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Hush
09-13-2018, 05:33 PM
NBL Season 11
Week 4

Due SUNDAY 9/17/18

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

~RustyGunZ~
09-13-2018, 08:05 PM
No more than 16 preferably

Cashius
09-13-2018, 11:05 PM
Nope. Going 57.

~RustyGunZ~
09-13-2018, 11:09 PM
Damnit. Okay.

Cashius
09-16-2018, 08:36 PM
Gonna need the extension.

Hush
09-18-2018, 12:01 PM
Cashius Knucklehead

Cashius
09-19-2018, 12:00 AM
AKA Seth Scheinberg


Getting married tomorrow
Aim & squeeze - I'll put the Cantonese 'til there's less of u than cities that speak it

That 44 barks outside ya crib, i clamour chrome that batter domes


Lol...right.

Quit acting like you’d run up on Blue. You’re a fake bitch...or are you forgetting?
Only time you’d have the ‘cans banging behind him’...is if you decorated the car for his wedding
Computer Programmer? Nah, you work at Best Buy...but you got homies aimin’ to tangle?
I’ll hit you with a TEC problem...that no one in your Geek Squad gonna be able to handle
He livin’ for now...but a few shots’ll put kid in the ground quick
Grippin’ the pound? Shiiiiiiit...Sex with your fat ass wife the only time you ‘Licking a round bitch’
Ending the Scheinberg gimmick had to be tough for him...this nerd about to get hit
You dropped the ‘Shtick’....I’ll pick one up and leave more than just your personality split
I’ll shit on whatever he drops...Knuck used to be bad, now homie is way worse
OK, computer guy. Explain how you typed your lines on a Mac...While IBM all over the same verse
How can your wife be fat AND have zero tits?...I swear that chest can’t be real
That bitch is a ‘flat outlier’...and so are you if you tell me she weighs less than three bills

~RustyGunZ~
09-19-2018, 12:58 AM
How ya bout the life but from Amish town, I’ll change ya mind real fast
Get at me, you’ll never come back from the city like rumspringa was a blast
Ya love to grab shit out of thin air, but nothin' magic for ya here
Catch ya on the street & blow ur mind when I pull the metal behind ya ear
That 44 barks outside ya crib, slide thru in a murdered out ferrari
Pull up in somethin' black & make ya stomach drop like a nigga came to the party
We ain't gonna let that slide kkkashius, ur legacy is fleeting
Blades drawn. Drag ya in the woods & cross ya heart like ya dressin’ for a meeting
Last time we battled for the belt I left king, ya verse got a hard scoff
If this one ends w/ something over ya shoulder, it's taking your fuckin' arm off
Leave u bleedin' out, then go kill ya family for speakin on mine freal ock
Whole town gonna get more clicks in 24 hrs than Em & they aallll Killshots

Faggot

Ryno
09-19-2018, 05:54 PM
AKA Seth Scheinberg





Lol...right.

Quit acting like you’d run up on Blue. You’re a fake bitch...or are you forgetting?
Only time you’d have the ‘cans banging behind him’...is if you decorated the car for his wedding
Computer Programmer? Nah, you work at Best Buy...but you got homies aimin’ to tangle?
I’ll hit you with a TEC problem...that no one in your Geek Squad gonna be able to handle
He livin’ for now...but a few shots’ll put kid in the ground quick
Grippin’ the pound? Shiiiiiiit...Sex with your fat ass wife the only time you ‘Licking a round bitch’
Ending the Scheinberg gimmick had to be tough for him...this nerd about to get hit
You dropped the ‘Shtick’....I’ll pick one up and leave more than just your personality split
How can your wife be fat AND have zero tits?...I swear that chest can’t be real
That bitch is a ‘flat outlier’...and so are you if you tell me she weighs less than three bills



That 44 barks outside ya crib, slide thru in a murdered out ferrari
Pull up in somethin' black & make ya stomach drop like a nigga came to the party
We ain't gonna let that slide kkkashius, ur legacy is fleeting
Blades drawn. Drag ya in the woods & cross ya heart like ya dressin’ for a meeting
Last time we battled for the belt I left king, ya verse got a hard scoff
If this one ends w/ something over ya shoulder, it's taking your fuckin' arm off
Leave u bleedin' out, then go kill ya family for speakin on mine freal ock
Whole town gonna get more clicks in 24 hrs than Em & they aallll Killshots

