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Cred
06-04-2018, 09:02 AM
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RULES

-24 line limit MAX
-16 line limit MINIMUM
-DUE THURSDAY JUNE 7
-STANDARD NBL RULES APPLY

Allen Knight & Barcotic

vs

Enbombz BodySnatcher

Barcotic
06-04-2018, 03:24 PM
yooo fgts
16-24

BodySnatcher
06-04-2018, 05:02 PM
match whoever drops first bum ass

Allen Knight
06-04-2018, 07:12 PM
Check.

Barcotic
06-07-2018, 09:52 PM
guess we'll go 3 for 3 w extensions
i got 12 rn personally so be ready for 20-24 Enbombz BodySnatcher

BodySnatcher
06-07-2018, 10:46 PM
Max.

sign Skunk out cuz thats me

Fuck your aliaseshttps://media.tenor.com/images/eb2219a459d97ce21b5b4317a4edb7e7/tenor.gif


I’ll give AKA break but this Skunk is last place in the rat race
He got exposed & went Hollywood actin like Orange is the New Black-face
Bar, I realize that you hate your life & being white is wack, I see this
But this wigga is actin like Vin Diesel over here tryin to Pitch Black ideas
You old niggas are so-so & st8 homo to think we don’t recline stars
Zelph don't gotta cuff`em, Allen was down to spend a Knight behind Bars
No green herb can help when the AK takes Bar out his element people
Big gun, got me limping from his body like I’m about to die in Resident Evil
Who wears the pants between y'all? The old nigga or whiny farmer?
Shit, we know Barbie in his dreamhouse waitin on Knight in shiny armor
When I drop this Bar it’ll be another Ghost in Boston, I got your past
It said this white dude been exploitin black culture longer than Robert Kraft
You think we GOT to be grateful instead it's "son i hate what i've read"
Crownin this Night King? They gotta a better chance of raising the dead
Wordplay n gun bars great in small doses, ur measures aren’t stable
But Since your thermidor that shit, we servin you with shells at this table
They say "we got it down to a science"...Either would bet his life
Forcin that formula down kids throats but these tits are useless...Des's wife
20 pm's later...Allen said he done with you, it’s the end of the team
But if you pushin my buttons, these cans rollin out like a vendin machine
Gotta stop mid-line like "what is this play?" ur phony I speak truth
No regard for Flow...just a burnin rage inside since the day homie beat you
IDK why they believe they’re God MC’s...that claim is approximate to...
Them saying they touch soles when it feels more like rocks in a shoe

Blasphemy.

Barcotic
06-09-2018, 07:31 AM
got to 18, met the crew n partied all night
fuck u ak
try wording fillers all fucked up on serious blow

posting what i got for feedback (last few bars were desperate attempts to make 24 before the hollywood kicked in lol)

enbombz is a fgt, snatch is just collateral damage

yo lets swap accents w/ the loser.. HI, im british
ur style's Arsenal only have to use one tool from mine to win this
think the rotten things inside ur cheeks gleam white? ha, no
but thanks to a few anal cavities, ur teeth feel right at home
im throwin uppercuts in the vicinity of this clown's chin,
dislodging at least one Tuscany might land in italy if hes downwind
shotgun behind bod. bruh, i got huuuuge heat for substitutes
this is a 5 lap race; u lookin at ya shoulder a few ft in front of u
btw that bal roast was reeeally fair & standard pal
more power to u... ur the reason there's a panel now
bout to hit williamsburg to mack a slut? u wudnt
u dont have to say Virginia already kno u havent fucked a woman
eb's neckin w/ this weak peasant on his cheap bedroom floor
he made a splash from the jump
first time at the Jimmy Snuka peek up bs' shorts
faggot ur an ogre, clocking 240 or over proly
the pump'll have u weighing 135 and Alcantara bigger hole in body
u been in plenty bouts, but ur hand held high?
last time u rang someones bell, it was a pepper in a checkout line

