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07-22-2018, 07:41 PM
The Summer Classic ‘18
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

bleak Infiltrate

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday,
July 26th, 2018 @ 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due Tuesday, July 24th, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST
Voting ends Saturday, July 28th, 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 48 hours
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Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines


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2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

bleak
07-22-2018, 07:53 PM
Great match I can go however many

Saint
07-22-2018, 08:39 PM
12

bleak
07-26-2018, 12:05 AM
My heat infinite, he been here a minute but this guy's gotta die.
I'm a threat in this. but when Inf in it he's forever losing time, after time
Bitch it's NOT safe. Stop faking or I'll serrate this opp's face
Duct w/ me... BUCK 50! I'll roll from the edge w/ the blade like Scotch tape
I'll send the goons to rape and pillage ur honey's mouth, &
if u let her slip: Handled from both sides in a Yeti's grip like Summer outings.
Cashius called ur trash out, and bad mouthed u as a lame geek.
W/o Len I'd have smashed yall. Now I'm castrating both in the same week.
Your CAREER was ended by Knuck in that Fight Night, a tragic loss.
YOU contend for titles? Out here making retired chumps look like Isaac Frost
He been on a cold streak. No quotes to speak of, this fella is a random.
MY shooter was flown in, &playing NO GAMES like Melo in Atlanta
Y'all settle down when Metal Speak. I'll deliver the Mac now
Lift the FIFTH, I'm on a Bender... then open ur chest and pull IT back out
Silenced sticks. I'm a Whisper in the Wind but Inf is in trouble.
Choppa is ur Twist of Fate. Hit w/ Swanton force when I Lift off the Buckle

Bro I told you not to post 12, I've had 16 up all week

Saint
07-28-2018, 04:53 AM
Shit's in the bag...Maan it's a sin losing to Cashtration again..
S'like us two hit the lottery the same week...'cause I'm splitting Cash w/ the Win
FN i was robbed...+ 'Snatch forfeited after a long revival..
Showin up was suicide...An I'm movin from body to body like bad karmic cycles
I've seen ur aunt too, that fat bitch couldnt hide inna corner..
'Planet Fitness' would judge her squeezin thru front doors cuz she's the size of the former
I blam my man...dammit fam, i get a rush to shoot my enemies..
I'll 'put on a clinic then give B 12 shots' that'll shed pounds & boost my energy
i'll have ur brain chemistry on display, one shot & now ur demise..
We'll see Neuro Chemicals splash ppl & cant wash that image outta their eyes
An the thought of this creep bein smooth w / ladies been wrong
Get sprayed in the face w Masonry main calm...cuz bleak's always hittin brick walls
You broke bum...Holding out years for a job? Dog, make no mistakes
Be honest, ur 'Working Title's been in development' longer than films w/ placeholder names
Bleaks a snitch faggot. it's a shame girl...make this lame hurl
But if i catch this queen singing? i'd put flame to his whip faster than Waynes World

bleak
07-29-2018, 02:25 PM
Hello

Em Kay Gee
07-29-2018, 04:14 PM
My heat infinite, he been here a minute but this guy's gotta die.
I'm a threat in this. but when Inf in it he's forever losing time, after time
Your CAREER was ended by Knuck in that Fight Night, a tragic loss.
YOU contend for titles? Out here making retired chumps look like Isaac Frost
He been on a cold streak. No quotes to speak of, this fella is a random.
MY shooter was flown in, &playing NO GAMES like Melo in Atlanta

vs

Shit's in the bag...Maan it's a sin losing to Cashtration again..
S'like us two hit the lottery the same week...'cause I'm splitting Cash w/ the Win
FN i was robbed...+ 'Snatch forfeited after a long revival..
Showin up was suicide...An I'm movin from body to body like bad karmic cycles
I blam my man...dammit fam, i get a rush to shoot my enemies..
I'll 'put on a clinic then give B 12 shots' that'll shed pounds & boost my energy

thought the masonry w/p could've been fire but the fact that it didn't work both ways weakened it for me. Appreciated the fight night punch with frost thought it was smooth. The Melo to the hawks line was smooth too. Inf in it / infinite losses was clever as well. I thought inf was cool too, the b12 line was cool but I thought the wording was iffy and the fact that you went 16 weakened it. other two lines were smooth. overall I gotta go with Bleak. felt he had the better verse.

