I am...

[Witty]

I keep...

Searching in mirrors, exploring in portals
Begging the omnipotent, imploring immortals
Try to creep through the back door of heaven
No grace for a pleb, no pass for a peasant.

Am I...

Scum?
The senseless one
Huh?
Is the best to come?
*shrug*
Let's get drunk
*glug*
The stench of rum.

I keep...

Digging in tunnels, running in circles
I'm saying a lot...but none of it verbal
I speak to myself, and I choose not to listen
I drink from this doubt, and chew on contrition.

I am...

Contorted with fright
A sordid delight
This twisted fantasy
Born in the night
A tryst with blasphemy
Distorting the light
A sort of...listless vanity.

[Witty]

Wow those tags were quick lol

[Witty]

Up.

[dull boy]

This is good.

[ACTIVATE SELF]

Ditto

[Mediocrity]

I keep...

Searching in mirrors, exploring in portals
Begging the omnipotent, imploring immortals
Try to creep through the back door of heaven
No grace for a pleb, no pass for a peasant.

Am I...

Scum?
The senseless one
Huh?
Is the best to come?
*shrug*
Let's get drunk
*glug*
The stench of rum.

I keep...

Digging in tunnels, running in circles
I'm saying a lot...but none of it verbal
I speak to myself, and I choose not to listen
I drink from this doubt, and chew on contrition.

I am...

Contorted with fright
A sordid delight
This twisted fantasy
Born in the night
A tryst with blasphemy
Distorting the light
A sort of...listless vanity.

Enjoyed this and the structure was great it seemed to flow like h20 but
Didn’t really fw the highlighted part. Choppy

[Sinacog]

This was a decent read, Witty.

I enjoyed this read, for it's sort of disdainful ordeal you portrayed yourself of having. You seem to be in a corner with your shadow or something...which is interesting. I rather enjoy your narrative style, and intellect. You also seem to have a sort of sarcastic tone with yourself; which is good. I don't think you're a pleb, I think you write a little better than that. But some of these lines indicate, you need more experience with things; but that's okay. I don't think you're scum, but you can be if you're not careful. Lines like 'creeping into heaven' were pretty cool..but you should've continued on such a route in your writing. More christian undertones, so to speak. But yeah, this was a poem - about you; - and I enjoyed it. Didn't seem too out there; nice one man. Good work on this one. Nice imagery as-well. I suppose you can work on your consistency with your undertones, but this was good. Nice, one. Keep writing!

[Witty]

This deserves more.

[Pharaohs Army]

It's good but I've seen better from you in the past. More than a couple times. Don't have links right now.
You champed that league last year I believe?

Write something new?

[Elfo]

Gay

[veritas]

The portal would say:

We don’t agree with your stance, but the flowy way you easily handled such immense context was great.

Write more, Fox

[Geno]

No, you aren't
Dope shit tho.
<3

[Alice]

This was really really good. Loved the conversational tone and poetic-tale throughout. Lots of highlights of a reflective nature.

I'm saying a lot...but none of it verbal
I speak to myself, and I choose not to listen
I drink from this doubt, and chew on contrition

Those stood out to me the most because they’re so relatable. Write more.

[Witty]

Fucking hell I was dope.

[Urban Dialect]

let me hear it