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Cred
05-01-2018, 08:33 AM
NBL SEASON 11
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Infiltrate Schadenfreude

Schadenfreude
05-01-2018, 04:04 PM
Dropping 16.

Saint
05-01-2018, 04:07 PM
Alright my dude

Schadenfreude
05-03-2018, 05:53 PM
Extendo.

Schadenfreude
05-05-2018, 12:12 AM
No friends in competition, LOOK..

My ninja the way you’re constantly overlooked son, so bogus
s’why I call you my ninja - even when you kill someone it goes unnoticed.
Huge twin 4-5ths..blowing like chronic when I’m fanning clips,
the 1st could miss, still catch second hand smoke from the cann abyss.
Nerd playing hero, really think you can take this beating kid?
cuz when I BlankMan, you’re getting socked all across the face like he did.
Emotional ‘never was’ whose never been told he was great..
Inf late, allowed to it balloon.. my pen bouta make it explode in his face.
Helped you write stronger punches, yet ya just keep missing,
gave ya lines like the telephone game, but you repeated Chinese Whispers.
Ppl swear we got a similar style, Ion’t see whatever they mean
they think ‘birds of a feather’, more like you’ve been under my wing.
DQ’d for reusing old bars thinking ya dead plays would work,
been recycling that old trash as if yo dumb ass was gon’ save the Earth.
0-Never, asians good at math, so lose how u're expected to do
little chink bitch, when Barc said Soo Woo, I thought it was directed at you.

..BODY.

Saint
05-05-2018, 12:32 AM
Muff vs Aero was jokes

But ur girl stole the spotlight, she gave me the word

said my dick was absurd, couldn't fit more than the tip due to girth
tried alll different angles w/ the head til her lip got a sore, that's Muff pic & his verse
my investments reap huge profits, ur broke & fat at obscene rates
ur Yearly Quarter Gains resulted from lots'a vending machine snacks in-between breaks
been a fan of mine for yrs. lie in here & i'll draw that iron near
the tech's Jim West, i'll shoot u to blow off some steampunk....g'head try'ta grind my gears
& freuds rhyming aint clever, go hard cuz if u think lighter is better?
it'll open ya world if I bucket & put a german on ice like the ad heineken kegger
in the mag said you, me, or cred could champ? that shit's a bit odd
^ it's a leap of logic to include urself. i'ma catch ya at a bad time when u slipshod
bet ur that perv uncle preying on fam, f'kin creep lures 'em home
making those spicy films that 'Star Anise' && i ain't talking exotic cooking shows
best prayy while the piece stretch u out like yoga class, & flow wit it
before the shot? sun salutation. after the shot? downward dog, now ya soul lifted
I actually respect Amen, he's a Man in everything he does. I know & see too many mfers who just won't stand tall on what they say.
fuck that G pop up bite claim! lol i knew this broad needed rescuing
cuz the REAL gender reveal.. is telling us how much of a MAN Amen is in everything

Flow
05-05-2018, 11:27 AM
No friends in competition, LOOK..

My ninja the way you’re constantly overlooked son, so bogus
s’why I call you my ninja - even when you kill someone it goes unnoticed.
wording was meh, concept was ok but was never going to be a fire bar imo
Huge twin 4-5ths..blowing like chronic when I’m fanning clips,
the 1st could miss, still catch second hand smoke from the cann abyss.
this ok unless im missing something, did inf once go by abyss? If so shits dope but if its just to help get the cannabis play in its good but solid at best
Nerd playing hero, really think you can take this beating kid?
cuz when I BlankMan, you’re getting socked all across the face like he did.
fresh but bit light l
Emotional ‘never was’ whose never been told he was great..
Inf late, allowed to it balloon.. my pen bouta make it explode in his face.
i liked this, self hype done well
Helped you write stronger punches, yet ya just keep missing,
gave ya lines like the telephone game, but you repeated Chinese Whispers.
meh
Ppl swear we got a similar style, Ion’t see whatever they mean
they think ‘birds of a feather’, more like you’ve been under my wing.
solid
DQ’d for reusing old bars thinking ya dead plays would work,
been recycling that old trash as if yo dumb ass was gon’ save the Earth.
solid
0-Never, asians good at math, so lose how u're expected to do
little chink bitch, when Barc said Soo Woo, I thought it was directed at you.
lmao fire this was good

..BODY.

