Incredible 3-4 vs bleak 4-7 - BLEAK WINS

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Incredible bleak

[Incredible]

bleak here's that rematch we were talking about, 10 or 12?

[bleak]

12

[bleak]

.40 named Fiona, glock called Tina cz she sung so right
&if the girls are rowdy, you'll get tossed around like Amen on bunco night
Ur on the edge &fun stops when blood clots, I'll stop the show
Show hemorrhage that'll end his life, his vessel poppin on the rocks below
a stack on the dog, but the favorites bout to fry ur kids
Have your Seed in Brackets and chains, waiting on the highest bid
If we spring forward? He'll fall back cz they might hang him
He'll lose hours in my basement, w/ zero hope of Daylight Savings
U looking for a place that's like 3 blocks wide
& IF u find that 'G' spot, I'll be there to run those pockets dry.
blast the Tekken Tag out. We Street Fight'n if u show rags
Bloods'll have 4 arms over ur head squeezing, in kombat like Goro grabs

[Incredible]

He gets "lets just be friends" responses, cause he eats a lot of sweets
nothing semi about it but what I got that finally makes ya move ur feets!
Better duck duck off you get nothing but a goose in this man
Line up ya fam seance style, but I ain't tapping heads w/ my hands!
True or not.. join date his motivation, but not what he needs to melt
20 plus years in? Knuck battle proved it only shows above the belt!
So get your weights up...IRL but also in the NC ranks
Exchanging anime w/ his buds sends replies like "your the besties! Thanks!
I'm a up and comer the same position your moms prefers
Also says she hasn't had it this big since you came outta hers
But bro your body frame and broad shoulders just aren't suffice
So from just a description alone you sure your not Amens wife?

[ill nik-A]

This battle was weird. I think I like bleaks verse more

But like the lack of attacking ugh.

[Suthaveli]

yo,

this battle was a rly weird read tho. Bleak verse had great concepts, came across vague tho while Incred vs confused me. it was like unfinished thoughts. prime example was the anime line, i can go off context clues & see his avy would def make u attack that, so great find on ur behalf, but the line came across as vry bleh. bleak had a daylight saving bar i thought was dope but idk, it just doesn't seem like u guys were fully at ea. other. idk how to describe it other than weird tho. he did hv the lynch & chained up lines kinda made me think was he thinking of slavery or some shit. but yea, whatevs.
Bleak def had the better verse to read tho. I actually dug quite a few of his lines, but i happen to be a lowkey bleak fan awaiting him to take that nxt step. Incred i feel needs to work on better mechanics in his vrs as of now i do feel bleak is at a higher pedestal than him. hope to see ya grow.

mvgt- bleak

[Blue Bayou]

.40 named Fiona, glock called Tina cz she sung so right
&if the girls are rowdy, you'll get tossed around like Amen on bunco night
okay site reference/attack line... diss light
Ur on the edge &fun stops when blood clots, I'll stop the show
Show hemorrhage that'll end his life, his vessel poppin on the rocks below
him/hem, him a ridge? I'm missing this..
a stack on the dog, but the favorites bout to fry ur kids
Have your Seed in Brackets and chains, waiting on the highest bid
another attack line? The conceot is cool here tho
If we spring forward? He'll fall back cz they might hang him
He'll lose hours in my basement, w/ zero hope of Daylight Savings
nah
U looking for a place that's like 3 blocks wide
& IF u find that 'G' spot, I'll be there to run those pockets dry.
mehh
blast the Tekken Tag out. We Street Fight'n if u show rags
Bloods'll have 4 arms over ur head squeezing, in kombat like Goro grabs
attack lines are meant to complient verses not make up the entire thing... anyways, ive seen 20 goro/4 arms lines over the years

vs.

He gets "lets just be friends" responses, cause he eats a lot of sweets
nothing semi about it but what I got that finally makes ya move ur feets!
nah
Better duck duck off you get nothing but a goose in this man
Line up ya fam seance style, but I ain't tapping heads w/ my hands!
okayish attack line I guess
True or not.. join date his motivation, but not what he needs to melt
20 plus years in? Knuck battle proved it only shows above the belt!
nah
So get your weights up...IRL but also in the NC ranks
Exchanging anime w/ his buds sends replies like "your the besties! Thanks!
weak
I'm a up and comer the same position your moms prefers
Also says she hasn't had it this big since you came outta hers
mehh
But bro your body frame and broad shoulders just aren't suffice
So from just a description alone you sure your not Amens wife?
not feelin


I vote for bleak

[Cyrax]

bleak had
.40 named Fiona, glock called Tina cz she sung so right
&if the girls are rowdy, you'll get tossed around like Amen on bunco night
Ur on the edge &fun stops when blood clots, I'll stop the show
Show hemorrhage that'll end his life, his vessel poppin on the rocks below
a stack on the dog, but the favorites bout to fry ur kids
Have your Seed in Brackets and chains, waiting on the highest bid

inc had

Better duck duck off you get nothing but a goose in this man
Line up ya fam seance style, but I ain't tapping heads w/ my hands!


i have bleak here... he had more bars i was feeling.. incredible had some lines
that could of hit but worded off to me.. semi line would of been nice if he re worded it.
bleak took this.

[Concrete]

I didnt catch most of the references in this battle to be honest, Incredible has some ideas but the outcome needs to be more than stating something, the insults needs more pun so to speak. bleak was better tho there stuff I couldnt decipher in his verse as well, tho the dayligths line was aight, plus added bonus for classic beat em up references .

Vote bleak

[Lyfzaa Gamble]

Ur on the edge &fun stops when blood clots, I'll stop the show
Show hemorrhage that'll end his life, his vessel poppin on the rocks below
a stack on the dog, but the favorites bout to fry ur kids
Have your Seed in Brackets and chains, waiting on the highest bid

Was my favorite part of the batttle, wasn't really feeling incs verse nothing really hit hard imo.... Both keep dropping

Mvgt bleak