Faggot

this was a nice battle. good read from both. i thought knuck started off cold while cash was pretty cool from start to finish. he had the harder disses imo.

v/Cash

Big Bolo
09-19-2018, 08:13 PM
knuck

How ya bout the life but from Amish town, I’ll change ya mind real fast
Get at me, you’ll never come back from the city like rumspringa was a blast

Not bad

Ya love to grab shit out of thin air, but nothin' magic for ya here
Catch ya on the street & blow ur mind when I pull the metal behind ya ear

Decent

That 44 barks outside ya crib, slide thru in a murdered out ferrari
Pull up in somethin' black & make ya stomach drop like a nigga came to the party

Lol funny

We ain't gonna let that slide kkkashius, ur legacy is fleeting
Blades drawn. Drag ya in the woods & cross ya heart like ya dressin’ for a meeting

Ok bar here

Last time we battled for the belt I left king, ya verse got a hard scoff
If this one ends w/ something over ya shoulder, it's taking your fuckin' arm off

I liked this

Leave u bleedin' out, then go kill ya family for speakin on mine freal ock
Whole town gonna get more clicks in 24 hrs than Em & they aallll Killshots

Was waiting for someone to do this, think you did a good job with it here


Cash

Quit acting like you’d run up on Blue. You’re a fake bitch...or are you forgetting?
Only time you’d have the ‘cans banging behind him’...is if you decorated the car for his wedding

Cool opening bar

Computer Programmer? Nah, you work at Best Buy...but you got homies aimin’ to tangle?
I’ll hit you with a TEC problem...that no one in your Geek Squad gonna be able to handle

Nice

He livin’ for now...but a few shots’ll put kid in the ground quick
Grippin’ the pound? Shiiiiiiit...Sex with your fat ass wife the only time you ‘Licking a round bitch’

Meh was ok

Ending the Scheinberg gimmick had to be tough for him...this nerd about to get hit
You dropped the ‘Shtick’....I’ll pick one up and leave more than just your personality split

Decent

I’ll shit on whatever he drops...Knuck used to be bad, now homie is way worse
OK, computer guy. Explain how you typed your lines on a Mac...While IBM all over the same verse

Ok here think it could've been better

How can your wife be fat AND have zero tits?...I swear that chest can’t be real
That bitch is a ‘flat outlier’...and so are you if you tell me she weighs less than three bills

Decent closing


Not a bad champ here would've like to see more like 16bars but still turned out to be an ok battle. I think it was pretty close couple nice bars from both not too many misses here. I'll give my vote to Cash, props to both for showing.

Score
09-19-2018, 10:13 PM
AKA Seth Scheinberg





Lol...right.

Quit acting like you’d run up on Blue. You’re a fake bitch...or are you forgetting?
Only time you’d have the ‘cans banging behind him’...is if you decorated the car for his wedding

comedy


Computer Programmer? Nah, you work at Best Buy...but you got homies aimin’ to tangle?
I’ll hit you with a TEC problem...that no one in your Geek Squad gonna be able to handle

nice


He livin’ for now...but a few shots’ll put kid in the ground quick
Grippin’ the pound? Shiiiiiiit...Sex with your fat ass wife the only time you ‘Licking a round bitch’

fuckin ridiculous


Ending the Scheinberg gimmick had to be tough for him...this nerd about to get hit
You dropped the ‘Shtick’....I’ll pick one up and leave more than just your personality split

nice


I’ll shit on whatever he drops...Knuck used to be bad, now homie is way worse
OK, computer guy. Explain how you typed your lines on a Mac...While IBM all over the same verse

ok

How can your wife be fat AND have zero tits?...I swear that chest can’t be real
That bitch is a ‘flat outlier’...and so are you if you tell me she weighs less than three bills

damn



How ya bout the life but from Amish town, I’ll change ya mind real fast
Get at me, you’ll never come back from the city like rumspringa was a blast

eh


Ya love to grab shit out of thin air, but nothin' magic for ya here
Catch ya on the street & blow ur mind when I pull the metal behind ya ear

heat

That 44 barks outside ya crib, slide thru in a murdered out ferrari
Pull up in somethin' black & make ya stomach drop like a nigga came to the party

ok


We ain't gonna let that slide kkkashius, ur legacy is fleeting
Blades drawn. Drag ya in the woods & cross ya heart like ya dressin’ for a meeting

