Contenders Match: Nick James 3-2 Vs Pinot Grij 4-2 - PINOT WINS

[Allen Knight]

Rules

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Nick James Pinot Grij

[Pinot Grij]

Word. Probably 12.

[Nick James]

sounds good

[Pinot Grij]

Bruh you’ve posted as much in a month as I have in 5 years. Relax, you fucking psycho.


Fakin’ like ur a B-Boys legend, pffft.. that site made you their private bitch
Bruh, real b-boys breakdance on cardboard, you fucking live inside of it
Catch you in the dark, you won’t see nuthin but the muzzle flash, stupid ho
Give you a Close Encounter, these bright lights lift you off the ground like a UFO
You’re the type'a nutjob I’d like to see hafta give his rifle back
Cuz you like girls that Ar 15, and you’ll shoot up their school with one if they don’t like you back
Ur baby momz cheated on you and I gotta laugh when you beef with her
I call that bitch a fire truck………
Cuz she gets filled with men that make her squirt and you gotta Keep Back 500 feet from her
You fuckin' child abuser.. no wonder she was fuckin' your neighbors
Your Baby Bones harder than the ones you have buried under your trailer
In high school you kept a journal that details how your classmates harassed you
Your diary a’problems includes THAT excuse for why you ate lunch alone in the bathroom

[Nick James]

.. back to reality.

I seen muff n gamble around now im fightin the hunches
Its good to see old heads comin back.. maybe now ull stop bitin their punches
hot or thot tourneys poppin idk wat u doin wrong
I asked for some panty shots nigga.. not for you to put em on
we doubt ur gettin play, puttin u on blast is a goal for the lime
I dont have to flag ur bitch down.. shes on top of every pole we can find
u better have sum back up ideas, cuz ur prolly bout to bleed
I hope u got a plan B, like B more appreciate I dont slaughter u out the league
u took garbage n styled it, ill drop u off a mile cliff
give me 2 reasons why I shuldnt u leave u wit that many teeth to smile wit
u shuld take a listen, cuz I can tell from ur bland past
20/20 aint ya vision.. its the next time ull see a champ match

[WRATH]

Bruh you’ve posted as much in a month as I have in 5 years. Relax, you fucking psycho.


Fakin’ like ur a B-Boys legend, pffft.. that site made you their private bitch
Bruh, real b-boys breakdance on cardboard, you fucking live inside of it

Lol nice

Catch you in the dark, you won’t see nuthin but the muzzle flash, stupid ho
Give you a Close Encounter, these bright lights lift you off the ground like a UFO

Good

You’re the type'a nutjob I’d like to see hafta give his rifle back
Cuz you like girls that Ar 15, and you’ll shoot up their school with one if they don’t like you back

Lil off but cool

Ur baby momz cheated on you and I gotta laugh when you beef with her
I call that bitch a fire truck………
Cuz she gets filled with men that make her squirt and you gotta Keep Back 500 feet from her

Too wordy

You fuckin' child abuser.. no wonder she was fuckin' your neighbors
Your Baby Bones harder than the ones you have buried under your trailer

Nah

In high school you kept a journal that details how your classmates harassed you
Your diary a’problems includes THAT excuse for why you ate lunch alone in the bathroom

Good but weird





I seen muff n gamble around now im fightin the hunches
Its good to see old heads comin back.. maybe now ull stop bitin their punches

Okay

hot or thot tourneys poppin idk wat u doin wrong
I asked for some panty shots nigga.. not for you to put em on

Nah

we doubt ur gettin play, puttin u on blast is a goal for the lime
I dont have to flag ur bitch down.. shes alrdy on top of every pole we can find

Good

u better have sum back up ideas, cuz ur prolly bout to bleed
I hope u got a plan B, like B more appreciate I dont slaughter u out the league

Nah

u took garbage n styled it, ill drop u off a mile cliff
give me 2 reasons why I shuldnt u leave u wit that many teeth to smile wit

Good

u shuld take a listen, cuz I can tell from ur bland past
20/20 aint ya vision.. its the next time ull see a champ match

Nah


V pinot

[DynamiCz]

Fakin’ like ur a B-Boys legend, pffft.. that site made you their private bitch
Bruh, real b-boys breakdance on cardboard, you fucking live inside of it

Nice

You’re the type'a nutjob I’d like to see hafta give his rifle back
Cuz you like girls that Ar 15, and you’ll shoot up their school with one if they don’t like you back

Lol I like this

In high school you kept a journal that details how your classmates harassed you
Your diary a’problems includes THAT excuse for why you ate lunch alone in the bathroom

Lmao

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I seen muff n gamble around now im fightin the hunches
Its good to see old heads comin back.. maybe now ull stop bitin their punches

Good opener

we doubt ur gettin play, puttin u on blast is a goal for the lime
I dont have to flag ur bitch down.. shes on top of every pole we can find

Nice

u better have sum back up ideas, cuz ur prolly bout to bleed
I hope u got a plan B, like B more appreciate I dont slaughter u out the league

Ok


Nice read on both ends

V-Pinot

[Saitama]

Bruh you’ve posted as much in a month as I have in 5 years. Relax, you fucking psycho.


