View Full Version : Barcotic (3-2) vs. Unemployed (2-1) - BARCOTIC WINS
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02-05-2018, 02:14 PM
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Barcotic Unemployed
Barcotic
02-05-2018, 02:22 PM
i will match ur ammo
let's try to get pics up sooner than later
Nick James
02-05-2018, 02:26 PM
jus waitin on u..
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Barcotic
02-05-2018, 04:52 PM
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Barcotic
02-06-2018, 12:44 PM
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stop it, u fag. u cant romp w/ the angles bar knows
i meeean
props to Orc for the Hang Over line, but u the one sayin "not at the table, carlos"
n listen guy, none of ur debt's finna be lifted by the government
yes nick james is Unemployed.. and kissing his kid goodbye because of it
ur idea of ballin? ur sitting on it & it's green
saint nick flips are old, unfortunately the only Child Support ur offering's a knee
that tatt of a bitch u dated is tight! it mustve elated the wife
whether its the girl ON ur arm or the girl IN ur arm, thats 2 things u regret later in life
ill knock ur hat off quick if my fist collides w/ ur throat ..
revealing a Widow's Peak thatd cause ur chick to hit her stride if u croaked
i promise ima end this but i just thought that i should mention
u co-starred w hugh jackman in Real Steel, then went n bought some as a necklace
12
Nick James
02-06-2018, 05:03 PM
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Its safe to say u scare the hoes away, man im straight ether
it wasnt enuff cockblockin ur homies now the dogs not gettin laid either
boggles my mind why ud wear that shirt, I guess u cherish the elf
its crazy how u can be all alone in the woods n still manage to embarrass urself
check out the upper lip crackin, dude ur a rip off
u culdnt be famous here for battlin so u had to chew ur lip off
we all payin homage to the lime yea i see the work
ghost broke out the lime shoes n u squeezed into ur brothers shirt
this is where lucky ends, ur anime bitch loves to suck our rims
Its weird u take walks at the same secluded spot ur girl goes to fuck ur friends
yea I bet it hurts ill punch this pussy n I bet he squirts
yall shuld reverse roles.. since ur the one bein dogwalked in every verse
WRATH
02-06-2018, 05:42 PM
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stop it, u fag. u cant romp w/ the angles bar knows
i meeean
props to Orc for the Hang Over line, but u the one sayin "not at the table, carlos"
Solid
n listen guy, none of ur debt's finna be lifted by the government
yes nick james is Unemployed.. and kissing his kid goodbye because of it
Fire
ur idea of ballin? ur sitting on it & it's green
saint nick flips are old, unfortunately the only Child Support ur offering's a knee
Nice
that tatt of a bitch u dated is tight! it mustve elated the wife
whether its the girl ON ur arm or the girl IN ur arm, thats 2 things u regret later in life
Good
ill knock ur hat off quick if my fist collides w/ ur throat ..
revealing a Widow's Peak thatd cause ur chick to hit her stride if u croaked
Lol good
i promise ima end this but i just thought that i should mention
u co-starred w hugh jackman in Real Steel, then went n bought some as a necklace
Good
12[/QUOTE]
Its safe to say u scare the hoes away, man im straight ether
it wasnt enuff cockblockin ur homies now the dogs not gettin laid either
Okay
boggles my mind why ud wear that shirt, I guess u cherish the elf
its crazy how u can be all alone in the woods n still manage to embarrass urself
Lol i like this
check out the upper lip crackin, dude ur a rip off
u culdnt be famous here for battlin so u had to chew ur lip off
Didnt like the presentation
we all payin homage to the lime yea i see the work
ghost broke out the lime shoes n u squeezed into ur brothers shirt
Nah
this is where lucky ends, ur anime bitch loves to suck our rims
Its weird u take walks at the same secluded spot ur girl goes to fuck ur friends
Okay not bad
yea I bet it hurts ill punch this pussy n I bet he squirts
yall shuld reverse roles.. since ur the one bein dogwalked in every verse
Good
V bar
Habitat
02-07-2018, 01:50 PM
n listen guy, none of ur debt's finna be lifted by the government
yes nick james is Unemployed.. and kissing his kid goodbye because of it
ur idea of ballin? ur sitting on it & it's green
saint nick flips are old, unfortunately the only Child Support ur offering's a knee
that tatt of a bitch u dated is tight! it mustve elated the wife
whether its the girl ON ur arm or the girl IN ur arm, thats 2 things u regret later in life
ill knock ur hat off quick if my fist collides w/ ur throat ..
