Rd. 1: mustachiaa vs Akbar - AKBAR WINS BY NS

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RULES

-24 line limit MAX
-16 line limit MINIMUM
-DUE THURSDAY MAY 31st
-STANDARD NBL RULES APPLY

Allen Knight & Barcotic

vs

PancakeBrah big baby

[Allen Knight]

Check.

[Barcotic]

Check.
16

[PancakeBrah]

Nah we're going 20.

[Barcotic]

ext

EDIT
we got 16 ready, sent mine to ak

[Allen Knight]

Yea we been ready.

[Allen Knight]

fuck it for feed....


S' like big baby said "fuck it ima roll w/ my queer friend"
i get it, u wanna band together
but no one wants to see Pantera larger hole in ur rear end
duel magnums aimed at ya dome, we'll splatter ur cerebral
send enough shells to Bighead till it fills up his memory bank & shatters his ego
put the switch blade to cakes face, cuttin this guys jaw
Panel get shanked & stuffed in between the shit that holds up dry wall
Baby the biggest waste of air, we'll put the metal in his sight
once that shit go Bam Bam Bigalow task on the doc's charts to wrestle w/ his life
losing to an asian punk & some basic chump? rare
the only Pan Defeat we worried about are on his favorite stuffed bear
babys a pussy that'll get shot at, leave'em ripped & mangled
it'll have Bigotry climbin & hidin till the shells hit him from different angles
u a body, no doubt. crawling w/ clout? plsss
hows it feel knowing cats only say ur name if theyre talking about ME ..
tf is a 'big baby' anyway? ur impact here is minimal AT BEST
granted this Pancake Nip'll get hard just by kissing ur fat chest

[For Battling]

S' like big baby said "fuck it ima roll w/ my queer friend"
i get it, u wanna band together
but no one wants to see Pantera larger hole in ur rear end
this is ok and it works but it’s kinds corny
duel magnums aimed at ya dome, we'll splatter ur cerebral
send enough shells to Bighead till it fills up his memory bank & shatters his ego
this is dope.
put the switch blade to cakes face, cuttin this guys jaw
Panel get shanked & stuffed in between the shit that holds up dry wall
cool
Baby the biggest waste of air, we'll put the metal in his sight
once that shit go Bam Bam Bigalow task on the doc's charts to wrestle w/ his life
this Was hard to read but it’s sctuslly pretty good
losing to an asian punk & some basic chump? rare
the only Pan Defeat we worried about are on his favorite stuffed bear
lmao. Panda feet. It’s a bit of a stretch but ok
babys a pussy that'll get shot at, leave'em ripped & mangled
it'll have Bigotry climbin & hidin till the shells hit him from different angles
nah foh w/ this shit
u a body, no doubt. crawling w/ clout? plsss
hows it feel knowing cats only say ur name if theyre talking about ME ..
i don’t get it tbh
tf is a 'big baby' anyway? ur impact here is minimal AT BEST
granted this Pancake Nip'll get hard just by kissing ur fat chest
lol corny but decent


Good work. I know who wrote what but as a team you mesh well.

[Saint]

went nameplay heavy here, lol. still its bb/pancake so yall prob dgaf

S' like big baby said "fuck it ima roll w/ my queer friend"
i get it, u wanna band together
but no one wants to see Pantera larger hole in ur rear end
(Pantera good play, not big on the followup/execution)

duel magnums aimed at ya dome, we'll splatter ur cerebral
send enough shells to Bighead till it fills up his memory bank & shatters his ego

(This cool)

put the switch blade to cakes face, cuttin this guys jaw
Panel get shanked & stuffed in between the shit that holds up dry wall

(Ok.)

Baby the biggest waste of air, we'll put the metal in his sight
once that shit go Bam Bam Bigalow task on the doc's charts to wrestle w/ his life

(Had to re-read, creative)

losing to an asian punk & some basic chump? rare
the only Pan Defeat we worried about are on his favorite stuffed bear

(Gone @ Panda feet)

babys a pussy that'll get shot at, leave'em ripped & mangled
it'll have Bigotry climbin & hidin till the shells hit him from different angles

(Liked Bigotry....diff angles was meh to me)

u a body, no doubt. crawling w/ clout? plsss
hows it feel knowing cats only say ur name if theyre talking about ME ..
tf is a 'big baby' anyway? ur impact here is minimal AT BEST
granted this Pancake Nip'll get hard just by kissing ur fat chest

(Not big on these last couple)

Would've won tho

[Barcotic]