v-Bleak

Allen Knight
07-29-2018, 04:29 PM
My heat infinite, he been here a minute but this guy's gotta die.
I'm a threat in this. but when Inf in it he's forever losing time, after time
^^^Solid flip for the opener
Bitch it's NOT safe. Stop faking or I'll serrate this opp's face
Duct w/ me... BUCK 50! I'll roll from the edge w/ the blade like Scotch tape
^^^Good swag shit was smooth but it was an ight bar tbh light
I'll send the goons to rape and pillage ur honey's mouth, &
if u let her slip: Handled from both sides in a Yeti's grip like Summer outings.
^^^Ehh nahh
Cashius called ur trash out, and bad mouthed u as a lame geek.
W/o Len I'd have smashed yall. Now I'm castrating both in the same week.
^^^nah
Your CAREER was ended by Knuck in that Fight Night, a tragic loss.
YOU contend for titles? Out here making retired chumps look like Isaac Frost
^^^Nice
He been on a cold streak. No quotes to speak of, this fella is a random.
MY shooter was flown in, &playing NO GAMES like Melo in Atlanta
^^^Fire
Y'all settle down when Metal Speak. I'll deliver the Mac now
Lift the FIFTH, I'm on a Bender... then open ur chest and pull IT back out
^^^Nice
Silenced sticks. I'm a Whisper in the Wind but Inf is in trouble.
Choppa is ur Twist of Fate. Hit w/ Swanton force when I Lift off the Buckle
^^^Cool flip on a old concept, can't say it was to hard hitting tbh


Vs

Shit's in the bag...Maan it's a sin losing to Cashtration again..
S'like us two hit the lottery the same week...'cause I'm splitting Cash w/ the Win
^^^Nah at this opener
FN i was robbed...+ 'Snatch forfeited after a long revival..
Showin up was suicide...An I'm movin from body to body like bad karmic cycles
^^^Ok
I've seen ur aunt too, that fat bitch couldnt hide inna corner..
'Planet Fitness' would judge her squeezin thru front doors cuz she's the size of the former
^^^Nah light
I blam my man...dammit fam, i get a rush to shoot my enemies..
I'll 'put on a clinic then give B 12 shots' that'll shed pounds & boost my energy
^^^Fire Lotb
i'll have ur brain chemistry on display, one shot & now ur demise..
We'll see Neuro Chemicals splash ppl & cant wash that image outta their eyes
^^^nah
An the thought of this creep bein smooth w / ladies been wrong
Get sprayed in the face w Masonry main calm...cuz bleak's always hittin brick walls
^^^Ok coulda been used wayy better tbh. w/p was there liked the concept
You broke bum...Holding out years for a job? Dog, make no mistakes
Be honest, ur 'Working Title's been in development' longer than films w/ placeholder names
^^^Nope
Bleaks a snitch faggot. it's a shame girl...make this lame hurl
But if i catch this queen singing? i'd put flame to his whip faster than Waynes World
^^^Nice closer


This shits close tbh, i think bleak took it tho, inf had lotb which was fire but i think bleak was more consistent here, good battle had to re read acouple times, props to both. V/Bleak.

Destroyer
07-29-2018, 04:47 PM
I think this battle is pretty close
The fucking B12 shit was fire. I think they were pretty even on quotes
Bleak had
Opener, Frost, closer
Inf had
B12 (lotb) Masonry almost, Wayne’s world

