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Cred
04-16-2018, 04:15 PM
NBL SEASON 11 PLAYOFFS


* Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory
* Swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ
* Verses due, THURSDAY APRIL 19th
* 12 Line MINIMUM FOR ALL PLAYOFF PARTICIPANTS (Max 20)

Infiltrate Barcotic

Saint
04-16-2018, 04:21 PM
12

Barcotic
04-18-2018, 07:34 AM
20 now since u said u was dropping on time n didnt
on all day, no excuses
gl

Barcotic
04-19-2018, 10:07 PM
I squatted 545 in my prime no wraps, cant now tho
Ur a liar
I had a real good powerlifting coach at one point. It was literally my best lift.
My deadlift i had trouble w alot tho
lmao. k did u have to? im basically baffled
cuh the only thing u been Lifting is ur disqualifications in battles
had ya L vs hush reversed. urself spitting nice is doubted
using a 'con template' for every verse w/o thinking twice about it
recycle, flip, recycle, reach... the style's fag-like & see-thru
u aint SQUAT but keep the front going and bags might believe u
if iont see barc/Al in rd 2, im prepared to take a lotta heat ..
Infallible matchup that cudnt possibly fail to make us fall asleep
beat u 4x but lost1 by a vote aka greasy calls. hell of a joke
Barcelona round here, while U tenda keep ye balls outta ur posts
even admitted u got got. i saved the pm.. yes its fkn cheap
im keeping Tabs, but that dont mean u Can recycle ery other wk
these is facts, believe me. this cheating cat's the eeeasiest
smbdy best make infirmaries gonna need one after reading this
feeling under the weather? yea cuz what sickens u is beef
so if the doc asks for a stool sample
.. take one from ur face after i hit u w/ my seat
dont dodge me yo. ima land more but u shud bring it, rookie
or optimus this battle cz u do transform into the biggest pussy
caught this fgt in the archives yall. he's farrr beyond a bitch
if he leaves here w/ the cheese, its cuz he havarti wants ta flip

yo cred can i have my $50 early?

Saint
04-20-2018, 02:43 PM
Had an animal last week, & dog u played it cool

We saw Bayou beast! guy unleashed hell. u aint sway it's truth
You could say Blue Buffalo cuz 'we didnt hear a Barc' while dog ate your food
I out muscle weak mf'kers, dude needs a quick fix to blow steam
Punches dont pack any PowerBar, strongest hits show ya deficient in protein
Ur bitch pulled me under & said 'lets b more than would-be lovers'
She'd spread for Mauradin I stole her heart after leavin the fuckin' pussy plundered
And your style = retarded wordplay. At the core it's worthless
Must be on a mission to butcher grammar w/the 'special forces' in ya verses
The whole squadd masked up, gat tucked, try to remedy solutions
After guns blow the smokestack body on top of body til ya scenes heavily polluted
Bars dead meat. yo i'ma f'kin bury this loser of a textcee
Nigga it's bad blood. & I'll be 'hidin the body for yearsss' under my crib like hep c
Silencer on the K, send shots til you echo the craziest shrill
U'll hear ch ch ch then ah ah ah. Gun sound Jason Voorhees before makin da kill
Ya HOF dont owe respect. Cro'd shark lines w/ no regrets
Barbital his good shit back then &&& now every drop we feelin those effects
Bitch, sway & sign out 24/7. meltdown everytime this geek'll get beat
U such a jerkoff 'round the clock' it'd make Amen discipline ya & leave for the week
Barc begged me asking if he can have all his Cronus accomps added to his Barcotic account

not sure if you guys wanna oblige?

Lol

Haven't champed shit since NC.1 & it made this nerd nervous
S'like Lars forego'd alll update patches how ur list nevr changes from the first version

Cred
04-21-2018, 10:40 AM
LETS GET SOME VOTES PEOPLE.

El Muffin
04-21-2018, 11:49 AM
l



Okay. Ill be the first . y'all shook. And for good reason ..

