Habitat vs Alvin Karpis - ALVIN KARPIS WINS

[Orc]

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Habitat Alvin Karpis

[Habitat]

Check

[Habitat]

Might need the ext

[Alvin Karpis]

yep same

[Alvin Karpis]

I’ll have 10-12 up tonight

[Habitat]

gun bars scare this faggot, i knew u were a female from the start
and if you pour your heart out to me I'll shoot you in the fuckin heart
poor people have a shitty childhood n a low survival rate.. death is comin fast
but I'll bet Alvin beats the Odds.. n' Ends up scarred by the Remnants of his past
when homies label him w/ the vet Cardiac Talented.. dickridings his basic need
and it's funny the only thing alvin's good at is bein scared to death of facin me
ur girl fat as fuck; look away if u don't wanna vomit
shes got rolls honor roles... that bitch gotta degree in home economics

8

[Alvin Karpis]

why 8?

Lettuce all enjoy him gettin Beet again, he don’t Carrots old news
^^see thats the word play Fresh Produce... Whole Foods
Barc gets clowned for his wp, but I’m more disgusted with this guys text
They all know Hublots more cuz you have less value then a Timex
I’ll slay ya chick n kill, She stay on my dick for real
I got with this Bumbu faster then Waynes liquor deal
Tactical scope for this joke, if you ask one question
Red dots on ya, I’ll have the laser remove Tat in one session

[Barcotic]

gun bars scare this faggot, i knew u were a female from the start
and if you pour your heart out to me I'll shoot you in the fuckin heart

nah, weak concept. n using heart twice made it worse

poor people have a shitty childhood n a low survival rate.. death is comin fast
but I'll bet Alvin beats the Odds.. n' Ends up scarred by the Remnants of his past

odds n ends was an ok idea, but ur tie in fell flat

when homies label him w/ the vet Cardiac Talented.. dickridings his basic need
and it's funny the only thing alvin's good at is bein scared to death of facin me

cool wp in the setup, followup was ehhh

ur girl fat as fuck; look away if u don't wanna vomit
shes got rolls honor roles... that bitch gotta degree in home economics

lol ok, light tho

vs

Lettuce all enjoy him gettin Beet again, he don’t Carrots old news
^^see thats the word play Fresh Produce... Whole Foods

the fresh produce np is played on him

Barc gets clowned for his wp, but I’m more disgusted with this guys text
They all know Hublots more cuz you have less value then a Timex

cool wp

I’ll slay ya chick n kill, She stay on my dick for real
I got with this Bumbu faster then Waynes liquor deal

light

Tactical scope for this joke, if you ask one question
Red dots on ya, I’ll have the laser remove Tat in one session

dope

no gd punches
1 jab
3 misses
vs
2 gd punches
1 jab
1 miss

v/karpis

[Pinot Grij]

Hab's closer was dope. I wasn't wow'ed by anything else -- 1st couplet and 3rd were just straightforward statements.

Karpis opener basically dummied Hab's whole verse, tbh. Just slick.
Hublots was a bit difficult in the execution. I didn't feel it landed very harshly.
Wayne bit was cool.
Closer was flames. Wowzers.

Vote -- Karpis

[Saint]

Hab:
Didnt like how you used heartx2, took away from execution.
Odds n Ends/Remnants -- liked it, could've been harder tho
Cardiac -- Needed revision.
Closer was light.

Alv:
Opener -- Fresh been done but i liked the setup here so it was better.
Hublots -- ;)
Bumbu -- Light
Closer -- somewhat played idea m but delivered good enough

V -- AK. More convincing hits..Hab read like he was rushed this week.

[Profit]

Hab,

Odds n ends and ur closer were solid, didn't really like the other two much

Karp I like the opener, hublots and closer, those three hit nice..

I got it 3 1/2 to 2 in favor of karp. Cool read y'all

[Cred]

ur girl fat as fuck; look away if u don't wanna vomit
shes got rolls honor roles... that bitch gotta degree in home economics
Lol cool

vs

Lettuce all enjoy him gettin Beet again, he don’t Carrots old news
^^see thats the word play Fresh Produce... Whole Foods
I liked this.
I’ll slay ya chick n kill, She stay on my dick for real
I got with this Bumbu faster then Waynes liquor deal
Cool lil w/p

Ok, not the greatest battle but short and simple gets it done. Fresh definitely seemed pressed for time or rushed dropping that verse. Alvin imo did jus enough to trump Habs verse.

Vote / Alvin Karpis