View Full Version : Week 1: Plot (0-0) vs. BodySnatcher (0-0) - BODY WINS
For Battling
06-21-2018, 09:05 PM
Rules
This should be self explanatory, but for those who are unfamiliar with the 1-2 Punch League..
1. NO BITING
2. NO SWAYING
3. NO FEEDING
4. No RECYCLING
5. Must vote on at least 5 battles each week. Failure to vote on 5 battles will result in -1 votes deducted from your battle. Failure to vote on ANY will result in -2 votes deducted in your battle.
6. Voting much be at least ONE complete sentence with a decent explanation. (Vote: Bags as per tradition) WON’T COUNT!
7. Voting on Champ and Contender matches are required for all participants.
8. ONLY 2 TOTAL EXTENSIONS ALLOWED THIS SEASON. It’s literally 1 bar, extensions shouldn’t be needed but you’ll get 2 just for whining purposes.
9. NO TALKING ABOUT OPEN BATTLES! If you think you’re being hate voted against etc, contact a mod and we will handle it accordingly.
THIS WEEK ONLY
PUNCHES DUE ON SUNDAY
VOTING ENDS MONDAY MORNING
NEW BATTLES UP MONDAY EVENING
Plot BodySnatcher
BodySnatcher
06-21-2018, 09:28 PM
you ready Plot
BodySnatcher
06-22-2018, 04:49 PM
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This is the end of ur life story so if u book it...I got the chopper for an aerial shot
& if I see a Plot scheme...I’ma leave him with a hole the size of his own burial Plot
These rhymes are tough, better bring the arsenal if you wanna fight me bud,
Coz you can bet Imma give you the full jacket, no membership to a bikie club.
Body used plot twice made the bar clunky and repetitive. 2 lines can’t afford to waste space. Plot came a little consistent.
Plot
For Battling
06-24-2018, 01:05 PM
Yea body had a good scheme going on, pretty complex and creative but also very wordy and he used the world plot 2x which def hurt. Plot came with a surprisingly good line, had he dropped worse then body would have won but plot came correct.
Vote plot
Twodrop
06-24-2018, 01:24 PM
is 'bikie' club something they say in Australia or something? That made Plots bar corny to me....
V/ Body
Bongo Bear
06-24-2018, 01:27 PM
This was close. I think BodySnatcher made a little more sense. Both lines were worded pretty awkwardly.
V/BodySnatcher
Its always wierd to me people cant get over a word being used twice when in some cases its needed for the bar to deliver its aim. For me this was that rare exception. I got plots angle but the "bikie" part was a deal breaker. Both concepts are some what played but body gave his a creative twist and jus seemed to put more effort in here.
Vote body
Jabari Black
06-24-2018, 06:49 PM
Body had a lot going on (in a good way). The burial plot punch was pretty basic, but you had the book/life/plot flip; the chopper/aerial shot flip; then ‘plot scheme’ phrase ties everything together. ‘Burial plot’ punch was just okay - basic plot flip.
Plot punch was pretty good. Subtle tie ins with the tough and bar fight tie ins to the punch. Wasn’t a complex scheme like Body’s though. FMJ/biker jack wasn’t a crazy flip to me - a little basic.
Both punches were good but I think the complexity of Body’s edged it
Mvgt Body
Schadenfreude
06-24-2018, 07:30 PM
Body bruh, you literally used EVERY played Plot concept that's been throw at your opponent a million times before.. VOTE PLOT, even tho we call 'em BIKERS.
DynamiCz
06-24-2018, 07:32 PM
This is the end of ur life story so if u book it...I got the chopper for an aerial shot
& if I see a Plot scheme...I’ma leave him with a hole the size of his own burial Plot
This was dope, I seen it used before but the wording here was completely different.
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These rhymes are tough, better bring the arsenal if you wanna fight me bud,
Coz you can bet Imma give you the full jacket, no membership to a bikie club.
This was coo here, would have hit harder with different wording, but still overall tho
Props to both, I got BS here, his line just overall had more jab to it and was more effective. Plot line was still nice tho none the less
V-Body
Close...
I liked Body's bar but gotta concur with what was previously mentioned, what you said I've heard a lot of, bro.
Plot...hmm def not your best...I get the biker line though especially livin' in OZ, it was poorly worded yet I felt you did more with the line before imo.
V - Plot.
Plot mini scheme worked for me, scrammed in a lot of stuff and made it work
Plot's didn't really land imo
v/Body
Ghost1
06-25-2018, 09:45 AM
honestly I thought both were fire....body just had better wording and word association on his execution
I didn't mind bikie even tho it sounded gay lol
v body in a close one
Lenox
06-25-2018, 12:41 PM
I didn’t like either tbh.
Bikie club was random and I got the reference but it was still like fuck off lol
v/body
Ahriman
06-25-2018, 06:13 PM
Cool bars... body had the better wording I thought plots concepts was nice just needed more to the actual punch
V/body
Saint
06-26-2018, 02:54 AM
V/Plot.....wording saved him here imo
Body wasnt bad just not executed well enough imo
For Battling
06-26-2018, 04:03 AM
BodySnatcher Wins 9-5
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