West: 1. Schadenfreude vs 16. Gamble - SCHAD WINS

[Cred]

NBL SEASON 11 PLAYOFFS


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Schadenfreude @gamble

[Schadenfreude]

Dropping 16.

[Lyfzaa Gamble]

Im from the East lol

W.e check, gl il match

[Schadenfreude]

Winning’s never guaranteed when up against legends & vets
& he’s neither, know this a win w/ Gamble-in, I’m hedging the bets.
Howtf are u even here? Bribed Cred while we weren’t looking
oxymoron is calling yourself $ho Money, yet never had one booking.
Settle this like Men, ya’kno what time it is.. bitch do u box?
got no hands, so don’t wound ya’self up, you’ll get digital clocked.
And I hope ya have a church home, cuz the gun play’s next,
my Saturday Night Special’s gon’ lead to ya corpse in it’s sunday best.
Fuck around & euthanize this lil bitch, you’re basically a pet..
dog it’s certain shots you’re gonna take once ya make it to a Vet.
I’m bilingual, you’re bi-sexual, that’s 2 different life plans hoe
rifle down ya damn throat, have you talking w/ de que, no español.
I own my house, cars & more, while his life’s bad, it’s sad..
straight leap frog - homeless fag keeps jumping from pad to pad.
Must’ve been a neglected kid, tourney’s your whole life story,
the grown-ups wanna have fun.. so u’re getting dropped off early.

..BODY.

[Lyfzaa Gamble]

* * For voters, i purposely used half of his name with the pronunciation SHADE as opposed to SHOD because if u say half of it with an American accent adding the E it sounds like Shade. Heres proof

https://ibb.co/gPKgU7

Ok with that said........


Hes expected to set the tone based off what the card shows.
Yet you couldnt 'RAISE THE BAR' if you 'parented Shemus & Cesaro.'
Number 1 seed? Pfft 'watch me disrespect' till this cocky prick is dead..
U cld say i'm 'Throwing SCHADE'... yeah when i 'pick his frail ass up' and 'Drop him on his Head.'
Hell fire and Brimstone, watch him burn in the flames.
If i was 'those cats from RB I' would 'Hit u till u run Home'.... N chalk it up to a real 'Personal Gain'.
He's the type to talk shit on the net, then in person try calling a truce.
Probably 'Soldier Sole' just cause u couldn't Stand or 'Walk in a real Warrior's Boots.'
Get put down with a tight verse, when he'd probably bite first.
But when i 'Sunshades' attempt? he couldn't 'use those to block my shine'...this is 'Light Work.'
Fuck that new 'Dwayne Johnson flick', got No Time to See.
Closest youd see to 'him on a RAM PAIGE' is 'watching Her Sex Tape from Behind a Screen.'
Soon as i start swinging this battle axe? Itll show this faggots whack.
And soon as this blast his ass..Chances are Slim Shady 1' to get a dub in the 'Aftermath.'
'U getting fucked', just for being a 'Virginia gonna see defeat sir.'
This'll be another upset to go down in History when u see '16 over 1'..... Im like the 'UMBC Retrievers.'

Eaaaasy.

[Barcotic]

Winning’s never guaranteed when up against legends & vets
& he’s neither, know this a win w/ Gamble-in, I’m hedging the bets.
nah, weird concept & underwhelming execution
Howtf are u even here? Bribed Cred while we weren’t looking
oxymoron is calling yourself $ho Money, yet never had one booking.
better, i like it. solid np
Settle this like Men, ya’kno what time it is.. bitch do u box?
got no hands, so don’t wound ya’self up, you’ll get digital clocked.
ehh, gd try creatively but the get digital clocked bit is beyond corny
And I hope ya have a church home, cuz the gun play’s next,
my Saturday Night Special’s gon’ lead to ya corpse in it’s sunday best.
dece
Fuck around & euthanize this lil bitch, you’re basically a pet..
dog it’s certain shots you’re gonna take once ya make it to a Vet.
no matter how many ways u flip dog, shots & vet together u cant make a fresh bar. needed something else to get a pass. gd wording tho
I’m bilingual, you’re bi-sexual, that’s 2 different life plans hoe
rifle down ya damn throat, have you talking w/ de que, no español.
hah, nice
I own my house, cars & more, while his life’s bad, it’s sad..
straight leap frog - homeless fag keeps jumping from pad to pad.
good
Must’ve been a neglected kid, tourney’s your whole life story,
the grown-ups wanna have fun.. so u’re getting dropped off early.
hit, but just

