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Cred
04-22-2018, 07:44 PM
NBL SEASON 11
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Infiltrate Jay Welsh

Saint
04-23-2018, 04:05 AM
Oh. Match.

Flow
04-23-2018, 06:17 PM
Id say no barc votes due to hate voting but not sure who would get it right now

Flow
04-26-2018, 05:28 PM
http://urbanprowlers.net/vb/showthread.php?t=37208
For those too lazy back in 2006 Inf aka Tragic an asian pussy with bipolar made a number of goodbye cruel world threads...

Asian slob, your weight lifting days are gone
Shiit.. neck n arms already have more folds than your paper swans
Your moodswings harder then you can throw hands son
An the only fatal Boxin you practised is putting a dead mum in one
Cus he shops on amazon to help when hes depressed
N buys razor blades with no reviews as they clearly work the best
Bipolar mess, fights depression with cuts he nuts
..must suck you can only listen to Pharrel Williams' Happy one day each month
N wordplays dead bruv, these days gun bars all the rage
So imma launch the Bucks til you loaded... cus you cant accept the Change
you jus a clone of cronus, honed his style while i dug yo past apart
Finding out your asian was LULZ cus course you bit something that Barks
N i see ur edits last minute tryna add a howler like a faggot coward
verse going through more chop and change than Henry The Eighths marriage counsellor
RN you in the NC archives lookin for ideas to reuse em again
so im exhuming the corpse of that exhuman just to do it to death
..Cus your not a tough guy, ur the bipolar lost his touch type
I had to bring up ur dead mum to remind you what a cold hard body looks like

Bodied 18 as agreed

Saint
04-27-2018, 01:28 PM
vs FLO REAL aka JAY WELSH

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=126577&highlight=Business+Insider

I'll win the 50$ & donate it, & it's funny

You're always last to be picked in battling events. should've fled dummy
If anyone says 'get wel on the card!' it's for signing 1 i'll send barc w/ creds money
Fly out my goons to maim the UK, we grip steel then aim it at prey
& Everyone Influenza cold killer w/ the hawks, ur whole team catch avian strains
Besides Brits ain't want u to rep since skills lack clear; u wack queer
Now u'll take revenge, but they knew u couldn't 'command a 'ship' w/ that shitty blackbeard
Plug up this dumbfuck in dirty dishwater. I'll drown up his face
Call me a Flo Stopper. cuz the Synchros up while I connected his mouth to the drain
It's best to keep a guard dog to alert cops when yo head gets beat
After i bash your Melancholy the rescue breed bringing help to the depressive scene
By heavens grace u'll rest in a better place cuz i shoot great
These bullets will travel Enya & 'only time will tell' if Real lives to see a new age
Lol @ yo catfished ex in hot or thot...c'mon nobody believin u smash
You thot 'hidin behind a fake picture made it safe' but nah ur just easier to crack
Worked your way to finals vs Muff but they're no lines anyone quoted
I won't short change the fact ur raise from low to midtier resembled Finnys promotion
This a kick in the rear, i'm the reason u champed when nick disappeared
How ironic I gave u the Rookie accomp & made you look like the biggest one here

Jabari Black
04-28-2018, 10:48 PM
Asian slob, your weight lifting days are gone
Shiit.. neck n arms already have more folds than your paper swans

Solid opener.

Your moodswings harder then you can throw hands son
An the only fatal Boxin you practised is putting a dead mum in one

My word lol. This was a good bar. The moodswings line was good. I always give props for good setups or punching in the set up. “Fatal boxing” wordplay in itself was just okay at best, but the angle is harsh af and it tied into the setup well.

Cus he shops on amazon to help when hes depressed
N buys razor blades with no reviews as they clearly work the best

Thought this was a miss. The angle is cool, the punch just wasn’t that good.

Bipolar mess, fights depression with cuts he nuts
..must suck you can only listen to Pharrel Williams' Happy one day each month

I didn’t like this bar but up to this point you’re doing a good job of attacking your opponent with the depression angle.

N wordplays dead bruv, these days gun bars all the rage
So imma launch the Bucks til you loaded... cus you cant accept the Change

Another well done personal. Punch landed. The buck/change wp has been done plenty, but the way you used it was fresh.

you jus a clone of cronus, honed his style while i dug yo past apart
Finding out your asian was LULZ cus course you bit something that Barks

This is dope and funny.

N i see ur edits last minute tryna add a howler like a faggot coward
verse going through more chop and change than Henry The Eighths marriage counsellor

Ehh. I get the bar but i don’t really care for it.

