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Allen Knight
02-26-2018, 04:18 PM
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ill nik-A Barcotic

ill nik-A
02-26-2018, 05:23 PM
Allen Knight

Replace me thx

Barcotic
02-26-2018, 08:05 PM
Welcome!

Barcotic
02-27-2018, 06:34 PM
u gonna show ? ill nik-A
ill go 12
edit
if u not showing ima still drop 8, i want contenders

pussy

Orc
02-28-2018, 05:04 AM
I'll step in, pics due fri

Barcotic
02-28-2018, 10:31 AM
i got 12 for nik
on a busy week

dropping 8 of them

Allen Knight
02-28-2018, 01:43 PM
i got 12 for nik
on a busy week

dropping 8 of them

he aint showin tho, might as well vs orc.

Barcotic
02-28-2018, 02:59 PM
16 ill nik-A
u got anyyy idea what i can do?!

have 2 or 3 dicks in ur whore's ass at ya doormat, then rob the house
better yet
treat her booty like the Friends' intro.. thats 4 claps when Cox come out
nik should retire, nik whack, nik old, many think a corpse
nik washed up, nik trash, Anakin suck a dick if he thinks anything is forced
met the only decent sister in ur close family. bro, panties went down
opened her up, then asked how many fingers w/ NO standing ten count
ur eeeasy to take. every season ur rank slides, dork
u aint a pioneer.. & if we had a pie in 'ere, u'd eat it n make 9 more
when it comes to chick shit, ill fuck a fit bitch in her face
i like broads that pole vault... you keep dick pics in a safe
u blow n have sex with guys, u cant rectify these givens
every time u Succubus in ur pants n let ur pride demon ish
u just lost twice in a week's span, chap. u land? hardly
rose to the occasion? ya, if the occasion was a bachelor fan party
glad this aging mf took a leave, the senior's outshined here
besides
longer he ghosts the site, the more comfortable he'll be in bout 5 years

rip

Schadenfreude
03-02-2018, 02:38 PM
have 2 or 3 dicks in ur whore's ass at ya doormat, then rob the house
better yet
treat her booty like the Friends' intro.. thats 4 claps when Cox come out
Very creative & original, could've worded the set up cleaner tho
nik should retire, nik whack, nik old, many think a corpse
nik washed up, nik trash, Anakin suck a dick if he thinks anything is forced
"& Nik can" doesn't sound like Anakin..irony
met the only decent sister in ur close family. bro, panties went down
opened her up, then asked how many fingers w/ NO standing ten count
LOOOOOL now this is dope
ur eeeasy to take. every season ur rank slides, dork
u aint a pioneer.. & if we had a pie in 'ere, u'd eat it n make 9 more
NO
when it comes to chick shit, ill fuck a fit bitch in her face
i like broads that pole vault... you keep dick pics in a safe
Simple, yet funny
u blow n have sex with guys, u cant rectify these givens
every time u Succubus in ur pants n let ur pride demon ish
Demon ish - diminish, nah
u just lost twice in a week's span, chap. u land? hardly
rose to the occasion? ya, if the occasion was a bachelor fan party
Lol decent
glad this aging mf took a leave, the senior's outshined here
besides
longer he ghosts the site, the more comfortable he'll be in bout 5 years
Idk feels like there could have been more to this closer

Overall decent, still refuse to smooth out some of your wording, but the verse was as creative as you usually are, so propers. The opener & 10 count were nice asf, bachelor fan was cool as well, the rest was 'meh' level.

Saint
03-04-2018, 09:57 PM
opener was creative
10 count was lotv
pole vault -- i was lookin to flip this, ok
like succubus wp. not demon ish part