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View Full Version : Sour Joog 4-1 Vs Joe Boston 3-0 - JOOG WINS


Allen Knight
02-19-2018, 02:41 PM
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Sour joog Joe Boston

Joe Boston
02-19-2018, 06:56 PM
Check

Enbombz
02-19-2018, 06:57 PM
check ten max

Joe Boston
02-21-2018, 07:20 PM
10 Sour joog

Talking about he eating, steady robbin or always in the trap
Whatever coke he Nipsey Hussles, but fag dont own a decent pair of kicks to run Victory Laps
Strike me as the type to clap feminantly ur faggotry spreads across the air
Constanly begging to have a Melania, u turned coming out the closet to a political affair
I'll stare blank directly in his face then'll watch this pussy fold
I'll pick him off with long nose, it can get nasty whenever im "Diggin For Gold"
Mold yourself into the wackest top teir, I hope that bullshit ego plummits
Ur rep is a nothing but a fucking Endless Wreck, Ur Danica at the wheel during Daytona 500
Ur hoe got an overly sized stomach, fucking her missionary is where i draw the line
Bitch got so many Layers if i lift them up there'll be a tattoo of Royce Da 5'9

Enbombz
02-22-2018, 06:29 PM
When I rhyme I'm a force, have you seen the size of this dork
My words carry soo much weight they got his legs begging for advice and support
You live a fags life on a wack site in need of improvement.
That queer attempt to get us to "come together" Went about as well as a Beatles reunion
Knife game got the swagger of a bags vid, It get mean with no conscience,
One slice drain all the blood from ya face, It look like you seen a Ghost Boston
You get smashed in fights n always fail when you chat that trife
You been killed so many times you got atleast 40 tales of the afterlife
You always been sensitive, a hot headed guy with no bars
It's just too easy to Bateman n dump his body over by the Ozarks

DynamiCz
02-23-2018, 10:29 AM
Talking about he eating, steady robbin or always in the trap
Whatever coke he Nipsey Hussles, but fag dont own a decent pair of kicks to run Victory Laps

Nice

Mold yourself into the wackest top teir, I hope that bullshit ego plummits
Ur rep is a nothing but a fucking Endless Wreck, Ur Danica at the wheel during Daytona 500

This was coo

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When I rhyme I'm a force, have you seen the size of this dork
My words carry soo much weight they got his legs begging for advice and support

Nice

You live a fags life on a wack site in need of improvement.
That queer attempt to get us to "come together" Went about as well as a Beatles reunion

Lol

You get smashed in fights n always fail when you chat that trife
You been killed so many times you got atleast 40 tales of the afterlife

Dope

You always been sensitive, a hot headed guy with no bars
It's just too easy to Bateman n dump his body over by the Ozarks

Coo


V-Joog

ill nik-A
02-25-2018, 10:01 AM
Danika was ok I guess from joe

Joog was more consistent. After life was nice.

Joog wins easily

Pinot Grij
02-25-2018, 10:08 AM
Boston -- best lines were Nipsey ,, but that's a real stretch to begin with. You gotta cross like 4 different bridges to get to the punchline. He steals coke, he sells the coke, but he's still too broke to afford shoes, the shoes would be needed to run victory laps, ps don't forget about the wordplay! I think you gotta cut down on the amount of turns your line takes, cuz the more mechanisms you have in there, the greater the opportunity for the voter to get lost, bored and give up on the line.

Diggin for Gold is aight too -- but the connection isn't 100% direct.

Joog -- Come Together was a solid personal. few other cool lines.

the difference here is Joog's simplistic approach compared to Boston's convoluted approach. Joog's had more impact because it was stripped down and direct. Boston required you to jump through hoops to get to the pay off, which lessened the impact.

Vote -- Joog

Saint
02-26-2018, 09:41 AM
Joe B -- opener was aight, coulda worded better.
Endless wreck was coo. Diggin for gold nice idea didnt care for flip tbh..

Joog -- consistent verse no big lows.
after life n beatles lines were coo..

V -- JOOG