Blue Bayou vs Witty - BLUE BAYOU WINS

[Cred]

The Summer Classic ‘18
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

Witty Blue Bayou

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday,
August 2nd, 2018 @ 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due Tuesday, July 31st, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST
Voting ends Saturday, August 4th, 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 48 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.



Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines


General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

[Witty]

Check and good luck.

You pick the line limit good sir.

[Blue Bayou]

16 ready when you are

[Cred]

Witty

[Witty]

It's probably going to be tomorrow, unfortunately.

[Witty]

Begging bags for a vote? Really?

Get off Anthony's dick...u scum, come get this roast
Ur Demi Moore...just a heart broken bitch in love with a ghost
U were dope once...but bro now you're just rusty with no shine
I know a bayou's sposed to be stagnant...but you ain't done NOTHING since '09
Crew got an arsenal...but this guy don't need to see the heat we bring
It only take a BB gun to turn BB's insides out and send him to BB King
Man I'll shoot you in public, then kill the witnesses IN the court
Fuck who's watching, I'll whip this hammer out in front of a crowd like the olympic sport
His friends KNOW he's gay..they went to the beach once, n noticed dude quite poised
Cuz there was a WHOLE BUNCH of women there...and Blue Eyed Boys
Hosted two fight nights cuz u lost the first then got a thought up in your head
Like 'Yo, if at first you don't succeed...just rob someone instead'
We got a Will Smith thread...n compared to u his bars look FAR advanced
This chopper bigger than uncle phil...it'll make you do the carlton dance
Fuck it I'm done...I gave u all my lines, let that heat spray...
Just one more thing...
IF BAGS VOTES FOR YOU HERE YOU GETTING DISQUALIFIED FOR A PRE-SWAY

[Blue Bayou]

Witty:It was my birthday today.

Hope it's my last.


a fucking emo european, applied for work & the head hunter frowned..
wish this Catacomb his hair & stop referring to his style as 'French Underground'
i'll shoot ur emo ass AND make sure ur gay lover is snuffed..
cuz ima Bad Hombre…you just get mad when u get a bad ombre colour & cut
he's an effeminate man whose fashion is a sin, i’ll tap him on the chin..
the way ‘Sundresses’ i've seen women rock those look more masculine then him
this guy is frontin, line for line i'm in my prime & stuntin..
fuck w/e ‘Heathrows’ .. i got uppercuts that'll realllly make em Fly in London
i'll laugh at what this square'll reference while i shoot at his apparel flexin..
Sawed-off to his sternum..this frail bitch can finally say that hes Barrel Chested
i'm chosen 1st in sports, seen as precise cuz i'm mean w/ some bite..
you're just a 2nd rate writer & Topical never be something u'll be in ur life
this footy lovin fruit is a puss, NOTHING could ever get this man ta see me..
closest he’ll ever get to ‘having the Stones’ is drafting John in his fantasy league
don't compare us, i'm levels above & just dropped this damn geek..
i'll be seen as Nevertheless.. funny since this battle will end Notwitstanding

[Flow]

Get off Anthony's dick...u scum, come get this roast
Ur Demi Moore...just a heart broken bitch in love with a ghost

OK/light.. Bit obvious where it was going an took away from the sting

U were dope once...but bro now you're just rusty with no shine
I know a bayou's sposed to be stagnant...but you ain't done NOTHING since '09

Surprised if this isn't played against him but new to me. Liked the personal

Crew got an arsenal...but this guy don't need to see the heat we bring
It only take a BB gun to turn BB's insides out and send him to BB King

LOL this is nuts.

Man I'll shoot you in public, then kill the witnesses IN the court
Fuck who's watching, I'll whip this hammer out in front of a crowd like the olympic sport

Meh I didn't fancy this tbh

His friends KNOW he's gay..they went to the beach once, n noticed dude quite poised
Cuz there was a WHOLE BUNCH of women there...and Blue Eyed Boys

Cheesy

Hosted two fight nights cuz u lost the first then got a thought up in your head
Like 'Yo, if at first you don't succeed...just rob someone instead'

Lmao

We got a Will Smith thread...n compared to u his bars look FAR advanced
This chopper bigger than uncle phil...it'll make you do the carlton dance

