God Of War
01-26-2013, 06:13 PM
posted on 05-07-2007
Dr Deep
I normally avoid posting first coz i think countering is for pussys...
...But oh well.
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Mets down on this, Writing shaky Rhymes….
Voters must have been blind lean coming Rating time(1)
I Took a look at his posts Finding Lately lines
It looks like nine rhymes since nineteen eighty five… (2)
“Mets you alright? It’s the year 2007..you still alive?”
This guy jus clocked seven eleven on TE-VO re-wind…(3)
His mind jus thought, “Oh heaven.. No...Lady D. Died!!”
Went out n bought CD’s n got cheesed when they tried to sell him MP3’s on the streets!
“What are these?! Go away please!”
This guys so old see?
that he posted for us all BEFORE Sir Berners lee… (4)
….Made internet protocol nine-teen ninety three!
Seen your profile it seems to me..
Your either a man with a Rolex.. or a Pink V.I.P (5)
A Fat ass with no sense n some fake D.N.G’s (5)
Sun-glasses on your fat head Rented to make energy
Solar Power panels For the suns ray-beams
Runs straight clean ironically off a Shit waste-heap..
Shit I’m waist deep…
For all I know he could be the other-guy.. My mistake G.(5)
..But one of you is in a Muddle Blatantly
your fingers Miss matched like a puzzle Game-set piece (5) (6)
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(1). Peoples predictions over round 2.
(2). Checked out his join date n post history
(3). Realized about 7/11 coz it was recorded on TE VO
(4). Sir Tim-Berners Lee, creator of WWW. (what your on now)
(5). Profile Pic: http://www.beatsrhymeslife.net/forum/member.php?u=4175
(6). In the picture, one of them is doing the wrong hand gesture.
vs.
Mets
V. Vega talking about Dr. Deeps 1st round verse.
no hate but judging by ur votes n ur verse, do u know a battle verse should have punches? that was just like random rhymes in a wierd structure, nothing witty dissin ur opponent.
That's quote was accurate, on point. shit, it was fairly awesome
Vega hit the nail on the head, now i gotta put the nail in the coffin
but honestly, when u get this critique again. Start connecting the two
i'm just wonderin how this dude explains YOUR verses better then u
& how u even drop a verse when every line u had to explain the punch
i always explain mine too....to the guy i'm facin, after i wake him up
was gonna say what up cos' i heard dude dont have one buddy
evn sick kids dont say what up doc? unless they mockin bugs bunny
on tha real, u beatin me would make me laugh & drop to the floor
& the $?, theres a better chance for ed mcmahon to knock at ur door
Thinkin your girls in love just makes you look stupid & foolish too
ur bitch was like 'I want it deep'.. & it had nothin to do with you
theres alot shit that u dont know, for instance ..i'm like an assassin
& deep throat aint jus what your girl gives, it's what my knife'll be slashin
i write wit a passion, if somebody smiles..i'm smiling back
cos' it's honestly nothing to rip u to decor, mostly cos ur styles so wack
pz.
Mets goes to rd 3
Dr Deep
I normally avoid posting first coz i think countering is for pussys...
...But oh well.
__________________________________________________ ______
Mets down on this, Writing shaky Rhymes….
Voters must have been blind lean coming Rating time(1)
I Took a look at his posts Finding Lately lines
It looks like nine rhymes since nineteen eighty five… (2)
“Mets you alright? It’s the year 2007..you still alive?”
This guy jus clocked seven eleven on TE-VO re-wind…(3)
His mind jus thought, “Oh heaven.. No...Lady D. Died!!”
Went out n bought CD’s n got cheesed when they tried to sell him MP3’s on the streets!
“What are these?! Go away please!”
This guys so old see?
that he posted for us all BEFORE Sir Berners lee… (4)
….Made internet protocol nine-teen ninety three!
Seen your profile it seems to me..
Your either a man with a Rolex.. or a Pink V.I.P (5)
A Fat ass with no sense n some fake D.N.G’s (5)
Sun-glasses on your fat head Rented to make energy
Solar Power panels For the suns ray-beams
Runs straight clean ironically off a Shit waste-heap..
Shit I’m waist deep…
For all I know he could be the other-guy.. My mistake G.(5)
..But one of you is in a Muddle Blatantly
your fingers Miss matched like a puzzle Game-set piece (5) (6)
__________________________________________________ _______
(1). Peoples predictions over round 2.
(2). Checked out his join date n post history
(3). Realized about 7/11 coz it was recorded on TE VO
(4). Sir Tim-Berners Lee, creator of WWW. (what your on now)
(5). Profile Pic: http://www.beatsrhymeslife.net/forum/member.php?u=4175
(6). In the picture, one of them is doing the wrong hand gesture.
vs.
Mets
V. Vega talking about Dr. Deeps 1st round verse.
no hate but judging by ur votes n ur verse, do u know a battle verse should have punches? that was just like random rhymes in a wierd structure, nothing witty dissin ur opponent.
That's quote was accurate, on point. shit, it was fairly awesome
Vega hit the nail on the head, now i gotta put the nail in the coffin
but honestly, when u get this critique again. Start connecting the two
i'm just wonderin how this dude explains YOUR verses better then u
& how u even drop a verse when every line u had to explain the punch
i always explain mine too....to the guy i'm facin, after i wake him up
was gonna say what up cos' i heard dude dont have one buddy
evn sick kids dont say what up doc? unless they mockin bugs bunny
on tha real, u beatin me would make me laugh & drop to the floor
& the $?, theres a better chance for ed mcmahon to knock at ur door
Thinkin your girls in love just makes you look stupid & foolish too
ur bitch was like 'I want it deep'.. & it had nothin to do with you
theres alot shit that u dont know, for instance ..i'm like an assassin
& deep throat aint jus what your girl gives, it's what my knife'll be slashin
i write wit a passion, if somebody smiles..i'm smiling back
cos' it's honestly nothing to rip u to decor, mostly cos ur styles so wack
pz.
Mets goes to rd 3