RN you in the NC archives lookin for ideas to reuse em again
so im exhuming the corpse of that exhuman just to do it to death

This was pretty slick. Nice personal. And I like how it ties into the next bar. Only critique is you wouldn’t call a dead person a exhuman right? Unless it’s a reference I didn’t catch.

..Cus your not a tough guy, ur the bipolar lost his touch type
I had to bring up ur dead mum to remind you what a cold hard body looks like

Lettuce pray. This is sick. You set this up nice af.



You're always last to be picked in battling events. should've fled dummy
If anyone says 'get wel on the card!' it's for signing 1 i'll send barc w/ creds money

I liked the name flip but I thought the punch was odd. Thought it would be a punch directed at putting Jay in the hospital. The wp pretty slick though.

Fly out my goons to maim the UK, we grip steel then aim it at prey
& Everyone Influenza cold killer w/ the hawks, ur whole team catch avian strains

This is slick af. The subtle tie ins that you add you your wordplay (prey/hawk/avian flu/cold/avian) is dope.

Besides Brits ain't want u to rep since skills lack clear; u wack queer
Now u'll take revenge, but they knew u couldn't 'command a 'ship' w/ that shitty blackbeard

This was just okay.

Plug up this dumbfuck in dirty dishwater. I'll drown up his face
Call me a Flo Stopper. cuz the Synchros up while I connected his mouth to the drain

This was just decent. Once again it’s like all of the phrases he uses have some sort of tie in which is dope. The problem is he synchros wp is obscure af. I had to google and kinda so quick research to find out what tf a synchros was and how it tied in to the bar. Also it’s nitpicky but saying the sink rose is kind of a stretch to describe the water rising.

It's best to keep a guard dog to alert cops when yo head gets beat
After i bash your Melancholy the rescue breed bringing help to the depressive scene

This was nice. Same thing - clean wp and tie ins all throughout the set up and punch. Wording slightly off but pretty dope bar.

By heavens grace u'll rest in a better place cuz i shoot great
These bullets will travel Enya & 'only time will tell' if Real lives to see a new age

I liked this. Simple and effective. All your wp coming off clean so far.

Lol @ yo catfished ex in hot or thot...c'mon nobody believin u smash
You thot 'hidin behind a fake picture made it safe' but nah ur just easier to crack

I might be missing one if the tie ins here but the think the crack/safe wp pretty basic. I like the angle but the punch wasn’t quite there.

Worked your way to finals vs Muff but they're no lines anyone quoted
I won't short change the fact ur raise from low to midtier resembled Finnys promotion

Pretty funny. I think the fact that someone else had a finny flip took away from this a bit. S/o to finny on the promotion though.

This a kick in the rear, i'm the reason u champed when nick disappeared
How ironic I gave u the Rookie accomp & made you look like the biggest one here

Pretty good closer. I liked the angle.


This battle was fire.

To me, inf has one of the sharpest pens I’ve seen in my short time on NC. The lyricism; the crisp, unforced wp; the complexity; plus the ability to punch was all on display here. Unfortunately, Jay Welsh just kinda left earth in this one.

Jay matched Inf’s lyricism to an extent and added complexity in that in a lot of his bars, he was building on the previous bar. But what stood apart was I feel Jay really broke down and attacked Inf with his verse.

I thought he executed personals as good as you can. He stayed on topic, he developed his angles well, and he was punching at the end of all his personals. Plus his material hit hard af. So even though inf was a bit more consistent, Jay had the more impactful lines. Inf prob coulda edged if coulda put together a few haymakers like he did the last week.

Mvgt Welsh

Salute to both you guys.

El Muffin
04-29-2018, 02:35 AM
sian slob, your weight lifting days are gone
Shiit.. neck n arms already have more folds than your paper swans
( ha cool)
Your moodswings harder then you can throw hands son
An the only fatal Boxin you practised is putting a dead mum in one
(Cutthroat but execution was pretty standard . the punch didn't transition well from the setup)
Cus he shops on amazon to help when hes depressed
N buys razor blades with no reviews as they clearly work the best
(Heh clever concept butttt not too effective its pretty cool tho)
Bipolar mess, fights depression with cuts he nuts
..must suck you can only listen to Pharrel Williams' Happy one day each month
(Meh)
N wordplays dead bruv, these days gun bars all the rage
So imma launch the Bucks til you loaded... cus you cant accept the Change
( bucks/change pretty done in )
you jus a clone of cronus, honed his style while i dug yo past apart
Finding out your asian was LULZ cus course you bit something that Barks
(Hmm clever I like this kinda)
N i see ur edits last minute tryna add a howler like a faggot coward
verse going through more chop and change than Henry The Eighths marriage counsellor
(Creative )
RN you in the NC archives lookin for ideas to reuse em again
so im exhuming the corpse of that exhuman just to do it to death
(Ok)
..Cus your not a tough guy, ur the bipolar lost his touch type
I had to bring up ur dead mum to remind you what a cold hard body looks like
(Eghhh should be much harder but it isn't imo)