Hmmm, started slow for me, only 2 real misses, 2 light jabs 3 solids an a fire bar. Not a bad showing but feel a tad rewording on the 2 misses could of made all the difference.





Muff vs Aero was jokes

But ur girl stole the spotlight, she gave me the word

said my dick was absurd, couldn't fit more than the tip due to girth
tried alll different angles w/ the head til her lip got a sore, that's Muff pic & his verse
haha clever
my investments reap huge profits, ur broke & fat at obscene rates
ur Yearly Quarter Gains resulted from lots'a vending machine snacks in-between breaks
this is good, i feel like it should be played but i cant say i have seen it before
been a fan of mine for yrs. lie in here & i'll draw that iron near
the tech's Jim West, i'll shoot u to blow off some steampunk....g'head try'ta grind my gears
ok
& freuds rhyming aint clever, go hard cuz if u think lighter is better?
it'll open ya world if I bucket & put a german on ice like the ad heineken kegger
not seen the ad but i get it obvs. But nah meh wasnt a fan tbh, dunno maybe it was jusy a bit predictable or stretvhed out i dunno
in the mag said you, me, or cred could champ? that shit's a bit odd
^ it's a leap of logic to include urself. i'ma catch ya at a bad time when u slipshod
light nameplay at best for me
bet ur that perv uncle preying on fam, f'kin creep lures 'em home
making those spicy films that 'Star Anise' && i ain't talking exotic cooking shows
liked the concept, hated the wording
best prayy while the piece stretch u out like yoga class, & flow wit it
before the shot? sun salutation. after the shot? downward dog, now ya soul lifted
lotb this is dope as fuck

fuck that G pop up bite claim! lol i knew this broad needed rescuing
cuz the REAL gender reveal.. is telling us how much of a MAN Amen is in everything
Light to ok

Good battle 2 misses from both for me, wording in both of those occasions but mostly with fresh ideas, schad has the better closer inf the better opener. Schads solids were a bit better for me then infs however inf had two fire bars to schads one. Both had a pretty light jab or two an all. All in all imma edge this to inf because he had lotb for me shit was sick imo.

Good battle both
Vote INF

Amen
05-05-2018, 02:01 PM
No friends in competition, LOOK..

My ninja the way you’re constantly overlooked son, so bogus
s’why I call you my ninja - even when you kill someone it goes unnoticed.
Ok. Not heavy but ok.
Huge twin 4-5ths..blowing like chronic when I’m fanning clips,
the 1st could miss, still catch second hand smoke from the cann abyss.
Um, don't know how to feel about this one.
Nerd playing hero, really think you can take this beating kid?
cuz when I BlankMan, you’re getting socked all across the face like he did.
Lol, the 1st black super hero - fuck black panther - he's pussy lol.
Emotional ‘never was’ whose never been told he was great..
Inf late, allowed to it balloon.. my pen bouta make it explode in his face.
Light.
Helped you write stronger punches, yet ya just keep missing,
gave ya lines like the telephone game, but you repeated Chinese Whispers.
Fuck w/ this one.
Ppl swear we got a similar style, Ion’t see whatever they mean
they think ‘birds of a feather’, more like you’ve been under my wing.
Fuck w/ this one as well.
DQ’d for reusing old bars thinking ya dead plays would work,
been recycling that old trash as if yo dumb ass was gon’ save the Earth.
Nah.
0-Never, asians good at math, so lose how u're expected to do
little chink bitch, when Barc said Soo Woo, I thought it was directed at you.
Lmfao - is he asian? Tough, if so...