Lol but fr Niggas need to chill tf out

I'm going into this nervous first time reading both completely

mao. k did u have to? im basically baffled
cuh the only thing u been Lifting is ur disqualifications in battles
(Ha . good personal )
had ya L vs hush reversed. urself spitting nice is doubted
using a 'con template' for every verse w/o thinking twice about it
(Pretty cool . using s contemplate just reading that is odddd but the wp works and the tie in is slick so cool)
recycle, flip, recycle, reach... the style's fag-like & see-thru
u aint SQUAT but keep the front going and bags might believe u
(Seen a lot of squat lines /bags/lifting angles his one didn't stand out)
if iont see barc/Al in rd 2, im prepared to take a lotta heat
Infallible matchup that cudnt possibly fail to make us fall asleep
(That setup is why niggas don't want to vote xD but the wp.. Idk I'm sounding it out 10x inf al a bull .. Im saying it over n over n its not translating CLESRLY n that's the thing with wp I shouldn't be doing that.. Tie ins are there so maybe the phonetics get by next person)
beat u 4x but lost1 by a vote aka greasy calls. hell of a joke
Barcelona round here, while U tenda keep ye balls outta ur posts
(Ok but fuck this shit is not striking me as hot :ehh ok( )
even admitted u got got. i saved the pm.. yes its fkn cheap
im keeping Tabs, but that dont mean u Can recycle ery other wk
(Bang bang SIMPLE BUT SLICK I LIKE THIS)
these is facts, believe me. this cheating cat's the eeeasiest
smbdy best make infirmaries gonna need one after reading this
(Ugh :( )
feeling under the weather? yea cuz what sickens u is beef
so if the doc asks for a stool sample
.. take one from ur face after i hit u w/ my seat
(The whole idea of stool sample because u hit him with one is blah to me)
dont dodge me yo. ima land more but u shud bring it, rookie
or optimus this battle cz u do transform into the biggest pussy
(This one was followed clear this is the right way . like )
caught this fgt in the archives yall. he's farrr beyond a bitch
if he leaves here w/ the cheese, its cuz he havarti wants ta flip
( I love the tie in in the beginning . the wp just uhh this is eh ok)

4 quotes
4 misses
Second look 2 eh oks

Fuck . that was a struggle. Much anxiety I can't wait to see pplz take on some if those concepts and if they have same issues/difficulties I did. its all phonetics

Some if the wp was immediately processed n others I found myself sounding them out over n over to no avail

Biggest problem with wp rears its ugly head . hits based on individuals perception n I Fucking hate it coz I want to see why you used them. I know they can't be too bad



saw Bayou beast! guy unleashed hell. u aint sway it's truth
You could say Blue Buffalo cuz 'we didnt hear a Barc' while dog ate your food
( creative but the reference was weird lol like a dig good brand I'm adduminh? Eh)
I out muscle weak mf'kers, dude needs a quick fix to blow steam
Punches dont pack any PowerBar, strongest hits show ya deficient in protein
(Cool)
Ur bitch pulled me under & said 'lets b more than would-be lovers'
She'd spread for Mauradin I stole her heart after leavin the fuckin' pussy plundered
(Word play done right . ma rod in . tie ins there cool)
And your style = retarded wordplay. At the core it's worthless
Must be on a mission to butcher grammar w/the 'special forces' in ya verses
(Idk why but butcher messed up the transition to ur tie ins but this is ok)
The whole squadd masked up, gat tucked, try to remedy solutions
After guns blow the smokestack body on top of body til ya scenes heavily polluted
(Ok . the compounded way u did that was ok .. But not too impressive)
Bars dead meat. yo i'ma f'kin bury this loser of a textcee
Nigga it's bad blood. & I'll be 'hidin the body for yearsss' under my crib like hep c
(Eghhh )
Silencer on the K, send shots til you echo the craziest shrill
U'll hear ch ch ch then ah ah ah. Gun sound Jason Voorhees before makin da kill
(Eghhh kinda weird when u actually sounding it out . like the ch ch ch part is fine but ah ah ah .. Eghhh)
Ya HOF dont owe respect. Cro'd shark lines w/ no regrets
Barbital his good shit back then &&& now every drop we feelin those effects
(Niiiice )
Bitch, sway & sign out 24/7. meltdown everytime this geek'll get beat
U such a jerkoff 'round the clock' it'd make Amen discipline ya & leave for the week
(Cool close)

4 quotes
4 misses
Edit: second look :2 oks


Oh god

*sigh*

I HATE YIU NIGGSS

*scrolls up* tied on quotes n misses I have to see who had more ok lines n if they were better than their opponents

Oksyyyy and we have a winner by a cunt hair

I fw you both so I don't want to hear it . I really tried my best here

Due to infs 2 ok lines n bsrcs 2 ehh oks which to me? Aren't complete misses?

