View Full Version : Contenders Match: ill nik-A vs. Orc - ORC WINS
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01-28-2018, 11:54 PM
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ill nik-A Orc
ill nik-A
01-29-2018, 06:00 PM
https://preview.ibb.co/h6L0Tm/AFB23_C1_C_097_A_4_D2_C_8_BE5_857_F99_BA83_BC.jpg
Orc post yours, broskie
http://i67.tinypic.com/9rtusj.png
ill nik-A
02-02-2018, 06:10 PM
http://i67.tinypic.com/9rtusj.png
The British abandoned that side of the country cuz u bitches are a buncha sissies
I mean, I see skirts being worn by the scotch... & u’re in Ireland drinking honey whiskey
Fuck trying to be who this geeks not, u ain’t jack shit punches are ya weak spot
Picture ya bars being like a boxing round... where McGreggor’s side kick is craving a cheap shot
Need pott? I got that dank for sale & ur barber buys the most, dude
So that’s a buzz cut only cuz I got weed to get ya higher than ur hairline is supposed to
I killed u the last three so it’s either mod or battler before u lose control
u need to find some New Balance... besides sportin the number of times I’ve beaten u in a row
stop tryin to flex cuz we see u straining guess u not the smartest
plus u’re acting like that tattoo is ill... that’s an infection for hiring Barcotic’s artist
I got stacks to buy the bar out u in soccer gear with a goal to get ya some play
u shootin for that Messi look... but ya broken wallet says there’s more paper to clean than there is to pay
https://preview.ibb.co/h6L0Tm/AFB23_C1_C_097_A_4_D2_C_8_BE5_857_F99_BA83_BC.jpg
Damn u. Yea one no show one pic one reg. U also no showed twice before that but when u showed u had won the last 3 won’t lie
R u kidding me, sir!? Claiming noshow wins is just sillyness, twerp
I show up, I win -- Check the Pattern, &&& we ain't talking on that hideous Shirt
Honestly; at first I wasn't sure if u ever let the Heat cook
But now that pic got me real shook. I mean maaan even those Teeth Buck
&&& brooo those fashion decisions would even make my girl cry
Those jeans got a Lived In Look that'd revolutionize Burglar Deterrents worldwide
I beeeen told you ''keep eating those ribs and you're gonna get fat''
Now ya Belt gotta Hang Over problem. shits worse than mine after that bottle of Jack
ORC the dopest FACT. &&&if you try sway it's a hopeless act
Keep saying the votings a Click but you look like Adam Sandler in that when he's old & fat
You a 40yr old man wita Dad Bod. What you claim the streets for!?
I'll lay the C4... then watch you 'get lit up from the back' like your Neighbors Decor
Barcotic
02-03-2018, 04:08 PM
Nik
cheap shot was lol
buzz cut was good
tattoo is ill was lol
opener was meh, new balance was corny & messi look is played out
vs
Orc
check the pattern was nice, proper opener
teeth buck lmao
lived in look was dece
hang over problem was lol
click hit
closer missed
botw IMO right behind karp v hab but i got orc outclassing here
v/orc
Enbombz
02-03-2018, 07:11 PM
The British abandoned that side of the country cuz u bitches are a buncha sissies
I mean, I see skirts being worn by the scotch... & u’re in Ireland drinking honey whiskey
okay
Fuck trying to be who this geeks not, u ain’t jack shit punches are ya weak spot
Picture ya bars being like a boxing round... where McGreggor’s side kick is craving a cheap shot
this was decent
Need pott? I got that dank for sale & ur barber buys the most, dude
So that’s a buzz cut only cuz I got weed to get ya higher than ur hairline is supposed to
good spot, okay flip
I killed u the last three so it’s either mod or battler before u lose control
u need to find some New Balance... besides sportin the number of times I’ve beaten u in a row
fidnt think the flip was great tbh
stop tryin to flex cuz we see u straining guess u not the smartest
plus u’re acting like that tattoo is ill... that’s an infection for hiring Barcotic’s artist
meh to okay
I got stacks to buy the bar out u in soccer gear with a goal to get ya some play
u shootin for that Messi look... but ya broken wallet says there’s more paper to clean than there is to pay
alot going n got a bit messi, i see the angle but was executed as well as it could
vs
R u kidding me, sir!? Claiming noshow wins is just sillyness, twerp
I show up, I win -- Check the Pattern, &&& we ain't talking on that hideous Shirt
good start, nice wording
Honestly; at first I wasn't sure if u ever let the Heat cook
But now that pic got me real shook. I mean maaan even those Teeth Buck
lol nice
&&& brooo those fashion decisions would even make my girl cry
Those jeans got a Lived In Look that'd revolutionize Burglar Deterrents worldwide
meh i like i like it n i don't
I beeeen told you ''keep eating those ribs and you're gonna get fat''
Now ya Belt gotta Hang Over problem. shits worse than mine after that bottle of Jack
nicely done
ORC the dopest FACT. &&&if you try sway it's a hopeless act
Keep saying the votings a Click but you look like Adam Sandler in that when he's old & fat
meh kinda see it
You a 40yr old man wita Dad Bod. What you claim the streets for!?