...BODY
I really hate when you do this, lol...

Muff vs Aero was jokes

But ur girl stole the spotlight, she gave me the word
You on Aero dick heavy, right now. His gimmick - not yours.

said my dick was absurd, couldn't fit more than the tip due to girth
tried alll different angles w/ the head til her lip got a sore, that's Muff pic & his verse
Cool concept - execution was wack to me.
my investments reap huge profits, ur broke & fat at obscene rates
ur Yearly Quarter Gains resulted from lots'a vending machine snacks in-between breaks
This was ok, lol.
been a fan of mine for yrs. lie in here & i'll draw that iron near
the tech's Jim West, i'll shoot u to blow off some steampunk....g'head try'ta grind my gears
Nah... This fell flat for me... Concept was good, tho but your execution fell off.
& freuds rhyming aint clever, go hard cuz if u think lighter is better?
it'll open ya world if I bucket & put a german on ice like the ad heineken kegger
Heineken is Holland lager tho... Am I missing something? Googled this shit just in case and was pissed I even googled when I normally DO NOT google...
in the mag said you, me, or cred could champ? that shit's a bit odd
^ it's a leap of logic to include urself. i'ma catch ya at a bad time when u slipshod
This was ok.
bet ur that perv uncle preying on fam, f'kin creep lures 'em home
making those spicy films that 'Star Anise' && i ain't talking exotic cooking shows
Nah.
best prayy while the piece stretch u out like yoga class, & flow wit it
before the shot? sun salutation. after the shot? downward dog, now ya soul lifted
Wordy but light.

fuck that G pop up bite claim! lol i knew this broad needed rescuing
cuz the REAL gender reveal.. is telling us how much of a MAN Amen is in everything
This was dumb corny. Don't even think the quote was needed.

Pretty close, IMO. I think both had the same amount of misses vs landed punches. However effectiveness makes all the difference which is where I felt SHAD may have edged this one. I just think his cleaner wording/delivery on his concepts helped him out. Inf's structure is weird to me. I think he gets caught up on his own concepts sometimes by over wording or complex'n them. Nothing was really overly complex in this verse but there were a few bars that had some wording issues or where he struggled to execute his concept. He had some dope ideas, he just did not deliver them properly for an example the Muff bump concept. That was dope and even set up well but edns it with that's a Muff pic battle verse or w/e - Like wtf? Mannnnnn, and that closer was cringe, bro. Not even worth the attempt AND ESPECIALLY at the angle you tried to deliver it... Bad.

v/SHAD - with the edge.

El Muffin
05-05-2018, 10:52 PM
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anyways

I lost it


I had inf by a hair

tied at 3 quotes

n tied misses

w/ infs oks slightly outweighing shads

I give inf the nod by a hair

v/inf

Barcotic
05-06-2018, 12:17 AM
My ninja the way you’re constantly overlooked son, so bogus
s’why I call you my ninja - even when you kill someone it goes unnoticed.
this hit but barely
Huge twin 4-5ths..blowing like chronic when I’m fanning clips,
the 1st could miss, still catch second hand smoke from the cann abyss.
something I'd drop, culda ben executed better but i do like this
Nerd playing hero, really think you can take this beating kid?
cuz when I BlankMan, you’re getting socked all across the face like he did.
nah, weak concept
Emotional ‘never was’ whose never been told he was great..
Inf late, allowed to it balloon.. my pen bouta make it explode in his face.
i think u meant allowed it to balloon.. this was ok
Helped you write stronger punches, yet ya just keep missing,
gave ya lines like the telephone game, but you repeated Chinese Whispers.
nah, this is corndog
Ppl swear we got a similar style, Ion’t see whatever they mean
they think ‘birds of a feather’, more like you’ve been under my wing.
played concept
DQ’d for reusing old bars thinking ya dead plays would work,
been recycling that old trash as if yo dumb ass was gon’ save the Earth.
same as last bar
0-Never, asians good at math, so lose how u're expected to do
little chink bitch, when Barc said Soo Woo, I thought it was directed at you.
miss