3 gd punches
2 jabs
3 misses

vs

Hes expected to set the tone based off what the card shows.
Yet you couldnt 'RAISE THE BAR' if you 'parented Shemus & Cesaro.'
i actually get the reference but it doesnt make sense even if it wasnt mad corny. they arent brothers, theyre tag team partners lol
Number 1 seed? Pfft 'watch me disrespect' till this cocky prick is dead..
U cld say i'm 'Throwing SCHADE'... yeah when i 'pick his frail ass up' and 'Drop him on his Head.'
its pronounced shod, like rod, not shade. a little research culdve prevented this. plus throwing shade is played by guys who made the same mistake before u
Hell fire and Brimstone, watch him burn in the flames.
If i was 'those cats from RB I' would 'Hit u till u run Home'.... N chalk it up to a real 'Personal Gain'.
dude this had so much potential, unfortunately its another miss. i love the rbi bit but the rest fell flat. rbi & a different tie in altogether culda been fire
He's the type to talk shit on the net, then in person try calling a truce.
Probably 'Soldier Sole' just cause u couldn't Stand or 'Walk in a real Warrior's Boots.'
soldier wp is mad dated. u made it dated n corny
Get put down with a tight verse, when he'd probably bite first.
But when i 'Sunshades' attempt? he couldn't 'use those to block my shine'...this is 'Light Work.'
again, its not shade
Fuck that new 'Dwayne Johnson flick', got No Time to See.
Closest youd see to 'him on a RAM PAIGE' is 'watching Her Sex Tape from Behind a Screen.'
reach, weak concept. i did a rampages wp better
Soon as i start swinging this battle axe? Itll show this faggots whack.
And soon as this blast his ass..Chances are Slim Shady 1' to get a dub in the 'Aftermath.'
hell no even if the pronunciation was different
'U getting fucked', just for being a 'Virginia gonna see defeat sir.'
This'll be another upset to go down in History when u see '16 over 1'..... Im like the 'UMBC Retrievers.'
nah, filler closer

0 gd punches
0 jabs
8 misses

no hate
i definitely expect a retaliation vote, but im just being real & unlike half the fgts here, that wont change
v/shad

[El Muffin]

Winning’s never guaranteed when up against legends & vets
& he’s neither, know this a win w/ Gamble-in, I’m hedging the bets.
(Mmm pretty simple but ok open)
Howtf are u even here? Bribed Cred while we weren’t looking
oxymoron is calling yourself $ho Money, yet never had one booking.
(Decent)
Settle this like Men, ya’kno what time it is.. bitch do u box?
got no hands, so don’t wound ya’self up, you’ll get digital clocked.
(Meh)
And I hope ya have a church home, cuz the gun play’s next,
my Saturday Night Special’s gon’ lead to ya corpse in it’s sunday best.
(Phewwwww I fk with this)
Fuck around & euthanize this lil bitch, you’re basically a pet..
dog it’s certain shots you’re gonna take once ya make it to a Vet.
(Old afffff but oddly enough its slick to me)
I’m bilingual, you’re bi-sexual, that’s 2 different life plans hoe
rifle down ya damn throat, have you talking w/ de que, no español.
(Nice)
I own my house, cars & more, while his life’s bad, it’s sad..
straight leap frog - homeless fag keeps jumping from pad to pad.
(Haha I like)
Must’ve been a neglected kid, tourney’s your whole life story,
the grown-ups wanna have fun.. so u’re getting dropped off early.
(Eh)


