Bleak vs Dynamicz - Dynamicz wins

[Victor.]

NBL Season 11
Week 7

Due SUNDAY 8/26/18

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


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[bleak]

However many DynamiCz I'll give this more tine

[DynamiCz]

My bad bleak

Shidd...10-12 coo really or ill match

[bleak]

You act like you pop bottles, silence the heat/scopes and swords!
Plz. YOU? A pop will silence my shots & you ain't dope no more.
You crack the top off a 2 liter and Lazyboy, not smoke no whores.
But fgt when I Pop bottles, the 9 giving this bitch some Coke Rewards
LONG BARREL, fuck a Bottle we just dipping after blammin' yall
If I Pop Off at ya Port side, it means the cork was a fucking cannonball
U fuck grimy hoes, like she blindly rose out of a deep basement
I'd threaten your life but you sleep with fishes on a week to week basis.
I got a blunt weapon for ya, but I decided to get with the times &
cop that D40, then bust the top off this silver like rolling a Swisher diamond
While my team sticks banging, I'm tuning ya hoe for slow jams.
All you'll hear is racket over a bitch yelling like screamo bands

Lil something different 12

[DynamiCz]

I promise to hurt ya! I got the ammo ready...something loaded to merk ya
Arm extend out the side, giving more bucks out the window then a toll booth worker
He in a dream..big boy sleep on his stomach! I make the room a bad scene
When the plastic pointing at the back of ya head like the mannequin meme
You liar! Ya aunt do clean up jobs and babysit kids..she was just hired
So i'll shootup the whole house, then let pops turn to the nanny-Ms. Doubtfire
When they showing malice, i understand...in certain cases you need balance
Body had you tying your shoes..running from the screen like the speed challenge
I got the bird chirping like a pet shop! One shot..feel like Hogan did a leg drop
Side of the highway..when they find a body sleep in the car, it ain't a rest stop
Ya verses been on zero! Copying Jabari Black format..i wont say a peep tho
This ain't a disney flow..when i put big machines around the kid like Big 6 Hero

[For Battling]

You act like you pop bottles, silence the heat/scopes and swords!
Plz. YOU? A pop will silence my shots & you ain't dope no more.
wtf was this shit
You crack the top off a 2 liter and Lazyboy, not smoke no whores.
But fgt when I Pop bottles, the 9 giving this bitch some Coke Rewards
another pop bottles line? Do you not know what pop bottles means? Lol
LONG BARREL, fuck a Bottle we just dipping after blammin' yall
If I Pop Off at ya Port side, it means the cork was a fucking cannonball
bleak ur my boy but what the hell are you doing, I feel like this bar and the last bar actually had potential if you hadn’t ruined it with pop bottles bullshit.
Relax tunechi
U fuck grimy hoes, like she blindly rose out of a deep basement
I'd threaten your life but you sleep with fishes on a week to week basis.
decent, could have been better
I got a blunt weapon for ya, but I decided to get with the times &
cop that D40, then bust the top off this silver like rolling a Swisher diamond
times and.....diamond....which idiot on the site is going to pronounce diamond as die man? Lawwwwd have mercy on this fool
While my team sticks banging, I'm tuning ya hoe for slow jams.
All you'll hear is racket over a bitch yelling like screamo bands
alright this was pretty cool


Vs



I promise to hurt ya! I got the ammo ready...something loaded to merk ya
Arm extend out the side, giving more bucks out the window then a toll booth worker
alright
He in a dream..big boy sleep on his stomach! I make the room a bad scene
When the plastic pointing at the back of ya head like the mannequin meme
you shooting him with a plastic gun? Knife? You poppin bottles with bleak mothafucka?
You liar! Ya aunt do clean up jobs and babysit kids..she was just hired
So i'll shootup the whole house, then let pops turn to the nanny-Ms. Doubtfire
this was cool lol coulda been worded better though
When they showing malice, i understand...in certain cases you need balance
Body had you tying your shoes..running from the screen like the speed challenge
mmm had potential to be dope but it was OK here
I got the bird chirping like a pet shop! One shot..feel like Hogan did a leg drop
Side of the highway..when they find a body sleep in the car, it ain't a rest stop
decent
Ya verses been on zero! Copying Jabari Black format..i wont say a peep tho
This ain't a disney flow..when i put big machines around the kid like Big 6 Hero
ha nice lol


Bleak wtf were you trying to do here? You know what don’t answer that. Where’s the bleak who won the 1-2 championship? Bring him back. Dyna came pretty good here just has to work on wording a bit, some bars has dope concepts but seemed overly worded or not done enough. Either way it was a good showing and clearly got you the win lol.


