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07-30-2018, 07:29 AM
The Summer Classic ‘18
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

bleak Ghost1

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday,
August 2nd, 2018 @ 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due Tuesday, July 31st, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST
Voting ends Saturday, August 4th, 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 48 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.



Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines


General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

Ghost1
07-30-2018, 10:51 AM
take it easy on me my guy lets say 14

bleak
07-30-2018, 11:09 AM
Yes

bleak
08-03-2018, 02:06 PM
This shit is NOT fake, gang keep the glock raised to roast this bloke.
if WE get to Ghost hunting, they'd need a Digital Recorder to quote ur posts.
slide in ur shower door: wifey gasps, I think I'll take some ass today
Sig at her face/yo bitch at my fingertips, butt to the glass like an ashtray.
If I Road Rage, the chains will put ur Frame on Wheels &ur dead quick
Smash pedals while you hang over 2 bars, and a basket to catch ur head with
I Bang the semi, Dap my homies. Skedaddle before this dude rap
This that new Scat soul. You don't know wtf u hearing besides BOOM BAP
Man I got Hogan pythons, arms so big I could smash w/ one blow
Snatch his hoe. THIS Ghost got smaller arms than the Snapchat logo
They say I'm slick w/ words, an artist. U form rogue circles of swallowers
I could Con "spirit" or gun him down, hundred rounds for THOSE followers
I tip the scale. Biggest whale in this, winning's what I'm s'posed to do.
BITCH if I Grip the Rail, I'll flip you upside down w/ metal like coaster loops.

Ghost1
08-03-2018, 05:28 PM
ur love life's looking bland, not mushy man. u lost the spark..
so call the fire department, ur girl's pussy cant get off of barc
-cat out the tree lol but not really, decent
Papa Bless

Btw I don't look anything like that fat Strikta lite bitch. Y'all keep acting like I'm fat but I look more like Bags than Joe Metts lmao. Not as big for sure Bags been working since I left but I ain't fat by any stretch of Inno's imagination


lol at ya big ass...ill show up to ya gym fast
an hand u a salad like have some iceberg slim...then lay u out stiff as a pimp slap
ill get u in shape if its the last thing u do in ya horrible life
make u hold the AR barrel to ya face...have u do the shake weight workout b4 u die
u smokin? i think about u an wonder..is he that looney?
oughtta get a space helmet w them moonrocks cuz u look more like the kid in that movie
an that fire dept bar? u said that shit was dece?
now im loaded w the mac in the jeep, let it barc on this pussy ...aint no cats in a tree
ehbody know im insane, choppa blow a hole in ya fade
i keep the chrome wen i load it an bang? it leave ya wig dusted like the victorian age
for battling said u was nice...well i have my own doubts
thought u could rely on zelph... now u prayin them posts gon support u like diodes house
bleak!? say he aint washed up...it be hard to prove
so if i mention memphis bleak its only cuz tennesee ya state getting scorched like a bbq

King Karaoke
08-03-2018, 06:46 PM
Hi...

This shit is NOT fake, gang keep the glock raised to roast this bloke.
if WE get to Ghost hunting, they'd need a Digital Recorder to quote ur posts.
Smh wasted concept
slide in ur shower door: wifey gasps, I think I'll take some ass today
Sig at her face/yo bitch at my fingertips, butt to the glass like an ashtray.
what year is it?
If I Road Rage, the chains will put ur Frame on Wheels &ur dead quick
Smash pedals while you hang over 2 bars, and a basket to catch ur head with
lol wtf?
I Bang the semi, Dap my homies. Skedaddle before this dude rap
This that new Scat soul. You don't know wtf u hearing besides BOOM BAP
ok
Man I got Hogan pythons, arms so big I could smash w/ one blow
Snatch his hoe. THIS Ghost got smaller arms than the Snapchat logo
your best line
They say I'm slick w/ words, an artist. U form rogue circles of swallowers
I could Con "spirit" or gun him down, hundred rounds for THOSE followers
oh this is just bad
I tip the scale. Biggest whale in this, winning's what I'm s'posed to do.
BITCH if I Grip the Rail, I'll flip you upside down w/ metal like coaster loops.
this is retarded

Wasnt expecting a great verse from you so Im not surprised with the final product. A lot of your lines felt forced. Seems like you thought that they were intricate but in reality they were nonsensical and poorly executed.


u smokin? i think about u an wonder..is he that looney?
oughtta get a space helmet w them moonrocks cuz u look more like the kid in that movie
ehbody know im insane, choppa blow a hole in ya fade
i keep the chrome wen i load it an bang? it leave ya wig dusted like the victorian age
for battling said u was nice...well i have my own doubts
thought u could rely on zelph... now u prayin them posts gon support u like diodes house

Didnt really have to do much to get this win. dusted wig line was cool.

