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Cred
06-04-2018, 09:00 AM
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ill nik-A & Destroyer

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Cashius Infiltrate

ill nik-A
06-04-2018, 06:37 PM
16
Welcome!

Saint
06-04-2018, 07:51 PM
yes

Saint
06-07-2018, 05:10 PM
Ext

Destroyer
06-08-2018, 10:51 AM
fuck every paper champ who hides behind anonymity & tricks
You’d think with a name that means dickless, ur squad would have less dicks
Find another site to post on? des would be astounded
But this Bourdain for u - I have no reservations to let u be found dead
Name reigns supreme. known for evil deeds and being high strung
Who can handle inf? Uh, me. Cause I live in it & it’s what u will die from
take these claws to ur throats, cats leaving ripped in half
Cudi is a monster so when it’s over, Kids see Ghosts of both inf & cash
Y’all know I’m Hispanic which means I’m full of hate & violence
gimme a gun & I’m goin nuts… yall get lost in translation cuz in Spanish the H is silent
Inf bein carried but wont know it till we tussle with the victims
Idgaf if Cash is known for liftin cuz my finger’s repetition gives ya more muscle definition
Talk about me all u want like a bitch u do shit the gay way
I figured out ya combination… Cash doesn’t post personal shit to make sure he stays safe
Inf’s 1st tourney win’s a fake; my haters wanted me to lose, son
beggin Joe for $50 was a poor sign… & u in China town with a will text for food one

Saint
06-09-2018, 01:16 AM
Any of u have one?

Thinking of getting a 50 gallon. Heard it’s a bitch to maintain but u can also pay for a monthly service


That's dope Nik! Ya time'll free up when u dudes get trampled..
But what's real salty & a bitch to maintain is your activity after losing battles
The stick’s I’m grippin’ spit for distance...Shit is gettin’ grim.
I got a big machine that’s gonna put a body on a body...This Pacific Rim
It's Top Grade vs some odd lames...Trophy already in OUR names
Grab a Canaan walk to the podium, yall been finishin last since the Bronze Age
Des, why’d the Lord give your wife A cups? Son, your chick is way scrawny
It’s like deja vu for you...Cuz this is the gawd giving another bitch a Straight Body
Bitch was quick...One Tug in the bath & he was sendin me death threats
How she pulled a monster snake from underwater made her your Deadliest Catch Yet
Nik’s spic Mom’s a maid for caucasians. Clean towels, pillow chocolate...making it regal
The way she Turns Down that White House, you would think the bitch played for the Eagles
Now we got Nik talking about shooting guns LOL. You lyin, just can it yo...
Only time we’ll see a bitch’s Burner Account for a Firing was Bryan Colangelo
And if ya'll survive here? Natural Order see you faggots dead sooner..
Fuckit, 'Something Old' CAN'T even guarantee DMS a battle in the Near Future

Cred
06-09-2018, 09:18 AM
fuck every paper champ who hides behind anonymity & tricks
You’d think with a name that means dickless, ur squad would have less dicks
so ur saying there squad does have dicks? pause. not much of a diss
ol dickless ass niggas
Find another site to post on? des would be astounded
But this Bourdain for u - I have no reservations to let u be found dead
ok fresh
Name reigns supreme. known for evil deeds and being high strung
Who can handle inf? Uh, me. Cause I live in it & it’s what u will die from
dope
take these claws to ur throats, cats leaving ripped in half
Cudi is a monster so when it’s over, Kids see Ghosts of both inf & cash
bit forced tbh
Y’all know I’m Hispanic which means I’m full of hate & violence
gimme a gun & I’m goin nuts… yall get lost in translation cuz in Spanish the H is silent
didnt get this?
Inf bein carried but wont know it till we tussle with the victims
Idgaf if Cash is known for liftin cuz my finger’s repetition gives ya more muscle definition
nahh
Talk about me all u want like a bitch u do shit the gay way
I figured out ya combination… Cash doesn’t post personal shit to make sure he stays safe
nice
Inf’s 1st tourney win’s a fake; my haters wanted me to lose, son
beggin Joe for $50 was a poor sign… & u in China town with a will text for food one
lol aight