Cred
06-09-2018, 08:40 AM
I’ll give AKA break but this Skunk is last place in the rat race
He got exposed & went Hollywood actin like Orange is the New Black-face
this was pretty cool imo
Bar, I realize that you hate your life & being white is wack, I see this
But this wigga is actin like Vin Diesel over here tryin to Pitch Black ideas
ehh,
You old niggas are so-so & st8 homo to think we don’t recline stars
Zelph don't gotta cuff`em, Allen was down to spend a Knight behind Bars
nahh
No green herb can help when the AK takes Bar out his element people
Big gun, got me limping from his body like I’m about to die in Resident Evil
alright, i fuck with this
Who wears the pants between y'all? The old nigga or whiny farmer?
Shit, we know Barbie in his dreamhouse waitin on Knight in shiny armor
lol ok
When I drop this Bar it’ll be another Ghost in Boston, I got your past
It said this white dude been exploitin black culture longer than Robert Kraft
decent
You think we GOT to be grateful instead it's "son i hate what i've read"
Crownin this Night King? They gotta a better chance of raising the dead
i like this
Wordplay n gun bars great in small doses, ur measures aren’t stable
But Since your thermidor that shit, we servin you with shells at this table
hmm. i didnt get this
They say "we got it down to a science"...Either would bet his life
Forcin that formula down kids throats but these tits are useless...Des's wife
lol nah fam
20 pm's later...Allen said he done with you, it’s the end of the team
But if you pushin my buttons, these cans rollin out like a vendin machine
decent at best
Gotta stop mid-line like "what is this play?" ur phony I speak truth
No regard for Flow...just a burnin rage inside since the day homie beat you
wasnt feeling this
IDK why they believe they’re God MC’s...that claim is approximate to...
Them saying they touch soles when it feels more like rocks in a shoe
concepts cool, wording needed a harsher execution

Good verse here to be honest, i see potential in this duo here. Thankfully u guys got another shot to put ur 2 formuals together and bring something lethal to the table. I'm fuckin wit yall styles and if u guys could word ur shit a bit more harsher, then u guys'll definitely be a problem.

Cred
06-09-2018, 08:49 AM
yo lets swap accents w/ the loser.. HI, im british
ur style's Arsenal only have to use one tool from mine to win this
alright
think the rotten things inside ur cheeks gleam white? ha, no
but thanks to a few anal cavities, ur teeth feel right at home
decent
im throwin uppercuts in the vicinity of this clown's chin,
dislodging at least one Tuscany might land in italy if hes downwind
didnt like this
shotgun behind bod. bruh, i got huuuuge heat for substitutes
this is a 5 lap race; u lookin at ya shoulder a few ft in front of u
didn't get the 5 lap race part but shoulder in front was dope
btw that bal roast was reeeally fair & standard pal
more power to u... ur the reason there's a panel now
lol ok
bout to hit williamsburg to mack a slut? u wudnt
u dont have to say Virginia already kno u havent fucked a woman
wasn't feeling
eb's neckin w/ this weak peasant on his cheap bedroom floor
he made a splash from the jump
first time at the Jimmy Snuka peek up bs' shorts
nahh
faggot ur an ogre, clocking 240 or over proly
the pump'll have u weighing 135 and Alcantara bigger hole in body
wording was off, concept fire tho
u been in plenty bouts, but ur hand held high?
last time u rang someones bell, it was a pepper in a checkout line
lol nooo fam

Wouldve liked to see the Ak Bar duo tbh. I definitely think AK wouldve picked ur best bars and did his thing wit the rest. The bars i did like, i liked. the ones i didnt i didnt but cool verse nonetheless

Barcotics Wordplay
06-10-2018, 03:56 AM
got to 18, met the crew n partied all night
fuck u ak
try wording fillers all fucked up on serious blow

posting what i got for feedback (last few bars were desperate attempts to make 24 before the hollywood kicked in lol)

enbombz is a fgt, snatch is just collateral damage

yo lets swap accents w/ the loser.. HI, im british
ur style's Arsenal only have to use one tool from mine to win this
think the rotten things inside ur cheeks gleam white? ha, no
but thanks to a few anal cavities, ur teeth feel right at home
im throwin uppercuts in the vicinity of this clown's chin,
dislodging at least one Tuscany might land in italy if hes downwind
shotgun behind bod. bruh, i got huuuuge heat for substitutes
this is a 5 lap race; u lookin at ya shoulder a few ft in front of u
btw that bal roast was reeeally fair & standard pal
more power to u... ur the reason there's a panel now
bout to hit williamsburg to mack a slut? u wudnt
u dont have to say Virginia already kno u havent fucked a woman
eb's neckin w/ this weak peasant on his cheap bedroom floor
he made a splash from the jump
first time at the Jimmy Snuka peek up bs' shorts
faggot ur an ogre, clocking 240 or over proly
the pump'll have u weighing 135 and Alcantara bigger hole in body
u been in plenty bouts, but ur hand held high?
last time u rang someones bell, it was a pepper in a checkout line


We are in top form here, Master ..

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