View Full Version : Contenders Match: Habitat (6-3) vs. Profit (5-3) - HABITAT WINS
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02-12-2018, 11:26 PM
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Habitat Profit
Habitat
02-13-2018, 06:47 AM
Check. How does 12 sound?
Profit
02-13-2018, 11:22 PM
Sounds good bro. 12 it is
Habitat
02-15-2018, 06:31 AM
I may need an ext. this week
Profit
02-15-2018, 11:01 AM
No problem man
Habitat
02-15-2018, 03:15 PM
ur overrated as fuck, I don't even have to try an diss you
anyone who wants to read Samoa ur shit can get banished to an island w/ you
ur always on the Back End when people list the bottom 5
so it's a given you won't Farewell against me, you can kiss your ass goodbye
cannon ready, one shot'll rip his families entire life apart
a bullet don't need forgiveness... n' it'll be too late when you find it in ur heart
got the upper hand cuz ur styles outdated, ima swing on this chump
the left hand has ya neck.. n' I've got All Rights Reserved for this unoriginal fuck
had so many gf's you'd think w/ ladies the guy was a hit
but you always say goodbye with a heavy heart.. cuz all ur exes die of the shit
u're a failure at everything, it's astonishing to witness
so it's no surprise to see profit go down after I give him the business
12 Profit
Profit
02-15-2018, 04:35 PM
Last week
Dont mean u dope cos u won, another contenders? give up hope cos ur done
Fuck if u got by a few punches from sour,.. diesel hit ur chest till u choke up a lung
The lil talent left in text is HERE, & this lame makes it far? geez
I knooow the comp on the limelight, but u can't even hit main stage on RB
U ain't built fa this, a Canadian dork rappin? Fuuuck that noise fam
To u rap ain't natural habitat.. so stay in ur comfort zone w/ur boy band
Heard um judge ya girls butt, & u got defensive like her booty be nice
Doooog, every critical thinker ass got issues.... & the smart 1's r usually right
I understand how ur games played, in the archives' where this lame stays
S'cool fresh twists old concepts.. too bad the flips r the same age
U stress text sooo much u take advice, but ion think it works dog
Cos when Orc said just do u.. it ain't mean avoid pussy to jerk off
bleak
02-16-2018, 11:41 AM
I got
All rights
Profit go down
Vs
Sour diesel
Natural habitat
Do u
I didn't get critical thinker but maybe I'm not doing enough of that. Limelight could have been good but I've seen shit like it everywhere. And I'm sure sour diesel is played but it read hard af to me
Hab all his exes die bc of a heavy heart? Don't understand the diss. Samoa is played tf out so is farewell. Forgiveness just read weird to me.
V/Profit kinda close but not
Oh critical think her ass got issues? W/e
2tripple0
02-17-2018, 12:18 PM
ur overrated as fuck, I don't even have to try an diss you
anyone who wants to read Samoa ur shit can get banished to an island w/ you
ok decent
ur always on the Back End when people list the bottom 5
so it's a given you won't Farewell against me, you can kiss your ass goodbye
ok coulda been better
cannon ready, one shot'll rip his families entire life apart
a bullet don't need forgiveness... n' it'll be too late when you find it in ur heart
this was your best bar so far
got the upper hand cuz ur styles outdated, ima swing on this chump
the left hand has ya neck.. n' I've got All Rights Reserved for this unoriginal fuck
I liked the all rights reserved concept here not bad
had so many gf's you'd think w/ ladies the guy was a hit
but you always say goodbye with a heavy heart.. cuz all ur exes die of the shit
that was nice I liked that
u're a failure at everything, it's astonishing to witness
so it's no surprise to see profit go down after I give him the business
lol ok I guess
vs.
Last week
Dont mean u dope cos u won, another contenders? give up hope cos ur done
Fuck if u got by a few punches from sour,.. diesel hit ur chest till u choke up a lung
alright I guess
The lil talent left in text is HERE, & this lame makes it far? geez
I knooow the comp on the limelight, but u can't even hit main stage on RB
this was alright kind of light to me
U ain't built fa this, a Canadian dork rappin? Fuuuck that noise fam
To u rap ain't natural habitat.. so stay in ur comfort zone w/ur boy band
nah didn't like this
Heard um judge ya girls butt, & u got defensive like her booty be nice
Doooog, every critical thinker ass got issues.... & the smart 1's r usually right
this was good I liked this
I understand how ur games played, in the archives' where this lame stays
S'cool fresh twists old concepts.. too bad the flips r the same age
I liked this too but it coulda been better
U stress text sooo much u take advice, but ion think it works dog
Cos when Orc said just do u.. it ain't mean avoid pussy to jerk off
nah wasn't feeling this
overall: yeah I'm going go ahead and give this BOTW... easily... you guys were much better than all the other battles I read... easy... maybe it was just a slow week but for me this was the best battle of the week... coulda been better though in some ways... anyways I'm going give my vote to habitat just because I think he was a bit harsher with his shit... and just a bit stronger with his punches so yeah.... although this coulda gone either way really.....
vote: habitat
Pinot Grij
02-17-2018, 12:47 PM
Habitat -- foregiveness/heart line was dooope. I try to play with concepts like this sometimes but can never seem to stick them. Otherwise, some good jabs but the wordplay just felt a lil unoriginal.. Samoa, Farewell, All Rights Reserved... it was cool but not attention grabbing.. closer was nice too.