You're always last to be picked in battling events. should've fled dummy
If anyone says 'get wel on the card!' it's for signing 1 i'll send barc w/ creds money
(Lmao . shots fired at barc too but this is funny )
Fly out my goons to maim the UK, we grip steel then aim it at prey
& Everyone Influenza cold killer w/ the hawks, ur whole team catch avian strains
(A little too much . I got it but it came off as choppy to me )
Besides Brits ain't want u to rep since skills lack clear; u wack queer
Now u'll take revenge, but they knew u couldn't 'command a 'ship' w/ that shitty blackbeard
(Ok)
Plug up this dumbfuck in dirty dishwater. I'll drown up his face
Call me a Flo Stopper. cuz the Synchros up while I connected his mouth to the drain
(Ok)
It's best to keep a guard dog to alert cops when yo head gets beat
After i bash your Melancholy the rescue breed bringing help to the depressive scene
(Dope like I hate it but I recognize this was cool )
By heavens grace u'll rest in a better place cuz i shoot great
These bullets will travel Enya & 'only time will tell' if Real lives to see a new age
(Reference lost on me )
Lol @ yo catfished ex in hot or thot...c'mon nobody believin u smash
You thot 'hidin behind a fake picture made it safe' but nah ur just easier to crack
(Ohohooooooo this was the most creative bar in the battle easily )
Worked your way to finals vs Muff but they're no lines anyone quoted
I won't short change the fact ur raise from low to midtier resembled Finnys promotion
(Nice)
This a kick in the rear, i'm the reason u champed when nick disappeared
How ironic I gave u the Rookie accomp & made you look like the biggest one here
(Ok)

Tied in quotes

Inf had lotb with the safe thing

But even then inf had less misses .. Bunch if oks..

I got inf here

Goid shit fellas


V/inf

Blue Bayou
04-29-2018, 08:50 AM
Asian slob, your weight lifting days are gone
Shiit.. neck n arms already have more folds than your paper swans
^lol, funny opener
Your moodswings harder then you can throw hands son
An the only fatal Boxin you practised is putting a dead mum in one
the boxin/boxing play is done to death but the personal helps, cold
Cus he shops on amazon to help when hes depressed
N buys razor blades with no reviews as they clearly work the best
lmao, like this angle
Bipolar mess, fights depression with cuts he nuts
..must suck you can only listen to Pharrel Williams' Happy one day each month
not feeling
N wordplays dead bruv, these days gun bars all the rage
So imma launch the Bucks til you loaded... cus you cant accept the Change
ehh I get the relevance but this is still played
you jus a clone of cronus, honed his style while i dug yo past apart
Finding out your asian was LULZ cus course you bit something that Barks
lol, nice
N i see ur edits last minute tryna add a howler like a faggot coward
verse going through more chop and change than Henry The Eighths marriage counselor
damn, pretty cool
RN you in the NC archives lookin for ideas to reuse em again
so im exhuming the corpse of that exhuman just to do it to death
nah
..Cus your not a tough guy, ur the bipolar lost his touch type
I had to bring up ur dead mum to remind you what a cold hard body looks like
shit, this hits imo, set-up well also

vs.