Coo n unique gun bar. Imagery an referencing sold it

Fuck it I'm done...I gave u all my lines, let that heat spray...
Just one more thing...
IF BAGS VOTES FOR YOU HERE YOU GETTING DISQUALIFIED FOR A PRE-SWAY

Almost a presway in itself lol

Vs

a fucking emo european, applied for work & the head hunter frowned..
wish this Catacomb his hair & stop referring to his style as 'French Underground'

I think given the genius concept at work here you let yourself down a bit with the wording an execution.. However this bar is clever an still solid. Jus could of been so much more.

i'll shoot ur emo ass AND make sure ur gay lover is snuffed..
cuz ima Bad Hombre…you just get mad when u get a bad ombre colour & cut

OK. Light

he's an effeminate man whose fashion is a sin, i’ll tap him on the chin..
the way ‘Sundresses’ i've seen women rock those look more masculine then him

Maybe it's me sure your wording isnt as crisp as usual. Still decent bar. Easy move but hit.

this guy is frontin, line for line i'm in my prime & stuntin..
fuck w/e ‘Heathrows’ .. i got uppercuts that'll realllly make em Fly in London

Cool

i'll laugh at what this square'll reference while i shoot at his apparel flexin..
Sawed-off to his sternum..this frail bitch can finally say that hes Barrel Chested

Surely this played but fresh to me. Hit

i'm chosen 1st in sports, seen as precise cuz i'm mean w/ some bite..
you're just a 2nd rate writer & Topical never be something u'll be in ur life

Hmm I think I knew what you were going for here with topical but it doesn't work for me an takes away from a nice personal angle. Pm me after I vote an clue me in.

this footy lovin fruit is a puss, NOTHING could ever get this man ta see me..
closest he’ll ever get to ‘having the Stones’ is drafting John in his fantasy league

Football bars always go well with me

don't compare us, i'm levels above & just dropped this damn geek..
i'll be seen as Nevertheless.. funny since this battle will end Notwitstanding

Mmmm. I don't know how I feel on this. Again like the idea a lot though



To be honest I enjoyed both and nice to see witty writing I ain't seen him drop since my return. Felt blue came with some really cool ideas and despite me not feeling his wording this time round... Not sure why. But yeah think he took this comfortably. But loved the bb line wit.

Vote blue

[murda sho]

Blue Bayou

a fucking emo european, applied for work & the head hunter frowned..
wish this Catacomb his hair & stop referring to his style as 'French Underground'
i'll shoot ur emo ass AND make sure ur gay lover is snuffed..
cuz ima Bad Hombre…you just get mad when u get a bad ombre colour & cut
he's an effeminate man whose fashion is a sin, i’ll tap him on the chin..
the way ‘Sundresses’ i've seen women rock those look more masculine then him
this guy is frontin, line for line i'm in my prime & stuntin..
fuck w/e ‘Heathrows’ .. i got uppercuts that'll realllly make em Fly in London
i'll laugh at what this square'll reference while i shoot at his apparel flexin..
Sawed-off to his sternum..this frail bitch can finally say that hes Barrel Chested


Witty

U were dope once...but bro now you're just rusty with no shine
I know a bayou's sposed to be stagnant...but you ain't done NOTHING since '09
Crew got an arsenal...but this guy don't need to see the heat we bring
It only take a BB gun to turn BB's insides out and send him to BB King

His friends KNOW he's gay..they went to the beach once, n noticed dude quite poised
Cuz there was a WHOLE BUNCH of women there...and Blue Eyed Boys


Vote: Blue Bayou... his verse started off on fire line after line then it cooled off toward the end, still clean wording and it flowed smoothly so the verse was strong. The lines that I liked from Witty were funny and put together decently, the Blue Eyed Boys shit was fire but I feel the setup coulda been slightly better it was still dope though. Blue had the better verse here though. Line of the battle to me was the sundress shit not because it was out of this world creative but it was executed very clean which gave it more impact, vet shit

[Ghost1]

Begging bags for a vote? Really?