Fakin’ like ur a B-Boys legend, pffft.. that site made you their private bitch
Bruh, real b-boys breakdance on cardboard, you fucking live inside of it
- this angle been played back @ bboys lol

Catch you in the dark, you won’t see nuthin but the muzzle flash, stupid ho
Give you a Close Encounter, these bright lights lift you off the ground like a UFO
-seen a variation of it b4.....and the bright lights was loose tie in

You’re the type'a nutjob I’d like to see hafta give his rifle back
Cuz you like girls that Ar 15, and you’ll shoot up their school with one if they don’t like you back
-lol ok

Ur baby momz cheated on you and I gotta laugh when you beef with her
I call that bitch a fire truck………
Cuz she gets filled with men that make her squirt and you gotta Keep Back 500 feet from her
-nah....did too much, little payoff

You fuckin' child abuser.. no wonder she was fuckin' your neighbors
Your Baby Bones harder than the ones you have buried under your trailer
-eh

In high school you kept a journal that details how your classmates harassed you
Your diary a’problems includes THAT excuse for why you ate lunch alone in the bathroom
- ok this wasnt bad




I seen muff n gamble around now im fightin the hunches
Its good to see old heads comin back.. maybe now ull stop bitin their punches
- eh, pinot hasnt any biting of voting, outside of that a weak angle

hot or thot tourneys poppin idk wat u doin wrong
I asked for some panty shots nigga.. not for you to put em on
-no

we doubt ur gettin play, puttin u on blast is a goal for the lime
I dont have to flag ur bitch down.. shes on top of every pole we can find
-ok this hit......mighta seen it but ok

u better have sum back up ideas, cuz ur prolly bout to bleed
I hope u got a plan B, like B more appreciate I dont slaughter u out the league
-no way

u took garbage n styled it, ill drop u off a mile cliff
give me 2 reasons why I shuldnt u leave u wit that many teeth to smile wit
-ok simple but decent here

u shuld take a listen, cuz I can tell from ur bland past
20/20 aint ya vision.. its the next time ull see a champ match
-seen way too many of these, this one wasnt good imo


Bit of an underwhelming match here
NJ had a few glaring misses/played ideas
poles was best one imo..
pinot had a few weak hits but had more hitters overall

v pinot

[Joe Boston]

Pinoj

Fakin’ like ur a B-Boys legend, pffft.. that site made you their private bitch
Bruh, real b-boys breakdance on cardboard, you fucking live inside of it
Not sure if this is related to the BBOYS crew Ricardo and Pumper ran if so funny ass personal flip

Catch you in the dark, you won’t see nuthin but the muzzle flash, stupid ho
Give you a Close Encounter, these bright lights lift you off the ground like a UFO
dope nice metaphore

You’re the type'a nutjob I’d like to see hafta give his rifle back
Cuz you like girls that Ar 15, and you’ll shoot up their school with one if they don’t like you back
some will call reach on the wordplay but this is lmao

Ur baby momz cheated on you and I gotta laugh when you beef with her
I call that bitch a fire truck………
Cuz she gets filled with men that make her squirt and you gotta Keep Back 500 feet from her
nah too wordy

You fuckin' child abuser.. no wonder she was fuckin' your neighbors
Your Baby Bones harder than the ones you have buried under your trailer
nah

In high school you kept a journal that details how your classmates harassed you
Your diary a’problems includes THAT excuse for why you ate lunch alone in the bathroom
lol ok

Nick James

I seen muff n gamble around now im fightin the hunches
Its good to see old heads comin back.. maybe now ull stop bitin their punches
pretty soft hit basic too simple

hot or thot tourneys poppin idk wat u doin wrong
I asked for some panty shots nigga.. not for you to put em on
lol

we doubt ur gettin play, puttin u on blast is a goal for the lime
I dont have to flag ur bitch down.. shes on top of every pole we can find
light jab but played also

u better have sum back up ideas, cuz ur prolly bout to bleed
I hope u got a plan B, like B more appreciate I dont slaughter u out the league
huh didnt get this at all

u took garbage n styled it, ill drop u off a mile cliff
give me 2 reasons why I shuldnt u leave u wit that many teeth to smile wit
ok this was better more of a direct hit

u shuld take a listen, cuz I can tell from ur bland past
20/20 aint ya vision.. its the next time ull see a champ match
nah played

v/pINOT He was more consistent and creative. Nick came too simple with some bars and overall wording hurt him.

