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Blue Bayou
08-17-2018, 10:31 PM
12 lines due in 15 mins..

gluck

Ryno

Blue Bayou
08-17-2018, 10:47 PM
since ur probaly Barc you're nothin but a weak biter..
& if im sayin Ryu Ken Fight its only cuz im playin Street Fighter
i'm an assassin, act up i’ll bury you fam..
i know the Rules of Engagement.. ur pissed off u cant marry a man
ur just an actor, i'm not someone u can hope to harm..
Ry n' gauze sling?! ull need both for ur wounds & you're broken arm
reaper blade u'll leak for days, if you even try ur marked..
funny im the Raptors fan but u'll be the one that's gunna take Masai to Heart
soon as i mention great pussy you just start to frown..
i'm getting girls 'Out-skirts'.. ur grungy ass is pulling bitches from that part of town
i'm like Gotti on the block cuz this shotty's gunna pop..
bitch i'm Flossin.. these '2 Arms Wavin' will ensure that ur Body's getting Rocked

Ryno
08-17-2018, 10:48 PM
This pussy is a heathen, 1 dial n my killers get to squeezin’
The way i keep that phone for the kill, u’d think that i was on some Scream shit
if i pop the trunk its over, ill proceed to keep that broom rainin'
Choppa singing till u hit the ground, wayyyy quicker than aretha franklin
N we know ur wifes a slut, but my homies fuck her on sight
Every ten minutes she’s gettin’ tagged, her bedrooms almost a fight night
I’ve got a shotgun on stand by, tbh that bitch is gnarly
It’ll paint ya face upon entrance, guess we should call u jeff hardy
Let it be known i’ll be at ya home, ryno is known to get it in
Barge in n slide the blade in u n ya fam, i dont give af if ur law abiding citizen

Blue Bayou
08-17-2018, 10:51 PM
VOTESSSS

Raizen
08-17-2018, 11:19 PM
since ur probaly Barc you're nothin but a weak biter..
& if im sayin Ryu Ken Fight its only cuz im playin Street Fighter


This is a stretch.

i'm an assassin, act up i’ll bury you fam..
i know the Rules of Engagement.. ur pissed off u cant marry a man

He can legally marry a dude in any state now. Maybe this would've worked like six or seven years ago.

ur just an actor, i'm not someone u can hope to harm..
Ry n' gauze sling?! yaa ull need both for ur wounds & you're broken arm

This is REALLY stretched

funny im the Raptors fan but u'll be the one that's gunna take Masai to Heart
soon as i mention great pussy you just start to frown.
i'm getting girls 'Out-skirts'.. ur grungy ass is pulling bitches from that part of town

a lot more could've been with this, if you had more time. As it is, it doesn't really hit, outskirts aren't automatically or even typically bad

i'm like Gotti on the block bitch this shotty's gunna pop..
bitch i'm Flossin.. these '2 Arms Wavin' will ensure that ur Body's getting Rocked

it's okay. possibly your best line, but not great



Ryno:

his pussy is a heathen, 1 dial n my killers get to squeezin’
The way i keep that phone for the kill, u’d think that i was on some Scream shit
if i pop the trunk its over, ill proceed to keep that broom rainin'
Choppa singing till u hit the ground, wayyyy quicker than aretha franklin
N we know ur wifes a slut, but my homies fuck her on sight
Every ten minutes she’s gettin’ tagged, her bedrooms almost a fight night

These were tight. I knew I'd see an Aretha Franklin line on this site, but, but you managed to make it hit. Your wording and delivery were pretty good. Didn't like the rest of your lines at all, but these were more than enough to win.

v/ Ryno

Twodrop
08-18-2018, 02:39 AM
v barc

Victor.
08-18-2018, 10:32 AM
Blue wins for being less generic

King Karaoke
08-18-2018, 12:50 PM
Hi...

since ur probaly Barc you're nothin but a weak biter..
& if im sayin Ryu Ken Fight its only cuz im playin Street Fighter
This was cool...
i'm an assassin, act up i’ll bury you fam..
i know the Rules of Engagement.. ur pissed off u cant marry a man
I liked this...
ur just an actor, i'm not someone u can hope to harm..
Ry n' gauze sling?! ull need both for ur wounds & you're broken arm
lol cmon man
reaper blade u'll leak for days, if you even try ur marked..
funny im the Raptors fan but u'll be the one that's gunna take Masai to Heart
I liked this too...
soon as i mention great pussy you just start to frown..
i'm getting girls 'Out-skirts'.. ur grungy ass is pulling bitches from that part of town
This was cool...
i'm like Gotti on the block cuz this shotty's gunna pop..
bitch i'm Flossin.. these '2 Arms Wavin' will ensure that ur Body's getting Rocked
ok...

Good verse. Consistent. I really hated the gosling line.

This pussy is a heathen, 1 dial n my killers get to squeezin’
The way i keep that phone for the kill, u’d think that i was on some Scream shit
Nah...
if i pop the trunk its over, ill proceed to keep that broom rainin'
Choppa singing till u hit the ground, wayyyy quicker than aretha franklin
Nope...
N we know ur wifes a slut, but my homies fuck her on sight
Every ten minutes she’s gettin’ tagged, her bedrooms almost a fight night
This was ok...
I’ve got a shotgun on stand by, tbh that bitch is gnarly
It’ll paint ya face upon entrance, guess we should call u jeff hardy
Best line...
Let it be known i’ll be at ya home, ryno is known to get it in
Barge in n slide the blade in u n ya fam, i dont give af if ur law abiding citizen
Wtf...

Verse was too simple. Seems like you didnt even bother to develop your concepts.

Vote_Blue Bayou...

Bye...

Barcotic
08-25-2018, 09:11 AM
eww @ calling me ryno

no sir
v/blue bayou

his wp won this, easily

For Battling
08-25-2018, 09:26 AM
Ahh gotta love waking up to some thoroughly detailed barcotic votes!