I got inf

Very close though


V/infiltrate

DynamiCz
04-21-2018, 06:13 PM
lmao. k did u have to? im basically baffled
cuh the only thing u been Lifting is ur disqualifications in battles

Nice Opener

had ya L vs hush reversed. urself spitting nice is doubted
using a 'con template' for every verse w/o thinking twice about it

Coo

recycle, flip, recycle, reach... the style's fag-like & see-thru
u aint SQUAT but keep the front going and bags might believe u

Lol Nice

if iont see barc/Al in rd 2, im prepared to take a lotta heat ..
Infallible matchup that cudnt possibly fail to make us fall asleep

This was ok

beat u 4x but lost1 by a vote aka greasy calls. hell of a joke
Barcelona round here, while U tenda keep ye balls outta ur posts

Dope

even admitted u got got. i saved the pm.. yes its fkn cheap
im keeping Tabs, but that dont mean u Can recycle ery other wk

Lol this shit personal huh?

these is facts, believe me. this cheating cat's the eeeasiest
smbdy best make infirmaries gonna need one after reading this

Aight

feeling under the weather? yea cuz what sickens u is beef
so if the doc asks for a stool sample
.. take one from ur face after i hit u w/ my seat

Coo

dont dodge me yo. ima land more but u shud bring it, rookie
or optimus this battle cz u do transform into the biggest pussy

Lol Nice

caught this fgt in the archives yall. he's farrr beyond a bitch
if he leaves here w/ the cheese, its cuz he havarti wants ta flip

Coo closer

--------


We saw Bayou beast! guy unleashed hell. u aint sway it's truth
You could say Blue Buffalo cuz 'we didnt hear a Barc' while dog ate your food

Ight Opener

I out muscle weak mf'kers, dude needs a quick fix to blow steam
Punches dont pack any PowerBar, strongest hits show ya deficient in protein

Lol Nice

Ur bitch pulled me under & said 'lets b more than would-be lovers'
She'd spread for Mauradin I stole her heart after leavin the fuckin' pussy plundered

Coo

And your style = retarded wordplay. At the core it's worthless
Must be on a mission to butcher grammar w/the 'special forces' in ya verses

Lol

The whole squadd masked up, gat tucked, try to remedy solutions
After guns blow the smokestack body on top of body til ya scenes heavily polluted

Light, but coo

Bars dead meat. yo i'ma f'kin bury this loser of a textcee
Nigga it's bad blood. & I'll be 'hidin the body for yearsss' under my crib like hep c

Dope here

Silencer on the K, send shots til you echo the craziest shrill
U'll hear ch ch ch then ah ah ah. Gun sound Jason Voorhees before makin da kill

I couldn't get with this

Ya HOF dont owe respect. Cro'd shark lines w/ no regrets
Barbital his good shit back then &&& now every drop we feelin those effects

Ok

Bitch, sway & sign out 24/7. meltdown everytime this geek'll get beat
U such a jerkoff 'round the clock' it'd make Amen discipline ya & leave for the week

Lmao

Hmmm, another good battle of the playoffs here. After reading BOTH verses twice Its honestly another debatable we have here. My opinion you going to have to go by misses when it come to this matchup and INF had that Jason vorhees line I wasn't to much feeling. Imma swing my vote to Barc on this one...

V-Barc

For Battling
04-21-2018, 08:54 PM
lmao. k did u have to? im basically baffled
cuh the only thing u been Lifting is ur disqualifications in battles
ok good personal here
had ya L vs hush reversed. urself spitting nice is doubted
using a 'con template' for every verse w/o thinking twice about it
first line reads weird, wp was ok but the punch itself I didn’t like. Decent at best
recycle, flip, recycle, reach... the style's fag-like & see-thru
u aint SQUAT but keep the front going and bags might believe u
ok
if iont see barc/Al in rd 2, im prepared to take a lotta heat ..
Infallible matchup that cudnt possibly fail to make us fall asleep
what?
beat u 4x but lost1 by a vote aka greasy calls. hell of a joke
Barcelona round here, while U tenda keep ye balls outta ur posts
lmao Christ Man ur wp kills me. This works tho so I’ll give it to you
even admitted u got got. i saved the pm.. yes its fkn cheap
im keeping Tabs, but that dont mean u Can recycle ery other wk
this is pretty cool
these is facts, believe me. this cheating cat's the eeeasiest
smbdy best make infirmaries gonna need one after reading this
nah this one was too forced to give credit to, unfortunately
feeling under the weather? yea cuz what sickens u is beef
so if the doc asks for a stool sample
.. take one from ur face after i hit u w/ my seat
playeddd
dont dodge me yo. ima land more but u shud bring it, rookie
or optimus this battle cz u do transform into the biggest pussy
alright
caught this fgt in the archives yall. he's farrr beyond a bitch
if he leaves here w/ the cheese, its cuz he havarti wants ta flip
wasnt feelin


