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Elemental P
04-13-2018, 02:56 PM
My scripts will merk this net geek, when I spit my verse it's deadly/
Antis Quick to Serve but Quix get stirred like Nestle!/
You ain't very sick, I'ma bury this fairy bitch very quick/
Claim you're the shit? Yea in the tourney "ABZ" had to carry Quix/
Bet I'll win, Anti Up, in battles I punch lines with quick hands/
You can't bust rhymes Pansy fuck, Quix gona sink fast, call em Quick Sand/
My fist land, blast one and ur done, ya raps dumber than fuck/
Call yaself Quix, but couldn't catch a run a blunt!/
So fag how can you front, I'm a true artist you're true garbage/
I spew Carnage, but shooting pool the only time you see "Q-balling"/
Ya too soft kid, and every time this dude trys to find his groove/
He ends up Digging his Own Grave from the rhymes he used/
Prolly scripted a whole page, but I shouldn't even waste time on you/
I ain't lying too, fuck the tourny, Scott didn't have to arrive to outshine this dude//


(Granted this ain't my best work but gives you an idea how my battle scheme is) this was against some dude name QUIX on illestlyrics.

I'll try y'all's style and see if I like writing it, need to read some examples.

Allen Knight
04-13-2018, 02:58 PM
No one gives a fuck.

Elemental P
04-13-2018, 02:59 PM
No one gives a fuck.

Good looks.

Sharp
04-13-2018, 03:39 PM
So what was your opponents name?

Elemental P
04-13-2018, 03:45 PM
LMAO

Orc
04-13-2018, 04:34 PM
Nice style, fluid

I think you'd adapt well

El Muffin
04-13-2018, 04:56 PM
This isn't bad

Its ok

Few shining spots where I'm like hmmmm ok.. Conceptually u show potential

I stand corrected @ Elemental p

Elemental P
04-13-2018, 05:05 PM
Appreciated. I'll gotta read more battles here to get a better grasp of this sites style

Saint
04-13-2018, 05:19 PM
Fluidity seems there but concepts need alot of work

El Muffin
04-13-2018, 05:25 PM
Appreciated. I'll gotta read more battles here to get a better grasp of this sites style

Lets do that pic battle

That 6 lines shit don't even bring me half staff no homo

Drop link in here n ill do same n set it up Elemental P

El Muffin
04-13-2018, 05:26 PM
Oops

Suthaveli
04-13-2018, 05:29 PM
So what was your opponents name?

Shleep!

Elemental P
04-13-2018, 05:48 PM
Lets do that pic battle

That 6 lines shit don't even bring me half staff no homo

Drop link in here n ill do same n set it up Elemental P


When you looking to get it written by?
I'm still working on writing some songs and just moved to the new place so just need some time to get to it but I'm still down. You said 20 lines right?

El Muffin
04-13-2018, 05:54 PM
When you looking to get it written by?
I'm still working on writing some songs and just moved to the new place so just need some time to get to it but I'm still down. You said 20 lines right?


Whenever ugot time ill give u a week Yeah but im flexible just lmk if u having problems

N Yeah

Elemental P
04-13-2018, 06:07 PM
Whenever ugot time ill give u a week Yeah but im flexible just lmk if u having problems

N Yeah

Word aite that sounds str8. Idk how to post pics on here, I think Activate said something bout using another site... idk but I'll figure that out when we set an actual time frame. I'll PM you around tomorrow when I get shit done and see what a good due date will be. I got my Facebook page I can always post if I have to

El Muffin
04-13-2018, 06:08 PM
Word aite that sounds str8. Idk how to post pics on here, I think Activate said something bout using another site... idk but I'll figure that out when we set an actual time frame. I'll PM you around tomorrow when I get shit done and see what a good due date will be. I got my Facebook page I can always post if I have to

Pm ur name ill send u request n then ima creep on ur shit n snatch one lol

Elemental P
04-13-2018, 09:32 PM
Pm ur name ill send u request n then ima creep on ur shit n snatch one lol

LMFAO gooone

Elemental P
04-13-2018, 09:33 PM
Shit could get serious if we see our fb pages LMFAO

El Muffin
04-13-2018, 10:08 PM
Shit could get serious if we see our fb pages LMFAO

I'm outchear..I'm no danger

Ill screenshot n crop ur profile name out eetcetc

Elemental P
04-13-2018, 11:06 PM
I'm outchear..I'm no danger

Ill screenshot n crop ur profile name out eetcetc

Aite I'll send my link by tom lol

GUDELJ
04-13-2018, 11:23 PM
Good looks.