I got to go with inf with that lotb
V/inf

~RustyGunZ~
07-29-2018, 07:57 PM
My heat infinite, he been here a minute but this guy's gotta die.
I'm a threat in this. but when Inf in it he's forever losing time, after time
cool
Bitch it's NOT safe. Stop faking or I'll serrate this opp's face
Duct w/ me... BUCK 50! I'll roll from the edge w/ the blade like Scotch tape
i love the idea but it didn't land to hard
I'll send the goons to rape and pillage ur honey's mouth, &
if u let her slip: Handled from both sides in a Yeti's grip like Summer outings.
same as above
Cashius called ur trash out, and bad mouthed u as a lame geek.
W/o Len I'd have smashed yall. Now I'm castrating both in the same week.
nah
Your CAREER was ended by Knuck in that Fight Night, a tragic loss.
YOU contend for titles? Out here making retired chumps look like Isaac Frost
lmao cool
He been on a cold streak. No quotes to speak of, this fella is a random.
MY shooter was flown in, &playing NO GAMES like Melo in Atlanta
ok
Y'all settle down when Metal Speak. I'll deliver the Mac now
Lift the FIFTH, I'm on a Bender... then open ur chest and pull IT back out
maaan this idea was dope but the connection made no sense. why would the fifth be in his chest?
Silenced sticks. I'm a Whisper in the Wind but Inf is in trouble.
Choppa is ur Twist of Fate. Hit w/ Swanton force when I Lift off the Buckle
cool

9/16

vs

Shit's in the bag...Maan it's a sin losing to Cashtration again..
S'like us two hit the lottery the same week...'cause I'm splitting Cash w/ the Win
nah
FN i was robbed...+ 'Snatch forfeited after a long revival..
Showin up was suicide...An I'm movin from body to body like bad karmic cycles
cool
I've seen ur aunt too, that fat bitch couldnt hide inna corner..
'Planet Fitness' would judge her squeezin thru front doors cuz she's the size of the former
nah
I blam my man...dammit fam, i get a rush to shoot my enemies..
I'll 'put on a clinic then give B 12 shots' that'll shed pounds & boost my energy
cool
i'll have ur brain chemistry on display, one shot & now ur demise..
We'll see Neuro Chemicals splash ppl & cant wash that image outta their eyes
no
An the thought of this creep bein smooth w / ladies been wrong
Get sprayed in the face w Masonry main calm...cuz bleak's always hittin brick walls
cool
You broke bum...Holding out years for a job? Dog, make no mistakes
Be honest, ur 'Working Title's been in development' longer than films w/ placeholder names
so wordy
Bleaks a snitch faggot. it's a shame girl...make this lame hurl
But if i catch this queen singing? i'd put flame to his whip faster than Waynes World
yes

8/16

inf woulda won with one more solid hit

too bad you couldn't be bothered

bleak wins

Twodrop
07-29-2018, 10:21 PM
My heat infinite, he been here a minute but this guy's gotta die.
I'm a threat in this. but when Inf in it he's forever losing time, after time
pretty cool flip, just ok for me
Bitch it's NOT safe. Stop faking or I'll serrate this opp's face
Duct w/ me... BUCK 50! I'll roll from the edge w/ the blade like Scotch tape
fk w/ it
I'll send the goons to rape and pillage ur honey's mouth, &
if u let her slip: Handled from both sides in a Yeti's grip like Summer outings.
Yeti grip? This was a miss imo
Cashius called ur trash out, and bad mouthed u as a lame geek.
W/o Len I'd have smashed yall. Now I'm castrating both in the same week.
light
Your CAREER was ended by Knuck in that Fight Night, a tragic loss.
YOU contend for titles? Out here making retired chumps look like Isaac Frost
did everyone play Fight Night??! I thought the ref was to obscure to be crazy, it was coo after I looked it up
He been on a cold streak. No quotes to speak of, this fella is a random.
MY shooter was flown in, &playing NO GAMES like Melo in Atlanta
ha, fire..lotb so far
Y'all settle down when Metal Speak. I'll deliver the Mac now
Lift the FIFTH, I'm on a Bender... then open ur chest and pull IT back out
I never see fifths of liquor in ice chests, if that is what the reference is, I see what you did tho...decent
Silenced sticks. I'm a Whisper in the Wind but Inf is in trouble.
Choppa is ur Twist of Fate. Hit w/ Swanton force when I Lift off the Buckle
I read it Swan-Tin.. not a wrestling fan..so I didn't get the reference, when I googled didn't get wrestling stuff. Now that I know what it is... Dope ass concept


