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07-30-2018, 07:33 AM
The Summer Classic ‘18
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

Ryno Flow

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday,
August 2nd, 2018 @ 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due Tuesday, July 31st, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST
Voting ends Saturday, August 4th, 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 48 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.



Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines


General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

Ryno
07-30-2018, 07:53 AM
Best of the rookies? This nigga is pussy, Ry aimin’ to hurt dude
Ur the most hyped out of a bad class, Lavar ball should sponsor ur first shoe
Get cocky with me boy n Marvel as i go old yella on a negro
I am Groot cus this the 2nd time a stick blowin a brain up to end an Ego
Oh really ur groot huh? Dumb punk, filler lines’ll leave ya totally roast
My bare hands’ll rip ur Barc, to the point that ur bitching and go totally Ghost
This is my turf now, calm down, trust me u dont wanna tease the beast
Out the gate i’ve been a dawg, u pass yards w/ chihuahua’s & frantically cross the street
Got old school values, lets throw the knucks, no need to lift the boiler
Pussy, come fight night i’ll give u the blues n leave u leakin’ like destroyer
Names flow but for what, slangin’ rhymes aint really ya callin’ see
Call the .45 Kulture, once it pops this bitch’ll be off stage quicker than cardi b
Boss shit, i’ll press the mack n nina to ya features, those rockets gotta hurt
U flinch they’re bound to burst, now ur stuck between to pieces like a micrometer

Flow
08-03-2018, 05:55 AM
Lost to a bar thief last week now you fuckin witta boss
Vipers bite had enough sting to make voters 'believe venom' and you lost
Another British invasion, crossed without the music but I'm bringing a buck
Cus the Macklemore than show this clown he 'can't hold us' when the hands are put up
no tactical espionage I got the metal gear pointing at your heart
who cares bout what Raiden, he been running towards a Big Shell from the start
U sound like a noob who never been in a head to head for a title
so imma just ignore Ryan Seacrest since this american idle
The first rounds a breeze, in the second is where the weak fall through
Last round you got a "bye" but this round it's a "don't call us, we'll call you"
N this tourney dont need u...shit its all our hope that you die
Cus anythin Ricin makes us wish u’d push the envelope and find poison inside

For Battling
08-05-2018, 05:53 PM
Best of the rookies? This nigga is pussy, Ry aimin’ to hurt dude
Ur the most hyped out of a bad class, Lavar ball should sponsor ur first shoe
alright pretty cool here
Oh really ur groot huh? Dumb punk, filler lines’ll leave ya totally roast
My bare hands’ll rip ur Barc, to the point that ur bitching and go totally Ghost
you had a decent concept going but I’m no feelin how you ended
This is my turf now, calm down, trust me u dont wanna tease the beast
Out the gate i’ve been a dawg, u pass yards w/ chihuahua’s & frantically cross the street
lol nah man
Got old school values, lets throw the knucks, no need to lift the boiler
Pussy, come fight night i’ll give u the blues n leave u leakin’ like destroyer
heres another one where you had a cool concept going but didn’t quite finish it off good. Decent
Names flow but for what, slangin’ rhymes aint really ya callin’ see
Call the .45 Kulture, once it pops this bitch’ll be off stage quicker than cardi b
alright not bad
Boss shit, i’ll press the mack n nina to ya features, those rockets gotta hurt
U flinch they’re bound to burst, now ur stuck between to pieces like a micrometer
nah bro


Vs


Lost to a bar thief last week now you fuckin witta boss
Vipers bite had enough sting to make voters 'believe venom' and you lost
this was OK, wasn’t feelin the “believe venom” part. Feel like it could have been better without that
Another British invasion, crossed without the music but I'm bringing a buck
Cus the Macklemore than show this clown he 'can't hold us' when the hands are put up
this was cool, nice wp
no tactical espionage I got the metal gear pointing at your heart
who cares bout what Raiden, he been running towards a Big Shell from the start
in America we pronounce this as “ray-din”, not “ry-din” or “ry-don” lol brits...I’ll give you credit for the language barrier though. The concept was good
U sound like a noob who never been in a head to head for a title
so imma just ignore Ryan Seacrest since this american idle
oh nahhhh man I wasn’t feelin this lol
The first rounds a breeze, in the second is where the weak fall through
Last round you got a "bye" but this round it's a "don't call us, we'll call you"
weird take but i liked this lol
N this tourney dont need u...shit its all our hope that you die
Cus anythin Ricin makes us wish u’d push the envelope and find poison inside
this is cool