Vote DynamiCz

[Raizen]

Arm extend out the side, giving more bucks out the window then a toll booth worker

Side of the highway..when they find a body sleep in the car, it ain't a rest stop

This ain't a disney flow..when i put big machines around the kid like Big 6 Hero

^ Thought these were cool from Dynamicz


As far as Bleak, I just didn't get any of his lines. Like the "sleeping with fishes" bar; I know what that means, but I don't get how this was a punch, or how it relates to your setup.

v/Dynamicz

[Dynomight]

You act like you pop bottles, silence the heat/scopes and swords!
Plz. YOU? A pop will silence my shots & you ain't dope no more.
No
You crack the top off a 2 liter and Lazyboy, not smoke no whores.
But fgt when I Pop bottles, the 9 giving this bitch some Coke Rewards
No
LONG BARREL, fuck a Bottle we just dipping after blammin' yall
If I Pop Off at ya Port side, it means the cork was a fucking cannonball
Good try
U fuck grimy hoes, like she blindly rose out of a deep basement
I'd threaten your life but you sleep with fishes on a week to week basis.
Fishes is not a term for ugly women to my knowledge. So no
I got a blunt weapon for ya, but I decided to get with the times &
cop that D40, then bust the top off this silver like rolling a Swisher diamond
Ok
While my team sticks banging, I'm tuning ya hoe for slow jams.
All you'll hear is racket over a bitch yelling like screamo bands
No

Lil something different 12

I promise to hurt ya! I got the ammo ready...something loaded to merk ya
Arm extend out the side, giving more bucks out the window then a toll booth worker
No
He in a dream..big boy sleep on his stomach! I make the room a bad scene
When the plastic pointing at the back of ya head like the mannequin meme
No
You liar! Ya aunt do clean up jobs and babysit kids..she was just hired
So i'll shootup the whole house, then let pops turn to the nanny-Ms. Doubtfire
Ok
When they showing malice, i understand...in certain cases you need balance
Body had you tying your shoes..running from the screen like the speed challenge
No
I got the bird chirping like a pet shop! One shot..feel like Hogan did a leg drop
Side of the highway..when they find a body sleep in the car, it ain't a rest stop
That’s nice
Ya verses been on zero! Copying Jabari Black format..i wont say a peep tho
This ain't a disney flow..when i put big machines around the kid like Big 6 Her
Hero
Maybe



Dynamic gets my vote he had the LOTB. Bleak was all over the place and never really landed a solid punch imo

[John Dillinger]

You act like you pop bottles, silence the heat/scopes and swords!
Plz. YOU? A pop will silence my shots & you ain't dope no more.
Not feeling this
You crack the top off a 2 liter and Lazyboy, not smoke no whores.
But fgt when I Pop bottles, the 9 giving this bitch some Coke Rewards
Could have been better imo
LONG BARREL, fuck a Bottle we just dipping after blammin' yall
If I Pop Off at ya Port side, it means the cork was a fucking cannonball
Not terrible
U fuck grimy hoes, like she blindly rose out of a deep basement
I'd threaten your life but you sleep with fishes on a week to week basis.
OK
I got a blunt weapon for ya, but I decided to get with the times &
cop that D40, then bust the top off this silver like rolling a Swisher diamond
I liked this
While my team sticks banging, I'm tuning ya hoe for slow jams.
All you'll hear is racket over a bitch yelling like screamo bands
Funny but not that hard

Vs.

I promise to hurt ya! I got the ammo ready...something loaded to merk ya
Arm extend out the side, giving more bucks out the window then a toll booth worker
I like it
He in a dream..big boy sleep on his stomach! I make the room a bad scene
When the plastic pointing at the back of ya head like the mannequin meme
Had to look it up, not bad
You liar! Ya aunt do clean up jobs and babysit kids..she was just hired
So i'll shootup the whole house, then let pops turn to the nanny-Ms. Doubtfire
could have worded this better to hit harder imo
When they showing malice, i understand...in certain cases you need balance
Body had you tying your shoes..running from the screen like the speed challenge
not feeling this
I got the bird chirping like a pet shop! One shot..feel like Hogan did a leg drop
Side of the highway..when they find a body sleep in the car, it ain't a rest stop
Cool
Ya verses been on zero! Copying Jabari Black format..i wont say a peep tho
This ain't a disney flow..when i put big machines around the kid like Big 6 Hero
not bad


got Dyna with a couple more hard hitters and being more consistent