1 gd punch
2 jabs
5 misses
vs

said my dick was absurd, couldn't fit more than the tip due to girth
tried alll different angles w/ the head til her lip got a sore, that's Muff pic & his verse
nahh, tried too hard here
my investments reap huge profits, ur broke & fat at obscene rates
ur Yearly Quarter Gains resulted from lots'a vending machine snacks in-between breaks
lol better
been a fan of mine for yrs. lie in here & i'll draw that iron near
the tech's Jim West, i'll shoot u to blow off some steampunk....g'head try'ta grind my gears
execution was off & the wp itself is played
& freuds rhyming aint clever, go hard cuz if u think lighter is better?
it'll open ya world if I bucket & put a german on ice like the ad heineken kegger
played bucket wp thrown into another awkwardly worded idea
in the mag said you, me, or cred could champ? that shit's a bit odd
^ it's a leap of logic to include urself. i'ma catch ya at a bad time when u slipshod
dope
bet ur that perv uncle preying on fam, f'kin creep lures 'em home
making those spicy films that 'Star Anise' && i ain't talking exotic cooking shows
had to read twice, this was ok
best prayy while the piece stretch u out like yoga class, & flow wit it
before the shot? sun salutation. after the shot? downward dog, now ya soul lifted
didnt like, wordy af too
fuck that G pop up bite claim! lol i knew this broad needed rescuing
cuz the REAL gender reveal.. is telling us how much of a MAN Amen is in everything
miss

2 gd punches
1 jab
5 misses
another disappointing match but not AS disappointing
culd go either way, im giving the nod based off standout bar pref. to the guy who's in MY rightful spot
v/inf

i hope the finals are better than the semis & yall were just saving the gems

Jabari Black
05-06-2018, 04:59 PM
Schade

My ninja the way you’re constantly overlooked son, so bogus
s’why I call you my ninja - even when you kill someone it goes unnoticed.

Decent

Huge twin 4-5ths..blowing like chronic when I’m fanning clips,
the 1st could miss, still catch second hand smoke from the cann abyss.

Pretty cool. If you’re going to use a concept that’s been done before it has to be a fresh twist on it and this felt fresh. Only problem with this bar is “abyss” has no tie in unless I’m missing a reference.

Nerd playing hero, really think you can take this beating kid?
cuz when I BlankMan, you’re getting socked all across the face like he did.

I’m feeling the Blank man reference but the actual bar was kinda light.

Emotional ‘never was’ whose never been told he was great..
Inf late, allowed to it balloon.. my pen bouta make it explode in his face.

Idea was good but the execution was off.

Helped you write stronger punches, yet ya just keep missing,
gave ya lines like the telephone game, but you repeated Chinese Whispers.

Pretty good

Ppl swear we got a similar style, Ion’t see whatever they mean
they think ‘birds of a feather’, more like you’ve been under my wing.

This was pretty basic but I thought the punch landed. I like the angle too.

DQ’d for reusing old bars thinking ya dead plays would work,
been recycling that old trash as if yo dumb ass was gon’ save the Earth.

This wasnt bad. Someone had a inf recycle flip that was better a few weeks ago so I think it kinda took away from this.

0-Never, asians good at math, so lose how u're expected to do
little chink bitch, when Barc said Soo Woo, I thought it was directed at you.

Lol this is funny. I mess with the closer.


Inf

said my dick was absurd, couldn't fit more than the tip due to girth
tried alll different angles w/ the head til her lip got a sore, that's Muff pic & his verse

Decent.

my investments reap huge profits, ur broke & fat at obscene rates
ur Yearly Quarter Gains resulted from lots'a vending machine snacks in-between breaks

I liked this.

been a fan of mine for yrs. lie in here & i'll draw that iron near
the tech's Jim West, i'll shoot u to blow off some steampunk....g'head try'ta grind my gears

I don’t get this. I googled that Jim West is Weird Al but that’s all I got.