fucks w it


Last time we battled for the belt I left king, ya verse got a hard scoff
If this one ends w/ something over ya shoulder, it's taking your fuckin' arm off

nice


Leave u bleedin' out, then go kill ya family for speakin on mine freal ock
Whole town gonna get more clicks in 24 hrs than Em & they aallll Killshots

dig it

Faggot

sheesh. battle was crazy

by the breakdown i got


5-4 cash

licking a round bitch was nuts

knucks magic bar was crazy too

flat outlier also crazy

dope one

cash

Jabari Black
09-20-2018, 12:46 AM
Quit acting like you’d run up on Blue. You’re a fake bitch...or are you forgetting?
Only time you’d have the ‘cans banging behind him’...is if you decorated the car for his wedding

(This woulda been fine but the cans behind him/just married concept had been done before. It’s cool that it was relevant but yeah it’s been done)

Computer Programmer? Nah, you work at Best Buy...but you got homies aimin’ to tangle?
I’ll hit you with a TEC problem...that no one in your Geek Squad gonna be able to handle

(Lol this is cool. ‘Hit you with a TEC problem’ coulda been cleaned up a bit I liked the punch. Tied it into a personal pretty nice)

He livin’ for now...but a few shots’ll put kid in the ground quick
Grippin’ the pound? Shiiiiiiit...Sex with your fat ass wife the only time you ‘Licking a round bitch’

(Lol this is funny plus it had nice set up and flow. Not a bad flip. Overall pretty good)

Ending the Scheinberg gimmick had to be tough for him...this nerd about to get hit
You dropped the ‘Shtick’....I’ll pick one up and leave more than just your personality split

(Hmm I feel like someone did a Schtick/stick flip recently but I can’t recall. This was pretty good. Shtick/stick isn’t perfect but it work. The personality split part was nice though)

I’ll shit on whatever he drops...Knuck used to be bad, now homie is way worse
OK, computer guy. Explain how you typed your lines on a Mac...While IBM all over the same verse

(I didn’t like this. It works but it’s just really corny. It’s like that Mac and cheese line last week lol. IBM/computer guy/Mac word association made it not horrible but i still think this is a miss)

How can your wife be fat AND have zero tits?...I swear that chest can’t be real
That bitch is a ‘flat outlier’...and so are you if you tell me she weighs less than three bills

(This was okay. The “flat out liar” meaning works much better than the “flat outlier” meaning. I like that you went with a personal but that’s kinda the low hanging fruit for personals. Not bad though)



How ya bout the life but from Amish town, I’ll change ya mind real fast
Get at me, you’ll never come back from the city like rumspringa was a blast

(This one missed imo. The concept coulda worked but there needed to be something in the set up to tie into him not coming back from the city)

Ya love to grab shit out of thin air, but nothin' magic for ya here
Catch ya on the street & blow ur mind when I pull the metal behind ya ear

(This concepts been done before with “nickel behind ya ear”)

That 44 barks outside ya crib, slide thru in a murdered out ferrari
Pull up in somethin' black & make ya stomach drop like a nigga came to the party

(Lmao I legit laughed at this. The flip wasn’t crazy but I thought it was funny. Good line)

We ain't gonna let that slide kkkashius, ur legacy is fleeting
Blades drawn. Drag ya in the woods & cross ya heart like ya dressin’ for a meeting

(This is good. ‘Cross ya Heart’ isn’t a perfect flip but I still like to. Pretty clever too)

Last time we battled for the belt I left king, ya verse got a hard scoff
If this one ends w/ something over ya shoulder, it's taking your fuckin' arm off

(Not bad, pretty clever concept. The wording is really choppy in the set up imo. It probably coulda benefited from another tie in)

Leave u bleedin' out, then go kill ya family for speakin on mine freal ock
Whole town gonna get more clicks in 24 hrs than Em & they aallll Killshots

(Pretty good. Cool event reference. I thought the more clicks part was just okay but the ‘they all killshots’ part kinda pushed it over the age. Had a good but tying in to the punch)


Good battle here. Both guys had dope material.

I personally think this battle came down to execution. I think Cashius’s wording was clean throughout and his execution was on point. Knuck got scatter sometimes in his set ups. I think some bars he had that were l okay to good coulda been good to great but it seems like some of his set ups were rushed.

Cash had that one bar that I hated br other than that was consistent af. Good showing from both but I think Cash took it

Mvgt Cash