[ill nik-A]

Pinot wins easily in my eyes

Besides the 500 ft away and baby bones shit hit

From NJ I only liked the pole which I’ve seen before

[2tripple0]

Fakin’ like ur a B-Boys legend, pffft.. that site made you their private bitch
Bruh, real b-boys breakdance on cardboard, you fucking live inside of it
okay I guess
Catch you in the dark, you won’t see nuthin but the muzzle flash, stupid ho
Give you a Close Encounter, these bright lights lift you off the ground like a UFO
alright I guess
You’re the type'a nutjob I’d like to see hafta give his rifle back
Cuz you like girls that Ar 15, and you’ll shoot up their school with one if they don’t like you back
nah
Ur baby momz cheated on you and I gotta laugh when you beef with her
I call that bitch a fire truck………
Cuz she gets filled with men that make her squirt and you gotta Keep Back 500 feet from her
ok I liked that that was funny
You fuckin' child abuser.. no wonder she was fuckin' your neighbors
Your Baby Bones harder than the ones you have buried under your trailer
doesn't rhyme
In high school you kept a journal that details how your classmates harassed you
Your diary a’problems includes THAT excuse for why you ate lunch alone in the bathroom
lol that was funny as well

vs.

I seen muff n gamble around now im fightin the hunches
Its good to see old heads comin back.. maybe now ull stop bitin their punches
okay
hot or thot tourneys poppin idk wat u doin wrong
I asked for some panty shots nigga.. not for you to put em on
ok I guess not really tho
we doubt ur gettin play, puttin u on blast is a goal for the lime
I dont have to flag ur bitch down.. shes on top of every pole we can find
nah
u better have sum back up ideas, cuz ur prolly bout to bleed
I hope u got a plan B, like B more appreciate I dont slaughter u out the league
eh
u took garbage n styled it, ill drop u off a mile cliff
give me 2 reasons why I shuldnt u leave u wit that many teeth to smile wit
okay
u shuld take a listen, cuz I can tell from ur bland past
20/20 aint ya vision.. its the next time ull see a champ match
okay


vote: pinot grij

[Barcotic]

Pinot

opener was good
Ar 15 was OK but a bit of a reach
liked baby bones
closer was decent

NJ

flag ur bitch hit
2 reasons was coo

v/pinot

[Enbombz]

Bruh you’ve posted as much in a month as I have in 5 years. Relax, you fucking psycho.


Fakin’ like ur a B-Boys legend, pffft.. that site made you their private bitch
Bruh, real b-boys breakdance on cardboard, you fucking live inside of it
Catch you in the dark, you won’t see nuthin but the muzzle flash, stupid ho
Give you a Close Encounter, these bright lights lift you off the ground like a UFO
You’re the type'a nutjob I’d like to see hafta give his rifle back
Cuz you like girls that Ar 15, and you’ll shoot up their school with one if they don’t like you back
Ur baby momz cheated on you and I gotta laugh when you beef with her
I call that bitch a fire truck………
Cuz she gets filled with men that make her squirt and you gotta Keep Back 500 feet from her
You fuckin' child abuser.. no wonder she was fuckin' your neighbors
Your Baby Bones harder than the ones you have buried under your trailer
In high school you kept a journal that details how your classmates harassed you
Your diary a’problems includes THAT excuse for why you ate lunch alone in the bathroom

opener was decent, second bar was good only gripe was double back rhyme, i liked the closer too it was alright. Your verse weaved in the personal touches well. 2nd bar was way to long for what it was, baby bones wasn't bad but was that into it.


.. back to reality.

I seen muff n gamble around now im fightin the hunches
Its good to see old heads comin back.. maybe now ull stop bitin their punches
hot or thot tourneys poppin idk wat u doin wrong
I asked for some panty shots nigga.. not for you to put em on
we doubt ur gettin play, puttin u on blast is a goal for the lime
I dont have to flag ur bitch down.. shes on top of every pole we can find
u better have sum back up ideas, cuz ur prolly bout to bleed
I hope u got a plan B, like B more appreciate I dont slaughter u out the league
u took garbage n styled it, ill drop u off a mile cliff
give me 2 reasons why I shuldnt u leave u wit that many teeth to smile wit
u shuld take a listen, cuz I can tell from ur bland past
20/20 aint ya vision.. its the next time ull see a champ match

opener okay but a jab, flah gown was okay, closer was okay. It was a fairly smooth verse but was all very jabby. You flipped some of the stuff okay but did come off more generic. Yourr other too were pretty basic didn't help they weren't worded great.

Any overall i felt Pinot had the better hits here. V/ pinot

[Flow]

Other then the closer snd that fire truck bar all pinots were solid hits for me. The baby bones was lols, not the greatest bar but as a filler line shit was good. I dig a good clowning. Anyway, yeah solid an enjoyable read.

Nick. Bag of revelles got.me.
Opener was a hit but concept slightly played now.
Hot or thot bar was a dud for me
Pole was good
Plan b was weak
The 2 reasons line was sloppy, i likes it as i know how it was meant but it was sloppy
Closer hit but the concept played to fuck

Nick was rusty/sloppy here. Feel maybe this a case of being in so much at one time an just comkng back from a hiatus etc an all just took a little away from thst polish you csn usually bring.

Pinot was decent

Vote pinot