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Allen Knight
02-26-2018, 04:16 PM
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Letterman DynamiCz

Letterman
02-26-2018, 04:24 PM
Ok.

DynamiCz
02-26-2018, 04:57 PM
True

DynamiCz
03-01-2018, 10:20 PM
12...


Im fully alert, slouched in the seat, metal attached to the chair like a arm rest
The new gun came with a cover, i had to cut the sleeve off like a bike club vest
The ammo loaded, my movement is better..looking for letter like a college acceptance
Peeking over the mesh fence, gun fire already happened, his body was past tense
The lawyers going up per case, thats cause i made the murder capital letter
Front page in the news letter..they had to send the message to many like a chain letter
See these shots i shoot for the win...ncaa tourney in march, the millimeter a big ten
Today the task, trying to find a box for letter to match..word with friends
Beginning of baby boy..i was a grown man coming out the womb
If i rip him to shreds, they will find a pile of letters like this a inmate room
I wake up to sin, the beam parallel when it spread out...concave lens
I hope you try me then, fight game nice, but the tray on the table like im dining in

Letterman
03-02-2018, 01:44 AM
vs Extreme DynamiCs

Rearranging ya anatomy. Grip the gat, u’ll prolly leave harmed
Before the shot ya abnormal, til I blast & leave your whole upper body deformed
I’m rude w/ the tool. I’ll grab the mask & use the shotty
They gon have to pardon him, once these bullets start passing through his body
Imma rejoice when u die. I’ll let my sibling merk this damn beginner
So I’ll just pass the Mac, and cheese so my brother can eat like a family dinner
U knockoff Enbombz. I’ve killed him so u’ll get devoured in seconds
Cuz I’m known to airheads xtreme, & you’re just here leaving a sour impression
Gun under the pillow. I’ll fuck ya girl then the 4’s gonna pop
And after I make that bitch wail, I’ll turn around & blowholes in her top
Close range? Nah.. use a scope, lock & load then u drop
Cuz if I go to the extreme, I’d keep on shootin & won’t know when to stop

Habitat
03-02-2018, 08:48 PM
The ammo loaded, my movement is better..looking for letter like a college acceptance
Peeking over the mesh fence, gun fire already happened, his body was past tense

vs

U knockoff Enbombz. I’ve killed him so u’ll get devoured in seconds
Cuz I’m known to airheads xtreme, & you’re just here leaving a sour impression
Gun under the pillow. I’ll fuck ya girl then the 4’s gonna pop
And after I make that bitch wail, I’ll turn around & blowholes in her top

Dynamicz is definitely getting better. he has the right idea but still needs some work. LEtterman i think ur overdoing it on the gun bars. but thats just my opinion. you still had the better verse

v/letterman

Nick James
03-03-2018, 12:50 PM
See these shots i shoot for the win...ncaa tourney in march, the millimeter a big ten
Today the task, trying to find a box for letter to match..word with friends


vs


I’m rude w/ the tool. I’ll grab the mask & use the shotty
They gon have to pardon him, once these bullets start passing through his body
U knockoff Enbombz. I’ve killed him so u’ll get devoured in seconds
Cuz I’m known to airheads xtreme, & you’re just here leaving a sour impression


dynamics was better last wk but this week there really wasnt no punches thrown or even concepts attempted. I think letterman just did as much as he needed to cuz he had a cuple nice quotes n it was enuff

vote - letterman

Pinot Grij
03-03-2018, 02:00 PM
Emphatic win for LETTERMAN, imo.

Dynamicz -- I felt like you relied a lot on nameplays... they were cool, but no significant standouts. The inmate room one was cool. Rest was just aight.

Letterman's opening bar showed he was setting a different tone. Dope line. Family dinner and Airheads could be in contention for best bars of the week. Dope shit.

Erron Black
03-04-2018, 01:21 PM
Felt like Letterman simply had more punches here than Dynamics. Both didn't really bring a whole lot that impressed me and felt a few of the bars we're a bit played, so it came down to punch count.

MVGT: Letterman

2tripple0
03-04-2018, 03:24 PM
Im fully alert, slouched in the seat, metal attached to the chair like a arm rest
The new gun came with a cover, i had to cut the sleeve off like a bike club vest
no punchline here
The ammo loaded, my movement is better..looking for letter like a college acceptance
Peeking over the mesh fence, gun fire already happened, his body was past tense
don't get it
The lawyers going up per case, thats cause i made the murder capital letter
Front page in the news letter..they had to send the message to many like a chain letter
wheres the punchline
See these shots i shoot for the win...ncaa tourney in march, the millimeter a big ten
Today the task, trying to find a box for letter to match..word with friends
no
Beginning of baby boy..i was a grown man coming out the womb
If i rip him to shreds, they will find a pile of letters like this a inmate room
okay
I wake up to sin, the beam parallel when it spread out...concave lens
I hope you try me then, fight game nice, but the tray on the table like im dining in
nah didn't get it sorry

vs.

Rearranging ya anatomy. Grip the gat, u’ll prolly leave harmed
Before the shot ya abnormal, til I blast & leave your whole upper body deformed
wow
I’m rude w/ the tool. I’ll grab the mask & use the shotty
They gon have to pardon him, once these bullets start passing through his body
nah I don't like gunplay that much sorry
Imma rejoice when u die. I’ll let my sibling merk this damn beginner
So I’ll just pass the Mac, and cheese so my brother can eat like a family dinner
eh okay do you really have to kill the guy tho??
U knockoff Enbombz. I’ve killed him so u’ll get devoured in seconds
Cuz I’m known to airheads xtreme, & you’re just here leaving a sour impression
that was nice I liked the airheads that was good
Gun under the pillow. I’ll fuck ya girl then the 4’s gonna pop
And after I make that bitch wail, I’ll turn around & blowholes in her top
nah again not a fan of gunplay
Close range? Nah.. use a scope, lock & load then u drop
Cuz if I go to the extreme, I’d keep on shootin & won’t know when to stop
again no


vote: letterman

Barcotic
03-04-2018, 06:09 PM
Dyn
past tense was cool

rest was basically letter plays which ive seen for yrs
closer played out as well

Letter
opener was good
airheads xtreme was nice
blowholes was dece

not feelin the rest

v/letterman

Lyfzaa Gamble
03-04-2018, 08:39 PM
Clearly onesided battle here. Letterman had an overall solid approach. Airhead line took it for me. Dynamicz had some good ideas just didn't deliver em the right way imo.

Vote Letterman