revealing a Widow's Peak thatd cause ur chick to hit her stride if u croaked
vs
check out the upper lip crackin, dude ur a rip off
u culdnt be famous here for battlin so u had to chew ur lip off
yea I bet it hurts ill punch this pussy n I bet he squirts
yall shuld reverse roles.. since ur the one bein dogwalked in every verse
I've got bar here. Close call between widows peak and for battlin / lip off for LOTB but I've got Barcotic here on consistency.
Cool battle though.
v/barc
Joe Boston
02-07-2018, 08:03 PM
barc
stop it, u fag. u cant romp w/ the angles bar knows
i meeean
props to Orc for the Hang Over line, but u the one sayin "not at the table, carlos"
lmao good reference nice humor thought this was creative
n listen guy, none of ur debt's finna be lifted by the government
yes nick james is Unemployed.. and kissing his kid goodbye because of it
nice flip here with the nameplay involved and overall good punch in correlation with the pic
ur idea of ballin? ur sitting on it & it's green
saint nick flips are old, unfortunately the only Child Support ur offering's a knee
nice this was dope good reference
that tatt of a bitch u dated is tight! it mustve elated the wife
whether its the girl ON ur arm or the girl IN ur arm, thats 2 things u regret later in life
damn harsh lmao
ill knock ur hat off quick if my fist collides w/ ur throat ..
revealing a Widow's Peak thatd cause ur chick to hit her stride if u croaked
ok
i promise ima end this but i just thought that i should mention
u co-starred w hugh jackman in Real Steel, then went n bought some as a necklace
didnt like this
Unemployed
Its safe to say u scare the hoes away, man im straight ether
it wasnt enuff cockblockin ur homies now the dogs not gettin laid either
lol
boggles my mind why ud wear that shirt, I guess u cherish the elf
its crazy how u can be all alone in the woods n still manage to embarrass urself
lmao
check out the upper lip crackin, dude ur a rip off
u culdnt be famous here for battlin so u had to chew ur lip off
didnt like this execution
we all payin homage to the lime yea i see the work
ghost broke out the lime shoes n u squeezed into ur brothers shirt
again lacked execution
this is where lucky ends, ur anime bitch loves to suck our rims
Its weird u take walks at the same secluded spot ur girl goes to fuck ur friends
damn lmao
yea I bet it hurts ill punch this pussy n I bet he squirts
yall shuld reverse roles.. since ur the one bein dogwalked in every verse
nice lol
good battle here but i felt barc got more into a personal type level here just incoorperated overall harsh punches.
Facts MuhSheen
02-08-2018, 09:31 PM
Barcotic edged it for me. Felt he had some fire personals going on (kissed goodbye because of it line was heat) and he was able to stay at a more consistent level throughout the verse than what Unem was able to do. Unem had some decent lines (first few lines were hilarious af), but he kind of fell off from there in terms of impact (chewed the lip line wasn't good at all).
MVGT: Barc
Pinot Grij
02-09-2018, 10:48 AM
I thought this was a clear body for Unemployed.
Barc had the Unemployed and Child Support lines that were fire.. he also had big swings and misses tho and the setups that were a bit clunky. "Wife was elated" for example.
Unemployed had less ammo and came with diss after diss after diss.. the only thing that missed was "brothers shirt" -- everything else was harsh and entertaining and the verse had a better vibe overall, it was ore effortless in its clowning of the opponent.
Vote -- Unemployed
Dope battle boys. Unemployed aint to shabby.