Vote- Bags...

Bye...

Aero
08-04-2018, 03:47 PM
Bleak - digital recorder I’m not sure what you’re getting at // think I’ll take some ass today? Lol confirmed rapist. Butt to glass nice concept this could’ve been simplified though // basket bike is Avg horrocore // boom bap loooool likes the swag here nice // Snapchat logo okay // conspirator was a nice attempt but light // grip the rail Flip was cool.


Ghost1 - lol @ the last quote nullifying Bleak’s Hogan arms claim. Iceberg line was just okay but it was cute // fumbled the shake weight concept that could’ve been dope // a reference to his looks and an old movie. Nah // lol @ find any excuse to diss Barc. Delivered kinda same as last week’s. It’s okay // Victorian age wig dusted was niiiice likes the delivery // post support okay // Tennessee line could’ve been good but underdeveloped


Sigh too close to call again. I’ll have to do points. People really play to their competition I guess.


Ghost 1 = 18.2
Bleak = 17.9



Mvgt Ghost1

Ryno
08-04-2018, 07:30 PM
This shit is NOT fake, gang keep the glock raised to roast this bloke.
if WE get to Ghost hunting, they'd need a Digital Recorder to quote ur posts.
-this is ok
slide in ur shower door: wifey gasps, I think I'll take some ass today
Sig at her face/yo bitch at my fingertips, butt to the glass like an ashtray.
-not feeling the execution
If I Road Rage, the chains will put ur Frame on Wheels &ur dead quick
Smash pedals while you hang over 2 bars, and a basket to catch ur head with
-nah
I Bang the semi, Dap my homies. Skedaddle before this dude rap
This that new Scat soul. You don't know wtf u hearing besides BOOM BAP
-no sir
Man I got Hogan pythons, arms so big I could smash w/ one blow
Snatch his hoe. THIS Ghost got smaller arms than the Snapchat logo
-lol
They say I'm slick w/ words, an artist. U form rogue circles of swallowers
I could Con "spirit" or gun him down, hundred rounds for THOSE followers
-nah man nah
I tip the scale. Biggest whale in this, winning's what I'm s'posed to do.
BITCH if I Grip the Rail, I'll flip you upside down w/ metal like coaster loops.
-eh alil light


vs

ol at ya big ass...ill show up to ya gym fast
an hand u a salad like have some iceberg slim...then lay u out stiff as a pimp slap
-lol
ill get u in shape if its the last thing u do in ya horrible life
make u hold the AR barrel to ya face...have u do the shake weight workout b4 u die
-not feeling this
u smokin? i think about u an wonder..is he that looney?
oughtta get a space helmet w them moonrocks cuz u look more like the kid in that movie
-like the tie ins here..ok
an that fire dept bar? u said that shit was dece?
now im loaded w the mac in the jeep, let it barc on this pussy ...aint no cats in a tree
-nice
ehbody know im insane, choppa blow a hole in ya fade
i keep the chrome wen i load it an bang? it leave ya wig dusted like the victorian age
-nasty
for battling said u was nice...well i have my own doubts
thought u could rely on zelph... now u prayin them posts gon support u like diodes house
-unfamiliar w/ the reference
bleak!? say he aint washed up...it be hard to prove
so if i mention memphis bleak its only cuz tennesee ya state getting scorched like a bbq
-didnt like the execution

v/Ghost...Bleak only had a line or two i liked. i thought the middle of ghosts verse was enough for him to take the dub

Hush
08-05-2018, 09:11 AM
This shit is NOT fake, gang keep the glock raised to roast this bloke.
if WE get to Ghost hunting, they'd need a Digital Recorder to quote ur posts.
Ehhhh
slide in ur shower door: wifey gasps, I think I'll take some ass today
Sig at her face/yo bitch at my fingertips, butt to the glass like an ashtray.
Cool punch . Work on ur wording
If I Road Rage, the chains will put ur Frame on Wheels &ur dead quick
Smash pedals while you hang over 2 bars, and a basket to catch ur head with
Literally don’t understand what u trying to say
I Bang the semi, Dap my homies. Skedaddle before this dude rap
This that new Scat soul. You don't know wtf u hearing besides BOOM BAP
Dope idea . U need to fix ur wording
Man I got Hogan pythons, arms so big I could smash w/ one blow
Snatch his hoe. THIS Ghost got smaller arms than the Snapchat logo
Ehhh
They say I'm slick w/ words, an artist. U form rogue circles of swallowers
I could Con "spirit" or gun him down, hundred rounds for THOSE followers
I don’t get what ur saying
I tip the scale. Biggest whale in this, winning's what I'm s'posed to do.
BITCH if I Grip the Rail, I'll flip you upside down w/ metal like coaster loops.
Kinda dope



