses I'm gonna have to go with Swerve. This could go any way though.

v/swerve

[Pinot Grij]

Lady parts was the only good line in this whole battle tbh.
Wrath opener was really bad. Nick/nik wp is older than the man himself.

Swerve, not feeling this week’s entry. Who takes ornithology classes? Holes in your frame is played af. Also, I’m noticing that every week you have a “logo” bar - this is like three or four straight verses where you drop a logo bar. And you did it twice. Getting pretty stale.

Vote — wrath

[Joe Boston]

Wrath


Ya girl pussy is gi-normus, and i dont mean that in the fun way
She got a fat cat, it sleeps too much eats lasagna and hates mondays
Rofl dead this was solid as fuck nice Garfield reference only older heads get it great shit
Vvv. H
YOU ain't got the Cohones, dick. Im not one to play
Bruh got the kind of ladyparts that woulda made mo'nique accept the 500k
Like the current reference but i felt the monique netflix cincept could have in a more creative aspect

You're not apart of the "in" crowd, cut you up to small lil figures..
After this battle u gon be down in the dumps.. left in a ditch and lost in the river
Played down in the dumps is overused

On the road to success ur gonna crash, prolly cause u boring us
Swerve in the nik of time, and you still wont be a champ at 40+
Cool

You dont know how to battle. I'll teach you if its kept off the record
You need to learn how to except compliments... THAT you should forget all together
Soft flip

Swerve

Greed, Pryde, Wrath? Nah, you lame...I'm dying, that's classic,
Closest you come to cardinal sins is missing your ornithology classes.
Didnt like this flip felt it didnt have impact

Wrath works the angles tryna sneak wins, its a fact you're lame son,
I work the angles so ballistics can't find the trajectory I spatter your brain from.
Dope reference

Getchu where you live, step and only led is what you're tasting,
Drive by leave you with more holes in your frame than a termite infestation.
Dope metaphore

We can drop the guns and talk knives if you step to my dojo,
I'll stab and leave four handles coming from your skull like the Punisher logo.
The attempt was cool felt couldve done more with the punisher logo reference

Swerve known to be mean, put the gun to your head as you scream,
Squeeze until you C flames and think you're watching the Calgary NHL team.
Played

Feel both were equal in quotes i liked wraths opener i was dying laughing. 40 plus was cool. Swerve had the angles and termites line which landed pretty direct and had impact. So wrath of humor factor comes up u have that but i dont think its enough agaisnt two hard bars.

V/Swerve little more consistent

[Nick James]

damn this is pretty close. Wrath that garfield shit was solid.. the nik of time punch was pretty dope. Im not hip to the monique ish n i wasnt feelin the closer but overall decent verse.

swerve.. opener was kinda weak but the work the angles punch was fire. U finished strong with the punisher ish n the flames punch.. prolly edged it for ya.

V/ swerve

[Saint]

Wasnt feeling alot here tbh.
Swerve had better construction w/ some concepts that fell flat, while wrath bad played shit again
fat cat was passable but eh


ladyparts & ballistics were standouts

vote - swerve, slightly better wording

[bleak]

Ya girl pussy is gi-normus, and i dont mean that in the fun way
She got a fat cat, it sleeps too much eats lasagna and hates mondays

Feels like this should be played but idk I don't remember one.

On the road to success ur gonna crash, prolly cause u boring us
Swerve in the nik of time, and you still wont be a champ at 40+
You dont know how to battle. I'll teach you if its kept off the record
You need to learn how to except compliments... THAT you should forget all together

A little choppy and maybe too much but I fkd w/ it


Wrath works the angles tryna sneak wins, its a fact you're lame son,
I work the angles so ballistics can't find the trajectory I spatter your brain from.

