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For Battling
07-02-2018, 05:30 AM
COMPLETE RULE THREAD:
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411


IMPORTANT RULES:
- No biting
- No swaying
- No recycling
- No feeding


MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES


PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY
NEW MATCHUPS UP BY SUNDAY NIGHT

Burd Orc veritas

For Battling
07-06-2018, 01:01 PM
veritas Bar:

V aint the one to step to, he shines with cold text, easily wrecks this McGregor’s effeminate nephew.
My hands always on time like a Rolex, leave him checked and flipped like an old school Rolodex do.

Burd
07-06-2018, 02:20 PM
Fat wife aka wack life that’s inferior to mine
Boyyy ya girl cooch gota ‘Lived in look’ that’d revolutionize Interior Design

Schadenfreude
07-06-2018, 02:35 PM
VOTE ORC V posted 2 bars-in-one & the McGregor joke was much more interesting than the hands/watch punch. Burd's punch was simple yet funny & effective.

Saint
07-06-2018, 02:52 PM
V Burd -- veritas bar was too long an the rolodex/rolex concepts werent too great to me.
Burd used a familiar concept but it hit

veritas
07-06-2018, 02:57 PM
I thought what I posted was one bar. My bad guys. All love. Good show orc

Twodrop
07-06-2018, 03:06 PM
Both were cool... Veritas might have been a little stretched..

Burd was concise and hilarious, flowed nice, he got it.

v/ Burd

bleak
07-06-2018, 03:57 PM
I thought what I posted was one bar. My bad guys. All love. Good show orc

It was just a little stretched which makes it read weird. Whereas Orc was minimalistic and got the job done with the room allotted to him. Honestly V the first line was better maybe u should have transposed them it may have hit harder.

Burden

Jabari Black
07-06-2018, 04:56 PM
V

Rhymes scheme was nice so it made the bar not feel stretched imo. Rolex/Gand in time flip is kinda played but fine for a set up. Imo the roladex flip was a little light.

Burd’s punch was just funny af. Not too much more to say than that. Live in/interior design ain’t a crazy flip but it works and like I said - funny af.

mvgt Burd

Amen
07-06-2018, 05:07 PM
Lol @ people saying V's bar was stretched. No it wasn't - he utilized long bar format and made up for the long winded syllables with rhyme schemes. However the punch executed was fairly weak. I thought the concept in the setup bar would have been a little better if executed properly.

Orc's punch wasn't all that but he dropped just enough to take it.

Burd got it.

Chyeahhh!!!
07-06-2018, 05:32 PM
saw what V was going for, just a little long and wordy

Burd had a short setup that I thought was gonna end dumb but came through

vote Burd

Cereal
07-06-2018, 08:41 PM
vote = burd
ver punch was nice still, burd was just my compact..

MMLP
07-07-2018, 05:12 AM
Burd was simple n effective, vertias probably would have taken this if not 4 doing too much

Destroyer
07-07-2018, 07:49 AM
Man, burd’s punch really got that “lived in” look to it
But I can’t be bothered to go searching
Veritas was stretched like Armstrong

V/orc

Pinot Grij
07-07-2018, 09:05 AM
Vote — Orc , not only was the concept fresh but the rhyming was slick too. Veritas - Rolodex concept wasn’t as effective.

Aero
07-07-2018, 09:54 AM
Veritas - I like the set up more than the punch

Bird - I feel like lived in has been done before and this was predictable

Burd

For Battling
07-07-2018, 09:12 PM
Burd Wins 12-0