Shit's in the bag...Maan it's a sin losing to Cashtration again..
S'like us two hit the lottery the same week...'cause I'm splitting Cash w/ the Win
hmmm, decent at best for me
FN i was robbed...+ 'Snatch forfeited after a long revival..
Showin up was suicide...An I'm movin from body to body like bad karmic cycles
really liked the angle, good
I've seen ur aunt too, that fat bitch couldnt hide inna corner..
'Planet Fitness' would judge her squeezin thru front doors cuz she's the size of the former
light
I blam my man...dammit fam, i get a rush to shoot my enemies..
I'll 'put on a clinic then give B 12 shots' that'll shed pounds & boost my energy
fire
i'll have ur brain chemistry on display, one shot & now ur demise..
We'll see Neuro Chemicals splash ppl & cant wash that image outta their eyes
not feeling this one
An the thought of this creep bein smooth w / ladies been wrong
Get sprayed in the face w Masonry main calm...cuz bleak's always hittin brick walls
liked this
You broke bum...Holding out years for a job? Dog, make no mistakes
Be honest, ur 'Working Title's been in development' longer than films w/ placeholder names
na...
Bleaks a snitch faggot. it's a shame girl...make this lame hurl
But if i catch this queen singing? i'd put flame to his whip faster than Waynes World
yuuup


I read this a few times....dope battle. Not my favorite verse from Inf, Bleak had some really creative lines this week, I want to take awway points for a couple odd references..but I get it, most of u are pro wrestling fans, lol..but now after 2-3 reads...Bleak got it, imo.

v/bleak

Ryno
07-29-2018, 10:37 PM
My heat infinite, he been here a minute but this guy's gotta die.
I'm a threat in this. but when Inf in it he's forever losing time, after time
-haha ok
Bitch it's NOT safe. Stop faking or I'll serrate this opp's face
Duct w/ me... BUCK 50! I'll roll from the edge w/ the blade like Scotch tape
-ehhh
I'll send the goons to rape and pillage ur honey's mouth, &
if u let her slip: Handled from both sides in a Yeti's grip like Summer outings.
-nah fam
Cashius called ur trash out, and bad mouthed u as a lame geek.
W/o Len I'd have smashed yall. Now I'm castrating both in the same week.
-not feeling this
Your CAREER was ended by Knuck in that Fight Night, a tragic loss.
YOU contend for titles? Out here making retired chumps look like Isaac Frost
-okish
He been on a cold streak. No quotes to speak of, this fella is a random.
MY shooter was flown in, &playing NO GAMES like Melo in Atlanta
-doesnt rhyme to me, must be an accent thing
Y'all settle down when Metal Speak. I'll deliver the Mac now
Lift the FIFTH, I'm on a Bender... then open ur chest and pull IT back out
-nasty
Silenced sticks. I'm a Whisper in the Wind but Inf is in trouble.
Choppa is ur Twist of Fate. Hit w/ Swanton force when I Lift off the Buckle
-a lot going on here but nothin hard

vs

Shit's in the bag...Maan it's a sin losing to Cashtration again..
S'like us two hit the lottery the same week...'cause I'm splitting Cash w/ the Win
-okish
FN i was robbed...+ 'Snatch forfeited after a long revival..
Showin up was suicide...An I'm movin from body to body like bad karmic cycles
-ehhh
I've seen ur aunt too, that fat bitch couldnt hide inna corner..
'Planet Fitness' would judge her squeezin thru front doors cuz she's the size of the former
-not feeling this
I blam my man...dammit fam, i get a rush to shoot my enemies..
I'll 'put on a clinic then give B 12 shots' that'll shed pounds & boost my energy
-this is ok
i'll have ur brain chemistry on display, one shot & now ur demise..
We'll see Neuro Chemicals splash ppl & cant wash that image outta their eyes
-light
An the thought of this creep bein smooth w / ladies been wrong
Get sprayed in the face w Masonry main calm...cuz bleak's always hittin brick walls
-like this
You broke bum...Holding out years for a job? Dog, make no mistakes
Be honest, ur 'Working Title's been in development' longer than films w/ placeholder names
-ehhh
Bleaks a snitch faggot. it's a shame girl...make this lame hurl
But if i catch this queen singing? i'd put flame to his whip faster than Waynes World
-havent seen this in awhile, reference is a blurr

v-Inf. I liked his creativity even though they werent stingers. Felt like bleak had too many misses