Japanese Whiskey

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X

[Geno]

This was lmfao. Awesome

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I kid I kid lol

[Enbombz]

Dope. I always catch your flow cos I've heard you spit before.
I would of maybe switched the "future a text" to future self a text"
The gas line had s type though I'm assuming it's " I could use it on the gas" or "I could use one for the gas"
But like I said I enjoyed it, butter flow, cool references.

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Yooooooooo, I dig that suggestion. I would legit add it but it wouldn't feel right given I didn't think of it myself. Good lookin out on that typo too. Glad you dug it, fam.

[Sammy]

"I'm not suitable in suits unless I'm suiting up for death"

jjeeaaahh!

[Exis]

Your a funny nigga...

[sral]

shit fiyah

people sleeping

[Eŋg]

i'm all about hibiki when i can afford it. shit is extortion though.

this was dope.

rhythmic, self-effacing, self-important humour. nice blend.

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Thank you kindly, gents. Appreciate the read/feed.

[PancakeBrah]

Best of the pieces I've read from you. Funny, witty. Enjoyable read. Smooth.

[Wutzit Tewya]

Cause a corner office view is less beautiful when stressed..
I'm not suitable for suits unless I'm suiting up for death...REAL dope.

In the backseat of an uber with a floozie and a flask...LOL

The flow of this is nasty. Love me a sick flow..and the content was good to match it. Lots of LOL in there. Good stuff

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Thank you

[dull boy]

Dope

[Current faggot]

I sit back and wait for what comes next
So ahead of my time I sent my future a text
Like "Congratulation on our mutual success"

Fire.....



Y like Pookie in New Jack while I'm Nino quick as Neo
Dodgin bullets zoomin past ...
Bitch you Nemo with an ego gettin chewed up like a snack
"Spit that pinot in a glass" cos she rather drink some whisky
And get frisky in my lap ...I'm a billion dollar mac
With a sick apartment pad, til I get up from my nap
In the middle of the trap with a mattress that's on flat
Gettin action from an actress that so happens to be fat]


Man that shits hard

Bro you the best I have seen here hands down.


Consistent fire

[Lyriscologist]

haaaa, i think this is the first piece I read of yours that wasn’t a topical or imagery piece and just flowing... sick flow, i think the transitional structure was off on the gas line but flawless overall.. had me lol’in

[2tripple0]

It was alright it wasnt dope it was a piece it was a fucking piece and it coulda been better it was alright it was decent good for you for dropping or some shit...but dont lie to yourself and say that was dope....

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Word.

Note to self: don't lie to self.

- SELF

[sral]

2 Crip da turn up GAWD has spoken

[2tripple0]

Lol rap is weird man i mean its like life whats the point nobody really knows.... i mean i write shit and i guess follow the format er whatever rhyme a bar come up with a story or a theme er whatever but i dont really get what im actually trying to achieve.... i guess its just a piece of writing er sumn sumn to read at some point when you get a chance dont know.... what do i know.... it just feels like its some sort of challenge is all thats all it is your just challenging yourself to write something good i guess...

[Orc]

Read it a couple of times and feel it deserves a comment. Content was slick and fun. Phrasing was on point. Was enjoyable to say the least. You've been consistently dropping good stuff, it's refreshing.

[Pharaohs Army]

In the middle of the trap with a mattress that's on flat
Gettin action from an actress that so happens to be fat!


I felt like this closer was kinda forced and lame.

But props; as a whole I enjoyed this and the rest of it was a well-executed braggadocio-type verse.