Don’t know why this doesn’t have any votes yet, that’s a shame smh. Pretty cool battle here, props to both for dishing out some good lines and showing up. My favorite bar from Ryno was his opener, that was nice. Ryno also had a lot of good ideas and concepts but struggled to finish them out at times, definitely has potential to be dope but just has to tweak a few things. Flow also had a lot of cool ideas and was also able to close out on almost every bar. Cool battle here but I have Flow edging this.


Vote Flow

Blue Bayou
08-05-2018, 06:09 PM
Best of the rookies? This nigga is pussy, Ry aimin’ to hurt dude
Ur the most hyped out of a bad class, Lavar ball should sponsor ur first shoe
nice w/ a good personal hit, dig this
Oh really ur groot huh? Dumb punk, filler lines’ll leave ya totally roast
My bare hands’ll rip ur Barc, to the point that ur bitching and go totally Ghost
nah, I get the attempt just not into it... totally x 2 needed to be changed
This is my turf now, calm down, trust me u dont wanna tease the beast
Out the gate i’ve been a dawg, u pass yards w/ chihuahua’s & frantically cross the street
ehh, not feelin
Got old school values, lets throw the knucks, no need to lift the boiler
Pussy, come fight night i’ll give u the blues n leave u leakin’ like destroyer
hmmm, feel like more couldve been done with it, fell pretty flat
Names flow but for what, slangin’ rhymes aint really ya callin’ see
Call the .45 Kulture, once it pops this bitch’ll be off stage quicker than cardi b
pretty dece
Boss shit, i’ll press the mack n nina to ya features, those rockets gotta hurt
U flinch they’re bound to burst, now ur stuck between to pieces like a micrometer
this was okay


vs.


Lost to a bar thief last week now you fuckin witta boss
Vipers bite had enough sting to make voters 'believe venom' and you lost
solid.. would've used diff wording personally, personal hit
Another British invasion, crossed without the music but I'm bringing a buck
Cus the Macklemore than show this clown he 'can't hold us' when the hands are put up
niiiiice, fresh w/p that was done well
no tactical espionage I got the metal gear pointing at your heart
who cares bout what Raiden, he been running towards a Big Shell from the start
yaaaa it's a hard 'ray-din' for me so it doesn't really work... give you a pass since ur foreign, concept was dope
U sound like a noob who never been in a head to head for a title
so imma just ignore Ryan Seacrest since this american idle
lol, light but it worked and was cool
The first rounds a breeze, in the second is where the weak fall through
Last round you got a "bye" but this round it's a "don't call us, we'll call you"
hmmmm, nah
N this tourney dont need u...shit its all our hope that you die
Cus anythin Ricin makes us wish u’d push the envelope and find poison inside
pretty cool, solid close


Cool battle guys... I've got Flow here tho, better concepts & execution and was more consistent... props to both

Vote - Flow

Destroyer
08-05-2018, 06:15 PM
Got flow taking this pretty handily. Ry just need to work on his concept a little more, simply mentioning another battler’s name on nc’s isn’t really a concept. You can def have potential tho, just work on the bars a bit.
Dug pretty much everything from flow but sea rest, and raiden was a stretch to me

V/flow

~RustyGunZ~
08-05-2018, 10:48 PM
Best of the rookies? This nigga is pussy, Ry aimin’ to hurt dude
Ur the most hyped out of a bad class, Lavar ball should sponsor ur first shoe

Ok

Oh really ur groot huh? Dumb punk, filler lines’ll leave ya totally roast
My bare hands’ll rip ur Barc, to the point that ur bitching and go totally Ghost