vs

That's dope Nik! Ya time'll free up when u dudes get trampled..
But what's real salty & a bitch to maintain is your activity after losing battles
nice opener
The stick’s I’m grippin’ spit for distance...Shit is gettin’ grim.
I got a big machine that’s gonna put a body on a body...This Pacific Rim
good
It's Top Grade vs some odd lames...Trophy already in OUR names
Grab a Canaan walk to the podium, yall been finishin last since the Bronze Age
nah
Des, why’d the Lord give your wife A cups? Son, your chick is way scrawny
It’s like deja vu for you...Cuz this is the gawd giving another bitch a Straight Body
wasnt feeling this to much, u jus had a body line
Bitch was quick...One Tug in the bath & he was sendin me death threats
How she pulled a monster snake from underwater made her your Deadliest Catch Yet
lol ight
Nik’s spic Mom’s a maid for caucasians. Clean towels, pillow chocolate...making it regal
The way she Turns Down that White House, you would think the bitch played for the Eagles
nah
Now we got Nik talking about shooting guns LOL. You lyin, just can it yo...
Only time we’ll see a bitch’s Burner Account for a Firing was Bryan Colangelo
didnt like this
And if ya'll survive here? Natural Order see you faggots dead sooner..
Fuckit, 'Something Old' CAN'T even guarantee DMS a battle in the Near Future
weak closer


Nice battle here this morning. Something old & cashtration both had some pretty solid verses tbh. After looking at the breakdowns tho, I got Something old with the slight lead. They were a slightly bit more consistent with landed punches here imo. Cashtration slacked heavy towards the end of there verse. those bars I jus wasn't feeling and to be honest I had them as the favorites here. Both did there thing but I liked Something Old's verse more here though.

Vote / Something Old

El Muffin
06-09-2018, 09:52 AM
fuck every paper champ who hides behind anonymity & tricks
You’d think with a name that means dickless, ur squad would have less dicks
(lmao wut? are u essentially calling them assholes? not really much of a hit. if any at all)
Find another site to post on? des would be astounded
But this Bourdain for u - I have no reservations to let u be found dead
(fire tho.)
Name reigns supreme. known for evil deeds and being high strung
Who can handle inf? Uh, me. Cause I live in it & it’s what u will die from
(only part i dont like is the last tie in...dying from infamy. but the wp is fire n i like this regardles.. its like a 8/10)
take these claws to ur throats, cats leaving ripped in half
Cudi is a monster so when it’s over, Kids see Ghosts of both inf & cash
(ok)
Y’all know I’m Hispanic which means I’m full of hate & violence
gimme a gun & I’m goin nuts… yall get lost in translation cuz in Spanish the H is silent
(is panic. /nuts. ok .. but idk just the direction of this ,, not a concept iwould have pursued)
Inf bein carried but wont know it till we tussle with the victims
Idgaf if Cash is known for liftin cuz my finger’s repetition gives ya more muscle definition
(ehh)
Talk about me all u want like a bitch u do shit the gay way
I figured out ya combination… Cash doesn’t post personal shit to make sure he stays safe
(safe/combo is done to death but i think the personal...is very true n it hits.)
Inf’s 1st tourney win’s a fake; my haters wanted me to lose, son
beggin Joe for $50 was a poor sign… & u in China town with a will text for food one
(haha ok )


