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Cred
07-30-2018, 07:34 AM
The Summer Classic ‘18
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

Knucklehead Killing Spree

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday,
August 2nd, 2018 @ 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due Tuesday, July 31st, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST
Voting ends Saturday, August 4th, 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 48 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.



Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines


General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

Kill Spree
07-30-2018, 07:56 AM
Pics or reg?

~RustyGunZ~
07-30-2018, 09:37 AM
Reg

16

Ghost1
08-03-2018, 04:33 PM
watr u two doin lol

~RustyGunZ~
08-03-2018, 04:35 PM
Well someone deleted our posts about extensions lmao

Not sure why but yeah we’re both showing later Ghost1 spree needed an extra day and I granted it

Ghost1
08-03-2018, 04:45 PM
heard

~RustyGunZ~
08-04-2018, 12:07 AM
Another RB faggot..

Ticks everywhere here... I got lymes shit sucks

This is MY court, think u won't die here? u will really w/ ease
I fucking BLEED Lime, faggot.. and you just got some hillbilly disease
Broads think he the scariest of blokes, ain't got very much to gloat
Cus we know they respond to you with hatred quicker than a Karaoke vote
The real Gunbar van Gogh, ur team see the .50 cal buck & dispense loads
Handshake the belt & start cappin' pussies quicker than Muff in defense mode
Inno & I do work for the culture, & up in here u think I will die?
Against me is suicide, ripped off half the Pod to just get killed - that's cyanide
Got product for junkies, pull up - got the white soft & rock hard
This a set-up.. I'll drop the bag off & catch a body like Indy in the Lost Ark
That creature u captured fueled on yayo & I'ma raw dig'er cold
She loves my hustle.. Point & slam an 8 ball in her after I fill all've her holes
U leavin' this Round w/ leaks, 'cus home girl I flex geeks
Only thing I got in common w/ this BITCH.. is I know I'll see a Flow next week
Against me is a big imbalance - Get seizures when the blicky damage
Uzi have ya dancin' around holdin' ya heart out ya chest like the Shiggy challenge

Kill Spree
08-04-2018, 02:00 AM
No idea why ppl think you're Lyrs or 'Mander.. they'd put u in a sleeper bro
If NCGs think you're Sal via your verses, they must've been on that shit when readin' those

caught ur verse against Mander, what a joke.. i'm bein honest bruh
u lost to Salvia beatdown & ever since u've been writing like ur on the drug

Forget guns, with this herb I'll take one good toke in the brawl
Kill this Salvia, text... it turns out I don't have to do ANY smoking at all



Listen seth.....
Punch Ur face Blue, Dope bars? U ain’t fixed to win
NC got Strikt Lines to follow & we hope U OD'n die B4 biting His again
U wouldnt Fight Hush! Adress & all! this lame gets killed
The day C0in come outa pocket & counter? The day Finny offers to pay a bill
Vic postin weddin pics was all cake! weak;ur labeled
Wife had A future appetite...Looks like on her life she cleaned the table
Blue key tourneys? choked...U dnt bleed this shit
Huff'n Puff bout Fight W/Bags..Now I'll make sure u dnt Breathe again

Lets go back...

Dark secret bros

Suppressed it until one of my buddies in on it brought it up

There was this kid 8 middle school. He died. Tragically and suddenly from falling off a theater stage and seizing. He was dating a chick at the time. She later dated our friend. Broke his heart and cheated on him. He became emo. We trolled her on aim under an alias account saying we were her dead ex and that she is the reason he died. She went into a mental institution.

Worst thing I've ever done. We never told a soul until one of my accomplices mentioned it drunk as fuck a wrrk ago luckily only in front of our friend who knows us all and would totally have done it with us if asked.

Don't know how I forgot about it but I feel dirty being reminded of it

U trolled a child in school, Ur tough talk DNT faze me
I'll shoot @ U till u Dead kid ..& U can go tell ur boy why his cheating GF Went crazy
Its do or die, Depression had her doin guys
Even Muff'll exhaust the girl...tho U drove the bitch to suicide
Abort battling me! Hush exposed u as a fag
Egg'd on ur wife having a gut! To bad she killed a kid she could'a had
Nuff said...make sure this punk swept
Win or lose? U gotta read that quote and feel upset.


Good luck next round. win

bleak
08-04-2018, 03:15 PM
I would quote and breakdown but y all have a lot of quotes and I'm on the tablet, formatting sucks.

Knuck's opener was a solid flip on current event shit and establishes some presence.
2nd hits close to home decent, wording was great
3rd shit fire I saw that last round but still
4th not so much, I don't like that wording style
5th ok, maybe dated
6th burning thru the generics lol it's just ok
7th usually bracket punches don't work unless it's flames, this wasn't that.
8th ok I fuck with it

KS did his research lol let me get this out of the way: your capitalization of words drives me insane. I really want it to not affect my vote so I'm not going to mention it again.

