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Cred
03-19-2018, 08:28 AM
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Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday MARCH 22 and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

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bleak Plot

bleak
03-22-2018, 04:47 AM
brains look like Super Aqua, what a Wonder this Bat is
quick Flash to his Mans cz there's no Justice for faggots.
Hair trigger on my hands,1 pull &you gon' take this flak.
Watch your circle get erased w/ one finger like Facebook chat
Clip bout 69 deep. &this bitch is gifted in gab, kids.
You'll hear the Tek, 'aaa SHI-' then it's sounding like his ad libs.
I front weight it's kilos. Skip and I'm throwing the rockets.
Your front weight is that dad gut, keeps ur keys low in your pockets

8

Plot
03-22-2018, 03:48 PM
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bleak
03-22-2018, 07:51 PM
For 8? Sure

Plot
03-23-2018, 01:38 AM
Check this nosey faggot pre-swayying... so fucking lousy,
Imma just get busy-bodying the fool, care what he says about me!
Fuck this clown Bleak, he's gotta be the dumbest nerd,
If he thinks he's fly he got it backwards, he's a hummingbird.
Got no chance, shit gets absurd when I start throwing hands,
Leave all his facial features dripping-off, like a snow man.
Winning with those weak bars? pathetic how this fool tanks,
Just a shitty pipe dream, guess he must have missed Shawshank.

Jabari Black
03-23-2018, 10:21 PM
Bleak

Justice League scheme was decent. Basic but decent. I liked the circle get erased with one finger bar. Not gonna lie, I hated that tekashi 69 bar lmao. Maybe I’m tripping but I felt dumb af reading it out loud lol. The closer landed.

Plot I think you completely wasted your opener. I didn’t pay attention enough in school to know hummingbirds fly backwards lol. I used context clues though. I didn’t think it was that great though - too simple. Snowman bar was decent. I think you had an opportunity to build up that punch a bit more. Didn’t really care for your closer.

Bleak took this one. Punched every line and overall I liked your verse. Plot you wasted your opener which you can’t do when you only going 8 bars. Even then, I think Bleak’s punches landed harder and he had a overall better verse.

Concrete
03-24-2018, 08:47 AM
bleak; 1st, cool. 2nd, decent. 3rd, okay. 4th, meh.

Plot; 1st, just a statement. 2-4, the concepts have potential to hit hard but didnt.
I mean, there shoulda been more creative flips.

Anyways, bleaks gets the vote for better punches, better flips, etc.

Suthaveli
03-25-2018, 10:05 AM
bleak had fb chat & keys low

plot had a nice structured verse


bleak obv put up a quickie as most did this week. me included. i hated the justice league line., lol... apologies. IDK much about that rainbow bright kid other than the fact that i do find him to be a funny real life troll to the cali cats.
plot had potiental w.the hummingbird line, but i didn't like how it was executed. the problem w.plot, which has always been a issue w.him is he comes rly basic. wording structure is ideal for the site, he just needs to come much more creative w. what he says, imho.

mvgt- bleak

DynamiCz
03-25-2018, 10:31 AM
Hair trigger on my hands,1 pull &you gon' take this flak.
Watch your circle get erased w/ one finger like Facebook chat
Clip bout 69 deep. &this bitch is gifted in gab, kids.
You'll hear the Tek, 'aaa SHI-' then it's sounding like his ad libs.

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Got no chance, shit gets absurd when I start throwing hands,
Leave all his facial features dripping-off, like a snow man.

I'm going with bleak on this one, just better overall better verse with better content. Props to Plot tho.

V-Bleak

Schadenfreude
03-25-2018, 01:53 PM
VOTE BLEAK
Bleak forced his opener & that 69 concept was wack lol. FB chat & keys low were decent tho. Plot's concepts were super simple, that only works when your opponent's ideas are convoluted. At least your wording was clear & concise, just nothing special w/ your punches. Neither wowed Me w/ their verses, just an overall OK battle.