Sour Joog vs ill nik-A - SOUR JOOG WINS

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Sour joog ill nik-A

[ill nik-A]

12
Welcome!

[Enbombz]

12 is cool.

[Enbombz]

He gone silent cos he steaming after Orc took a shit on the guys verse
You used to be a Titanic, now we get sinking feeling that was the tip of the iceberg
Your going downhill fast, but Life ain't ever been fair though damn it
You used to bring the heat now You ain't even as hot as habenero faggot
Only thing bout to flips this dudes feelings, S'why he quit the dudes reeling
I think the guy needs it, cos we saw Auckland more than a trip to New Zealand
God love a trier, but you failed n now there's deep scars
You fought tooth n nail, shame he fucking nailed you with those teeth bars
Tbf those ivories the size of trees, Those things look fucking ferocious
If that loss was a kick In The teeth it would've broke Orcs foot in the process
Cash love me I make fast money on the corner come n get it,
Last time you made a few bucks ya kids inherited those unfortunate genetics

[ill nik-A]

I’m a contender every time I sign into the NBL... while the skill u lack is clear
over at RB u can be top tier... that translates to not good enough to even beat habit here
Kattegat got props? pffft, fuck all u nerds; when I pull out u better run far
u won’t have time to look up... like what u do on google just to write forced gun bars
u don’t know a good gat line if ya life depended on it, ya schemes played
Put ya face to the heat & make ya real familiar... I call that shot D Wade
diss my pics & talk ya shit but the truth is my punches are pure muscle... I’m too strong, yo
u can be in good shape till u get knocked out by the overweight Cuban... u’re Luke Rockhold
u still wanna see whose killing who?! I’m in a killa mood here to kill a few
I’m going ape shit when I’m sticking u... u’ll need facial reconstruction... that’s Gorilla glue

[Schadenfreude]

He gone silent cos he steaming after Orc took a shit on the guys verse
You used to be a Titanic, now we get sinking feeling that was the tip of the iceberg
Titan Nik & titanic doesn't work phonically, but you worded this bar beautifully
Your going downhill fast, but Life ain't ever been fair though damn it
You used to bring the heat now You ain't even as hot as habenero faggot
Hab & Aero? Light
Only thing bout to flips this dudes feelings, S'why he quit the dudes reeling
I think the guy needs it, cos we saw Auckland more than a trip to New Zealand
Auckland's pronounciation is NOTHING like Orc land
God love a trier, but you failed n now there's deep scars
You fought tooth n nail, shame he fucking nailed you with those teeth bars
Good personal
Tbf those ivories the size of trees, Those things look fucking ferocious
If that loss was a kick In The teeth it would've broke Orcs foot in the process
Dope
Cash love me I make fast money on the corner come n get it,
Last time you made a few bucks ya kids inherited those unfortunate genetics
Decent closer


I’m a contender every time I sign into the NBL... while the skill u lack is clear
over at RB u can be top tier... that translates to not good enough to even beat habit here
Solid opener
Kattegat got props? pffft, fuck all u nerds; when I pull out u better run far
u won’t have time to look up... like what u do on google just to write forced gun bars
DOPE
u don’t know a good gat line if ya life depended on it, ya schemes played
Put ya face to the heat & make ya real familiar... I call that shot D Wade
This is OK
diss my pics & talk ya shit but the truth is my punches are pure muscle... I’m too strong, yo
u can be in good shape till u get knocked out by the overweight Cuban... u’re Luke Rockhold
Nice flip
u still wanna see whose killing who?! I’m in a killa mood here to kill a few
I’m going ape shit when I’m sticking u... u’ll need facial reconstruction... that’s Gorilla glue
Cool closer

Stockingly enough I preferred Joog's verse just a lil bit more, Idk Nik wrote his verse as though it was a "gimme" that he'd win. Enbombz wasn't crazy, but Nik didn't retaliate as vicious as I expected him to, even tho he had his usual creativity. Joog was more personal & focused imo, VOTE SOUR JOOG.

[Barcotic]

SJ
hab n aero was cool, coulda executed it better tho
tooth n nail was nice
kick in the teeth was dope, lol lotb
decent closer

titanic & auckland are forced, way more than any of mine supposedly are

vs

Nik
time to look up was good
ufc reference was OK
closer hit, coulda hit harder w/ better wording

flat opener & heat flips are overdone

i got sj by a bar + harsher standouts
woulda been closer if nik matched, 12v10 hurt him
v/joog

[Nick James]

I’m a contender every time I sign into the NBL... while the skill u lack is clear
over at RB u can be top tier... that translates to not good enough to even beat habit here
Kattegat got props? pffft, fuck all u nerds; when I pull out u better run far
u won’t have time to look up... like what u do on google just to write forced gun bars

decent shit.. kinda fell off after the quotes tho


vs


God love a trier, but you failed n now there's deep scarsfat wife
You fought tooth n nail, shame he fucking nailed you with those teeth bars
Tbf those ivories the size of trees, Those things look fucking ferocious
If that loss was a kick In The teeth it would've broke Orcs foot in the process
Cash love me I make fast money on the corner come n get it,
Last time you made a few bucks ya kids inherited those unfortunate genetics

first half was well not good.. but them teeth lines were brutal

surprisingly I think joog pulled the upset here. he ended strong with the teeth lines

vote - joog

[Saint]

This was a bit hard to decide

Joog -- Titanic/Titan nic dont work for me but i did like the tie ins
Habanero -- Ok, but wording coulda been stronger.
Auckland -- Didnt work imo
Tooth & Nail -- Decent
Kick teeth in -- Better & personal hit. Rhyme was iffy.
Few Bucks -- Eh third teeth ref & rly it was decent but a little redundant.

Ill nika
Opener -- A little bland.
Look up -- This was cool, prob lotb
D Wade -- Ehh Heat stuff gets a pass unless rly dope
Cuban -- Ok this was decent, not bad
Gorilla Glue -- Coulda hit but fucked wording

Have to vote- joog here. I think nik rushed a cpl & it cost em.

[Geno]

I got joog here.

Joog hit a lot harder with his imo.
I really surpised at Nik. Damn nik i had you smashing dudencoming in here man. You alwats comenharder than thia musta been ruahed or some shit? Losing ur touch bruh? Nah.. Say it aint so man

I got sour joog here edging it. Nik just didnt come anywhere near what his potential is. Rly surprised by his performance tbr. Hell bounce back next week