Vs


We saw Bayou beast! guy unleashed hell. u aint sway it's truth
You could say Blue Buffalo cuz 'we didnt hear a Barc' while dog ate your food
too much going on here Man, wasn’t feelin
I out muscle weak mf'kers, dude needs a quick fix to blow steam
Punches dont pack any PowerBar, strongest hits show ya deficient in protein
alright
Ur bitch pulled me under & said 'lets b more than would-be lovers'
She'd spread for Mauradin I stole her heart after leavin the fuckin' pussy plundered
im not understanding the wordplay here guy
And your style = retarded wordplay. At the core it's worthless
Must be on a mission to butcher grammar w/the 'special forces' in ya verses
lol gone. All around nice line
The whole squadd masked up, gat tucked, try to remedy solutions
After guns blow the smokestack body on top of body til ya scenes heavily polluted
wasnt feelin
Bars dead meat. yo i'ma f'kin bury this loser of a textcee
Nigga it's bad blood. & I'll be 'hidin the body for yearsss' under my crib like hep c
mmm nah man I wanted to like this but couldn’t
Silencer on the K, send shots til you echo the craziest shrill
U'll hear ch ch ch then ah ah ah. Gun sound Jason Voorhees before makin da kill
lol cool I liked this
Ya HOF dont owe respect. Cro'd shark lines w/ no regrets
Barbital his good shit back then &&& now every drop we feelin those effects
alright
Bitch, sway & sign out 24/7. meltdown everytime this geek'll get beat
U such a jerkoff 'round the clock' it'd make Amen discipline ya & leave for the week
decent

Both had 4 misses each for me.
Bar 0 haymakers for me
Inf 1 haymaker & 1 almost

Going with Inf

Vote Infiltration

Destroyer
04-21-2018, 09:40 PM
lmao. k did u have to? im basically baffled
cuh the only thing u been Lifting is ur disqualifications in battles
Ok personal. Play on lifting is ehh
had ya L vs hush reversed. urself spitting nice is doubted
using a 'con template' for every verse w/o thinking twice about it
visually it works, but no one pronounces the “template part of contemplate the same way as template by itself, so to me it’s a reach. Plus the rhyme on the first part is way forced
recycle, flip, recycle, reach... the style's fag-like & see-thru
u aint SQUAT but keep the front going and bags might believe u
This was good
if iont see barc/Al in rd 2, im prepared to take a lotta heat ..
Infallible matchup that cudnt possibly fail to make us fall asleep
I hate this one way style of wordplay, but whatever. I see what you did here
beat u 4x but lost1 by a vote aka greasy calls. hell of a joke
Barcelona round here, while U tenda keep ye balls outta ur posts
what’s with the ye? This was ok
even admitted u got got. i saved the pm.. yes its fkn cheap
im keeping Tabs, but that dont mean u Can recycle ery other wk
tabs connection was decent but it just doesn’t make sense. Like keeping tabs would mean he’d have to watch out not freely recycle
these is facts, believe me. this cheating cat's the eeeasiest
smbdy best make infirmaries gonna need one after reading this
Is this ‘somebody best make inf firm?’ I don’t like it
feeling under the weather? yea cuz what sickens u is beef
so if the doc asks for a stool sample
.. take one from ur face after i hit u w/ my seat
no
dont dodge me yo. ima land more but u shud bring it, rookie
or optimus this battle cz u do transform into the biggest pussy
Decent
caught this fgt in the archives yall. he's farrr beyond a bitch
if he leaves here w/ the cheese, its cuz he havarti wants ta flip
‘have art he?’ Nah


Had an animal last week, & dog u played it cool

We saw Bayou beast! guy unleashed hell. u aint sway it's truth
You could say Blue Buffalo cuz 'we didnt hear a Barc' while dog ate your food
Not feeling
I out muscle weak mf'kers, dude needs a quick fix to blow steam
Punches dont pack any PowerBar, strongest hits show ya deficient in protein
This is good
Ur bitch pulled me under & said 'lets b more than would-be lovers'
She'd spread for Mauradin I stole her heart after leavin the fuckin' pussy plundered
not feeling
And your style = retarded wordplay. At the core it's worthless
Must be on a mission to butcher grammar w/the 'special forces' in ya verses
Lol I liked this
The whole squadd masked up, gat tucked, try to remedy solutions
After guns blow the smokestack body on top of body til ya scenes heavily polluted
This was ok. One way tho
Bars dead meat. yo i'ma f'kin bury this loser of a textcee
Nigga it's bad blood. & I'll be 'hidin the body for yearsss' under my crib like hep c
wording fucked this up, could have hit real hard
Silencer on the K, send shots til you echo the craziest shrill
U'll hear ch ch ch then ah ah ah. Gun sound Jason Voorhees before makin da kill
I like it
Ya HOF dont owe respect. Cro'd shark lines w/ no regrets
Barbital his good shit back then &&& now every drop we feelin those effects
Lotb
Bitch, sway & sign out 24/7. meltdown everytime this geek'll get beat
U such a jerkoff 'round the clock' it'd make Amen discipline ya & leave for the week
Nice current event punch
Haven't champed shit since NC.1 & it made this nerd nervous
S'like Lars forego'd alll update patches how ur list nevr changes from the first version
Decent jab


