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For Battling
02-12-2018, 11:25 PM
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Orc Alvin Karpis

Orc
02-13-2018, 11:23 AM
What's up bro? Pics? If not then 10 man

Alvin Karpis
02-13-2018, 06:09 PM
10 it is, gd luck

Orc
02-15-2018, 03:42 PM
u cool with tomorrow man

Alvin Karpis
02-15-2018, 07:24 PM
definitely but let’s go 12

Alvin Karpis
02-16-2018, 07:11 PM
Orc aka Red Ryding Hood

lol you love drizzy huh?? you think he’s godly too
Since you’re a huge fan of Drac O, then AK bout to spray n body you
This Irish fuck acts tough like he spits the hardest shit
You’ll NEVER be an Mc, but at least your last name starts with it
Clowned Karaoke for the fact he’s black, ya team lacks G swag
Red circle is surrounded by all white....That’s a Japanese flag
You hate dark skin, but what leaves us more confused
Is Amen has to live with his dick... what’s your excuse?
Quit sayin you Bumpin Casanova in the gym like the fakest groupie
I’m sick of Red Tales.. but tell us really why you hate the movie
This skinny fuck pumpin iron? just stop liar...
So frail his muscle memory suffers from Alzheimers

Orc
02-17-2018, 08:09 AM
WHAT UP YOU SQUARE HEADED MOTHERFUCKER

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Maan I took ya Indian girl &&& left her broken n dipped
call that bitch Broke Lesnar, she keeps sending videos but I never open the shit
Wowww @ dude acting like he roam the streets acting steady berserk
Be honest. You only ever Comb the Block when you're getting ready for work
Karp NEVER been around trouble but acting all streetmade
Trust me if HE sprays; he's 'half as hard returning the Heat'-- that's D. Wade
Yeeesh even the team raw!! I'd end a liiife with these dudes
This the Winter Olympics; my whole Squad got the Sticks on Ice to Sweep you
I just gotta bob & weave to see you fall apart as ever
My bars are better. If I give a fuck I'll wear A out, thats the Scarlet Letter
Karp been broke. && now we supposedta believe u're allll that again!?
You just talk a lot but ain't ever reaaally Copping shit... boy you For Battling

2tripple0
02-17-2018, 12:01 PM
lol you love drizzy huh?? you think he’s godly too
Since you’re a huge fan of Drac O, then AK bout to spray n body you
eh
This Irish fuck acts tough like he spits the hardest shit
You’ll NEVER be an Mc, but at least your last name starts with it
eh irish flip I guess
Clowned Karaoke for the fact he’s black, ya team lacks G swag
Red circle is surrounded by all white....That’s a Japanese flag
umm I guess
You hate dark skin, but what leaves us more confused
Is Amen has to live with his dick... what’s your excuse?
didn't like this
Quit sayin you Bumpin Casanova in the gym like the fakest groupie
I’m sick of Red Tales.. but tell us really why you hate the movie
didn't get it really
This skinny fuck pumpin iron? just stop liar...
So frail his muscle memory suffers from Alzheimers
this was a bit better

vs.

Maan I took ya Indian girl &&& left her broken n dipped
call that bitch Broke Lesnar, she keeps sending videos but I never open the shit
ok I guess
Wowww @ dude acting like he roam the streets acting steady berserk
Be honest. You only ever Comb the Block when you're getting ready for work
ok I guess don't get how combing is a diss though
Karp NEVER been around trouble but acting all streetmade
Trust me if HE sprays; he's 'half as hard returning the Heat'-- that's D. Wade
eh
Yeeesh even the team raw!! I'd end a liiife with these dudes
This the Winter Olympics; my whole Squad got the Sticks on Ice to Sweep you
ok
I just gotta bob & weave to see you fall apart as ever
My bars are better. If I give a fuck I'll wear A out, thats the Scarlet Letter
nah
Karp been broke. && now we supposedta believe u're allll that again!?
You just talk a lot but ain't ever reaaally Copping shit... boy you For Battling
this was better at the end I liked this more


overall: not the best champ match for me... I've seen a hell of a lot better but still I think really for me it was orc who took this with better formed ideas... but really not feeling much from either... but yeah...