lol at ya big ass...ill show up to ya gym fast
an hand u a salad like have some iceberg slim...then lay u out stiff as a pimp slap
Ok so ur not rhyming cool
ill get u in shape if its the last thing u do in ya horrible life
make u hold the AR barrel to ya face...have u do the shake weight workout b4 u die
No really . Just not gonna rhyme this round huh
u smokin? i think about u an wonder..is he that looney?
oughtta get a space helmet w them moonrocks cuz u look more like the kid in that movie
Nah
an that fire dept bar? u said that shit was dece?
now im loaded w the mac in the jeep, let it barc on this pussy ...aint no cats in a tree
Ok
ehbody know im insane, choppa blow a hole in ya fade
i keep the chrome wen i load it an bang? it leave ya wig dusted like the victorian age
Dope
for battling said u was nice...well i have my own doubts
thought u could rely on zelph... now u prayin them posts gon support u like diodes house
Ehhh
bleak!? say he aint washed up...it be hard to prove
so if i mention memphis bleak its only cuz tennesee ya state getting scorched like a bbq
Eh




This was close lol


Bleak had better ideas MAYBE but wording sucked . Bags had one good line. Only full line of the battle . A lot of eh almost moments from both


Bags barely on the strength of the line of the verse

DynamiCz
08-05-2018, 12:20 PM
This shit is NOT fake, gang keep the glock raised to roast this bloke.
if WE get to Ghost hunting, they'd need a Digital Recorder to quote ur posts.

Wasn't feeling this opener to much here...

slide in ur shower door: wifey gasps, I think I'll take some ass today
Sig at her face/yo bitch at my fingertips, butt to the glass like an ashtray.

Butt/Glass ashtray reference is kinda played...line was still decent tho

If I Road Rage, the chains will put ur Frame on Wheels &ur dead quick
Smash pedals while you hang over 2 bars, and a basket to catch ur head with

Didn't really understand this one to tough here...Idk maybe its the wording

I Bang the semi, Dap my homies. Skedaddle before this dude rap
This that new Scat soul. You don't know wtf u hearing besides BOOM BAP

Lol, come on bleak....this is def a filter line. Not feeling it at all

Man I got Hogan pythons, arms so big I could smash w/ one blow
Snatch his hoe. THIS Ghost got smaller arms than the Snapchat logo

Lol, now this is nice here!

They say I'm slick w/ words, an artist. U form rogue circles of swallowers
I could Con "spirit" or gun him down, hundred rounds for THOSE followers


Didn't really get this one here

I tip the scale. Biggest whale in this, winning's what I'm s'posed to do.
BITCH if I Grip the Rail, I'll flip you upside down w/ metal like coaster loops

Decent closer here! Bleak bro I def seen much much better work from you battle wise. This was a ok verse tho. Props

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lol at ya big ass...ill show up to ya gym fast
an hand u a salad like have some iceberg slim...then lay u out stiff as a pimp slap

Lmao funny ass opener

ill get u in shape if its the last thing u do in ya horrible life
make u hold the AR barrel to ya face...have u do the shake weight workout b4 u die

This was nice actually, I like this here. Wording a bit stretched, but it hit for me

u smokin? i think about u an wonder..is he that looney?
oughtta get a space helmet w them moonrocks cuz u look more like the kid in that movie

Basic here bro.....wasn't feeling it to much...

an that fire dept bar? u said that shit was dece?
now im loaded w the mac in the jeep, let it barc on this pussy ...aint no cats in a tree

Nice jab here

ehbody know im insane, choppa blow a hole in ya fade
i keep the chrome wen i load it an bang? it leave ya wig dusted like the victorian age

Lol, this was decent...could have been harsher if the wording was right...

for battling said u was nice...well i have my own doubts
thought u could rely on zelph... now u prayin them posts gon support u like diodes house

Fiyaaaa!!!!

bleak!? say he aint washed up...it be hard to prove
so if i mention memphis bleak its only cuz tennesee ya state getting scorched like a bbq

Ehhh, light closer, decent at best...no effect tho...Props on a nice verse here Bags...

Alright nice shit to both here, bleak had a lot of filler in his verse and some bad wording behind it. Kind of made some of his execution come up light, where Bags had filler as well, but also he had lines that did damage. I got Bags here with the better overall verse & less misses.

V-Bags