& freuds rhyming aint clever, go hard cuz if u think lighter is better?
it'll open ya world if I bucket & put a german on ice like the ad heineken kegger

This was decent. Good idea. Execution was off. Bucket/buck it is simple.

in the mag said you, me, or cred could champ? that shit's a bit odd
^ it's a leap of logic to include urself. i'ma catch ya at a bad time when u slipshod

This was okay. It was kinda simple though.

bet ur that perv uncle preying on fam, f'kin creep lures 'em home
making those spicy films that 'Star Anise' && i ain't talking exotic cooking shows

I didn’t care for this.

best prayy while the piece stretch u out like yoga class, & flow wit it
before the shot? sun salutation. after the shot? downward dog, now ya soul lifted

Lmao yeah you Asian af. This was solid. The punch was just okay (funny though) but everything tied in together well. I thought it was a very well put together line.

fuck that G pop up bite claim! lol i knew this broad needed rescuing
cuz the REAL gender reveal.. is telling us how much of a MAN Amen is in everything

You tried to do to much with this. You tried to fit like 3 different references into this and it just didn’t work out.

I thought both guys had a slight step down compared to the heat y’all were bringing the previous matches. Still a good read though imo.

Inf’s writing wasn’t as crisp as normal and he didn’t have the clever standout punches that helped him get to the semis.

Schade punching wasn’t as heavy as it usually is but I thought he had the more consistent verse.

Mvgt Schade

(Prob got mad typos but I’ll edit if necessary later)

Cred
05-07-2018, 07:24 AM
3-2 INFS WAY.

Vote up!

Cred
05-07-2018, 07:54 AM
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GUDELJ
05-07-2018, 08:36 AM
My ninja the way you’re constantly overlooked son, so bogus
s’why I call you my ninja - even when you kill someone it goes unnoticed.
nice I liked this
Huge twin 4-5ths..blowing like chronic when I’m fanning clips,
the 1st could miss, still catch second hand smoke from the cann abyss.
damn this could have been fire, abyss has no relevance as far as I know, so it hurt the punch greatly. Decent
Nerd playing hero, really think you can take this beating kid?
cuz when I BlankMan, you’re getting socked all across the face like he did.
ok
Emotional ‘never was’ whose never been told he was great..
Inf late, allowed to it balloon.. my pen bouta make it explode in his face.
this is a no on all levels bro
Helped you write stronger punches, yet ya just keep missing,
gave ya lines like the telephone game, but you repeated Chinese Whispers.
doesnt really rhyme, keep missing/Chinese whispers
Ppl swear we got a similar style, Ion’t see whatever they mean
they think ‘birds of a feather’, more like you’ve been under my wing.
alright this was done very simple and basic but it was ok for what it’s worth
DQ’d for reusing old bars thinking ya dead plays would work,
been recycling that old trash as if yo dumb ass was gon’ save the Earth.
the concepts played but I like the flip
0-Never, asians good at math, so lose how u're expected to do
little chink bitch, when Barc said Soo Woo, I thought it was directed at you.
lol ok


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Muff vs Aero was jokes

But ur girl stole the spotlight, she gave me the word

said my dick was absurd, couldn't fit more than the tip due to girth
tried alll different angles w/ the head til her lip got a sore, that's Muff pic & his verse
thus is pretty cool
my investments reap huge profits, ur broke & fat at obscene rates
ur Yearly Quarter Gains resulted from lots'a vending machine snacks in-between breaks
wasnt feeling this
been a fan of mine for yrs. lie in here & i'll draw that iron near
the tech's Jim West, i'll shoot u to blow off some steampunk....g'head try'ta grind my gears
gonna have to PM me on this one
& freuds rhyming aint clever, go hard cuz if u think lighter is better?
it'll open ya world if I bucket & put a german on ice like the ad heineken kegger
wording was screwy but decent punch overall
in the mag said you, me, or cred could champ? that shit's a bit odd
^ it's a leap of logic to include urself. i'ma catch ya at a bad time when u slipshod
alright cool
bet ur that perv uncle preying on fam, f'kin creep lures 'em home
making those spicy films that 'Star Anise' && i ain't talking exotic cooking shows
lmfao so stupid but I liked it
best prayy while the piece stretch u out like yoga class, & flow wit it
before the shot? sun salutation. after the shot? downward dog, now ya soul lifted
wordy here, hurt it too much to give credit
Amen punch
wasn feeling this