Get off Anthony's dick...u scum, come get this roast
Ur Demi Moore...just a heart broken bitch in love with a ghost

lol i dig

U were dope once...but bro now you're just rusty with no shine
I know a bayou's sposed to be stagnant...but you ain't done NOTHING since '09

yowza

Crew got an arsenal...but this guy don't need to see the heat we bring
It only take a BB gun to turn BB's insides out and send him to BB King

swaggy ...bb stuff played but wasn't really relevant to the play here

Man I'll shoot you in public, then kill the witnesses IN the court
Fuck who's watching, I'll whip this hammer out in front of a crowd like the olympic sport

lol why didn't u just call it shot-put ...still kinda liked this

His friends KNOW he's gay..they went to the beach once, n noticed dude quite poised
Cuz there was a WHOLE BUNCH of women there...and Blue Eyed Boys

lol eh light

Hosted two fight nights cuz u lost the first then got a thought up in your head
Like 'Yo, if at first you don't succeed...just rob someone instead'

lmaoo statement but still funny

We got a Will Smith thread...n compared to u his bars look FAR advanced
This chopper bigger than uncle phil...it'll make you do the carlton dance

I'm sure ive seen this before...its ok

Fuck it I'm done...I gave u all my lines, let that heat spray...
Just one more thing...
IF BAGS VOTES FOR YOU HERE YOU GETTING DISQUALIFIED FOR A PRE-SWAY

damn blue.....u heard the man






a fucking emo european, applied for work & the head hunter frowned..
wish this Catacomb his hair & stop referring to his style as 'French Underground'

this is kindve crazy.....fire

i'll shoot ur emo ass AND make sure ur gay lover is snuffed..
cuz ima Bad Hombre…you just get mad when u get a bad ombre colour & cut

light

he's an effeminate man whose fashion is a sin, i’ll tap him on the chin..
the way ‘Sundresses’ i've seen women rock those look more masculine then him

eh this is average

this guy is frontin, line for line i'm in my prime & stuntin..
fuck w/e ‘Heathrows’ .. i got uppercuts that'll realllly make em Fly in London

ugh... ill come back and look this up if i need to make a tough call on this battle FUCK....here i am back.....ok google lets see....this is good i guess.............i have more questions but I'm not gonna say what this punch actually is for those like my self lol

i'll laugh at what this square'll reference while i shoot at his apparel flexin..
Sawed-off to his sternum..this frail bitch can finally say that hes Barrel Chested

like this

i'm chosen 1st in sports, seen as precise cuz i'm mean w/ some bite..
you're just a 2nd rate writer & Topical never be something u'll be in ur life

underdeveloped

this footy lovin fruit is a puss, NOTHING could ever get this man ta see me..
closest he’ll ever get to ‘having the Stones’ is drafting John in his fantasy league

ok

don't compare us, i'm levels above & just dropped this damn geek..
i'll be seen as Nevertheless.. funny since this battle will end Notwitstanding

i don't dig these convoluted wordplays


catacomb
heathrows
barrel chested

vs

ghost
stagnant
hammer


catacomb was the line of the battle but that stagnant since 09 shit was mean by witty....he coulda got this one ...atleast for me...some blues wordplays just reach too hard for me.....the ones i quoted were all dope tho...catacomb was insane..that was the stand out and the misses were equally subpar from both so blue got it

v bayou


now dq this man

[For Battling]

Get off Anthony's dick...u scum, come get this roast
Ur Demi Moore...just a heart broken bitch in love with a ghost
lol cool
U were dope once...but bro now you're just rusty with no shine
I know a bayou's sposed to be stagnant...but you ain't done NOTHING since '09
good here
Crew got an arsenal...but this guy don't need to see the heat we bring
It only take a BB gun to turn BB's insides out and send him to BB King
nah too much BB usage here, made it bad
Man I'll shoot you in public, then kill the witnesses IN the court
Fuck who's watching, I'll whip this hammer out in front of a crowd like the olympic sport
mmm I wanna like this but I’m just not feelin how it was done
His friends KNOW he's gay..they went to the beach once, n noticed dude quite poised
Cuz there was a WHOLE BUNCH of women there...and Blue Eyed Boys
decent here, had potential for more but didn’t happen unfortunately
Hosted two fight nights cuz u lost the first then got a thought up in your head
Like 'Yo, if at first you don't succeed...just rob someone instead'
lol ok
We got a Will Smith thread...n compared to u his bars look FAR advanced
This chopper bigger than uncle phil...it'll make you do the carlton dance
mmm the concept really has no correlation with a gunbar, a miss for me
Fuck it I'm done...I gave u all my lines, let that heat spray...
Just one more thing...
IF BAGS VOTES FOR YOU HERE YOU GETTING DISQUALIFIED FOR A PRE-SWAY
lol this was a good use of the subject. Nice