Hes expected to set the tone based off what the card shows.
Yet you couldnt 'RAISE THE BAR' if you 'parented Shemus & Cesaro.'
(I don't watch wrestling . only thing I recognize is sheamus)
Number 1 seed? Pfft 'watch me disrespect' till this cocky prick is dead..
U cld say i'm 'Throwing SCHADE'... yeah when i 'pick his frail ass up' and 'Drop him on his Head.'
(Noooooo pronouncing error /forces np)
Hell fire and Brimstone, watch him burn in the flames.
If i was 'those cats from RB I' would 'Hit u till u run Home'.... N chalk it up to a real 'Personal Gain'.
(Could of been good . not feeling tho)
He's the type to talk shit on the net, then in person try calling a truce.
Probably 'Soldier Sole' just cause u couldn't Stand or 'Walk in a real Warrior's Boots.'
(Ok . passable but wording towards the end was plodding )
Get put down with a tight verse, when he'd probably bite first.
But when i 'Sunshades' attempt? he couldn't 'use those to block my shine'...this is 'Light Work.'
(Shade. Is a no like said prior .. But the last tie on was loooooseee)
Fuck that new 'Dwayne Johnson flick', got No Time to See.
Closest youd see to 'him on a RAM PAIGE' is 'watching Her Sex Tape from Behind a Screen.'
(Not familiar Tbh)
Soon as i start swinging this battle axe? Itll show this faggots whack.
And soon as this blast his ass..Chances are Slim Shady 1' to get a dub in the 'Aftermath.'
(If the shade shit worked I'd like it but u oding on a np that at its inception doesn't work)
'U getting fucked', just for being a 'Virginia gonna see defeat sir.'
This'll be another upset to go down in History when u see '16 over 1'..... Im like the 'UMBC Retrievers.'
(Ehh ok I guess)


Yeah Schad got it

Gamble used shade lines too much n the np is really off

V/schad

[Blue Bayou]

Winning’s never guaranteed when up against legends & vets
& he’s neither, know this a win w/ Gamble-in, I’m hedging the bets.
solid np, like the wording here
Howtf are u even here? Bribed Cred while we weren’t looking
oxymoron is calling yourself $ho Money, yet never had one booking.
lol.. good np jab
Settle this like Men, ya’kno what time it is.. bitch do u box?
got no hands, so don’t wound ya’self up, you’ll get digital clocked.
like the creative flip here, it just so light as an attack line imo
And I hope ya have a church home, cuz the gun play’s next,
my Saturday Night Special’s gon’ lead to ya corpse in it’s sunday best.
nice, cool concept
Fuck around & euthanize this lil bitch, you’re basically a pet..
dog it’s certain shots you’re gonna take once ya make it to a Vet.
very played with no real flip
I’m bilingual, you’re bi-sexual, that’s 2 different life plans hoe
rifle down ya damn throat, have you talking w/ de que, no español.
lol, good love the concept.. im tiring of the attack lines tho
I own my house, cars & more, while his life’s bad, it’s sad..
straight leap frog - homeless fag keeps jumping from pad to pad.
nice frog/pad flip here, enjoyed this.. great wording
Must’ve been a neglected kid, tourney’s your whole life story,
the grown-ups wanna have fun.. so u’re getting dropped off early.
solid swag closer

vs.

Hes expected to set the tone based off what the card shows.
Yet you couldnt 'RAISE THE BAR' if you 'parented Shemus & Cesaro.'
dece nameplay opener and concept
Number 1 seed? Pfft 'watch me disrespect' till this cocky prick is dead..
U cld say i'm 'Throwing SCHADE'... yeah when i 'pick his frail ass up' and 'Drop him on his Head.'
not enough of an enjoyable flip here
Hell fire and Brimstone, watch him burn in the flames.
If i was 'those cats from RB I' would 'Hit u till u run Home'.... N chalk it up to a real 'Personal Gain'.
lol cool concept here, wording could've been improved imo
He's the type to talk shit on the net, then in person try calling a truce.
Probably 'Soldier Sole' just cause u couldn't Stand or 'Walk in a real Warrior's Boots.'
did soldier sole back in the IHH days, flip was enjoyable enough but not very fresh wp
Get put down with a tight verse, when he'd probably bite first.
But when i 'Sunshades' attempt? he couldn't 'use those to block my shine'...this is 'Light Work.'
pretty dece np, the light-work tie in stretched this out too much tho imo wasn't needed
Fuck that new 'Dwayne Johnson flick', got No Time to See.
Closest youd see to 'him on a RAM PAIGE' is 'watching Her Sex Tape from Behind a Screen.'
cool, I haven't seen a paige/sex tape bar
Soon as i start swinging this battle axe? Itll show this faggots whack.
And soon as this blast his ass..Chances are Slim Shady 1' to get a dub in the 'Aftermath.'
seen
'U getting fucked', just for being a 'Virginia gonna see defeat sir.'
This'll be another upset to go down in History when u see '16 over 1'..... Im like the 'UMBC Retrievers.'
played idea but its relevant so its cool


