Bodysnatcher (1-0) vs Destroyer (0-1) - Destroyer wins

[Hush]

NBL Season 11
Week 2

Due SUNDAY 9/02/18

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


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[Destroyer]

Lol. Just doing these in order eh?

12

[BodySnatcher]

count`em.



JB made u sign out...
But u better believe I won’t spare u when I tear thru
Cuz u got such a God 'Complex'…after THIS u’ll be livin there too
If I drive-thru w/a machine, I’ma leave this star squash
& after bullets wet his whip...it’ll look like he came outta car wash
He’s got game...but he’s worried about his rank spot
I'll hold court just so I can let a round hit this square like a bank shot
I’d bag ur wife but I love titty fuckin b4 the day up
But like babysittin a drink...she ain't workin w/ more than A-cup
He needs liquid courage...he’s never sober postin
If I spill his guts...the pump’ll be in his stomach like he’s overdosin
Watch this pussy sway cuz on a man-made scale
Every verse of his is bitch-made...just another Handmaid’s Tale
Nigga is obsessed w/Zelph so I’ma feed him clips
The gun talk`ll put so many words in his mouth...u could read his lips
U’ll receive a sword to ur neck bruh, I’ll deck ya
& leave u floored...w/ ur head by ur knees like ur prayin at Mecca
I gave him ‘heatstroke’...so I’m forcin this prayer
He tried to ‘catch his breath’ but it didn't ‘work-out’ like Jordan McNair

[Destroyer]

I didn’t count. Hope I did enough...

Climb above des in the rankings? How, when truth is this boy the worst???
We gonna see body all the way at the bottom like this a schadenfreude verse
part of the new school class, plan is to shoot u fast
Then des will call this dude a fag, cause all he do is ass
des can not be stopped. Cuz even if I be shot...
It’s plane ur going down. Should have battled me before kamikaze dropped
how could this man be shook? I’ve peeped ur jabs & look...
them concepts so elementary, they got me wishing they went to Sandy Hook
u will never be known for shit. But I’m known to fight fags
&&& anyone ever mention snatch, I’m just thinking “u like dags?”
Look, don’t get hurt guy. cuz it’s not like u got the worst rhymes
My main issue w/ ur bars is I got no props for em when I dropped em the first time
self-proclaimed gun bar master. sensei of can fighting...
des’ll still put them Xs over his eyes, like little girl’s handwriting
& u pull the strap? I’m going Daniel-San on this lame
Watch me kick the can like I’m bringing back old kid’s games
this boy is dead. I was legit worried about u destroying des...
Then I read ur verse thinking I was in the “jokes from the toilet” thread

[Hush]

Votes

[Ryno]

count`em.



JB made u sign out...
But u better believe I won’t spare u when I tear thru
Cuz u got such a God 'Complex'…after THIS u’ll be livin there too
He’s got game...but he’s worried about his rank spot
I'll hold court just so I can let a round hit this square like a bank shot
He needs liquid courage...he’s never sober postin
If I spill his guts...the pump’ll be in his stomach like he’s overdosin
Nigga is obsessed w/Zelph so I’ma feed him clips
The gun talk`ll put so many words in his mouth...u could read his lips


i liked those that i quoted the most. alil bland in some spots. wording was good all around just some concepts didnt have a lot of impact like the car wash and A cup for ex. decent read
I didn’t count. Hope I did enough...

Climb above des in the rankings? How, when truth is this boy the worst???
We gonna see body all the way at the bottom like this a schadenfreude verse
des can not be stopped. Cuz even if I be shot...
It’s plane ur going down. Should have battled me before kamikaze dropped
how could this man be shook? I’ve peeped ur jabs & look...
them concepts so elementary, they got me wishing they went to Sandy Hook
self-proclaimed gun bar master. sensei of can fighting...
des’ll still put them Xs over his eyes, like little girl’s handwriting
& u pull the strap? I’m going Daniel-San on this lame
Watch me kick the can like I’m bringing back old kid’s games


liked the references . thought sandy hook was ur best bar imo. i thought you did enough here to take this. i liked the different ideas u developed throughout the verse as well.

v/Destroyer...got him winning by a bar

[Score]

count`em.



