Tell niggas be themselves and they nobody

[Hush]

Life’s a head scratcher
Can’t rewrite the book when ur on the tenth chapter
School of hard knocks head master
Playlist full of dead rappers
If I want it I visualize
Bumping notorious big hypnotize
Bad bitch all hips and thighs
Niggas bitch up switching Swides
Depression arise. I’m quick to sigh
New coupe switch the ride rims a different size
Can’t get close to a distant mind
Introvert .. time to dip and hide
Mind state re invent it
Crooked system .. bigger sentence
finger tips dollar scented
You are not authentic
Riding wit the carbon for the carbon copy’s
Ur story fake them scars been copied
Tell niggas be themselves and they nobody

[sral]

Low key fire, shame you don’t write more tbh.

Opening and closing lines were the best to me.

Felt it.

Keep that pen moving!

[veritas]

This would sound good rapped out loud. Well done, brother.

[Hush]

Word thx

[ACTIVATE SELF]

A body on the slick

Tough piece

[PancakeBrah]

I liked the dollar scent line. The whole thing was pretty clean.

[Exis]

Gotta echo Lars, your opener & closer were the best parts...no offense to the middle section tho as that was straight.

Stay nice with it.

[dead man]

Can’t rewrite the book when ur on the tenth chapter
School of hard knocks head master
Playlist full of dead rappers
If I want it I visualize

raw

Mind state re invent it
Crooked system .. bigger sentence
finger tips dollar scented
You are not authentic
Riding wit the carbon for the carbon copy’s

first 3 were great but whole thing was quotable


title and obviously closing line was a good draw, and actually could be extrapolated into something super interesting as well.


thanks

[Geno]

This shit fire homie.

[Kenny]

Dope piece harsh words could really feel does lines hahahaha good one!

[Aero]

Dope piece harsh words could really feel does lines hahahaha good one!

Who you

[Kenny]

Who you

Uhhh someone who likes to write words ... ??

[neutral]

average