Good work. I know who wrote what but as a team you mesh well.
no u dont, cuz theyre mixed up
ill send u $ if u can guess perfectly

[Saint]

no u dont, cuz theyre mixed up
ill send u $ if u can guess perfectly

Im try

Edit:

S' like big baby said "fuck it ima roll w/ my queer friend"
i get it, u wanna band together
but no one wants to see Pantera larger hole in ur rear end - Barco

duel magnums aimed at ya dome, we'll splatter ur cerebral
send enough shells to Bighead till it fills up his memory bank & shatters his ego - AK

put the switch blade to cakes face, cuttin this guys jaw
Panel get shanked & stuffed in between the shit that holds up dry wall-- AK

Baby the biggest waste of air, we'll put the metal in his sight
once that shit go Bam Bam Bigalow task on the doc's charts to wrestle w/ his life -- AK

losing to an asian punk & some basic chump? rare
the only Pan Defeat we worried about are on his favorite stuffed bear - Barc

babys a pussy that'll get shot at, leave'em ripped & mangled
it'll have Bigotry climbin & hidin till the shells hit him from different angles - AK

u a body, no doubt. crawling w/ clout? plsss
hows it feel knowing cats only say ur name if theyre talking about ME ..
tf is a 'big baby' anyway? ur impact here is minimal AT BEST
granted this Pancake Nip'll get hard just by kissing ur fat chest - Both Bar

[Barcotic]

Im try

Edit:

S' like big baby said "fuck it ima roll w/ my queer friend"
i get it, u wanna band together
but no one wants to see Pantera larger hole in ur rear end - Barco

duel magnums aimed at ya dome, we'll splatter ur cerebral
send enough shells to Bighead till it fills up his memory bank & shatters his ego - AK

put the switch blade to cakes face, cuttin this guys jaw
Panel get shanked & stuffed in between the shit that holds up dry wall-- AK

Baby the biggest waste of air, we'll put the metal in his sight
once that shit go Bam Bam Bigalow task on the doc's charts to wrestle w/ his life -- AK

losing to an asian punk & some basic chump? rare
the only Pan Defeat we worried about are on his favorite stuffed bear - Barc

babys a pussy that'll get shot at, leave'em ripped & mangled
it'll have Bigotry climbin & hidin till the shells hit him from different angles - AK

u a body, no doubt. crawling w/ clout? plsss
hows it feel knowing cats only say ur name if theyre talking about ME ..
tf is a 'big baby' anyway? ur impact here is minimal AT BEST
granted this Pancake Nip'll get hard just by kissing ur fat chest - Both Bar
sheesh
its a gd thing i aint say id send U money

deals over zelph

[Amen]

Inf a fucking weirdo but I could have guessed as well.

AK executions are unmatched - he's always easy to point out in a collab LOL.

[El Muffin]

like big baby said "fuck it ima roll w/ my queer friend"
i get it, u wanna band together
but no one wants to see Pantera larger hole in ur rear end
(Ok)
duel magnums aimed at ya dome, we'll splatter ur cerebral
send enough shells to Bighead till it fills up his memory bank & shatters his ego
(Cool)
put the switch blade to cakes face, cuttin this guys jaw
Panel get shanked & stuffed in between the shit that holds up dry wall
(Ok)
Baby the biggest waste of air, we'll put the metal in his sight
once that shit go Bam Bam Bigalow task on the doc's charts to wrestle w/ his life
(Lol pretty cool)
losing to an asian punk & some basic chump? rare
the only Pan Defeat we worried about are on his favorite stuffed bear
(This shit was jokes )
babys a pussy that'll get shot at, leave'em ripped & mangled
it'll have Bigotry climbin & hidin till the shells hit him from different angles
(The problem with this is the uh sound in between big n tree)
u a body, no doubt. crawling w/ clout? plsss
hows it feel knowing cats only say ur name if theyre talking about ME ..
(I don't get this)
tf is a 'big baby' anyway? ur impact here is minimal AT BEST
granted this Pancake Nip'll get hard just by kissing ur fat chest
(Ok)
__________________

Pretty good n def enough to best them so I know y'all didn't try to hard ..

Why the fk we let those fgts sign up anyway. PancakeBrah this is your contribution to netcees .


Nothing . why do u even log in ? For real. Waiting for a bags post? Christ your lame

Sign off permanently

[Diablo]

fuck it for feed....