JB made u sign out...
But u better believe I won’t spare u when I tear thru
Cuz u got such a God 'Complex'…after THIS u’ll be livin there too
Ok
If I drive-thru w/a machine, I’ma leave this star squash
& after bullets wet his whip...it’ll look like he came outta car wash
Solid
He’s got game...but he’s worried about his rank spot
I'll hold court just so I can let a round hit this square like a bank shot
Dope
I’d bag ur wife but I love titty fuckin b4 the day up
But like babysittin a drink...she ain't workin w/ more than A-cup
Liked the idea. The execution was lacking imo.
He needs liquid courage...he’s never sober postin
If I spill his guts...the pump’ll be in his stomach like he’s overdosin
Nice
Watch this pussy sway cuz on a man-made scale
Every verse of his is bitch-made...just another Handmaid’s Tale
Nah
Nigga is obsessed w/Zelph so I’ma feed him clips
The gun talk`ll put so many words in his mouth...u could read his lips
Lol i like it
U’ll receive a sword to ur neck bruh, I’ll deck ya
& leave u floored...w/ ur head by ur knees like ur prayin at Mecca
Nah
I gave him ‘heatstroke’...so I’m forcin this prayer
He tried to ‘catch his breath’ but it didn't ‘work-out’ like Jordan McNair
Whos that

I didn’t count. Hope I did enough...

Climb above des in the rankings? How, when truth is this boy the worst???
We gonna see body all the way at the bottom like this a schadenfreude verse
Ok
part of the new school class, plan is to shoot u fast
Then des will call this dude a fag, cause all he do is ass
Nah
des can not be stopped. Cuz even if I be shot...
It’s plane ur going down. Should have battled me before kamikaze dropped
Ok
how could this man be shook? I’ve peeped ur jabs & look...
them concepts so elementary, they got me wishing they went to Sandy Hook
Nah
u will never be known for shit. But I’m known to fight fags
&&& anyone ever mention snatch, I’m just thinking “u like dags?”
Ok
Look, don’t get hurt guy. cuz it’s not like u got the worst rhymes
My main issue w/ ur bars is I got no props for em when I dropped em the first time
Lmao nice
self-proclaimed gun bar master. sensei of can fighting...
des’ll still put them Xs over his eyes, like little girl’s handwriting
Heat
& u pull the strap? I’m going Daniel-San on this lame
Watch me kick the can like I’m bringing back old kid’s games
Nah
this boy is dead. I was legit worried about u destroying des...
Then I read ur verse thinking I was in the “jokes from the toilet” thread
Not a bad closer

Bank shot
Overdosin
Read his lips

Vs

Dopped em the first time
Little girls handwriting

Wish the first part of des verse was anywhere close to the rest of it he would have had it.

Got body with a more consistent verse and more hitters

[For Battling]

JB made u sign out...
But u better believe I won’t spare u when I tear thru
Cuz u got such a God 'Complex'…after THIS u’ll be livin there too
i had to look up what a god complex was, this ended up being alright
If I drive-thru w/a machine, I’ma leave this star squash
& after bullets wet his whip...it’ll look like he came outta car wash
nah I’m not seeing the correlation between bullets and a car worsh
He’s got game...but he’s worried about his rank spot
I'll hold court just so I can let a round hit this square like a bank shot
this was cool
I’d bag ur wife but I love titty fuckin b4 the day up
But like babysittin a drink...she ain't workin w/ more than A-cup
ok lol
He needs liquid courage...he’s never sober postin
If I spill his guts...the pump’ll be in his stomach like he’s overdosin
solid here
Watch this pussy sway cuz on a man-made scale
Every verse of his is bitch-made...just another Handmaid’s Tale
this is Decent, had potential for more but the setup a bit lazy
Nigga is obsessed w/Zelph so I’ma feed him clips
The gun talk`ll put so many words in his mouth...u could read his lips
fire lol
U’ll receive a sword to ur neck bruh, I’ll deck ya
& leave u floored...w/ ur head by ur knees like ur prayin at Mecca
hmm this is decent
I gave him ‘heatstroke’...so I’m forcin this prayer
He tried to ‘catch his breath’ but it didn't ‘work-out’ like Jordan McNair
this is a reach imo


