View Full Version : WEEK IX: Sammy vs Pinot Grij[PINOT WINS]
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Season 8
Verses are due FRIDAY at 11:59 PM EST
Voting ends SUNDAY at 11:59 PM EST
Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words
Voting on 3 battles is required.
Topic: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=126253
Sammy vs Pinot Grij
Goodluck!
Pinot Grij
03-05-2018, 09:09 PM
In
Sammy
03-05-2018, 11:08 PM
Check
Pinot Grij
03-10-2018, 12:31 AM
I can post tonight, but I'm guessing you want an extension
Sammy
03-10-2018, 04:37 PM
sure
Sammy
03-10-2018, 08:52 PM
“Promise”
It lessens the blow by making sense of
Confusion
Daily entanglements become riddles expressed by Confucius
What was nuisance slowly unraveled;
I welcome loose end
Let me breathe, please...a dream before this story begin
Like all story, it begins with dark clouds within view
There were efforts to mine silver but I'd choke on the fume
Lost with no sails; this world swells; I'm lost in the blues
Lost in my thoughts. lost it all; completely lost without you
Every Moment, a step closer to the edge of a bridge;
Making my long story short, Still i long for a hit
Lining up white promises and the promise are kept
Promise of bliss; plotting the script:
“are u proud of me yet?”
Except in this story, she promised me that pops would say “yes”
Birds would chirp in ecstasy. Fox plays with fish
Thanks to my sweet Snow White...alway promising kisses
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What to do here Pinot Grij
Candy
03-11-2018, 07:36 PM
Sammy:
the confusion dump was nice, slightly grasped it and carried the line..
nuisance slowly unraveled;
carried in and dragged through very subtly highly enjoyed it..
a dream before this story begin
very impressed
"mine silver"
deffinetly had color in it
white promises and the promise are kept
much more past that and it is all the way out of here
Thanks to my sweet Snow White...alway promising kisses
nice ending..
xoxo
good show keep it up
Pinot Grij
03-11-2018, 08:11 PM
Innovator yea sorry, guy basically confirmed he wanted an ext at 5 pm the day AFTER verses were due. I went out and didn't have time to finish my verse. Don't really care anymore now tbh.
Sammy
03-11-2018, 09:24 PM
Yo Innovator disqualify my verse, hombre. I’ll take the L.
Candy
03-11-2018, 11:12 PM
nice Sammy
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