vote: orc

Letterman
02-18-2018, 09:39 AM
Clowned Karaoke for the fact he’s black, ya team lacks G swag
Red circle is surrounded by all white....That’s a Japanese flag
Quit sayin you Bumpin Casanova in the gym like the fakest groupie
I’m sick of Red Tales.. but tell us really why you hate the movie

Vs

Maan I took ya Indian girl &&& left her broken n dipped
call that bitch Broke Lesnar, she keeps sending videos but I never open the Yeeesh even the team raw!! I'd end a liiife with these dudes
This the Winter Olympics; my whole Squad got the Sticks on Ice to Sweep you
I just gotta bob & weave to see you fall apart as ever
My bars are better. If I give a fuck I'll wear A out, thats the Scarlet Letter
Karp been broke. && now we supposedta believe u're allll that again!?
You just talk a lot but ain't ever reaaally Copping shit... boy you For Battling

Alvin was decent but Orc was more consistent and had the better hits here. The red flips were cool but the racist angle gets redundant. I got Orc winning this comfortably.

v/Orc

Nick James
02-18-2018, 10:26 AM
Maan I took ya Indian girl &&& left her broken n dipped
call that bitch Broke Lesnar, she keeps sending videos but I never open the shit
I just gotta bob & weave to see you fall apart as ever
My bars are better. If I give a fuck I'll wear A out, thats the Scarlet Letter
Karp been broke. && now we supposedta believe u're allll that again!?
You just talk a lot but ain't ever reaaally Copping shit... boy you For Battling

vs


This Irish fuck acts tough like he spits the hardest shit
You’ll NEVER be an Mc, but at least your last name starts with it
You hate dark skin, but what leaves us more confused
Is Amen has to live with his dick... what’s your excuse?
Quit sayin you Bumpin Casanova in the gym like the fakest groupie
I’m sick of Red Tales.. but tell us really why you hate the movie

I culda prolly quoted more tbh. I was feelin this battle kinda reminds me of old days lol. damn its hard to vote on tho it culd rlly go either way all depends on personal preference. the only thing that stuck out moreso than the other is karp was pretty direct here straight shots the amen line was pretty fire n the mc. orc u had sum gunsmoke wit the zelph/cop line n the broke lesnar. fuck ima have to go with my initial reaction n say karp.

prolly botw

DynamiCz
02-18-2018, 11:47 AM
Mannnn this was a dope ass battle, def might be botw


lol you love drizzy huh?? you think he’s godly too
Since you’re a huge fan of Drac O, then AK bout to spray n body you

Nice opener

Clowned Karaoke for the fact he’s black, ya team lacks G swag
Red circle is surrounded by all white....That’s a Japanese flag

I like...

Quit sayin you Bumpin Casanova in the gym like the fakest groupie
I’m sick of Red Tales.. but tell us really why you hate the movie
This skinny fuck pumpin iron? just stop liar...
So frail his muscle memory suffers from Alzheimers

This whole portion was nice man

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Maan I took ya Indian girl &&& left her broken n dipped
call that bitch Broke Lesnar, she keeps sending videos but I never open the shit
Wowww @ dude acting like he roam the streets acting steady berserk
Be honest. You only ever Comb the Block when you're getting ready for work
Karp NEVER been around trouble but acting all streetmade
Trust me if HE sprays; he's 'half as hard returning the Heat'-- that's D. Wade

Lol Fiya....!

I just gotta bob & weave to see you fall apart as ever
My bars are better. If I give a fuck I'll wear A out, thats the Scarlet Letter

Nice...

Karp been broke. && now we supposedta believe u're allll that again!?
You just talk a lot but ain't ever reaaally Copping shit... boy you For Battlin

Lol...

I don't know what some were reading but this was dope battle here in my eyes. Solid verses from both ends. I'm going with Orc by a pinch on this one.

V-Orc

Flow
02-18-2018, 12:33 PM
Karp
Opener was okish
Liked the mc line
Japenese was enjoyable as it wasnt formulaic
Amen good
Closer was my personal fav bar

Orc
Opener and closer were my personal fav lines. Opener was fire. Olympics an scarlet letter good. The rest i thought lacked your usual edge.

Arguably i felt this was quantity vs quality. An even then its thin margins. Tight contest. Going to have to edge it to Orc an tbh simply down to preference on his wording. All i had to split you both.