3 good
2 ok
2 Decent
2 misses


Vs


Climb above des in the rankings? How, when truth is this boy the worst???
We gonna see body all the way at the bottom like this a schadenfreude verse
this was good
part of the new school class, plan is to shoot u fast
Then des will call this dude a fag, cause all he do is ass
lol no man what the hell
des can not be stopped. Cuz even if I be shot...
It’s plane ur going down. Should have battled me before kamikaze dropped
nah “it’s plane ur going down” doesn’t make sense
how could this man be shook? I’ve peeped ur jabs & look...
them concepts so elementary, they got me wishing they went to Sandy Hook
decent
u will never be known for shit. But I’m known to fight fags
&&& anyone ever mention snatch, I’m just thinking “u like dags?”
i don’t know what dags means, I even thoroughly searched it up and still nothing.
Look, don’t get hurt guy. cuz it’s not like u got the worst rhymes
My main issue w/ ur bars is I got no props for em when I dropped em the first time
i wanna like this because it can be good but what bars are you referring to? It just doesn’t hit
self-proclaimed gun bar master. sensei of can fighting...
des’ll still put them Xs over his eyes, like little girl’s handwriting
ok I’ve never heard of little girls writing x’s over their i’s, I’ve seen hearts but not x’s. I’ll give you the benefit of the doubt though so decent I guess
& u pull the strap? I’m going Daniel-San on this lame
Watch me kick the can like I’m bringing back old kid’s games
lol this was cool
this boy is dead. I was legit worried about u destroying des...
Then I read ur verse thinking I was in the “jokes from the toilet” thread
lmao


3 good
0 ok
2 Decent
4 misses



I actually came back to read this battle a few times to make sure I got a clear understanding of each bars, well, as clear of an understanding as possible unless the bar was just a complete miss. My favorite lines from body were Bank shot & read my fucking lips, he also had some ok lines and some decent with 2 misses. I got Des having the better “good” bars for the most part, but then Des ended up having no “ok” bars and 4 total misses. I won’t say this is the best BodySnatcher verse I’ve read but it’s not the worst, definitely somewhere in between. Now as far as Des, I thought he dropped nice against me in the SC but this battle just came off as him being unmotivated for it or something along those lines. Also Des you literally spoke in third person in all of your bars lmao what the hell, I’ve never seen that from anyone before. That kind of took away impact from some of your stuff ngl. I can see people having this as a close one but due to Des having 2 more misses than body did, I’m going with BodySnatcher and I promise on everything I’m not hating on you Des lol.


Vote BodySnatcher

[~RustyGunZ~]

B made u sign out...
But u better believe I won’t spare u when I tear thru
Cuz u got such a God 'Complex'…after THIS u’ll be livin there too

nah

If I drive-thru w/a machine, I’ma leave this star squash
& after bullets wet his whip...it’ll look like he came outta car wash

ok

He’s got game...but he’s worried about his rank spot
I'll hold court just so I can let a round hit this square like a bank shot

eh

I’d bag ur wife but I love titty fuckin b4 the day up
But like babysittin a drink...she ain't workin w/ more than A-cup

fuck no

He needs liquid courage...he’s never sober postin
If I spill his guts...the pump’ll be in his stomach like he’s overdosin

eh kind of low hanging gunbar fruit

Watch this pussy sway cuz on a man-made scale
Every verse of his is bitch-made...just another Handmaid’s Tale

cool

Nigga is obsessed w/Zelph so I’ma feed him clips
The gun talk`ll put so many words in his mouth...u could read his lips

uh no

U’ll receive a sword to ur neck bruh, I’ll deck ya
& leave u floored...w/ ur head by ur knees like ur prayin at Mecca

cool

I gave him ‘heatstroke’...so I’m forcin this prayer
He tried to ‘catch his breath’ but it didn't ‘work-out’ like Jordan McNair

ok

8

vs

Climb above des in the rankings? How, when truth is this boy the worst???
We gonna see body all the way at the bottom like this a schadenfreude verse

ok, didnt read much of his stuff before he ghosted but im assuming he says body at the end like sho does zip em up.

part of the new school class, plan is to shoot u fast
Then des will call this dude a fag, cause all he do is ass

lmao like this

des can not be stopped. Cuz even if I be shot...
It’s plane ur going down. Should have battled me before kamikaze dropped

no. doesnt matter if its current you don't do a plane/plain bar.

