View Full Version : Week 2: Exis (0-1) vs. Cereal (0-1) - EXIS WINS
For Battling
06-26-2018, 02:20 PM
COMPLETE RULE THREAD:
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411
IMPORTANT RULES:
- No biting
- No swaying
- No recycling
- No feeding
MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES
PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY MIDNIGHT PST
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY MIDNIGHT PST
Exis Cereal
Cereal
06-26-2018, 08:23 PM
Exis I drop the tee like i am the new tigerwoods clubroom
Putting X on its ass like i am going to find the next disaster dubloon
Far from a serial killer, just a Cereal nuisance
All I see is you with an Asian bowl cut all Caucasian like tryna compete with his noodles.
Ghost1
06-28-2018, 08:35 AM
I guess cereal>? wut in the fuck lol
v cereal
Exis - not sure of you are aware but this isn't poetry as in where you don't need to rhyme. You have to rhyme on this side of the writing genre, fam.
Both of these were bad. Cereal was just a tad bit better/less bad but rhymed which is a plus in the 1-2.
v/Cereal
Yeh I gotta back cereal, didn't like a punch not rhyming being the main gripe
Also hated a vague game ref I had to look up
I got exis
I don’t know wtf a disaster Dubloon is
Twodrop
06-28-2018, 04:54 PM
hm....
Exis bar at least made me smile w/ 'all Caucasian like'
like Inno said I don't know what a disaster doubloon is, guess its treasure.. hated the bar tho..
Keep at it
v/ Exis
Exis - not sure of you are aware but this isn't poetry as in where you don't need to rhyme. You have to rhyme on this side of the writing genre, famv/Cereal
Trust me I know lol...& I'm no poet...just tryna transition is all...sorry I know it's bad, but I had to drop sumthin' man.
DynamiCz
06-28-2018, 10:41 PM
Exis I drop the tee like i am the new tigerwoods clubroom
Putting X on its ass like i am going to find the next disaster dubloon
Slight jab I guess, it's readable I guess
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Far from a serial killer, just a Cereal nuisance
All I see is you with an Asian bowl cut all Caucasian like tryna compete with his noodles.
Damn bro this could have been something if you rhymed it out right. Keep trying tho you will get it. Props fam
Cereal punch wasn't that much better, I only could understand it more. Better can come from each side but good shit on the effort.
V-Cereal
Cereal
06-29-2018, 10:56 AM
votes:
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128517
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128518
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128521
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128520
I got exis
I don’t know wtf a disaster Dubloon is
lol pretty much
Schadenfreude
06-29-2018, 01:25 PM
Either of you know how to word your punches. Cereal's pirate tresure concept MIGHT have worked, while Exis Ion't know what you were going for.. tried relating his haircut/head to asians..WTF are you talking about? VOTE CEREAL.
For Battling
06-30-2018, 06:13 AM
Both of you guys need to read some text battles, legit any - but preferably some NBL battles or something. The elevation process can be long and lengthy for some but it’s always possible. Exis I’m guessing you’re comparing noodles to Chinese cocks? Idk what else it could possibly be. Cereal youre wasn’t much better and Idk what your concept means but you at least had decent flow without
Vote cereal
For Battling
07-01-2018, 05:33 AM
11-8 Exis
Needs more votes
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Larkin
07-01-2018, 05:46 AM
Vote Exis, Cereal structured his punch better but the whole X treasure is very played concept to me. Exis setup his bar really nice, but the punch just fell flat. But he still edged it for me. His line 1 jab was the best punch in the battle.
Destroyer
07-01-2018, 08:47 AM
This was.... not great
It’s a tough vote
Going with the non-disaster dubloon guy
V/exis
lol pretty much
I had Exis winning here
Disaster dubloon lost me sorry
Defiant
07-01-2018, 12:01 PM
Vote ex is
Neither were great but gotta with ex is for making a bit more sense
Old what a disaster doubloon is either
V/ Exis, but I did expect a less close match with this one, big let down Exis.
Jabari Black
07-01-2018, 01:27 PM
Vote Cereal. The tee down/golf flip in Cereals set up was pretty much the only thing that landed. I’m assuming Dubloon is some sort of treasure but that was still a miss. Exis unfortunatley, didn’t really make sense in his punch.
Vote exis cus i like his enthusiasm
As far as bar goes didnt like or get either
bleak
07-01-2018, 02:19 PM
For Battling i avoided this for a reason.
Shit battle.
C was all over the place talking bout tiger woods and pirate treasure. Exis made sense all the way thru almost
V/ex
Blue Bayou
07-01-2018, 03:00 PM
Hmmmmmm... ive got Cereal here
Neither was great but at least it rhymed and altho played i can appreciate the nameplay attempt... exis was just worded poorly to me and there was nothing there
BodySnatcher
07-01-2018, 03:33 PM
v exis
dubloon? nah LOLOL
weak battle props for showing
Incredible
07-01-2018, 04:20 PM
I didn't like either one of these bars I don't see why this is still going both don't make much sense.
Vote = Exis for making the more sense out of two pointless bars
For Battling
07-01-2018, 04:21 PM
Exis Wins 11-8
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