Cashius vs. Dynomight (Contenders) - Cash wins

[~RustyGunZ~]

NBL Season 11
Week 3

Due SUNDAY 9/09/18

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
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- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


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Cashius Dynomight

[Dynomight]

16

[Cashius]

I’ll need an extension.

[Dynomight]

Sent 12.

[Cashius]

**the doctor aprouches Exis bedside, except it’s not a doctor it’s the harbringer of Exis demise**
***a robed man appears on a black steed, a pale red moon looms in the sky... “there will be blood , whispers the cloaked figure” ***
****zelphs mom car pulls up. A man in all black exits as he zips up his slacks***

This fucking weirdo’s about to get a chalk outline...Jesus, please just stop
Keep posting that gay shit and the next one to ‘set the scene’ gonna be the cops
I’ll scare him proper...he’ll go into hiding when I air the chopper
That don’t matter....I’m throwing bullets before you ‘make it out the cut’ like Aaron Rodgers
I bet he turns snitch once he sees the Desi...That bird gotta hell of a ring
I’ll blam, dare me...Once that ‘Canary’ probably gon’ turn ‘Yellow and Sing’
Don’t say one word about a gun, you faggot...I’m bettin’ you’re a bitch, bro
How the fuck are you called Dynomight...when you’d NEVER let a ‘Stick Blow’
Fuck the shit you carry...you miss every shot. He’s blind w/ the lead
It’s air traffic control...you got a ‘Holding Pattern’ that lets shit ‘fly over heads’
I’m givin’ dirt naps...how we supposed to believe that YOU ‘bout the heat, fool?!
Faggot prolly havin’ slumber parties...a futon’s the only thing you ‘pull out to sleep dudes’

[Dynomight]

U type of racist geek to give the nazi hand greeting
Next white sheet ur covered wits At the Morgue instead of ur klan meeting
Them guns bars all lies pussy.. u never strapped
I put Cash in a shallow grave by the beach .. send his mom a treasure map
Belly shot .. ya stomach bones to ya knees an ya soul right to heaven
after the first shot u will have ribs in ya jeans like it’s biker demin
Sawed off shotty maim ya chest .Livestream the mess when u laid to rest
NC can watch me Go dumb wit the lil pump on cam like I’m kanye West
100 yards away wit a sniper rifle aiming to clap u
Reticule on the scope put a cross between ya eyes I'll Kodak black u
An Ya bitch suck dick like a pro her throat always got room
The way her mouth form around my head she might be the venom costume

[Score]

This fucking weirdo’s about to get a chalk outline...Jesus, please just stop
Keep posting that gay shit and the next one to ‘set the scene’ gonna be the cops
--not bad
I’ll scare him proper...he’ll go into hiding when I air the chopper
That don’t matter....I’m throwing bullets before you ‘make it out the cut’ like Aaron Rodgers
--dig it.
I bet he turns snitch once he sees the Desi...That bird gotta hell of a ring
I’ll blam, dare me...Once that ‘Canary’ probably gon’ turn ‘Yellow and Sing’
--creative as fuck. U gotta say the wordplay realllllly slow to make it work. At least for me. I pronounce it cuhh nearry. But it works.
Don’t say one word about a gun, you faggot...I’m bettin’ you’re a bitch, bro
How the fuck are you called Dynomight...when you’d NEVER let a ‘Stick Blow’
--nice
Fuck the shit you carry...you miss every shot. He’s blind w/ the lead
It’s air traffic control...you got a ‘Holding Pattern’ that lets shit ‘fly over heads’
--ehh. I get it just dont sting really. Not feeling the way u did it.
I’m givin’ dirt naps...how we supposed to believe that YOU ‘bout the heat, fool?!
Faggot prolly havin’ slumber parties...a futon’s the only thing you ‘pull out to sleep dudes’
--lol