You're always last to be picked in battling events. should've fled dummy
If anyone says 'get wel on the card!' it's for signing 1 i'll send barc w/ creds money
lol, dope nameplay opener
Fly out my goons to maim the UK, we grip steel then aim it at prey
& Everyone Influenza cold killer w/ the hawks, ur whole team catch avian strains
I want to love this cuz I really like the concept but it's jut not working for me / it's too big a struggle... in-flu-when-za is really the only way I say it, inf-flew-ins-a nah but the creative attempt is cool
Besides Brits ain't want u to rep since skills lack clear; u wack queer
Now u'll take revenge, but they knew u couldn't 'command a 'ship' w/ that shitty blackbeard
lol, dece
Plug up this dumbfuck in dirty dishwater. I'll drown up his face
Call me a Flo Stopper. cuz the Synchros up while I connected his mouth to the drain
dope, this works and is a cool attack line
It's best to keep a guard dog to alert cops when yo head gets beat
After i bash your Melancholy the rescue breed bringing help to the depressive scene
it took me a re-read or 2 which I didn't love.. but ya this is dope & fresh
By heavens grace u'll rest in a better place cuz i shoot great
These bullets will travel Enya & 'only time will tell' if Real lives to see a new age
don't love this one... I did an N-ya nameplay wordplay a while back parallel to this so its not as effective
Lol @ yo catfished ex in hot or thot...c'mon nobody believin u smash
You thot 'hidin behind a fake picture made it safe' but nah ur just easier to crack
woahh, fire
Worked your way to finals vs Muff but they're no lines anyone quoted
I won't short change the fact ur raise from low to midtier resembled Finnys promotion
lol dece, the short change part in the punch helped this.. cool site punch
This a kick in the rear, i'm the reason u champed when nick disappeared
How ironic I gave u the Rookie accomp & made you look like the biggest one here
okay personal close


Damn great read here... JW you came pretty hard and consistent here respect... but so did Inf & tbh his highs were just too good so he pulled this out.. only a couple misses imo and some very fresh wordplay , prob the best safe concept ive ever seen.

Good battle dudes... both were consistent with hits but Inf got this based on the better standouts of the two

Vote - Infiltrate

Schadenfreude
04-29-2018, 11:56 AM
Asian slob, your weight lifting days are gone
Shiit.. neck n arms already have more folds than your paper swans
Bipolar mess, fights depression with cuts he nuts
..must suck you can only listen to Pharrel Williams' Happy one day each month
you jus a clone of cronus, honed his style while i dug yo past apart
Finding out your asian was LULZ cus course you bit something that Barks
N i see ur edits last minute tryna add a howler like a faggot coward
verse going through more chop and change than Henry The Eighths marriage counsellor
..Cus your not a tough guy, ur the bipolar lost his touch type
I had to bring up ur dead mum to remind you what a cold hard body looks like


versus



You're always last to be picked in battling events. should've fled dummy
If anyone says 'get wel on the card!' it's for signing 1 i'll send barc w/ creds money
Besides Brits ain't want u to rep since skills lack clear; u wack queer
Now u'll take revenge, but they knew u couldn't 'command a 'ship' w/ that shitty blackbeard
Plug up this dumbfuck in dirty dishwater. I'll drown up his face
Call me a Flo Stopper. cuz the Synchros up while I connected his mouth to the drain
It's best to keep a guard dog to alert cops when yo head gets beat
After i bash your Melancholy the rescue breed bringing help to the depressive scene
Lol @ yo catfished ex in hot or thot...c'mon nobody believin u smash
You thot 'hidin behind a fake picture made it safe' but nah ur just easier to crack
Worked your way to finals vs Muff but they're no lines anyone quoted
I won't short change the fact ur raise from low to midtier resembled Finnys promotion
This a kick in the rear, i'm the reason u champed when nick disappeared
How ironic I gave u the Rookie accomp & made you look like the biggest one here

Whoa another great battle this round, the Welshman went off, even had Me thinking Inf had an uphill battle, until this mfer showed up & displayed the different between their pens. Welsh approached his attacks from great angles & worded his stuff well, but he used a couple of concepts that were too familiar. Inf was as creative & original as he ALWAYS has been, so VOTE INFILTRATE.

Cred
04-29-2018, 12:24 PM
Asian slob, your weight lifting days are gone
Shiit.. neck n arms already have more folds than your paper swans
you jus a clone of cronus, honed his style while i dug yo past apart
Finding out your asian was LULZ cus course you bit something that Barks
Cus your not a tough guy, ur the bipolar lost his touch type
I had to bring up ur dead mum to remind you what a cold hard body looks

vs

By heavens grace u'll rest in a better place cuz i shoot great
These bullets will travel Enya & 'only time will tell' if Real lives to see a new age
Lol @ yo catfished ex in hot or thot...c'mon nobody believin u smash
You thot 'hidin behind a fake picture made it safe' but nah ur just easier to crack
Worked your way to finals vs Muff but they're no lines anyone quoted
I won't short change the fact ur raise from low to midtier resembled Finnys promotion
This a kick in the rear, i'm the reason u champed when nick disappeared
How ironic I gave u the Rookie accomp & made you look like the biggest one here


This was good read here from both, not there best work imo but worth the read. That opener from jay welsh was fire,Infs finny promo line was nice and the enya joint was pretty clever too. Close battle but I got inf wit the slight edge

Vote / Infiltrate