Damn Idk I wasn’t feeling this battle much at all tbh. Maybe it’s because I haven’t battled in forever and I’m out of touch with what’s good and what’s not? I don’t think so by is possible. I think Shad edges it though, less wordy

Vote shadenfreude

Blue Bayou
05-07-2018, 01:00 PM
Shadenfreude

My ninja the way you’re constantly overlooked son, so bogus
s’why I call you my ninja - even when you kill someone it goes unnoticed.
Cool opener & fresh concept
Huge twin 4-5ths..blowing like chronic when I’m fanning clips,
the 1st could miss, still catch second hand smoke from the cann abyss.
hmm... recall "2nd hand" plays like this & I don't see any tie in to abyss in the set-up.. this needed more imo
Nerd playing hero, really think you can take this beating kid?
cuz when I BlankMan, you’re getting socked all across the face like he did.
Cool concept & wordplay.. but I can't help but feel like it's not set-up well, I read it and it's almost as if you're saying ur gunna get zero votes then hit him for it
Emotional ‘never was’ whose never been told he was great..
Inf late, allowed to it balloon.. my pen bouta make it explode in his face.
like the wordplay, but not how it was done... not a strong hit
Helped you write stronger punches, yet ya just keep missing,
gave ya lines like the telephone game, but you repeated Chinese Whispers.
lol, this is funny
Ppl swear we got a similar style, Ion’t see whatever they mean
they think ‘birds of a feather’, more like you’ve been under my wing.
nice, good hit
DQ’d for reusing old bars thinking ya dead plays would work,
been recycling that old trash as if yo dumb ass was gon’ save the Earth.
this is so played... even with the personal tie in, nah
0-Never, asians good at math, so lose how u're expected to do
little chink bitch, when Barc said Soo Woo, I thought it was directed at you.
I feel bad maybe I'm missing something but I don't see the punch here... barc has a saying that sounds Asian and makes u think of Inf, for being Asian..? Sorry man if I'm missing this one but it seems light and not funny to me

vs.

Inf

said my dick was absurd, couldn't fit more than the tip due to girth
tried alll different angles w/ the head til her lip got a sore, that's Muff pic & his verse
lol, good site punch opener
my investments reap huge profits, ur broke & fat at obscene rates
ur Yearly Quarter Gains resulted from lots'a vending machine snacks in-between breaks
I get it, concept is cool.... didn't know Schade was fat
been a fan of mine for yrs. lie in here & i'll draw that iron near
the tech's Jim West, i'll shoot u to blow off some steampunk....g'head try'ta grind my gears
damn this is a cool concept & very creative... not so harsh as far as the punch goes but it works as an attack line, this def went over some heads
& freuds rhyming aint clever, go hard cuz if u think lighter is better?
it'll open ya world if I bucket & put a german on ice like the ad heineken kegger
cool attack line the flips helped... like the "open your world" tie in as it's very applicable
in the mag said you, me, or cred could champ? that shit's a bit odd
^ it's a leap of logic to include urself. i'ma catch ya at a bad time when u slipshod
dece nameplay
bet ur that perv uncle preying on fam, f'kin creep lures 'em home
making those spicy films that 'Star Anise' && i ain't talking exotic cooking shows
lol, punch/fam ref a bit of a reach but I like the wordplay & this is a fresh concept
best prayy while the piece stretch u out like yoga class, & flow wit it
before the shot? sun salutation. after the shot? downward dog, now ya soul lifted
damnnnn, the "pray" tie in in the set-up works perfect... this is a dope attack line, I think ppl re missing parts of this bar
fuck that G pop up bite claim! lol i knew this broad needed rescuing
cuz the REAL gender reveal.. is telling us how much of a MAN Amen is in everything
lol decent enough closer with the personal.. solid