Profit
Speaking of jabs -- Profit had some decent little lines, but I didn't feel a knockout punch or a clever line that really ended it for me. Sour diesel is cool -- RB is aight -- boy band feels like it comes out of nowhere. I guess I feel like there wasn't a lot of pointed, harsh lines towards your enemy. Maybe it was a wording thing, but it felt off.
Vote -- Habitat ... that forgiveness line was the knockout punch in this one for me
DynamiCz
02-17-2018, 01:14 PM
ur always on the Back End when people list the bottom 5
so it's a given you won't Farewell against me, you can kiss your ass goodbye
Lol Nice...
cannon ready, one shot'll rip his families entire life apart
a bullet don't need forgiveness... n' it'll be too late when you find it in ur heart
Sheessssh Hab...
u're a failure at everything, it's astonishing to witness
so it's no surprise to see profit go down after I give him the business
Dope ender...
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Last week
Dont mean u dope cos u won, another contenders? give up hope cos ur done
Fuck if u got by a few punches from sour,.. diesel hit ur chest till u choke up a lung
Nice Opener...
U ain't built fa this, a Canadian dork rappin? Fuuuck that noise fam
To u rap ain't natural habitat.. so stay in ur comfort zone w/ur boy band
Lol...Coo
I understand how ur games played, in the archives' where this lame stays
S'cool fresh twists old concepts.. too bad the flips r the same age
Nice, but not harsh...
Honestly to me this was a nice battle read on both ends. Imma go with Hab on the edge out. He had two lines were the most harsh in this battle which edged him out. Good battle
Vote: Hab
Letterman
02-18-2018, 09:44 AM
cannon ready, one shot'll rip his families entire life apart
a bullet don't need forgiveness... n' it'll be too late when you find it in ur heart
got the upper hand cuz ur styles outdated, ima swing on this chump
the left hand has ya neck.. n' I've got All Rights Reserved for this unoriginal fuck
u're a failure at everything, it's astonishing to witness
so it's no surprise to see profit go down after I give him the business
Vs
Dont mean u dope cos u won, another contenders? give up hope cos ur done
Fuck if u got by a few punches from sour,.. diesel hit ur chest till u choke up a lung
The lil talent left in text is HERE, & this lame makes it far? geez
I knooow the comp on the limelight, but u can't even hit main stage on RB
U ain't built fa this, a Canadian dork rappin? Fuuuck that noise fam
To u rap ain't natural habitat.. so stay in ur comfort zone w/ur boy band
Yo these were fire from both. Fresh your first 2 were decent but old wordplays. I give you credit for your flip on the Samoa one tho. Profit’s beginning of his verse was heat. He cooled off towards then end. This is super close but I gotta edge Habitat with better misses, because they were even in quotes. Salute to both of you.
v/Habitat
Nick James
02-18-2018, 10:46 AM
Dont mean u dope cos u won, another contenders? give up hope cos ur done
Fuck if u got by a few punches from sour,.. diesel hit ur chest till u choke up a lung
I understand how ur games played, in the archives' where this lame stays
S'cool fresh twists old concepts.. too bad the flips r the same age
vs
had so many gf's you'd think w/ ladies the guy was a hit
but you always say goodbye with a heavy heart.. cuz all ur exes die of the shit
u're a failure at everything, it's astonishing to witness
so it's no surprise to see profit go down after I give him the business
hab man the beginnin killed ya in this one.. samoa n farewell wordplays have been used since the beginnin. u know that bro. in a battle where one more good punch wulda stole u this one that hurt ya. profit.. I fucks with the style. I liked a few punches, I culda prolly quoted one more n u had enuff to win this one.
vote - profit
No offence to profit but i really struggled with yours here. I couldnt find one bar i liked, not to say i cant see the jabs in there but for a contenders i expected some haymakers an got none. Also the wording just seemed off, there was something in each of the first 3 bars but i dont know, just didnt work didnt hit direct. Overall its not a bad drop (flips age line stands out) just expected more. No hate i enjoy your drops usually.
Habitat underrated i thought his drop was fresh, in contract to profit i really enjoyed nearly all your bars. I mean again there was alot more jabs then id like but the whole thing was smooth reading an fresh. I just really enjoyed the constant turn of phrase. Heavy heart closer an bullet heart line to name a few favs. Opener was weak but yeah, enjoyed this.
Vote habitat
Saint
02-19-2018, 02:53 AM
Hab -- Find in ur heart, all rights réservés
Business was eh ok
Pro: sour diesel, fresh twist
some other ok ones that fell do to wording.
V - habitat
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