S' like big baby said "fuck it ima roll w/ my queer friend"
i get it, u wanna band together
but no one wants to see Pantera larger hole in ur rear end

Pantera is cool, nice opener

duel magnums aimed at ya dome, we'll splatter ur cerebral
send enough shells to Bighead till it fills up his memory bank & shatters his ego

wording seems off with "send enough shells to..." then "til it fills up" but the idea solid just needed tweeting

put the switch blade to cakes face, cuttin this guys jaw
Panel get shanked & stuffed in between the shit that holds up dry wall

this is dope, gotta be Barc I'd imagine, has all his hall marks over it but yeah this shit flames regardless who wrote it lol

Baby the biggest waste of air, we'll put the metal in his sight
once that shit go Bam Bam Bigalow task on the doc's charts to wrestle w/ his life

feeling it yo

losing to an asian punk & some basic chump? rare
the only Pan Defeat we worried about are on his favorite stuffed bear


LOOOOOOL at the Pan defeat line but the irony is strong enough in this one

babys a pussy that'll get shot at, leave'em ripped & mangled
it'll have Bigotry climbin & hidin till the shells hit him from different angles

straight

u a body, no doubt. crawling w/ clout? plsss
hows it feel knowing cats only say ur name if theyre talking about ME ..

I enjoy the swag, noticed a lot more using those type lines this tourney actually which surprised me

tf is a 'big baby' anyway? ur impact here is minimal AT BEST
granted this Pancake Nip'll get hard just by kissing ur fat chest

LOL fun closer

good shit my g's

[For Battling]

sheesh
its a gd thing i aint say id send U money

deals over zelph

I was gonna say the same as him lol

[Diablo]

LOL I was for SURE that Panel line was Barcs

[Barcotic]

LOL I was for SURE that Panel line was Barcs
not enough syllables rhyming at the end to be mine

mind u neither of us tried lol

[Diablo]

lol true forgot about your OCD

[Amen]

Barcs 2 syllable end rhymes make all the difference.

[Barcotic]

try again

IN FACT

tbh im a novice.. but im sending a clip thru solid jello
im Green but ill still use both ends of the Stick. its donatello
9 syllies
n get urself a ride that starts, hoe.. barc knows an army
or a Long Nose'll come thru n Wet the inside of ur car, no safari
5 syllies
get the msg??? an assault rifle wont hesitate to run in gutters..
think conjoined twins- the Scar will separate u from ur brothers
8
silenced metal will force ur whole ghetto ta lose they craniums
ill put the Beak to ur Dome like doing renos at blue jays stadium
8
ya gf scared too.. she cant prepare u for barcs hammers
so Draw ur Tiny Arms when the Fire's on ya Tail. u a charmander
6
lisssssten bro, we aint simple folk. my clique'a go bonkers
Bus Loads in a parking lot, Mac'll put metal thru ur window. no connor
5
this bastard is plump. i have to be blunt n rip his mass quick..
im the chocolate river, and a Factory Pump will Lift the fat kid
9
FUCK an extension. i got a hair trigger & a round of lead
Kings last minute- ill Pull that Jawn Quick n hell be down a head
7
im taking life. odds on who'd really spray's in mikes favor
Ur last Shot w/ any Kick Back made u thank ur nice neighbor
5

yea
90% of the time i drop verses that have no less than 5 syllies rhyming in every bar
ranging anywhere from 5 to 12 syllable rhymes all the way thru sometimes lol

this particular batt falls w/ the 10% because wgaf

butk
keep throwing uneducated jabs at the king

[Amen]

Yea some of those arent even slant rhymes. Perfect multi rhymes throughout.

Some were forced, but good job, after all you aren't a basic bitch.

[Diablo]

yo Barcotic lemme put you on game real quick

[Diablo]

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=54377&highlight=Lars+Open

me vs Deadman, topical Tourney Finals

look how many syllables I rhyme every couplet ever

and I keep that A, B/A, B/B, C/B, C rhyme pattern going throughout entire verses while storytelling and beating the best that we've got

my rhyme OCD way worse than yours lol

but at least you'll appreciate what I'm doing the same way I do

[Barcotic]

yo Barc lemme put you on game real quick
i kno what u can do rhyme wise
trust me
a collab would be crazy tbh, i go harder w/ the schemes if its not a battle

[Diablo]

lmao holla when you're out of the tourney and we'll try to think of something

[Barcotic]

bet

[El Muffin]

Sometimes ill have an entire setup that rhymes w/ the punch

Haven't been doing it as much but I can

You'll get gunned out if you rest. Ur carcass brings the calllmesstt feeling
Ruler w/ the Thumb down = Death . bih I'm Commodus in the Colluseum

Little off but close

Only example I can think of atm