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Orc
02-16-2018, 11:51 AM
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THE WINTER CLASSIC
The Premier Text Battling Tournament


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Due Dates:

Verses are due TUESDAY,
Voting ends FRIDAY,
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If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.


Alvin Karpis Infiltration

Saint
02-16-2018, 11:57 AM
16, maybe more

Alvin Karpis
02-16-2018, 03:28 PM
unless you have a lot to say, how about 12?

Saint
02-16-2018, 05:51 PM
Ok.

Alvin Karpis
02-20-2018, 09:29 PM
What a waste of my time, guess I gotta keep killing you
In the Nbl it’s you-0 me-1, and for me showin to this...you really do
I know you been wantin to elevate but everything you type is nerdy
If you’re tryin to sing a different tune you must be takin advice from Fergie
Obscure references google can’t even find, this kids a geek
With a style so Baazar it has Beyond wantin to leave the middle east
I reach minds, even ya weak prime couldn’t see shine
Tried followin Suit cuz you need Stripes...is like shoutin Beetlejuice 3 times
Orc loves your mag commitment, and I aint throwin no types of shade
But you offering to give OBJ’s for cash is a Giant trade
You beg him to conduct interviews, then vs E tha real you quote him
What’s next? you runnin a Rookie Tourney you’d be lucky to get a vote in

Saint
02-20-2018, 09:39 PM
contenders was garb last wk maaan i couldn't believe it, sport
officer lips review:
"a kar/swerve accident hurt the nbl." -- in his police report
I'll beat ya blockhead red, bruise it purple & black til shits a game
we'll see that cube switch colors so fast it'd put the smartest rubix whiz to shame
n cops'll match a jagged piece in his dead heart to prove a crime
cuz the blade i stuck in kar serrated &&& now dna on it has me doing time
yo I abused ur bitch doggystyle on the floor til she said stop
felt a sting from behind then her head whipped back, call it a scorpion death drop
only sendin headshots to ur wholee team, that's true marksmanship
do MRI scans w/ the scope... meanin it's trained on ur brain like a neurologist
really fam, talm bout how u had any fans was a silly sham
all ur shits played, it was done in the pastor dead by 99 like billy graham

dull boy
02-21-2018, 05:46 PM
Didn’t I vote on this?

Nick James
02-21-2018, 08:49 PM
I'll beat ya blockhead red, bruise it purple & black til shits a game
we'll see that cube switch colors so fast it'd put the smartest rubix whiz to shame
only sendin headshots to ur wholee team, that's true marksmanship
do MRI scans w/ the scope... meanin it's trained on ur brain like a neurologist


vs


You beg him to conduct interviews, then vs E tha real you quote him
What’s next? you runnin a Rookie Tourney you’d be lucky to get a vote in
What a waste of my time, guess I gotta keep killing you
In the Nbl it’s you-0 me-1, and for me showin to this...you really do
I know you been wantin to elevate but everything you type is nerdy
If you’re tryin to sing a different tune you must be takin advice from Fergie

another good read. I culd break it down further but obv I got karp wit a quote more. Inf had sum good shit I jus think karp edged him in this one.

vote - karp

big baby
02-23-2018, 05:44 PM
i feel karp did okay with stuff that lands, but the wording was insanely lazy caus, whereas infiltration tightened up and it was actually easier to read, not adding extra syllables to an already cramped verse. lot of good hits. i didn't like obj execution, but the concept was cool. infiltration scorpion made me laugh. have infiltration here

Mr. J
02-24-2018, 04:04 AM
I have Allen winning this one, even thought I enjoyed Infiltrations verse it didnt have enough hits
scorpion death drop was horribly executed & could have been worded better in my opinion
felt that Billy Graham was what really threw me off and made me think how the first line snuck past me.
like really?....silly sham?
I think the rookie tourney line really tipped the scale here and landed correct
also Als opener made me lol pretty loud once I read it again...so Im going with him here.


v/Alvin Karpis

Schadenfreude
02-24-2018, 04:59 AM
VOTE INFILTRATION
Close call, I was expecting a bit more from both, but Karp was solid, just didn't throw some of those crazy harsh joints I'm use to seeing from him. Overall, the punches were throughout were predictable tbh. Whereas Inf had that creativity that gets slept on, he was solid from start to finish, but the opener & 'scorpion death drop' were fire.

Suthaveli
02-24-2018, 09:34 AM
i actually wrote out a vote for this battle like i did the others yesterday but lost it when i went to go look for something & my laptop lost power. got annoyed & said f it.

i like alvins you owe me line & beetlejuice was ok. mostly everything else range from bad to decent. Alvin usually displays a corny line or 2 & in this case for me it was bizarre & that obj line. i really disliked that obj line. verses came off smooth like they normally do tho.
Inf, i hated ur opener. but it picked up from there. rubix cube, scorpion death drop & neurologist went hard body imo. everyting else i didn't rly like.

all & all, alvin was probably a bit smoother but the stand outs of inf's were just too gd to pass up.

mvgt Infiltration

Orc
02-25-2018, 11:19 AM
3 2. Battle closes tomorrow.