Decent recent personal but maybe should have been the other way around. The setup was the diss imo

Swerve known to be mean, put the gun to your head as you scream,
Squeeze until you C flames and think you're watching the Calgary NHL team

Not my favorite but I felt like you needed 2 quotes for consistency. This and the last had kinda the same vibe

This one is close but I have seen pat drop better. On quotes it's 3-2 and after first read I had WRATH so that's my vote

[Ender]

Ya girl pussy is gi-normus, and i dont mean that in the fun way
She got a fat cat, it sleeps too much eats lasagna and hates Mondays
This was interesting, but the wording stopped it from connecting as well as it could have imo
YOU ain't got the Cohones, dick. Im not one to play
Bruh got the kind of ladyparts that woulda made mo'nique accept the 500k
Again, the concept is cool, but the wording seems a little off
You're not apart of the "in" crowd, cut you up to small lil figures..
After this battle u gon be down in the dumps.. left in a ditch and lost in the river
I remember seeing this wordplay back when BBoys was still active, so it felt old to me
On the road to success ur gonna crash, prolly cause u boring us
Swerve in the nik of time, and you still wont be a champ at 40+
I liked this
You dont know how to battle. I'll teach you if its kept off the record
You need to learn how to except compliments... THAT you should forget all together
Wasn't feeling this

Greed, Pryde, Wrath? Nah, you lame...I'm dying, that's classic,
Closest you come to cardinal sins is missing your ornithology classes.
This was alright
Wrath works the angles tryna sneak wins, its a fact you're lame son,
I work the angles so ballistics can't find the trajectory I spatter your brain from.
I wasn't feeling this
Getchu where you live, step and only led is what you're tasting,
Drive by leave you with more holes in your frame than a termite infestation.
This was nice
We can drop the guns and talk knives if you step to my dojo,
I'll stab and leave four handles coming from your skull like the Punisher logo.
This didn't work for me
Swerve known to be mean, put the gun to your head as you scream,
Squeeze until you C flames and think you're watching the Calgary NHL team.
Had to Google this, I'm not familiar with the NHL. It was alright


I thought Wrath actually had better and more original concepts, but the wording spoiled a lot of it for me. Swerve dropped solid enough to take the win.

Vote - Swerve

[For Battling]

Ya girl pussy is gi-normus, and i dont mean that in the fun way
She got a fat cat, it sleeps too much eats lasagna and hates mondays
yea this is a weird one, I’m all for outside of the box concepts but this was worded weird idk
YOU ain't got the Cohones, dick. Im not one to play
Bruh got the kind of ladyparts that woulda made mo'nique accept the 500k
nice I liked it
You're not apart of the "in" crowd, cut you up to small lil figures..
After this battle u gon be down in the dumps.. left in a ditch and lost in the river
nah this type of stuff is played man
On the road to success ur gonna crash, prolly cause u boring us
Swerve in the nik of time, and you still wont be a champ at 40+
decent
You dont know how to battle. I'll teach you if its kept off the record
You need to learn how to except compliments... THAT you should forget all together
nah

1 hitter here (Monique), and 1 decent line....gotta work on better execution man cause you definitely have nice concepts but they’re falling short

Vs


Greed, Pryde, Wrath? Nah, you lame...I'm dying, that's classic,
Closest you come to cardinal sins is missing your ornithology classes.
pretty corny tbh
Wrath works the angles tryna sneak wins, its a fact you're lame son,
I work the angles so ballistics can't find the trajectory I spatter your brain from.
buh listics? I’m not seeing this bro
Getchu where you live, step and only led is what you're tasting,
Drive by leave you with more holes in your frame than a termite infestation.
alright
We can drop the guns and talk knives if you step to my dojo,
I'll stab and leave four handles coming from your skull like the Punisher logo.
alright again not bad
Swerve known to be mean, put the gun to your head as you scream,
Squeeze until you C flames and think you're watching the Calgary NHL team.
ehh decent imo

No hitters from swerve this time around, kind of a letdown tbh coming from a fire verse last week. Although he had no hitters he did have more hits in general and an overall more consistent verse than wrath.

Vote Swerve

[Barcotic]

Wrath
opener was funny, barely hit tho
40+ joint hit cuz of wording

down in the dumps played af, ladyparts & closer too simple

vs

Swerve
work the angles was cool
holes in ur frame hit
same w/ c flames

opener & punisher logo were weak conceptwise

v/swerve by a bar

[Orc]

I have WRATH here. The wording was nice to me and appeared a little bit more. Opener was hilarious and I don't expect it. The lady parts line was really good too. Swerve had the holes in your frame and closer which was nice to me. I do think that WRATH had the better quotes and also some of his almost quotes were a bit stronger such as the Nik line. I got WRATH edgong.

[For Battling]

Swerve Wins 7-3