That's dope Nik! Ya time'll free up when u dudes get trampled..
But what's real salty & a bitch to maintain is your activity after losing battles
(man i had something like this for nika.. like someshit about how he hasnt posted since he lost the finals cept to sign in this tourney. this hits)
The stick’s I’m grippin’ spit for distance...Shit is gettin’ grim.
I got a big machine that’s gonna put a body on a body...This Pacific Rim
(nice)
It's Top Grade vs some odd lames...Trophy already in OUR names
Grab a Canaan walk to the podium, yall been finishin last since the Bronze Age
(i dont know about this.. not fw it )
Des, why’d the Lord give your wife A cups? Son, your chick is way scrawny
It’s like deja vu for you...Cuz this is the gawd giving another bitch a Straight Body
(this is good tf u talm bout cred ..read the setup)
Bitch was quick...One Tug in the bath & he was sendin me death threats
How she pulled a monster snake from underwater made her your Deadliest Catch Yet
(ok)
Nik’s spic Mom’s a maid for caucasians. Clean towels, pillow chocolate...making it regal
The way she Turns Down that White House, you would think the bitch played for the Eagles
(i never heard the phrase turns down..being referenced to cleaning a house.. i think im losing what ur getting at here..i think this would be better suited about a bitch turning down going to a white bois house...even if u are white urself.. this one im not feeling but it has so much potential)
Now we got Nik talking about shooting guns LOL. You lyin, just can it yo...
Only time we’ll see a bitch’s Burner Account for a Firing was Bryan Colangelo
(fire but why say "a bitch" instead of "this bitchs" coz as is it sounds like u talking about a female. ..luckily i see through it. still fire)
And if ya'll survive here? Natural Order see you faggots dead sooner..
Fuckit, 'Something Old' CAN'T even guarantee DMS a battle in the Near Future
(huh?)

ooo close.

h/o

pretty much tied in quotes. the only thing thats making me lean towards inf n cash is the fact that somethings old closer was a barely quote...its literally dead even otherwise

i think this is ridiculously close. but i got inf n cash

v/inf cash

Jabari Black
06-10-2018, 08:18 AM
fuck every paper champ who hides behind anonymity & tricks
You’d think with a name that means dickless, ur squad would have less dicks

(I didn’t care for this one. The punch wasn’t hard enough)

Find another site to post on? des would be astounded
But this Bourdain for u - I have no reservations to let u be found dead

(Haymaker! This was dope)

Name reigns supreme. known for evil deeds and being high strung
Who can handle inf? Uh, me. Cause I live in it & it’s what u will die from

(This was cool. The wp itself was cool but the set up brought everything together. That’good writing)

take these claws to ur throats, cats leaving ripped in half
Cudi is a monster so when it’s over, Kids see Ghosts of both inf & cash

(This was just okay. The punch was a bit too basic imo)

Y’all know I’m Hispanic which means I’m full of hate & violence
gimme a gun & I’m goin nuts… yall get lost in translation cuz in Spanish the H is silent

(I tried my hardest but I missed this one)

Inf bein carried but wont know it till we tussle with the victims
Idgaf if Cash is known for liftin cuz my finger’s repetition gives ya more muscle definition

(I see where you going but this is between a miss and an very very light jab)

Talk about me all u want like a bitch u do shit the gay way
I figured out ya combination… Cash doesn’t post personal shit to make sure he stays safe

(The punch wasn’t crazy. Safe/combo is basic but that’s a good personal. This landed)

Inf’s 1st tourney win’s a fake; my haters wanted me to lose, son
beggin Joe for $50 was a poor sign… & u in China town with a will text for food one

(Lol this was funny. I liked the personal angles too. Nothing crazy but solid closer)




That's dope Nik! Ya time'll free up when u dudes get trampled..
But what's real salty & a bitch to maintain is your activity after losing battles

(Lol this is nice)

The stick’s I’m grippin’ spit for distance...Shit is gettin’ grim.
I got a big machine that’s gonna put a body on a body...This Pacific Rim

(This is pretty nice as well)

It's Top Grade vs some odd lames...Trophy already in OUR names
Grab a Canaan walk to the podium, yall been finishin last since the Bronze Age

(Hmm, the Cannan wp was is pretty slick and I get how it ties into the Bronze Age but that may be too obscure of a reference. This is decent. Clever though)

Des, why’d the Lord give your wife A cups? Son, your chick is way scrawny
It’s like deja vu for you...Cuz this is the gawd giving another bitch a Straight Body

(This is pretty good. I like it)