Vs


a fucking emo european, applied for work & the head hunter frowned..
wish this Catacomb his hair & stop referring to his style as 'French Underground'
damn, nice line
i'll shoot ur emo ass AND make sure ur gay lover is snuffed..
cuz ima Bad Hombre…you just get mad when u get a bad ombre colour & cut
nahhh
he's an effeminate man whose fashion is a sin, i’ll tap him on the chin..
the way ‘Sundresses’ i've seen women rock those look more masculine then him
damn another gay punch? Decent at best here. Sundress wp kinda basic
this guy is frontin, line for line i'm in my prime & stuntin..
fuck w/e ‘Heathrows’ .. i got uppercuts that'll realllly make em Fly in London
alright
i'll laugh at what this square'll reference while i shoot at his apparel flexin..
Sawed-off to his sternum..this frail bitch can finally say that hes Barrel Chested
cool
i'm chosen 1st in sports, seen as precise cuz i'm mean w/ some bite..
you're just a 2nd rate writer & Topical never be something u'll be in ur life
what? Nah...is topical used as wordplay here? Idk but wasn’t feelin this
this footy lovin fruit is a puss, NOTHING could ever get this man ta see me..
closest he’ll ever get to ‘having the Stones’ is drafting John in his fantasy league
this is a reach. Coulda used John stones a lot better and this is coming from a soccer fan
don't compare us, i'm levels above & just dropped this damn geek..
i'll be seen as Nevertheless.. funny since this battle will end Notwitwstanding
nah not feeling this either man

I have witty with 3 misses, blue with 4. Witty had a lot of original concepts that were done pretty cool and I like that he stepped outta his comfort zone with this. Blue kinda OD’ed on gay jokes and I wasn’t feelin some of the wp, idk maybe I’m the sole offender here but I feel like witty edged it.

Vote Witty

[Ryno]

Get off Anthony's dick...u scum, come get this roast
Ur Demi Moore...just a heart broken bitch in love with a ghost
-ok at best
U were dope once...but bro now you're just rusty with no shine
I know a bayou's sposed to be stagnant...but you ain't done NOTHING since '09
-ehh...
Crew got an arsenal...but this guy don't need to see the heat we bring
It only take a BB gun to turn BB's insides out and send him to BB King
-not feeling this
Man I'll shoot you in public, then kill the witnesses IN the court
Fuck who's watching, I'll whip this hammer out in front of a crowd like the olympic sport
-nah
His friends KNOW he's gay..they went to the beach once, n noticed dude quite poised
Cuz there was a WHOLE BUNCH of women there...and Blue Eyed Boys
-this is kinda funny
Hosted two fight nights cuz u lost the first then got a thought up in your head
Like 'Yo, if at first you don't succeed...just rob someone instead'
-not too clever here
We got a Will Smith thread...n compared to u his bars look FAR advanced
This chopper bigger than uncle phil...it'll make you do the carlton dance
-nooooo
Fuck it I'm done...I gave u all my lines, let that heat spray...
Just one more thing...
IF BAGS VOTES FOR YOU HERE YOU GETTING DISQUALIFIED FOR A PRE-SWAY
-nah
vs

a fucking emo european, applied for work & the head hunter frowned..
wish this Catacomb his hair & stop referring to his style as 'French Underground'
-ok
i'll shoot ur emo ass AND make sure ur gay lover is snuffed..
cuz ima Bad Hombre…you just get mad when u get a bad ombre colour & cut
-
he's an effeminate man whose fashion is a sin, i’ll tap him on the chin..
the way ‘Sundresses’ i've seen women rock those look more masculine then him
-i like this
this guy is frontin, line for line i'm in my prime & stuntin..
fuck w/e ‘Heathrows’ .. i got uppercuts that'll realllly make em Fly in London
-nice
i'll laugh at what this square'll reference while i shoot at his apparel flexin..
Sawed-off to his sternum..this frail bitch can finally say that hes Barrel Chested
-this ok
i'm chosen 1st in sports, seen as precise cuz i'm mean w/ some bite..
you're just a 2nd rate writer & Topical never be something u'll be in ur life
-harsh
this footy lovin fruit is a puss, NOTHING could ever get this man ta see me..
closest he’ll ever get to ‘having the Stones’ is drafting John in his fantasy league
-not feeling
don't compare us, i'm levels above & just dropped this damn geek..
i'll be seen as Nevertheless.. funny since this battle will end Notwitstanding
-nah

v-blue bayou. harder hitting punches. more clever

[Kill Spree]