Cool read... I don't really care personally if you use Shade lines based on how his names spelled its fine to me... I've got Scahde here tho based on the two bets bars of the battle and being more consistent throughout.. props to both

Vote - Schadenfreude

[Cred]

Schad: I liked sho money, vet line was a dope flip on an old concept, leap frog was cool, closer was cool.

Gamble: soldier soul could have been nasty dope concept, some other played concepts and jus some stuff that didn’t hit.

This one was a pretty easy decision here. Schad did enough to take the dub here. Cool showing from both.

Vote / Schadenfreude

[For Battling]

Winning’s never guaranteed when up against legends & vets
& he’s neither, know this a win w/ Gamble-in, I’m hedging the bets.
ok not bad
Howtf are u even here? Bribed Cred while we weren’t looking
oxymoron is calling yourself $ho Money, yet never had one booking.
i don’t get it
Settle this like Men, ya’kno what time it is.. bitch do u box?
got no hands, so don’t wound ya’self up, you’ll get digital clocked.
the more I think Bout it the more I like it. Cool
And I hope ya have a church home, cuz the gun play’s next,
my Saturday Night Special’s gon’ lead to ya corpse in it’s sunday best.
you can never just be simple can u? I don’t get this one[/b]
Fuck around & euthanize this lil bitch, you’re basically a pet..
dog it’s certain shots you’re gonna take once ya make it to a Vet.
nah
I’m bilingual, you’re bi-sexual, that’s 2 different life plans hoe
rifle down ya damn throat, have you talking w/ de que, no Español
i liked this lol
I own my house, cars & more, while his life’s bad, it’s sad..
straight leap frog - homeless fag keeps jumping from pad to pad.
cool
Must’ve been a neglected kid, tourney’s your whole life story,
the grown-ups wanna have fun.. so u’re getting dropped off early.
dcent at best



Vs



Hes expected to set the tone based off what the card shows.
Yet you couldnt 'RAISE THE BAR' if you 'parented Shemus & Cesaro.'
who? I didn’t like this
Number 1 seed? Pfft 'watch me disrespect' till this cocky prick is dead..
U cld say i'm 'Throwing SCHADE'... yeah when i 'pick his frail ass up' and 'Drop him on his Head.'
nahhhh
Hell fire and Brimstone, watch him burn in the flames.
If i was 'those cats from RB I' would 'Hit u till u run Home'.... N chalk it up to a real 'Personal Gain'.
decent I guess for what it’s worth
He's the type to talk shit on the net, then in person try calling a truce.
Probably 'Soldier Sole' just cause u couldn't Stand or 'Walk in a real Warrior's Boots.'
old wordplay man
Get put down with a tight verse, when he'd probably bite first.
But when i 'Sunshades' attempt? he couldn't 'use those to block my shine'...this is 'Light Work.'
ill give you this
Fuck that new 'Dwayne Johnson flick', got No Time to See.
Closest youd see to 'him on a RAM PAIGE' is 'watching Her Sex Tape from Behind a Screen.'
hows this dissing scad at all?
Soon as i start swinging this battle axe? Itll show this faggots whack.
And soon as this blast his ass..Chances are Slim Shady 1' to get a dub in the 'Aftermath.'
a lot going on here, too wordy
'U getting fucked', just for being a 'Virginia gonna see defeat sir.'
This'll be another upset to go down in History when u see '16 over 1'..... Im like the 'UMBC Retrievers.'
nah

Gamble needs to switch up his style frfr, he had no hitters and most his bars were very wordy with no sting in them. Focused too much on emphasizing the concepts rather than the punch itself. Scad came pretty good and gets a fairly easy W.

Vote Schadenfreude