Bitch was quick...One Tug in the bath & he was sendin me death threats
How she pulled a monster snake from underwater made her your Deadliest Catch Yet

(This was just okay. I don’t actually watch deadliest catch so I might have missed a tie in, but just from what I was able to catch I didn’t think it was enough to tie in to the ‘Deadliest Catch Yet’ part)

Nik’s spic Mom’s a maid for caucasians. Clean towels, pillow chocolate...making it regal
The way she Turns Down that White House, you would think the bitch played for the Eagles

(The punch felt forced on this one, particularly the ‘Turns down that white house’ phrase. Didn’t care for this one)

Now we got Nik talking about shooting guns LOL. You lyin, just can it yo...
Only time we’ll see a bitch’s Burner Account for a Firing was Bryan Colangelo

(This was pretty cool. My only critique is you wouldn’t call a shooting a ‘firing’. You had enough here to compensate for that though. Overall I think the line was good)

And if ya'll survive here? Natural Order see
you faggots dead sooner..
Fuckit, 'Something Old' CAN'T even guarantee DMS a battle in the Near Future

(This was light)



I enjoyed this battle. It’s dope seeing 4 elite battlers go at it.

Very close battle but I got Cash and Inf taking this by just a bar.

Mvgt Cashtration

BodySnatcher
06-12-2018, 02:15 PM
fuck every paper champ who hides behind anonymity & tricks
You’d think with a name that means dickless, ur squad would have less dicks
ehh
Find another site to post on? des would be astounded
But this Bourdain for u - I have no reservations to let u be found dead
i like
Name reigns supreme. known for evil deeds and being high strung
Who can handle inf? Uh, me. Cause I live in it & it’s what u will die from
hit
take these claws to ur throats, cats leaving ripped in half
Cudi is a monster so when it’s over, Kids see Ghosts of both inf & cash
decent at best
Y’all know I’m Hispanic which means I’m full of hate & violence
gimme a gun & I’m goin nuts… yall get lost in translation cuz in Spanish the H is silent
I see it what yall did, just wasn't as effective as you prolly thought would be
Inf bein carried but wont know it till we tussle with the victims
Idgaf if Cash is known for liftin cuz my finger’s repetition gives ya more muscle definition
meh
Talk about me all u want like a bitch u do shit the gay way
I figured out ya combination… Cash doesn’t post personal shit to make sure he stays safe
basic
Inf’s 1st tourney win’s a fake; my haters wanted me to lose, son
beggin Joe for $50 was a poor sign… & u in China town with a will text for food one
lol

2 yes, 3 ok, 3 meh

That's dope Nik! Ya time'll free up when u dudes get trampled..
But what's real salty & a bitch to maintain is your activity after losing battles
lol
The stick’s I’m grippin’ spit for distance...Shit is gettin’ grim.
I got a big machine that’s gonna put a body on a body...This Pacific Rim
cool line
It's Top Grade vs some odd lames...Trophy already in OUR names
Grab a Canaan walk to the podium, yall been finishin last since the Bronze Age
ok, only get this line because of mysteries of the museum
Des, why’d the Lord give your wife A cups? Son, your chick is way scrawny
It’s like deja vu for you...Cuz this is the gawd giving another bitch a Straight Body
st8
Bitch was quick...One Tug in the bath & he was sendin me death threats
How she pulled a monster snake from underwater made her your Deadliest Catch Yet
st8
Nik’s spic Mom’s a maid for caucasians. Clean towels, pillow chocolate...making it regal
The way she Turns Down that White House, you would think the bitch played for the Eagles
ehhh
Now we got Nik talking about shooting guns LOL. You lyin, just can it yo...
Only time we’ll see a bitch’s Burner Account for a Firing was Bryan Colangelo
damn yall gettin at philly, this was ok
And if ya'll survive here? Natural Order see you faggots dead sooner..
Fuckit, 'Something Old' CAN'T even guarantee DMS a battle in the Near Future
lols but light

2 yes, 4 ok, 2 meh


I got Cash Rate in a close match-up, props for showing.