1st was solid, maybe a little too much but only because the setup read choppy. Punch was decent
2nd I really like but another tie in to the finny shit would have been nice. Still I like the flip.
3rd had some humor, your wording is the only thing holding these concepts back.
4th I tried to write a million bags flips this week so I can't appreciate any of these. When I read Huff&Puff I thought it was some Harry potter shit. Tying in another fight night reference could have made it.
5th had potential, just seemed statementish. Could have been brutal is what takes away from it for me.
6th was pretty good, this is probably some of the best stuff I've ever to read from KS, wording still the only thing holding u back in a 16 line battle which is impressive.
7th meh
8th statementish, seems like u felt pressed for time here.

I like this verse

This is closer than I expected, KS did some research this week and I respect it. That said, Knuck's wording is just more polished and it is a better read. As I saw Hush say, respect the setup KS. Opener could have used a drug or bleach reference to tie into Blue, instead of punching. Just an example.

Knucklehead

Allen Knight
08-05-2018, 07:38 PM
This is MY court, think u won't die here? u will really w/ ease
I fucking BLEED Lime, faggot.. and you just got some hillbilly disease
Inno & I do work for the culture, & up in here u think I will die?
Against me is suicide, ripped off half the Pod to just get killed - that's cyanide
Got product for junkies, pull up - got the white soft & rock hard
This a set-up.. I'll drop the bag off & catch a body like Indy in the Lost Ark
That creature u captured fueled on yayo & I'ma raw dig'er cold
She loves my hustle.. Point & slam an 8 ball in her after I fill all've her holes

Vs

Punch Ur face Blue, Dope bars? U ain’t fixed to win
NC got Strikt Lines to follow & we hope U OD'n die B4 biting His again
U wouldnt Fight Hush! Adress & all! this lame gets killed
The day C0in come outa pocket & counter? The day Finny offers to pay a bill
Its do or die, Depression had her doin guys
Even Muff'll exhaust the girl...tho U drove the bitch to suicide

V/Knuckle, i enjoyed this battle...both had some shit i thought was nice,
i like the fucked up harsh shit & kills drove the bitch to suicide line was dope to me,
the ones i quoted were all nice in his verse, but i think knuckle got this on consistency
tbh his non quoted lines were ight also, but the quotes were dope & the indiana bar was fire.
i think if spree didnt waste the last bar w/ a random shit it coulda gone different, props to both.

For Battling
08-06-2018, 12:23 AM
This is MY court, think u won't die here? u will really w/ ease
I fucking BLEED Lime, faggot.. and you just got some hillbilly disease
wasnt feelin
Broads think he the scariest of blokes, ain't got very much to gloat
Cus we know they respond to you with hatred quicker than a Karaoke vote
alright cool and very current
The real Gunbar van Gogh, ur team see the .50 cal buck & dispense loads
Handshake the belt & start cappin' pussies quicker than Muff in defense mode
lol nice take on the muff concept
Inno & I do work for the culture, & up in here u think I will die?
Against me is suicide, ripped off half the Pod to just get killed - that's cyanide
nice
Got product for junkies, pull up - got the white soft & rock hard
This a set-up.. I'll drop the bag off & catch a body like Indy in the Lost Ark
good again
That creature u captured fueled on yayo & I'ma raw dig'er cold
She loves my hustle.. Point & slam an 8 ball in her after I fill all've her holes
nah the wording was bad here and killed any potential
U leavin' this Round w/ leaks, 'cus home girl I flex geeks
Only thing I got in common w/ this BITCH.. is I know I'll see a Flow next week
OK
Against me is a big imbalance - Get seizures when the blicky damage
Uzi have ya dancin' around holdin' ya heart out ya chest like the Shiggy challenge
pretty cool


Vs


Listen seth.....
Punch Ur face Blue, Dope bars? U ain’t fixed to win
NC got Strikt Lines to follow & we hope U OD'n die B4 biting His again
nice, good personal
U wouldnt Fight Hush! Adress & all! this lame gets killed
The day C0in come outa pocket & counter? The day Finny offers to pay a bill
good again
Vic postin weddin pics was all cake! weak;ur labeled
Wife had A future appetite...Looks like on her life she cleaned the table
ok
Blue key tourneys? choked...U dnt bleed this shit
Huff'n Puff bout Fight W/Bags..Now I'll make sure u dnt Breathe again
mmm decent
U trolled a child in school, Ur tough talk DNT faze me
I'll shoot @ U till u Dead kid ..& U can go tell ur boy why his cheating GF Went crazy
nah
Its do or die, Depression had her doin guys
Even Muff'll exhaust the girl...tho U drove the bitch to suicide
Abort battling me! Hush exposed u as a fag
Egg'd on ur wife having a gut! To bad she killed a kid she could'a had
Nuff said...make sure this punk swept
Win or lose? U gotta read that quote and feel upset.
yeah I think you gave up w/ these and it’s a shame cause you had some good shit going lol


Really good battle here actually. I don’t think I’ve read anything from knuck since he was caught biting from Strikta but he actually had a lot of good lines and was consistent with it. Good shit. Spree also came with some good lines and I wish he didn’t fall off with the last 3-4 lines because he could have possibly taken it. Again nice battle and props to both.


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