LMFAO this got me

El Muffin
04-13-2018, 11:39 PM
Boooo

Elemental P
04-14-2018, 12:36 AM
http://i65.tinypic.com/5dkpqh.png

There you go El Muffin

El Muffin
04-14-2018, 01:38 AM
Lmao yes.. This will do just fine. Elemental P

Alright ur gonna get that pic i posted if me that No one wanted to battle because they seen it but u new just write for it so it becomes obsolete . not taking new pics rn when I got a weeks worth of throwaway clothes w/ me for a good reason lol ahemmm

I need to conserve shit j gotta battle Lars too

Elemental P
04-14-2018, 01:55 AM
Lmao yes.. This will do just fine. Elemental P

Alright ur gonna get that pic i posted if me that No one wanted to battle because they seen it but u new just write for it so it becomes obsolete . not taking new pics rn when I got a weeks worth of throwaway clothes w/ me for a good reason lol ahemmm

I need to conserve shit j gotta battle Lars too
Yea that don't matter to me, a picture is a picture. We'll figure out a battle date, either next wkend or when u do ur verse for the UK and US tourny whichever comes first. Just hit my PM when u ready

El Muffin
04-14-2018, 02:43 AM
U are fucked bro I'm dropping rtf now

Hibachi style

I cook it right in front of u

Go to the thread

May go do shit but I will not leave that thresd untill I'm done

Welcome to nc

Elemental P
04-14-2018, 03:40 AM
U are fucked bro I'm dropping rtf now

Hibachi style

I cook it right in front of u

Go to the thread

May go do shit but I will not leave that thresd untill I'm done

Welcome to nc
I'll live. I've lost battles before. Been a while since I battled but Sall good. Post your pic in the thread

El Muffin
04-14-2018, 04:27 AM
I'll live. I've lost battles before. Been a while since I battled but Sall good. Post your pic in the thread


Had to break your hymen

If you beat THAT nigga ?

Idk. Ion see it . I went Batshit conceptually

Some of my more complex work in that verse. Operative word : Some

Hush
04-14-2018, 07:21 AM
He better not be the wigger in that pic

Elemental P
04-14-2018, 12:34 PM
He better not be the wigger in that pic

Don't u got a corner to stand on to sell drugs an shit kid

Mr. J
04-14-2018, 03:19 PM
Not the proper place to post this. But it was alright.

Elemental P
04-14-2018, 06:22 PM
Not the proper place to post this. But it was alright.

This basically turned in to a call out thread so there's that.

El Muffin I'll get at u asap when I can since u already posted up

El Muffin
04-14-2018, 06:30 PM
Ok

Elemental P
04-14-2018, 06:31 PM
Good shit boy. Ain't battled in a hot minute I'll try throwing you some decent bars. Gluck joie

El Muffin
04-14-2018, 06:33 PM
Good shit boy. Ain't battled in a hot minute I'll try throwing you some decent bars. Gluck joie

You alright noone tripping on you

You new here . you'll come along in due time .

You don't have to give me/ us disclaimers

Elemental P
04-14-2018, 06:37 PM
You alright noone tripping on you

You new here . you'll come along in due time .

You don't have to give me/ us disclaimers

Good deal. #Respect. A least you ain't being a hoe about it like I seen so many other mofuckas on sites do.

El Muffin
04-14-2018, 06:43 PM
Good deal. #Respect. A least you ain't being a hoe about it like I seen so many other mofuckas on sites do.

Too old to not encourage the culture

Comes a point where you decide to not run off the new wave n attempt to let them cultivate their talent

Wasn't always like that .. Especially to the kids who come in here arrogant af and they are most obviously trash

Seen our fair share of them over the years for sure . real talk very few ppl just come outta nowhere n then make a name for themselves here

But it happens

sral
04-14-2018, 07:04 PM
Quix and / quick sand could have been something but you did nothing with it

The latter half of your verse was better from Q balling onwards

Kill Spree
04-14-2018, 07:06 PM
No one gives a fuck.

Gone!