Shanghai Noon

[ACTIVATE SELF]

Eh

[sral]

You already posted this here I think?

[ACTIVATE SELF]

Kinda, but not really. I posted it. Then edited and deleted it before anybody actually read it.

[Pharaohs Army]

Oh you deleted it?

Well, from what I remember there were things I liked and disliked.

I very much liked the short lines and some of the good rhyming.

I didn't like a few phrases that were stretches. And just in general some poorer wording. I don't have examples right now because it's deleted.

It was okay you could put it back up.