I can do a break down later ... I got blue with the cleaner wording and better concepts. Demi more ghost and stagnant was dope but didn’t feel much of wittys after that. Blue had his opener, sun dresses heathrow was nice.

V/blue

[Destroyer]

Hahha I like reading witty’s stuff

I got stagnant and Carlton dance

Vs

Opener and having the stones

This isn’t the blowout I expected it to be, I’ve seen a lot better from blue. Lot of it was either played or generics. That said, it was even on quotes for me and blue had the far cleverer concepts and did barely enough to take it.

V/bb

[Allen Knight]

Get off Anthony's dick...u scum, come get this roast
Ur Demi Moore...just a heart broken bitch in love with a ghost
^^^lol nice opener
U were dope once...but bro now you're just rusty with no shine
I know a bayou's sposed to be stagnant...but you ain't done NOTHING since '09
^^^fire
Crew got an arsenal...but this guy don't need to see the heat we bring
It only take a BB gun to turn BB's insides out and send him to BB King
^^^nah played as fuck my dude
Man I'll shoot you in public, then kill the witnesses IN the court
Fuck who's watching, I'll whip this hammer out in front of a crowd like the olympic sport
^^^ehh
His friends KNOW he's gay..they went to the beach once, n noticed dude quite poised
Cuz there was a WHOLE BUNCH of women there...and Blue Eyed Boys
^^^lol funny but wasnt hard hittin
Hosted two fight nights cuz u lost the first then got a thought up in your head
Like 'Yo, if at first you don't succeed...just rob someone instead'
^^^coulda been sick personal worded different but its light
We got a Will Smith thread...n compared to u his bars look FAR advanced
This chopper bigger than uncle phil...it'll make you do the carlton dance
^^^nah
Fuck it I'm done...I gave u all my lines, let that heat spray...
Just one more thing...
IF BAGS VOTES FOR YOU HERE YOU GETTING DISQUALIFIED FOR A PRE-SWAY
^^^eh decent i guess


Vs

a fucking emo european, applied for work & the head hunter frowned..
wish this Catacomb his hair & stop referring to his style as 'French Underground'
^^^Cool flip seen the catacomb w/p before but the flip was solid
i'll shoot ur emo ass AND make sure ur gay lover is snuffed..
cuz ima Bad Hombre…you just get mad when u get a bad ombre colour & cut
^^^nah
he's an effeminate man whose fashion is a sin, i’ll tap him on the chin..
the way ‘Sundresses’ i've seen women rock those look more masculine then him
^^^LOl funny liked this, hit nice
this guy is frontin, line for line i'm in my prime & stuntin..
fuck w/e ‘Heathrows’ .. i got uppercuts that'll realllly make em Fly in London
^^^dope had to look up but its nice
i'll laugh at what this square'll reference while i shoot at his apparel flexin..
Sawed-off to his sternum..this frail bitch can finally say that hes Barrel Chested
^^^Played tbh flip wasnt fresh
i'm chosen 1st in sports, seen as precise cuz i'm mean w/ some bite..
you're just a 2nd rate writer & Topical never be something u'll be in ur life
^^^ehhh
this footy lovin fruit is a puss, NOTHING could ever get this man ta see me..
closest he’ll ever get to ‘having the Stones’ is drafting John in his fantasy league
^^^nahh reach here
don't compare us, i'm levels above & just dropped this damn geek..
i'll be seen as Nevertheless.. funny since this battle will end Notwitstanding
^^^dope closer


V/Blue, this was a close one tbh, i can see witty gettin votes.
both had some nice shit here, was feelin wittys stagnant bar shit was fire
one more like that he coulda took it, but blue came a lil more consistent here, Heathrows was nice.. props to both.