I think inf heated up later in his verse and was more personal and funnier
Barc, you had some far out connections that I wasn’t feeling esp with so much of the one way wordplay. This wasn’t a blowout but I think inf edges it.

V/inf

Schadenfreude
04-22-2018, 12:22 AM
lmao. k did u have to? im basically baffled
cuh the only thing u been Lifting is ur disqualifications in battles
Good opener
had ya L vs hush reversed. urself spitting nice is doubted
using a 'con template' for every verse w/o thinking twice about it
Decent
recycle, flip, recycle, reach... the style's fag-like & see-thru
u aint SQUAT but keep the front going and bags might believe u
Not feeling this
if iont see barc/Al in rd 2, im prepared to take a lotta heat ..
Infallible matchup that cudnt possibly fail to make us fall asleep
Forced
beat u 4x but lost1 by a vote aka greasy calls. hell of a joke
Barcelona round here, while U tenda keep ye balls outta ur posts
What does 'Bar's a loner' have to do w/ the rest of the punch?
even admitted u got got. i saved the pm.. yes its fkn cheap
im keeping Tabs, but that dont mean u Can recycle ery other wk
I like it
these is facts, believe me. this cheating cat's the eeeasiest
smbdy best make infirmaries gonna need one after reading this
You've been better off saying sum'n simple like 'put Inf ina infirmary'
feeling under the weather? yea cuz what sickens u is beef
so if the doc asks for a stool sample
.. take one from ur face after i hit u w/ my seat
Yet you say I'm corny lol. Still this is aight, I enjoy attack bars
dont dodge me yo. ima land more but u shud bring it, rookie
or optimus this battle cz u do transform into the biggest pussy
Even cornier
caught this fgt in the archives yall. he's farrr beyond a bitch
if he leaves here w/ the cheese, its cuz he havarti wants ta flip
Light closer, at least you're original




We saw Bayou beast! guy unleashed hell. u aint sway it's truth
You could say Blue Buffalo cuz 'we didnt hear a Barc' while dog ate your food
OK opener
I out muscle weak mf'kers, dude needs a quick fix to blow steam
Punches dont pack any PowerBar, strongest hits show ya deficient in protein
Dope
Ur bitch pulled me under & said 'lets b more than would-be lovers'
She'd spread for Mauradin I stole her heart after leavin the fuckin' pussy plundered
Light, neither of y'all use two-way wordplay
And your style = retarded wordplay. At the core it's worthless
Must be on a mission to butcher grammar w/the 'special forces' in ya verses
Now this is heavy
The whole squadd masked up, gat tucked, try to remedy solutions
After guns blow the smokestack body on top of body til ya scenes heavily polluted
Decent
Bars dead meat. yo i'ma f'kin bury this loser of a textcee
Nigga it's bad blood. & I'll be 'hidin the body for yearsss' under my crib like hep c
Nice
Silencer on the K, send shots til you echo the craziest shrill
U'll hear ch ch ch then ah ah ah. Gun sound Jason Voorhees before makin da kill
I like the imagery
Ya HOF dont owe respect. Cro'd shark lines w/ no regrets
Barbital his good shit back then &&& now every drop we feelin those effects
This is CRAZY
Bitch, sway & sign out 24/7. meltdown everytime this geek'll get beat
U such a jerkoff 'round the clock' it'd make Amen discipline ya & leave for the week
Ok current event
Haven't champed shit since NC.1 & it made this nerd nervous
S'like Lars forego'd alll update patches how ur list nevr changes from the first version
Good closer

Barc you get into a mindframe where you end up compounding your wordplay until the readers honor it, but that's not gonna happen..lol. Real talk I've always said I respect the creativity, but in all honesty, your wording & execution just comes across strange asf, some times. As for Inf I can tell you weren't all that inspired, but you had a couple heaters in 'barital' & 'special forces' & the majority of the rest were solid, so props. Overall I was hoping to see Barc later in the tourney, but I have to VOTE INFILTRATE.