how could this man be shook? I’ve peeped ur jabs & look...
them concepts so elementary, they got me wishing they went to Sandy Hook

sheesh. kind of outdated reference but worded really well

u will never be known for shit. But I’m known to fight fags
&&& anyone ever mention snatch, I’m just thinking “u like dags?”

i get it but it's not hard hitting at all

Look, don’t get hurt guy. cuz it’s not like u got the worst rhymes
My main issue w/ ur bars is I got no props for em when I dropped em the first time

ok

self-proclaimed gun bar master. sensei of can fighting...
des’ll still put them Xs over his eyes, like little girl’s handwriting

this could've been dope if little girls didn't put hearts over i's? maybe if there was like a connection to some artwork/album cover/logo that used those but I don't think of i's with x's when i think of kids writing

& u pull the strap? I’m going Daniel-San on this lame
Watch me kick the can like I’m bringing back old kid’s games

ok

this boy is dead. I was legit worried about u destroying des...
Then I read ur verse thinking I was in the “jokes from the toilet” thread

cool

9

got des but it was close.
body just needs to be a little less bland. a cup was a cringey bar.

v/destroyer

[Hush]

count`em.



JB made u sign out...
But u better believe I won’t spare u when I tear thru
Cuz u got such a God 'Complex'…after THIS u’ll be livin there too
...it is kinda forced . U didn’t make it work right . I get it but u didn’t put the stamp on it
If I drive-thru w/a machine, I’ma leave this star squash
& after bullets wet his whip...it’ll look like he came outta car wash
...too simple my guy
He’s got game...but he’s worried about his rank spot
I'll hold court just so I can let a round hit this square like a bank shot
...u set it up well . Man it’s just not creative enough . Maybe ur burnt out
I’d bag ur wife but I love titty fuckin b4 the day up
But like babysittin a drink...she ain't workin w/ more than A-cup
...lol ok.. this hit better
He needs liquid courage...he’s never sober postin
If I spill his guts...the pump’ll be in his stomach like he’s overdosin
...that’s dope ..
Watch this pussy sway cuz on a man-made scale
Every verse of his is bitch-made...just another Handmaid’s Tale
....nah
Nigga is obsessed w/Zelph so I’ma feed him clips
The gun talk`ll put so many words in his mouth...u could read his lips
...hmm that’s cool
U’ll receive a sword to ur neck bruh, I’ll deck ya
& leave u floored...w/ ur head by ur knees like ur prayin at Mecca
...nope
I gave him ‘heatstroke’...so I’m forcin this prayer
He tried to ‘catch his breath’ but it didn't ‘work-out’ like Jordan McNair
...don’t get it


I didn’t count. Hope I did enough...

Climb above des in the rankings? How, when truth is this boy the worst???
We gonna see body all the way at the bottom like this a schadenfreude verse
..ok cool
part of the new school class, plan is to shoot u fast
Then des will call this dude a fag, cause all he do is ass
...ummm nah man this like a Em bar lol
des can not be stopped. Cuz even if I be shot...
It’s plane ur going down. Should have battled me before kamikaze dropped
...ok.. really bland tho
how could this man be shook? I’ve peeped ur jabs & look...
them concepts so elementary, they got me wishing they went to Sandy Hook
...nice . I hate late references but this hits
u will never be known for shit. But I’m known to fight fags
&&& anyone ever mention snatch, I’m just thinking “u like dags?”
...lol what ?
Look, don’t get hurt guy. cuz it’s not like u got the worst rhymes
My main issue w/ ur bars is I got no props for em when I dropped em the first time
...lol ok that’s different I like that
self-proclaimed gun bar master. sensei of can fighting...
des’ll still put them Xs over his eyes, like little girl’s handwriting
....hmm ok that’s cool
& u pull the strap? I’m going Daniel-San on this lame
Watch me kick the can like I’m bringing back old kid’s games
...nice
this boy is dead. I was legit worried about u destroying des...
Then I read ur verse thinking I was in the “jokes from the toilet” thread
....decent




Seems like Body had a off week . A lot of tired concepts


Des did more than enough to secure this imo

[Flow]

count`em.