I'll lay the C4... then watch you 'get lit up from the back' like your Neighbors Decor
okay flip
I got Orc here overall. Decent verses from both. Both made use of the pic really well. I think overall i'd maybe edge it a bar to Orc but execution tipped it as well. Ill solid still just felt a couple ideas got a bit jumbled. So yeh v/orc
Nik - got that dank intrigued me bc I'll def be hitting you up for that.. hairline bar could've been mean & nasty but it's just light... new balance was cool cuz personal... rest was not my thing..
Orc - hangover problem lolol... hideous shirt was cool... rest was light
Mvgt Orc. Nik tried for jokes but that's not his thing. Whoever made the "I see why Nik is mad" tag please come forward in the chat lolololololol
Sovereign
02-03-2018, 11:48 PM
In my opinion this was fairly clear. ill nik-A's verse was very personal but in terms of concepts it was lacking compared to his opponent's. ORC not only took solid personal angles but combined them with very clever double meanings throughout. Lived In Look was bar of the battle. On the other hand, ill nik-A was slightly ahead of ORC in terms of rhyming.
MVGT: ORC
WRATH
02-04-2018, 02:14 AM
[QUOTE=ill nik-A;639146]
The British abandoned that side of the country cuz u bitches are a buncha sissies
I mean, I see skirts being worn by the scotch... & u’re in Ireland drinking honey whiskey
Okay
Fuck trying to be who this geeks not, u ain’t jack shit punches are ya weak spot
Picture ya bars being like a boxing round... where McGreggor’s side kick is craving a cheap shot
Not harsh enough
Need pott? I got that dank for sale & ur barber buys the most, dude
So that’s a buzz cut only cuz I got weed to get ya higher than ur hairline is supposed to
Good
I killed u the last three so it’s either mod or battler before u lose control
u need to find some New Balance... besides sportin the number of times I’ve beaten u in a row
Nah
stop tryin to flex cuz we see u straining guess u not the smartest
plus u’re acting like that tattoo is ill... that’s an infection for hiring Barcotic’s artist
Light
I got stacks to buy the bar out u in soccer gear with a goal to get ya some play
u shootin for that Messi look... but ya broken wallet says there’s more paper to clean than there is to pay[
Overworded and predictable/QUOTE]
R u kidding me, sir!? Claiming noshow wins is just sillyness, twerp
I show up, I win -- Check the Pattern, &&& we ain't talking on that hideous Shirt
Solid
Honestly; at first I wasn't sure if u ever let the Heat cookfat wife
But now that pic got me real shook. I mean maaan even those Teeth Buck
In your dialect i guess
&&& brooo those fashion decisions would even make my girl cry
Those jeans got a Lived In Look that'd revolutionize Burglar Deterrents worldwide
Not feeling
I beeeen told you ''keep eating those ribs and you're gonna get fat''
Now ya Belt gotta Hang Over problem. shits worse than mine after that bottle of Jack
Solid
ORC the dopest FACT. &&&if you try sway it's a hopeless act
Keep saying the votings a Click but you look like Adam Sandler in that when he's old & fat
Good
You a 40yr old man wita Dad Bod. What you claim the streets for!?
I'll lay the C4... then watch you 'get lit up from the back' like your Neighbors Decor
Good
V orc
bleak
02-04-2018, 04:17 AM
The British abandoned that side of the country cuz u bitches are a buncha sissies
I mean, I see skirts being worn by the scotch... & u’re in Ireland drinking honey whiskey
Fuck trying to be who this geeks not, u ain’t jack shit punches are ya weak spot
Picture ya bars being like a boxing round... where McGreggor’s side kick is craving a cheap shot
I killed u the last three so it’s either mod or battler before u lose control
u need to find some New Balance... besides sportin the number of times I’ve beaten u in a row
Not a hitter his bar just hits a bit harder because of this.
stop tryin to flex cuz we see u straining guess u not the smartest
plus u’re acting like that tattoo is ill... that’s an infection for hiring Barcotic’s artist
R u kidding me, sir!? Claiming noshow wins is just sillyness, twerp
I show up, I win -- Check the Pattern, &&& we ain't talking on that hideous Shirt
The setup here was what I was referring to
Honestly; at first I wasn't sure if u ever let the Heat cook
But now that pic got me real shook. I mean maaan even those Teeth Buck
I beeeen told you ''keep eating those ribs and you're gonna get fat''
Now ya Belt gotta Hang Over problem. shits worse than mine after that bottle of Jack
You a 40yr old man wita Dad Bod. What you claim the streets for!?
I'll lay the C4... then watch you 'get lit up from the back' like your Neighbors Decor
This was a great read, as i expected coming in. Both have a really good style for pics and use everything for a concept. I have Orc by a decent margin but impressive showing from both
Alvin Karpis
02-04-2018, 08:49 AM
Lol Nik 40ish with Js on, funny
Niks last 3 bars hit, very nice
Just didn’t start off the way he ended, i feel some of the lines were a bit wordy
Orc was more consistent in my eyes, teeth buck was lol
Good battle
VOrc
For Battling
02-04-2018, 09:05 PM
Orc Wins 7-0
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