Had some good shit but barc got a little more deep and personal with the stabs at ur parenthood. That took the match. Its hard to beat a verse that gets personal like this one. Not to take nothing from unemployed.. He had some good shit.
Gotta v/barcotic here
Really just came into peep unemployed battle talent since ive seen him in my OM. Pretty good showing just got edged here imo.
I enjoy the writing of both of these guys. Bar opener was cool and so was the Unemployed line. Seen widows peak before. Others were all pretty good imo. Child support was clever but just a little flat, still creative. Nick came really really good. Just less formulaic and naturally funny. I enjoyed most of the verse if I'm honest. It was a throwback to just roasting the opponent not really worrying about barriers of text. Insult the dude and me it rhyme.
Anyway I have Nick with the upset. That's not to say the boy Bar done bad by any means. I just preferred the humour approach that Nick took here
Vote NJ
n listen guy, none of ur debt's finna be lifted by the government
yes nick james is Unemployed.. and kissing his kid goodbye because of it
ur idea of ballin? ur sitting on it & it's green
saint nick flips are old, unfortunately the only Child Support ur offering's a knee
that tatt of a bitch u dated is tight! it mustve elated the wife
whether its the girl ON ur arm or the girl IN ur arm, thats 2 things u regret later in life
vs
boggles my mind why ud wear that shirt, I guess u cherish the elf
its crazy how u can be all alone in the woods n still manage to embarrass urself
check out the upper lip crackin, dude ur a rip off
u culdnt be famous here for battlin so u had to chew ur lip off
this is where lucky ends, ur anime bitch loves to suck our rims
Its weird u take walks at the same secluded spot ur girl goes to fuck ur friends
yea I bet it hurts ill punch this pussy n I bet he squirts
yall shuld reverse roles.. since ur the one bein dogwalked in every verse
This prolly botw imo. I thought bought both brought some heat tbh. That on and in ur arms shit was nasty barc. Nick James had some dope ass shit too, embarras urself and secluded spot was lotb. Close match dope shit by both but Nick edges this one here
Vote / Nick James
2tripple0
02-11-2018, 01:22 PM
yeah I got unemployed as well... definitely the better punches more harsh and worded correctly...
stop it, u fag. u cant romp w/ the angles bar knows
i meeean
props to Orc for the Hang Over line, but u the one sayin "not at the table, carlos"
nah
n listen guy, none of ur debt's finna be lifted by the government
yes nick james is Unemployed.. and kissing his kid goodbye because of it
nah
ur idea of ballin? ur sitting on it & it's green
saint nick flips are old, unfortunately the only Child Support ur offering's a knee
okay maybe
that tatt of a bitch u dated is tight! it mustve elated the wife
whether its the girl ON ur arm or the girl IN ur arm, thats 2 things u regret later in life
umm didn't get it
ill knock ur hat off quick if my fist collides w/ ur throat ..
revealing a Widow's Peak thatd cause ur chick to hit her stride if u croaked
okay
i promise ima end this but i just thought that i should mention
u co-starred w hugh jackman in Real Steel, then went n bought some as a necklace
nah
vs.
Its safe to say u scare the hoes away, man im straight ether
it wasnt enuff cockblockin ur homies now the dogs not gettin laid either
eh okay
boggles my mind why ud wear that shirt, I guess u cherish the elf
its crazy how u can be all alone in the woods n still manage to embarrass urself
that was alright I guess
check out the upper lip crackin, dude ur a rip off
u culdnt be famous here for battlin so u had to chew ur lip off
nah
we all payin homage to the lime yea i see the work
ghost broke out the lime shoes n u squeezed into ur brothers shirt
this was alright I guess
this is where lucky ends, ur anime bitch loves to suck our rims
Its weird u take walks at the same secluded spot ur girl goes to fuck ur friends
I liked this
yea I bet it hurts ill punch this pussy n I bet he squirts
yall shuld reverse roles.. since ur the one bein dogwalked in every verse
nah
don't know close battle but I still got unemployed taking it... don't know though could've gone either way really......
vote: unemployed
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