Cool battle imo, honestly both brought pretty fresh ideas (recycling bar aside) and some good creativity... I've got Infiltrate taking this tho, the yoga and steampower/grind my gears attack lines were lotb for me... I know Sschade has said recently that he's been keying most of his ideas and verses and I think it showed here because I liked a lot of his ideas, but it's as if he half assed a few of them and didn't take the time to round them out... Diff story for Infiltrate, good tie ins throughout and overall I thought he was a bit more consistent, creative and harder hitting throughout... Props to both there was some dope concepts in this

Vote - Infiltrate

Twodrop
05-07-2018, 02:39 PM
No friends in competition, LOOK..

My ninja the way you’re constantly overlooked son, so bogus
s’why I call you my ninja - even when you kill someone it goes unnoticed.
Cool opener
Huge twin 4-5ths..blowing like chronic when I’m fanning clips,
the 1st could miss, still catch second hand smoke from the cann abyss.
I liked the idea, but I got lost w/ the "abyss" tie in
Nerd playing hero, really think you can take this beating kid?
cuz when I BlankMan, you’re getting socked all across the face like he did.
Cool reference, I liked this
Emotional ‘never was’ whose never been told he was great..
Inf late, allowed to it balloon.. my pen bouta make it explode in his face.
Cool wp, the punch didn't hit very hard for me
Helped you write stronger punches, yet ya just keep missing,
gave ya lines like the telephone game, but you repeated Chinese Whispers.
dope
Ppl swear we got a similar style, Ion’t see whatever they mean
they think ‘birds of a feather’, more like you’ve been under my wing.
Another hit
DQ’d for reusing old bars thinking ya dead plays would work,
been recycling that old trash as if yo dumb ass was gon’ save the Earth.
nah..
0-Never, asians good at math, so lose how u're expected to do
little chink bitch, when Barc said Soo Woo, I thought it was directed at you.
lol, ok funny closer

..BODY.


Muff vs Aero was jokes

But ur girl stole the spotlight, she gave me the word

said my dick was absurd, couldn't fit more than the tip due to girth
tried alll different angles w/ the head til her lip got a sore, that's Muff pic & his verse
Creative flip, good opener
my investments reap huge profits, ur broke & fat at obscene rates
ur Yearly Quarter Gains resulted from lots'a vending machine snacks in-between breaks
lotb for me, thought this was fire
been a fan of mine for yrs. lie in here & i'll draw that iron near
the tech's Jim West, i'll shoot u to blow off some steampunk....g'head try'ta grind my gears
didn't get this one, na
& freuds rhyming aint clever, go hard cuz if u think lighter is better?
it'll open ya world if I bucket & put a german on ice like the ad heineken kegger
decent punch, basic wp
in the mag said you, me, or cred could champ? that shit's a bit odd
^ it's a leap of logic to include urself. i'ma catch ya at a bad time when u slipshod
I enjoyed this wp more
bet ur that perv uncle preying on fam, f'kin creep lures 'em home
making those spicy films that 'Star Anise' && i ain't talking exotic cooking shows
i fuck w/ this line, lol
best prayy while the piece stretch u out like yoga class, & flow wit it
before the shot? sun salutation. after the shot? downward dog, now ya soul lifted
dope concept, punch was light

fuck that G pop up bite claim! lol i knew this broad needed rescuing
cuz the REAL gender reveal.. is telling us how much of a MAN Amen is in everything
cool personal, decent closer

I have Inf edging this one out with a more consistent verse and lotb for me.
I thought both put together a strong showing for the semi's. I could have gone either way.

v/ inf