Great battle
V orc

Saint
02-18-2018, 12:34 PM
Alvin came cool w/ the opener, jap flag,
Red tales -- ok
MC, closer were coo -- red & racist material were kinda ehh not real hard to me.. imo

Orc -- comb the block was an angle nvr seen before on em, lol
D Wade -- flip was good
Scarlet Letter -- worded well
Sticks on Ice -- Aight
U had better angles/ more variety here imo

Vote Orc -- w/ the standouts

Pinot Grij
02-18-2018, 01:13 PM
Drake-o cool flip
Mc line is funny.
Japanese flag is an older concept, don't think the flip here really brought it to life.
I don't get all this NC race war shit that's going on, lol
Red Tales not my taste
Muscle memory is my favorite line, actually

Karpis, cool verse, some hits and some misses for me. Interesting construction.. going short bar, minimal style. I liked it. Refreshing to read that style.. makes it more impactful when you see the shortness of the verse and then you pull off solid lines.

Vs Orc

Lesnar shit is eh for me. I don't follow the NC drama.
Comb the Block is wowwowoweewow. dope shit. great setup up and finish.
D Wade ok
Winter Olympics aight.
Scarlet Letter cool
Zelph closer aight.

Comb the Block was far and away LOTB. Otherwise, I think Orc kinda mailed in the rest. Karpis had some cool lines, but no real knockout punch. I think I have to play champions advantage in this instance -- Karpis was cool, but didn't TAKE the title from the champ

Vote -- Orc.

Cred
02-18-2018, 05:19 PM
lol you love drizzy huh?? you think he’s godly too
Since you’re a huge fan of Drac O, then AK bout to spray n body you
This Irish fuck acts tough like he spits the hardest shit
You’ll NEVER be an Mc, but at least your last name starts with it
You hate dark skin, but what leaves us more confused
Is Amen has to live with his dick... what’s your excuse?

Vs

Karp NEVER been around trouble but acting all streetmade
Trust me if HE sprays; he's 'half as hard returning the Heat'-- that's D. Wade
Karp been broke. && now we supposedta believe u're allll that again!?
You just talk a lot but ain't ever reaaally Copping shit... boy you For Battling

This was a dope battle here fellas. Alvin’s shakes that rust off pretty nice. All around I was fucking wit ur verse, nice direct disses. Orc had that d Wade line, shit was fire imo but wasn’t enough wit that an his closest to outshine Karps verse

Vote / Alvin Karpis

Profit
02-18-2018, 05:33 PM
Ak had drake o, mc, red tales, amen.. solid verse Japan flag played & closer was eh


Orc had broke lesnar, comb the block was nice but didn't like u using actin twice in the setup, d wade was dope af but in reality it'd be returning 'to' the heat, still dope. Scarlet letter dope and cliser was cool.. sticks on ice was cool but I've seen similar.


Overall this is closer than votes show man I dug both verses but I do feel orc edges this one maybe with 1 more land.. nice shit

Useless
02-18-2018, 10:21 PM
This Irish fuck acts tough like he spits the hardest shit
You’ll NEVER be an Mc, but at least your last name starts with it
--- this was ok to me...
Clowned Karaoke for the fact he’s black, ya team lacks G swag
Red circle is surrounded by all white....That’s a Japanese flag
--- thought u coulda flipped this to hit harder but it's clever.......
Quit sayin you Bumpin Casanova in the gym like the fakest groupie
I’m sick of Red Tales.. but tell us really why you hate the movie
--- the racist angle is blah to me but this was well put together.........
This skinny fuck pumpin iron? just stop liar...
So frail his muscle memory suffers from Alzheimers
---- fire


Vs


Maan I took ya Indian girl &&& left her broken n dipped
call that bitch Broke Lesnar, she keeps sending videos but I never open the shit
--- fire........
Wowww @ dude acting like he roam the streets acting steady berserk
Be honest. You only ever Comb the Block when you're getting ready for work
--- fuck, 2 in a row...good way to start the verse......
Karp been broke. && now we supposedta believe u're allll that again!?
You just talk a lot but ain't ever reaaally Copping shit... boy you For Battling
--- aite........


Orc first 2 were fire to me then it fell off till the closer. Karp closer was fire n he was consistent. This could go either way but




V. Alvin karpis