JB made u sign out...
But u better believe I won’t spare u when I tear thru
Cuz u got such a God 'Complex'…after THIS u’ll be livin there too
I think you should have gone with after you see him you'll be living there too personally. Otherwise god just seems to come off kilter when reading it the other way. I get it though unlike some other people with God complexes voting....
If I drive-thru w/a machine, I’ma leave this star squash
& after bullets wet his whip...it’ll look like he came outta car wash
not sure how this works tbh
He’s got game...but he’s worried about his rank spot
I'll hold court just so I can let a round hit this square like a bank shot
took me a minute to get it cus i follow proper sport like football. Nah jokes this is ok
I’d bag ur wife but I love titty fuckin b4 the day up
But like babysittin a drink...she ain't workin w/ more than A-cup
better like this
He needs liquid courage...he’s never sober postin
If I spill his guts...the pump’ll be in his stomach like he’s overdosin
surprised this ain't been used on me. Good shit
Watch this pussy sway cuz on a man-made scale
Every verse of his is bitch-made...just another Handmaid’s Tale
not sure if this is lost on me an there's something more to a handmaid's tale...
Nigga is obsessed w/Zelph so I’ma feed him clips
The gun talk`ll put so many words in his mouth...u could read his lips
had a similar bar wrote ready the other day but scrapped it. This was done better then mine imo. So I'll pass it
U’ll receive a sword to ur neck bruh, I’ll deck ya
& leave u floored...w/ ur head by ur knees like ur prayin at Mecca
wording saves this but the concept pretty obvious
I gave him ‘heatstroke’...so I’m forcin this prayer
He tried to ‘catch his breath’ but it didn't ‘work-out’ like Jordan McNai
don't have time.to Google right now sorry man but I don't know who that isr

I have seen better from body tbh but there was some dope shit in here. A cup stomach pump were stands out an opener was good just potentially could been better imo


Vs

I didn’t count. Hope I did enough...

Climb above des in the rankings? How, when truth is this boy the worst???
We gonna see body all the way at the bottom like this a schadenfreude verse
surprised this isn't played but I can't recall seeing it. I'll let this go cus I like it but surely someone done this no?
part of the new school class, plan is to shoot u fast
Then des will call this dude a fag, cause all he do is ass
bro? Really?
des can not be stopped. Cuz even if I be shot...
It’s plane ur going down. Should have battled me before kamikaze dropped
nice quick off the bat here
how could this man be shook? I’ve peeped ur jabs & look...
them concepts so elementary, they got me wishing they went to Sandy Hook
pahahahaha lotb
u will never be known for shit. But I’m known to fight fags
&&& anyone ever mention snatch, I’m just thinking “u like dags?”
mint film. Which raised this bar for me. But.. it wasn't a good a punch as micky
Look, don’t get hurt guy. cuz it’s not like u got the worst rhymes
My main issue w/ ur bars is I got no props for em when I dropped em the first time
nasty
self-proclaimed gun bar master. sensei of can fighting...
des’ll still put them Xs over his eyes, like little girl’s handwriting
solid and creative
& u pull the strap? I’m going Daniel-San on this lame
Watch me kick the can like I’m bringing back old kid’s games
wasn't a fan
this boy is dead. I was legit worried about u destroying des...
Then I read ur verse thinking I was in the “jokes from the toilet” thread
not seen the thread but take your word on it as a pass

Stronger verse here has to be Destroyer for me. I recall roughly same amount of bars off top my head for both which indicates this close but the ones I recall from destroyer were all really good imo.


Vote des

[Amen]

I’d bag ur wife but I love titty fuckin b4 the day up
But like babysittin a drink...she ain't workin w/ more than A-cup
He needs liquid courage...he’s never sober postin
If I spill his guts...the pump’ll be in his stomach like he’s overdosin

vs

how could this man be shook? I’ve peeped ur jabs & look...
them concepts so elementary, they got me wishing they went to Sandy Hook
Look, don’t get hurt guy. cuz it’s not like u got the worst rhymes
My main issue w/ ur bars is I got no props for em when I dropped em the first time

Sandy hook was mean. Wish Des would write more bars like that. His 2nd bar was cool - a little over worded but nice hit none the less. Body's A cup bar was good but night heavy and his OD bar was nice but again, not heavy.

I got DESTORYER here. His quoted bars were just more effective, IMO.