Eh

This is my turf now, calm down, trust me u dont wanna tease the beast
Out the gate i’ve been a dawg, u pass yards w/ chihuahua’s & frantically cross the street

Wack

Got old school values, lets throw the knucks, no need to lift the boiler
Pussy, come fight night i’ll give u the blues n leave u leakin’ like destroyer

Nah

Names flow but for what, slangin’ rhymes aint really ya callin’ see
Call the .45 Kulture, once it pops this bitch’ll be off stage quicker than cardi b

Cool

Boss shit, i’ll press the mack n nina to ya features, those rockets gotta hurt
U flinch they’re bound to burst, now ur stuck between to pieces like a micrometer

Awful wording, why not say vice instead of micrometer lmao? Simple connection too



vs

Lost to a bar thief last week now you fuckin witta boss
Vipers bite had enough sting to make voters 'believe venom' and you lost

Ehhhh

Another British invasion, crossed without the music but I'm bringing a buck
Cus the Macklemore than show this clown he 'can't hold us' when the hands are put up

Cool concept not in love with the wording towards the end

no tactical espionage I got the metal gear pointing at your heart
who cares bout what Raiden, he been running towards a Big Shell from the start

Not sure how it ties to a punch? Ry Din? Maybe you mean Ry Done? His name is pronounced Ry Din. Cool idea just forced.

U sound like a noob who never been in a head to head for a title
so imma just ignore Ryan Seacrest since this american idle

Idol* ffs lol. Cool nameplay not the greatest bar.

The first rounds a breeze, in the second is where the weak fall through
Last round you got a "bye" but this round it's a "don't call us, we'll call you"

Liked it, simple

N this tourney dont need u...shit its all our hope that you die
Cus anythin Ricin makes us wish u’d push the envelope and find poison inside

Cool

Both struggled with wording, flow had slightly better concepts though

v/ Flow

BodySnatcher
08-05-2018, 11:03 PM
Best of the rookies? This nigga is pussy, Ry aimin’ to hurt dude
Ur the most hyped out of a bad class, Lavar ball should sponsor ur first shoe
cool line

Quote:
Get cocky with me boy n Marvel as i go old yella on a negro
I am Groot cus this the 2nd time a stick blowin a brain up to end an Ego

Oh really ur groot huh? Dumb punk, filler lines’ll leave ya totally roast
My bare hands’ll rip ur Barc, to the point that ur bitching and go totally Ghost
lol
This is my turf now, calm down, trust me u dont wanna tease the beast
Out the gate i’ve been a dawg, u pass yards w/ chihuahua’s & frantically cross the street
ehhh
Got old school values, lets throw the knucks, no need to lift the boiler
Pussy, come fight night i’ll give u the blues n leave u leakin’ like destroyer
ehh
Names flow but for what, slangin’ rhymes aint really ya callin’ see
Call the .45 Kulture, once it pops this bitch’ll be off stage quicker than cardi b
not bad
Boss shit, i’ll press the mack n nina to ya features, those rockets gotta hurt
U flinch they’re bound to burst, now ur stuck between to pieces like a micrometer
lol oook



Lost to a bar thief last week now you fuckin witta boss
Vipers bite had enough sting to make voters 'believe venom' and you lost
st8
Another British invasion, crossed without the music but I'm bringing a buck
Cus the Macklemore than show this clown he 'can't hold us' when the hands are put up
worded off but cool
no tactical espionage I got the metal gear pointing at your heart
who cares bout what Raiden, he been running towards a Big Shell from the start
ehh
U sound like a noob who never been in a head to head for a title
so imma just ignore Ryan Seacrest since this american idle
st8
The first rounds a breeze, in the second is where the weak fall through
Last round you got a "bye" but this round it's a "don't call us, we'll call you"
lol
N this tourney dont need u...shit its all our hope that you die
Cus anythin Ricin makes us wish u’d push the envelope and find poison inside
decent closer

I got Flow here on a decent battle.