U type of racist geek to give the nazi hand greeting
Next white sheet ur covered wits At the Morgue instead of ur klan meeting
--guess its a bit of a pers but its a bit dated
Them guns bars all lies pussy.. u never strapped
I put Cash in a shallow grave by the beach .. send his mom a treasure map
--dig it.
Belly shot .. ya stomach bones to ya knees an ya soul right to heaven
after the first shot u will have ribs in ya jeans like it’s biker demin
--nice.
Sawed off shotty maim ya chest .Livestream the mess when u laid to rest
NC can watch me Go dumb wit the lil pump on cam like I’m kanye West
--wording was roughhhh. Dumb with the lil pump just doesnt flow off right ya know. Still a hit, just could have been so much better imo
100 yards away wit a sniper rifle aiming to clap u
Reticule on the scope put a cross between ya eyes I'll Kodak black u
--this ight
An Ya bitch suck dick like a pro her throat always got room
The way her mouth form around my head she might be the venom costume
--eh, nah

Nice battle. Dyno was good here. Just not good enough. Cash with the more consistent, better worded drop imo

Cash

[Flow]

Cash came solid fucked with pretty much every bar even the odd light jab was tasty.

Dyn... Strange name btw man you realise we got someone with the same name nearly bro you open yourself up to angles just there. Anyway you got the concept of writing down so that's good. You need to work on harsher angles or wording for greater impact. You had the structure of good bars here just when I finished I struggled to recall a bar I was like yeah that was dope. Rereading through I'd say lil pump the best bar for me. The opening bar I disliked despite it being good to see you done your homework an went for a personal angle.

Vote cash but keep it up Dyn an just consider how harsh your bars are an then up it some more

[~RustyGunZ~]

This fucking weirdo’s about to get a chalk outline...Jesus, please just stop
Keep posting that gay shit and the next one to ‘set the scene’ gonna be the cops

cool personal

I’ll scare him proper...he’ll go into hiding when I air the chopper
That don’t matter....I’m throwing bullets before you ‘make it out the cut’ like Aaron Rodgers

ok

I bet he turns snitch once he sees the Desi...That bird gotta hell of a ring
I’ll blam, dare me...Once that ‘Canary’ probably gon’ turn ‘Yellow and Sing’

cool, took me a second read to not think it was super forced but it works

Don’t say one word about a gun, you faggot...I’m bettin’ you’re a bitch, bro
How the fuck are you called Dynomight...when you’d NEVER let a ‘Stick Blow’

ehhh kind of expected

Fuck the shit you carry...you miss every shot. He’s blind w/ the lead
It’s air traffic control...you got a ‘Holding Pattern’ that lets shit ‘fly over heads’

cool

I’m givin’ dirt naps...how we supposed to believe that YOU ‘bout the heat, fool?!
Faggot prolly havin’ slumber parties...a futon’s the only thing you ‘pull out to sleep dudes’

lol cool

8

vs

U type of racist geek to give the nazi hand greeting
Next white sheet ur covered wits At the Morgue instead of ur klan meeting

dope

Them guns bars all lies pussy.. u never strapped
I put Cash in a shallow grave by the beach .. send his mom a treasure map

nah, any cash lines are a miss to me

Belly shot .. ya stomach bones to ya knees an ya soul right to heaven
after the first shot u will have ribs in ya jeans like it’s biker demin

not sure I get this cus I don't find biker culture to be something worth knowing about. ribs like they have zippers on their pants? idk i feel bad not giving this credit but i'm not getting it

Sawed off shotty maim ya chest .Livestream the mess when u laid to rest
NC can watch me Go dumb wit the lil pump on cam like I’m kanye West

eh ok, wording is a bit jumbled

100 yards away wit a sniper rifle aiming to clap u
Reticule on the scope put a cross between ya eyes I'll Kodak black u

cool

An Ya bitch suck dick like a pro her throat always got room
The way her mouth form around my head she might be the venom costume

dope

6

dyno had two really dope bars at teh start and finish but the guts of the verse weren't consistent. Cash just had a solid all around verse.

v/Cashius

dope read. venom bar was fire

[Blue Bayou]

sorry guys tried to break it down thoroughly, fucking wifi

Anyways this was an awesome battle... both pretty consistent & a couple relly dope concepts .. I think if Cash slept even in the slightest Dyno would have got him.. but Canary was lotb for me & I just enjoyed Cash's concepts on the whole (and wording) a little bit more... gret showing Dyno, props to both

Vote - Cash