Pinot Grij (3-2) vs. Cred (3-2) - PINOT WINS

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Pinot Grij Cred

[Pinot Grij]

16.

[Cred]

Cash.

[Cred]

Ok, ok...

Yea ur chick foreign but a couple Bucks ‘ll have her give me head all day
Cus that bitch a Greek freak.. n I’m dunkin balls all in her like this the NBA
I feel like Nick in the end zone - easy asl to fuck her off dat cheap liquor
Foles ain’t got shit on that trick the way she throw it back like a flea flicker
U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin
Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button
I’m poppin! While U couldn’t even make it as Pulse; tough luck
It’s no wonder u named ur self after cheap wine Grij cus ur buzz sucks

[Pinot Grij]

Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene
Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen
U ain’t from Chicago, ur just a SUBURBAN KID with thug fantasies, and I don’t fear those
All this gangster talk is just an ‘Outlet’, cuz there’s nuthin else to do when you live near those
I guess The Windy City explains any social spot that you’re put in
Cuz Chi-Town is where you go to any time you’re forced to talk to a woman
Oh, u say u finally got a girl?? Well, I’ll give her a steak dinner then the dick after
I’ll pound the walls all night, like SHE did the day that you kidnapped her

[2tripple0]

Yea ur chick foreign but a couple Bucks ‘ll have her give me head all day
Cus that bitch a Greek freak.. n I’m dunkin balls all in her like this the NBA
ehh okay I guess
I feel like Nick in the end zone - easy asl to fuck her off dat cheap liquor
Foles ain’t got shit on that trick the way she throw it back like a flea flicker
nah
U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin
Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button
ok I guess
I’m poppin! While U couldn’t even make it as Pulse; tough luck
It’s no wonder u named ur self after cheap wine Grij cus ur buzz sucks
nah no hit here weak nameplay

vs.

Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene
Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen
ok worded better but still not the best punch to it
U ain’t from Chicago, ur just a SUBURBAN KID with thug fantasies, and I don’t fear those
All this gangster talk is just an ‘Outlet’, cuz there’s nuthin else to do when you live near those
nah didn't like this weak personal
I guess The Windy City explains any social spot that you’re put in
Cuz Chi-Town is where you go to any time you’re forced to talk to a woman
huh??
Oh, u say u finally got a girl?? Well, I’ll give her a steak dinner then the dick after
I’ll pound the walls all night, like SHE did the day that you kidnapped her
yeah that was alright I guess good flip sortve


overall: yeah I don't know you both kinda didn't go that hard for me personally but uhh yeah I'm going give it to pinot cause I just felt cred's concepts were a bit soft and or just not very good whereas pinot had better writing and like at least half way decent concepts... so yeah...

vote: pinot grij

[DynamiCz]

Yea ur chick foreign but a couple Bucks ‘ll have her give me head all day
Cus that bitch a Greek freak.. n I’m dunkin balls all in her like this the NBA

Coo...

U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin
Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button

Lol...I like this


I’m poppin! While U couldn’t even make it as Pulse; tough luck
It’s no wonder u named ur self after cheap wine Grij cus ur buzz sucks

Another coo line


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Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene
Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen

Not hip to Maury punches, but this was nice...

U ain’t from Chicago, ur just a SUBURBAN KID with thug fantasies, and I don’t fear those
All this gangster talk is just an ‘Outlet’, cuz there’s nuthin else to do when you live near those

Nice....

Oh, u say u finally got a girl?? Well, I’ll give her a steak dinner then the dick after
I’ll pound the walls all night, like SHE did the day that you kidnapped her

Lmao...


I liked both verses, of course there is margin for work, but hey that's with every text emcee. I'm going w Pinot on this one. His lines were more direct.

Vote: Pinot

[Letterman]

Foles ain’t got shit on that trick the way she throw it back like a flea flicker
U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin
Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button

Vs

Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene
Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen
I guess The Windy City explains any social spot that you’re put in
Cuz Chi-Town is where you go to any time you’re forced to talk to a woman
Oh, u say u finally got a girl?? Well, I’ll give her a steak dinner then the dick after
I’ll pound the walls all night, like SHE did the day that you kidnapped her

Really good read. Cred’s opener & closer were good concepts but they could’ve been executed better imo. Maury show was fire, lotb. I got Pinot taking this by a slight margin, one more quotable.

[Nick James]

Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene
Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen
U ain’t from Chicago, ur just a SUBURBAN KID with thug fantasies, and I don’t fear those
All this gangster talk is just an ‘Outlet’, cuz there’s nuthin else to do when you live near those

vs

U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin
Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button
I’m poppin! While U couldn’t even make it as Pulse; tough luck
It’s no wonder u named ur self after cheap wine Grij cus ur buzz sucks


this battle was actually worth readin. that maury line was viscous tho hard to go against that it was the difference maker in this one.

vote - pinot

[Profit]

Cred
Snooze button n buzz were nice other two were dope concepts but lacked execution.. cool verse nonetheless


Pg

Maury screen outlet & pounds the walls all hit. thought u put up a good verse here.

3-2 in favor of Pinot close af tho.


Pinot

[Enbombz]

Cred - snooze (although it did feel a bit familiar)and cheap wine we're okay. Wasn't really feeling the other two. No disrespect, not one of your better verses though

Pinot- pretty solid verse here. Maury was alright, outlet was nice and kidnapped was a nice flip. Not many complaints chi town was better than cress other two as well so yeh v/ Pinot